Date: 23 Jul 2014 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 38
Ah.. they are squeeking out a little happy in her horrible situation.
Love it!! :D
Date: 23 Jul 2014 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 38
Awe the girls stayed to feed the guys that was sweet update soon
Date: 23 Jul 2014 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 37
i want to kick egg carriers ass but first her ex. i wont say is name cause he dosent deserve to be called by his name and neither does her mother, cause she was just the carrier of bella not a mother.
Date: 23 Jul 2014 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 38
Glad that Bella waited for the guys to come back.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2014 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 38
Idiots with fireworks.
Date: 22 Jul 2014 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 38
well good chapter.
Date: 22 Jul 2014 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 38
They are so good to the guys having it all ready for them. Lol Em stinks.
Date: 22 Jul 2014 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 38
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 22 Jul 2014 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 38
I think they should do something besides the regular dinner thing. They are still trying to get to know each other so maybe something that will let them talk and bond a bit. Looking forward to it.
Date: 22 Jul 2014 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 38
a little gruesome there about that poor fool who lost his hand.....yuck! Emmett is a hoot! so glad Bella stuck around.
Date: 22 Jul 2014 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 38
I'm glad Bella and the other girls stayed and even made some more food presentable for the guys. Hell fighting a fire for over four hours must be pretty difficult on the body as well as the mind...
Date: 22 Jul 2014 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 38
People really do stupid things, esp when drinking.
Date: 22 Jul 2014 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 38
Awwww! I love how they are.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2014 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 37
What a great filler chapter. I am so glad that she told Emmet her story but I don't think it as any of his business. Bella is too nice. I would have been just as much of an ass as he was beign to her. I'm nto sure if I like this delicate Bella. I like her snarky. H really think her momma set that fire trying to scre her back to florida. Did Bella have no frined in Jacksonville, does no one miss her there?
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2014 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 37
Great chapter!
Looks like it's a good start to a new relationship.
Date: 22 Jul 2014 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 37
I only check TWCS for updates on this story! Lol I'm so busy with work I don't have time to read, but I make time for your updates! Love this story!!!!
Date: 22 Jul 2014 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 37
Doesn't her mother know what James did to her, continues to do? Is money that important to Renee that she would sacrifice her daughter? I say dump that woman's ass right on the ground!! mother or not....
Date: 22 Jul 2014 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 37
I am so happy she is giving it a try.
Date: 22 Jul 2014 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 37
Oh Edward. So sweet! Sounds like they are off to a good start which is good because I am sure some more drama is coming their way.
Date: 22 Jul 2014 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 37
I love EPOV! His desires to protect her and let her set the pace makes women's hearts swoon!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2014 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 30
Great chapter!
Well I'm hoping that she has been seeing someone for her grief and experience with James and her mom.
I'm gonna go with an ascociate of James for the fire...
Date: 22 Jul 2014 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 37
There is a fire in his pants too lol
Date: 22 Jul 2014 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 37
Glad that Bella and Edward are being honest with each other.
Date: 22 Jul 2014 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 36
What is Emmett going to think about Bella's ex starting the fire.
Date: 22 Jul 2014 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 37
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 22 Jul 2014 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 36
I am so hooked on this story!!! I love it! I'm glad Bella is getting help, but like Edward I'm really worried about her ex showing up. Looking forward to more!
Date: 22 Jul 2014 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 37
Glad Em is on board now.
Date: 22 Jul 2014 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 37
I am excited for more!! :)=)
Date: 21 Jul 2014 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 37
So sad the bbq wa interrupted.
Date: 21 Jul 2014 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 37
I can so visualize Edward running to get his gear on, jumping in the truck and pulling out of the station. Its an amazing visual.
Is it bad that I begin to fantasize about when he gets back to the station and him stripping down? Yummy.
Date: 21 Jul 2014 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 37
Poor Bella... can not wait for the James asskicking!
And Renee.. such a nasty hateful woman!!
Looking forward to more :)
Date: 21 Jul 2014 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 37
The wonders of an Edward Cullen hug;)
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2014 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 37
Well its a start and she is doing better and handling it better too update soon
Date: 21 Jul 2014 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 36
Oh yeah I can hear Emmett growling all the way here in Oz.
Who ever did this want to watch out.
Like I said I think Emmett will do more damage than what Edward will to who ever burnt the garage down.
Emmett hear him ROAR
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Date: 21 Jul 2014 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 36
EMMETT TO THE RESCUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 21 Jul 2014 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 36
Maybe Bella can teach Emmett that he should not paint all women with the same brush, much in the way they are helping her learn to trust people. Hopefully Emmett will help because it sounds like they will need all they can get.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2014 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 36
He better! Good chapter.
Date: 21 Jul 2014 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 36
I think the entire firehouse will end up being Team Bella before its over. They might even make her their mascot!! LOL :)
Date: 21 Jul 2014 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 22
OMG! What happened to Bella is horrible! I'm so glad she has friends to turn to now. I'm sure she has a long way to go in healing. Hopefully she'll allow her friends to be there for her.
Date: 21 Jul 2014 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 19
Happy to see Emmett get rid of the trash! I know they say love is blind, but wow! That broad's rational of what her friend did to Edward is beyond ridiculous!
