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Reviewer: Molly May Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2014 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 60

Yeah don't think it was her following Edward but ..... I'm never right about anything.😛

Reviewer: monkey22marie Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2014 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 59

Tayna right 

Reviewer: Molly May Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2014 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 59

Rose....Tanya hmmmmm

Hate when you do that girlie arrrrrr

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2014 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 59

:)

Reviewer: jenn1214 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2014 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 59

It's gotta be fucking Tanya! 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2014 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 59

good

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2014 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 59

Oh snap who is it is it Renee Tanya or Irena update soon

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2014 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 59

Evil cliffy.    I'd need to paint if those colors were in my house too

Reviewer: Iteachu4600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2014 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 59

I'm going with the skanky ex. Emmett has a restraining order against Rosalie ot her skank of a friend. 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2014 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 59

Edward's ex? What's her name....

 

Reviewer: catwalk1945 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2014 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 59

My god you did it, you done gone and done a cliffy, I hope Bella comes out kicking. Which skank can it possibly be...........

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2014 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 59

I'm guessing Tonya.

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2014 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 59

Hm... I'm curious if this is Tanya coming back or if we'll meet someone new...

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2014 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 59

:)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2014 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 59

Is it Tanya????? Please don't leave us hanging long.

Reviewer: bird1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2014 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 58

i still say its his ex and emmetts ex and if not the bellas mom cause she knows bella inherited all her grandmothers assests and as money hungry as she is i wouldnt put it past her. i dont think its james cause thats to obvious.

Reviewer: Shekita Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2014 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 58

Hi Great story. one Q - Can you please put the date down when you post please.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2014 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 58

Bella is moving on up in the world but that in turn might make it easier for people to get to her. And as for Edward, it's always good to follow your instincts.

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 58

I'm still not sure whom might have followed Edward, i have a few ideas now though;)

Yay! Bella got a business place, and as a big catch too! Very well done;)

Reviewer: lahragal Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 58

I think Tanya or Renee is starting to get sneeky. I am leaning towards Tanya since it was Edward being followed. Love the story, thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 58

I loved it hehehe Edward knows how to say I have a girlfriend without words now I think James has someone following Edward and Bella update soon 

Reviewer: Ni Ra Di Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 58

When the red-head walked in I got nervous. I thought it was the person following him. Don't scare me like that!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 58

Is Victoria a nice character in this story?  I still think it's James following or someone paid by James. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 58

:)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 58

=)

Reviewer: Molly May Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 58

Hmmmmm

ideas

ideas

ideas

no not in his mind

Hmmmm

😳

Reviewer: sweet_n_juicy Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 58

I wanna say it was Tanya, but he said he didn't recognize anyone. James maybe or someone he hired to follow Bella and Edward. I wouldn't even be surprised if it was Renee.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 58

Good things are happening.  I don't trust the sale in one week

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 58

:)

Reviewer: catwalk1945 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 58

Let it be Tanya or Edward's ex, and if she comes after Bella, heaven help her cause Bella is now a total badass, she will no longer be a victim. Even if it James, the fool will regret he ever hurt Bella.

Reviewer: rgh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 12

Uh oh!! Probably Jacob coming to torment her again! I will have to tell you that I love all your stories & your pic teasers are always tastefully done! Thank you for brightening up the day!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 58

it'll be good for Bella to have this new business. it'll keep her busy. good. i still think James is following Edward.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 58

Victoria is gonna love that commission check.    ha ha for Yvette being disappointed. 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 58

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 58

Oh, love this story and I bet it is Bella's ex. Edward is gonna throw down on him.

 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 58

I am thinking that James or Renee was following Edward.  Can't wait for more as always. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 57

Hmmm Renee or James.....I wonder which.  

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2014 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 57

Loved it :)

Reviewer: galwidanatitud Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2014 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 57

hmmmm....i guessing Tanya the psycho...or she-who-shall-not-be-named...james is a possibility too....so many choices!  :D

 

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2014 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 57

Hm...

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2014 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 57

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2014 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 57

Someone is following him that shit is scary 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2014 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 56

Hate is a strong word but that is what I feel for her mom and ex so does Edward.  So glad he figured it out

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2014 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 55

So sad what that prick did to her

Reviewer: Molly May Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2014 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 57

Hmmmm

So many possibilities James, Renee hmmm even Charlie hmmm.

Bring it on girlie so we can all find out ... Lol

😜

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2014 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 57

hmm. I have no idea.. Maybe his ex?

