Date: 10 Aug 2014 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 54
I am really enjoying this story. thank you for sharing it with us. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 10 Aug 2014 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 54
Glad to see that Edward is not nervous about meeting her dad. Lol I can just see his cocky grin.
I used to get awful cramps before I discovered birth control so I feel your pain Bella.
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2014 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 54
I loved it awe now she is taking care of him so sweet they are
Date: 10 Aug 2014 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 54
Lol parents love me he is too cute.
Date: 10 Aug 2014 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 54
Love it. But this seemed really short and sweet. Wished your chapters were longer. Love reading your wonderful story.
Date: 10 Aug 2014 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 54
Happy for bella and charlie!
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2014 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 54
So good I just love the storty so far.
Date: 10 Aug 2014 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 54
So nice to see things going well. But, where are James & Renee? Maybe they will wait until Charlie is there to strike.
Date: 10 Aug 2014 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 54
I LOVE him too! I also LOVE this story!! :)
Date: 10 Aug 2014 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 54
Loving this story!!! I think this Edward is one of the most unperfect perfect man! Geez, he should give lessons on how to talk to the woman you love! Melting....
Date: 10 Aug 2014 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 54
I am glad that Charlie is going to be likable. I love that Edward is so good with Bella.
Looking forward to more :D
Date: 10 Aug 2014 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 54
good thing she finds out while he is alive and they can start over.
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2014 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 54
To short, but highly appreciated.
Date: 10 Aug 2014 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 54
So glad that Charlie is coming to visit for her birthday.
Date: 10 Aug 2014 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 54
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2014 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 53
Awww! They are so good together! *swoon*
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2014 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 52
Ugh! Really adds to the list of vile, deceptive, and manipulative things that Renee has done. Bitch is going down, right? LOL
Date: 09 Aug 2014 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 53
They both need reasuring all the time so sweet.
Date: 09 Aug 2014 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 53
I am so glad that Bella got ahold of Charlie. I hope he rip Renee a new one!! And even get to smack James around a few times too!! After Edward, and maybe Emmett. Emmetts a big guy. I am sure he packs a whallop!! :)
Looking forward to more!
Date: 09 Aug 2014 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 53
Glad they were able to talk about things. I imagine it's nice for Bella to have his company after her long day. But of course now Edward is going to want to kill her mom even more. At least they both have something good to look forward to after the talk.;)
Date: 09 Aug 2014 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 53
I just love them being together. They are so cute together.
Date: 08 Aug 2014 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 53
Grrrrroooowwl! These two are so cute.
Date: 08 Aug 2014 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 53
I'm enjoying this story and all seems to be going much better between them.
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2014 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 53
I loved it she gets so wrapped up in her work thank goodness for Edward now what is next will her ex 9r her mom show themselves
Date: 08 Aug 2014 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 53
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 08 Aug 2014 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 53
I've missed many a meal when I'm into work or a book. LOL
Date: 08 Aug 2014 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 53
I am glad they are fine.
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2014 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 52
Yes, I knew Charlie loved Bella, it's time to make that bitch troll Renee pay.......
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2014 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 50
You know I think Bella should badass up, and cut a fool if she has to. She has been shit on enough and enough is enough. She's rich, smart and she can be powerful if she wants to, I mean really kick some ass.
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2014 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 49
A very sad chapter, and a little that will surely need someone to care for her.
Date: 08 Aug 2014 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 52
Poor Charlie and Bella so much lose time just because Renee is an evil bitch.
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2014 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 52
Great Story! Will you tell us what happens to baby Melanie? If it turns out she is an orphan Bella should adopt her. I'm glad that Bella talked to Charlie and it turns out he wants to be involved and always wanted to be. I am looking forward to the next chapter, till next time, take care.
Date: 07 Aug 2014 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 51
I hope she finds out that Charlie is better than she thought.
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2014 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 52
Renee is an evil, heinous bitch! She & James NEEDS to pay for all that they have done, ASAP! I wonder if James & Renee are somehow in cahoots together & always have been, or even more disturbingly, possibly even together as a couple?
It's just such a shame that someone worthless like Renee was able to have children, yet someone like Bella has possibly had that right cruelly taken from her. I HOPE by some miracle that she & Edward can have their own biological child someday soon. I think that would help Bella "heal" in more ways than one. :)
Can't wait for more! ;)
Date: 07 Aug 2014 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 52
I figured Renee was lying to Charlie. I can understand Charlie's position but at the same time he should have insisted that he hear it from Bella. But then Renee might have found a way to make Bella lie to him. Hopefully they will be able to repair their relationship. That would also help Bella's trust issues.
Date: 07 Aug 2014 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 52
ahhh so the plot thickens. NOW I'm thinking since Renee knows about the college fund as well as Grams money, that James would be entitled to get his hands off it if they married.
Date: 07 Aug 2014 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 52
Can't wait to see Renee go down for her neglect and misdeeds.
Date: 07 Aug 2014 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 52
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 07 Aug 2014 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 52
so happy right now for bella and charlie maybe together they can make sure renee and james pays for what they have done do both of them.
Date: 07 Aug 2014 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 52
So glad Bella is finally getting angry. All part if the healing process. Now she can fight back!!
Date: 07 Aug 2014 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 52
Yes Charlie is coming....
Date: 07 Aug 2014 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 52
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 07 Aug 2014 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 52
Wow, excellent chapter. Looking forward to more.
