Date: 30 Jul 2014 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 44
What a car and I love how she stepped on that guys nuts lol
Date: 30 Jul 2014 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 45
It's a nice change having a relaxed Carlisle and esme. Or should I say Carl and Essie. That should help Bella relax. I think this is an important step for both of them because it signals how important their relationship is, especially for Bella. She knows that Edward wants his family to know her.
Date: 29 Jul 2014 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 44
I LOVE that Bella asserted herself with the car salesman who hit on her! It seems like she's getting better at taking care of herself in that regard!
Date: 29 Jul 2014 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 44
Yea Car shopping can be the worst. Glad she got a car she wanted though
Date: 29 Jul 2014 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 44
Bring on dinner girlie.
I'm hungrey
lol
😜
Date: 29 Jul 2014 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 44
Haha, great chap. Please update soon.
Date: 29 Jul 2014 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 44
I'm sure every sales person loves the way Alice thinks;)
The new car looks amazing! I'm sure it was a great choice for Bella!
Uh... Meeting the family soon;)
Date: 29 Jul 2014 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 44
I'm glad that Bella felt able to treat herself to something nice. Hopefully she doesn't get too nervous when it's time to meet the parents.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2014 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 44
Ha ha! That a fun little adventure at the dealership! ;)
Date: 29 Jul 2014 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 44
Love the car purchase. Serves the sales guy right for being an idiot!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2014 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 44
LOL Alice saying she needs clothes for the dinner. I can't wait for the dinner, so looking forward to that.
Date: 29 Jul 2014 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 44
Loved that she didnt take any sh-- from pushy salesperson!! She is grtting her mojo back!! Thank you! Oh I think it is Rose who burned garage!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2014 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 44
I loved it hehehehehe now she found a new suv and Alice is taking her shopping for their family dinner will they rest of the family love her too
Date: 29 Jul 2014 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 44
I am wondering when we are going to hear from James or Bella's mother.
I am glad that Bella is acting more like her old self.
As always, you leave me wanting more. Can't wait for you to update again.
Date: 29 Jul 2014 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 44
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2014 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 43
You often reference Edward has having hair sweapt from his brow. I just can't imagin it that long? Is it like an onld justing Bieber haircut? Like s hort sketer boy cut? Brad Pitt model locks? Does Edward have mangs? (man bangs)
Date: 28 Jul 2014 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 43
That was a nice ending to a great date loved it.
Date: 28 Jul 2014 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 43
I want to see James get his due for hurting Bella like he did. I hope you'll make that happen.....and....it can't be too comfortable for Edward to go home with his shorts full of jizz....I wonder why he didn't take them off.
Date: 28 Jul 2014 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 43
lol for E's sweet tooth. So glad she is doing better
Date: 28 Jul 2014 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 43
I don't know why that is, but sometimes I think dry humping is more erotic than the full lemon...
theyre such a great couple and I still agree with you, rushing them into sex wouldn't be doing them any good... And there are so many other things they CAN do;)
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2014 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 43
Woo hoo! Hot action and totally cute ending!
xo
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2014 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 43
I loved it now that is how to end a date on a happy note heheheheeh more please
Date: 28 Jul 2014 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 43
Very nice! The lead up, the anticipitation......cannot wait!
Date: 28 Jul 2014 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 43
I love this and I am so excited to meet the parents! :)=)
Date: 28 Jul 2014 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 43
It seems that bella is getting better since she can talk about babies and what happened without panicking but I know she still has work to do. I am glad she is getting more comfortable with Edward physically but I am sure that is also something she is working on. Meeting the parents should be interesting. Hopefully they know enough not to talk about potential grandkids. You know how some parents can get over eager about that. But it's also great that Bella does not see her potential lack of being a biological parent as a reason not to be a parent at all.
Date: 28 Jul 2014 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 43
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 28 Jul 2014 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 43
I am glad that you are taking it slow with these two. It may have started out as dry humping but it did not end that way. LOL!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2014 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 26
This review honors chapter twenty five and twenty six, nice is enough said.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2014 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 42
They make me giddy, LOL!
Date: 27 Jul 2014 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 42
I like that after him pointing out she must love him, she didn't freak out but backed it up in her mind;)
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2014 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 42
Hehehehe I love it now that is a date I want to go on damn he is better than good now how will he like the cake hahahahaha
Date: 27 Jul 2014 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 42
awww they are officially together now. too cute.
Date: 27 Jul 2014 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 42
this is very sweet and just what she needs, for him to go slowly. wish i had a man like that....
Date: 27 Jul 2014 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 42
That was so fun and cute sounds like a great place.
Date: 27 Jul 2014 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 42
Ahhhhhh
Love the last line.