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2014 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 57

Drama. Love it

Reviewer: Robsfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2014 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 57

James or Renee

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2014 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 57

My husband swears by those Therm-Care heat wraps! ;)

 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2014 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 57

Oh wow thwy must be watching Bella's home and followed Edward home now will this be a problem for him update soon

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2014 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 57

OMG!! The firestarter! I can't wait for more!! :)

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2014 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 57

Poor Edward's back.....if someone IS following him, I think it may be James.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2014 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 57

I bet it's whoever set fire to Bella's garage. The first note of being a good stalker is to establish your targets routines and who they are close to. The downside of Bella getting her grandmas house is that her mom knows where it is and since she is in collusion with James, she could tell him where Bella is living. At least Bella is getting stronger for if/when they meet.

Reviewer: MaryE1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2014 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 57

James is following him huh I bet !

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2014 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 57

TANYA?

Reviewer: monkey22marie Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2014 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 57

James it has to be him if not Renee 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2014 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 57

Bet it's James or Renee

Reviewer: landaday1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2014 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 57

Psycho rose, tanya, crazy mama, crazy james, or worried dad??? 

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2014 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 57

:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2014 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 57

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: nnalday Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2014 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 57

Please tell me Irina or Tanya are not trying to come back...

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2014 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 57

thinking james

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2014 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 57

You are leaving us hanging! !!!!!!!! Hope you update soon.  Loving this story. 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2014 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 56

Poor Bella but she is still doing great and Edward can he get anymore dreamy update soon

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2014 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 56

So glad he is there for support. Eager to meet Charlie and gain another protector for Bella.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2014 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 56

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 56

I'm glad the he knows and shares his love with her, even if she's only asleep...

Reviewer: Ni Ra Di Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 56

I know the chaptpers are shorter but I feel like it's dragging a bit. I'm not into feeling sorry for Bella for some reason. Hmmm. She actually makes me kind of mad. The helpless dame from those old school romatic movies. Not the smart alec, funny girl. I understand the story is building but still makes me wish for a stronger lead. I'll be patient. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 56

:)

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 56

I like your story, I just wish your chapters were longer, keep on writing.

Cheers

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 56

I love that the fireman wants to set James on fire! Poetic!

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 52

Renee is a piece of work

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 56

=)

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 56

Glad e is there to help comfort her some.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 56

Poor Bella.  Bless her heart.  So glad that she now has Edward and his family and friends. 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 56

I LOVE THIS!!! :)=)

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 56

I would imagine it will take Bella longer but soon she will realize that Edward is not going anywhere. I hope he has some patience because I am sure that Bella's journey will be one step forward and sometimes two steps back but at least she is moving in the right direction. At least once Emmett moves, Edward will get his privacy back. ;)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 56

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 56

I want to know when James will get his cumuppence!

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 56

:)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2014 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 55

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2014 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 55

Poor thing.  Here's to hoping for more "better" days.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2014 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 55

Sadly she's got to go through the pain to get to the good.  

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2014 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 55

It's interesting how scents can tie into so many things. I think because humans are so visual we sometimes forget the power of the nose.

i think Edward will be supportive as always but also sad that he can't do more for her. Maybe this would be a good time for her to take him to one of her therapy sessions.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2014 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 55

Well even with that little sad moment she is still doing so well update soon

Reviewer: catwalk1945 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2014 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 55

Bella will need a little more time, the pace of this story will give us all that.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2014 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 55

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2014 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 55

Loving this

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2014 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 55

James needs to be dealt with. I can't wait for that to happen!

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2014 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 55

:)

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2014 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 55

Edward is so sweet.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2014 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 55

Poor Bella.  But I am glad that she is talking to Edward about things.  I was wondering,  will we ever meet Renee and James? Will they make an appearance?

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2014 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 55

I'm sure setbacks are normal in her situation and I don't think Edward would ever hold that against her! Bit he might worry about how strong a reaction that gets from her... And I'm sure whatever he's going to do about it, will be lovely and well appreciated;)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2014 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 55

=)

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2014 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 55

He will be there for her.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2014 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 54

yey for charlie coming.

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2014 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 54

I'm curious if his theory will apply to Charlie as well;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2014 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 53

Edward to the rescue;) if that's not the best food delivery...

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2014 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 54

:)

Reviewer: Molly May Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2014 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 54

Oh come on....of course they love him .... It's Edward after all..... Yeah

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