Date: 07 Aug 2014 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 52
Love this! Dying for more!! :)
Date: 06 Aug 2014 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 52
I thought it might be something like that! Poor Charlie! Poor Bella! I hope they can have some kind of relationship now....
Date: 06 Aug 2014 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 52
OMGosh! Renee is a real bitch. I can not imagine doing that to your own child. I am glad that Charlie is coming to see Bella.
Date: 06 Aug 2014 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 52
I'm sure it's very hard for Bella to trust Charlie, but her calling him dad at the end of their talk is giving me hope!
Date: 06 Aug 2014 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 52
What a horrible woman Renee is! I hope she gets what she deserves.
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2014 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 52
Wow Renee needs to go to jail and be someone's bitch and see how she likes it will her dad help her keep James away update soon
Date: 06 Aug 2014 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 51
Hmmm nothing good I bet.
Bring on the next chapter girlie 😄
Ima waitin....
😉
Date: 06 Aug 2014 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 51
Oh no. What in the world did Renee tell Charlie. This does not sound good.
Date: 06 Aug 2014 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 51
Oh boy! I bet Renee was the reason they are so distant. I cant wait for more to find out what Renee has said to Charlie!!! :)=)
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2014 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 51
let's hope Charlie doesn't believe anything Renee has to say
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2014 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 51
Oh boy we'll at least Alice saw what she did wrong but hmmm what will her dad say update soon
Date: 06 Aug 2014 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 51
ok i knew charlie was acting the way he was for a reason all this time and yes we should not be suprised that renee has alot to do with it. i am suprised that it has taken him this long to talk to bella about it. i cant wait to hear what she had been saying.
Date: 06 Aug 2014 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 51
Loved it can't wait for more :)
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2014 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 51
Oh lord, what has Renee told Charlie?!
Sounds like Charlie wasn't upset she called at least. :) Maybe things aren't so bad between he and Bella after all?
Date: 06 Aug 2014 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 51
Lies, Renee told Charlie lies. Let's hope dad believes his daughter.
Date: 06 Aug 2014 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 51
What did Bitchnee tell Charlie?? Did Bella ever tell Charlie about Bitchnee or James did to her??
Looking forward to more :)
Date: 06 Aug 2014 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 51
Well knowing a bit about how Renee sees the world, I am sure she spun the whole thing with James to be Bella's fault. Since Charlie does not know much of her life, he would probably believe whatever Renee tells him. Sounds like it should be an interesting conversation.
Date: 06 Aug 2014 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 51
oh oh. Renee has been up to no good again? Bella is right about Alice. Despite her heart being in the right place, she's a buttinsky....
Date: 06 Aug 2014 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 51
Alice has her heart at the right place, but sometimes that means you have to shut your mouth as well...
Oh oh... This doesn't sound good - at all!
Date: 06 Aug 2014 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 51
Please dont let charlie be a crazy one too...bella has enough to deal with
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2014 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 51
Well glad he's not a Cad! Poor dear girl, she's been very mistreated! I love how Bella told Alice the person owed the apologies was Edward! Hopefully Chief Swan will bring some enlightenment to his daughter!
Date: 05 Aug 2014 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 51
What, really? you are going to stop here?
Date: 05 Aug 2014 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 51
Omg! What did Renee say?
Date: 05 Aug 2014 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 51
Oh boy! Can't wait to read more soon of Charlie and Renee' s conversation.
Date: 05 Aug 2014 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 51
Tell him the truth !!!!! So he won't give out the number!!!
Date: 05 Aug 2014 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 51
Glad Alice sorta apologized. hmmm wonder what Charlie is gonna say
Date: 05 Aug 2014 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 51
Sounds like I don't have to hate Charlie, which is a relief. I hate mean Charlies in fics. I love hatingRenee though. I definitely think she was a shitty parent in canon.
Date: 05 Aug 2014 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 50
I think she was a bit too calm at the news about Tanya. He should have told her before, but Alice also shouldn't have butted in. Maybe Bella will tell him what is still on her mind later, and maybe not....
Date: 05 Aug 2014 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 50
I'm curious about Bella's true thoughts, but I don't think it will be too far away from what she told him...
Date: 05 Aug 2014 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 50
OMG! I can't wait for the convo between Bella and Alice! :)
Date: 05 Aug 2014 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 50
I think Bella is going to freak out about Tanya
Date: 05 Aug 2014 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 48
That is love they are there for each other
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2014 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 50
I think Tanya is going to be a problem
Date: 05 Aug 2014 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 50
Bella was a little too calm for me, which makes me think she's not as fine as she claims. I think it has more to do with her self worth and her self esteem than his past relationships. Edward is an attractive guy who could have any woman he wants. Not someone like her.
Date: 05 Aug 2014 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 50
I feel so badly for Edward and his crew having to experience something like that. I am so proud of all of our firefighters and paramedics who endure these kind of challenges each day to help others in need.
Bella seemed a little too calm and like she wanted to immediately run off, which makes me suspect she wasn't as okay with it as she said she was.
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2014 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 50
I loved it poor Edward he has crazy ex girlfriends but I think Bella can handle them update soon
Date: 05 Aug 2014 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 50
I think its good Bella was calm. It's possible that there is something else on her mind. Edward knows something is up. Hopefully Alice can get Bella calmed down. I would imagine its a trust issue for Bella, especially with her past.
Date: 05 Aug 2014 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 50
I appreciate your updates it. Is a good story
Date: 05 Aug 2014 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 50
Hopefully what Bella said was the truth. His past is just that. Think he handled it well but alice is a nosy nellie.