Baking for me cause you love . You just don't know it yet.
Again ahhhhhh
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2014 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 24
Bella is sad, scare and hurting, maybe Edward and Bella can help each other.
Date: 27 Jul 2014 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 42
I think it's great that she was taking pictures during the carriage ride instead of them just trying to be cuddly and romantic. I sympathize with the thought about the "good" camera. I face the same dilemma sometimes. Tell Edward I am sure the cheesecake will be worth the wait.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2014 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 42
Great story, keep on writing
Date: 27 Jul 2014 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 42
I love this!! :)=)
Date: 27 Jul 2014 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 42
Edward is killing me with all this talking of eating. Lol. Great job with their date. As always, can't wait for more.
Date: 26 Jul 2014 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 41
Loving the date so far. Great job.
Date: 26 Jul 2014 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 41
I love your protectiveness about the Sears Tower, I can really understand why you and Edward feel that way;)
Date: 26 Jul 2014 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 41
What a great date so far
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2014 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 41
Ehhehehehehehe I love it and his sweet tooth I love baking have him try pumpkin bread yummy update soon
Date: 26 Jul 2014 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 41
Sweet date loving how cute they are with one another.
Date: 26 Jul 2014 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 41
what a lovely romantic date....
Date: 26 Jul 2014 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 41
I love this!!! :)=)
Date: 26 Jul 2014 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 41
I am also a Nikon girl. I also finally got the chance to go to the top of the Sears tower last year. It would be a great place for a date. I am sure Bella will like the rest too. By the way, I thought it was funny that edward started bouncing when he heard cheesecake. I imagine he looked like a little kid for a minute.
Date: 26 Jul 2014 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 41
looking forward to more
Date: 26 Jul 2014 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 41
awww sweet date times.
Date: 25 Jul 2014 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 40
ahh.. I am loving this Edward!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2014 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 40
Awe his parents sound so sweet and damn Edward is romantic
Date: 25 Jul 2014 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 40
hmmm wonder if the Dad thing will get better for her? nice date
Date: 25 Jul 2014 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 40
I'm enjoying this date very much, so I'm pretty sure they're loving this time together all the more;)
Date: 25 Jul 2014 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 40
Collective awww! They are so cute.
Date: 25 Jul 2014 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 40
Awhh. Sweet. I feel the angst coming soon
Date: 25 Jul 2014 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 40
romantic date. nice.
Date: 25 Jul 2014 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 40
They are so good together
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2014 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 40
How could anyone not get his humor?
Author's Response:
His ex ~ Irina ~ is a stick in the mud. She got bored easily...she'll be coming back.
Date: 25 Jul 2014 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 40
Nice dinner glad they are having a happy moment.
Date: 25 Jul 2014 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 40
Love the date so far.
Date: 25 Jul 2014 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 40
Glad to see that Bella is doing better. I work as an environmental educator and I agree with Edward that based on some of the questions that I get asked, I fear for our future.
Date: 25 Jul 2014 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 40
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 24 Jul 2014 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 39
Sweet, everyone looking good.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2014 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 39
Love your story, just wish your chapters were longer. Keep on writing
Date: 24 Jul 2014 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love the story so far. I was hoping for some visuals, the a/n states there are women on your tumbler. I checked but I don't see anything for this story just the others. Please help. :)
Author's Response:
Type in Caught in the Flames in the Search bar and all of the visuals for this story will pop up, along with teasers and such.
Date: 24 Jul 2014 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 39
Sounds like a great start to their date! I just spent a weekend in Las Vegas and I know that dressing for extremly hot weather and still looking nice is a challange. Hopefully the rest of their date goes smoothly.
Date: 24 Jul 2014 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 39
Looking forward to more :)
Date: 24 Jul 2014 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 39
He is doing everything right he gramma is the only person that showed her love beside Edward
Date: 24 Jul 2014 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 39
very romantic! i've always wanted to ride in a horse drawn carriage but i don't think they have them here in L.A. where i live....
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2014 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 39
Does he give tips to husbands' of 42 years?
Date: 24 Jul 2014 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 39
Loving this story.
Date: 24 Jul 2014 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 39
Lol him and Alice are so cute.
Date: 24 Jul 2014 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 39
sounds like a wonderfully planned out night
Date: 24 Jul 2014 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 39
So sweet, happy date night.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2014 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 39
I loved it and Alice s funny ehhehehehehehe more please
Date: 24 Jul 2014 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 39
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 23 Jul 2014 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 38
Love how they are taking care of the boys
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2014 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 38
I don't know much about Chicago other that what my bestie tells me so Table Fifity-Two and Naha and on my list of places to each! Fancy schmancy Mac & Cheese. Yum! I love food!