Date: 21 Jul 2014 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 17
Rose is a major bitch! I hope she gets a serious dose of her own medicine!
Date: 21 Jul 2014 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 12
That's definitely bit a good email! Hopefully who ever it is doesn't find her anytime soon!
Date: 21 Jul 2014 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 4
Thank goodness Edward appeared when he did and saved Bella from probably knocking down the shelves!! It really sucks sometimes to be height challenged aka short! That was an awesome thing Bella did for Edward.
Date: 21 Jul 2014 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 36
I really wish these chapters were longer. Love the story
Date: 20 Jul 2014 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 36
Emmett got away pretty easy, but I think it's okay. Edward knows both their stories, so it's nice to not push the matter too hard on Emmett;)
Ah... The dreaded arson to Bella's garage. I'm glad that Edward confides in Emmett about his guess, because for now he's living pretty close to Bella as well. The more watchful eyes we have there the better!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2014 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 36
Emmett needs to join team Angel, screw Rosalie! He better get his head out his ass! Loved the chapters(finally caught up) now I need more,
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2014 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 36
He better joing Team Bella. I'm ohtobeyoung on fanfiction by the way. Going over ther for some more GeekBoy.
Date: 20 Jul 2014 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 36
Did Rose burn the garage??
Date: 20 Jul 2014 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 36
Emmett will definitely be team Bella. She will help him heal as well.
Date: 20 Jul 2014 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 36
More votes for team bella!
Date: 20 Jul 2014 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 36
Glad Em got his head out of his arse.
Date: 20 Jul 2014 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 36
Emmett is lucky that is all he got from Edward lol. I am so happy Emmett is back on team Bella.
Date: 20 Jul 2014 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 36
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2014 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 36
Wow well Emmett is definitely team Bella now will they find out who started the fire before something else happens
Date: 20 Jul 2014 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 36
Hell yes, he'll join Team Bella! How could he not, now that he knows her story.
Date: 20 Jul 2014 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 35
Em not bad....hope him & bella work it out
Date: 20 Jul 2014 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 35
I'm glad Bella got the chance to tell Emmett why she did what she did. And not hiding or getting into too much detail was a very good move. Now I'm curious how he will be treating her and how Edward is going to react to her crying because if the talk she had with Em...
Date: 19 Jul 2014 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 35
Yeah brave Bella.
Date: 19 Jul 2014 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 35
Glad she told Em off
Date: 19 Jul 2014 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 35
I LOVE THIS! I am so proud of Bella! :)=)
Date: 19 Jul 2014 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 35
I do think things will get better. Especially, after Edward eventually beats the crap out of James.
Date: 19 Jul 2014 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 35
I see that by facing, and talking to, Emmett that Bella is slowly recovering and beginning to trust people again. Now that he knows her story, maybe Emmett will lighten up on her.
Date: 19 Jul 2014 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 35
That was amazing Bella was so strong to confront Emmett and emmett sees what a dick he was. Edward is about to rip Emmetts head off for making her cry.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2014 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 35
Well it's a start a good one for Edward and Bella and now Emmett knows will he back off update soon
Date: 19 Jul 2014 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 35
Hmmmm
He's going to give it to Emmett.
But I would like him just to say "see Emmett" & leave it at that.
i think now that Emmett knows the full story he will be Bella's number one protector more so then what Edward will be.
Just sayin.
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[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2014 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 35
So happy stubborn Emmett listened
Date: 19 Jul 2014 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 35
Love the story and frequent posts. But it still feels like you are just getting in to it and it's done. Ugg. Thanks, really enjoying it.
Date: 19 Jul 2014 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 35
It is good she told him like it is so he can get his head out of his ass.
Date: 19 Jul 2014 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 35
I am glad that she talked to Emmett. She was up front with him. I hope he admits he was wrong for the way he treated her.
Date: 19 Jul 2014 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 35
It must be tough for Edward to be in the middle but at least Bella and Emmett cleared the air. And Bella, I have news for you, life is rarely easy but the good stuff is worth fighting for. I am sure Edward will have his own thoughts on Emmett.
Date: 19 Jul 2014 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 35
Poor Bella!
Looking forward to more :)
Date: 19 Jul 2014 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 35
looking forward to more
Date: 18 Jul 2014 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 34
'HOLLA'!!! I am excited for the bbq! ;)
Date: 18 Jul 2014 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 34
Yes! Kissing is good. A good start. I like that you'll be taking them slowly into this. I'm now reading 4 of your stories actively and 2 others passively.....
Date: 18 Jul 2014 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 34
Glad they are giving each other a chance.
I thought Emmett knew her story. Emmett was standing guard out her door after the bar incident. Can't wait for more.
Date: 18 Jul 2014 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 34
HOLLA!!
Loving it, and looking forward to more :)
Date: 18 Jul 2014 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 34
That was a good first kiss they needed it and slow is good they both need to trust
Date: 18 Jul 2014 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 34
Holla, girl;)
I'm glad that they're kissing and I think taking things slow is the only way to built up trust in themselves and each other... Both have some big packages to deal with from their pasts, so it's natural they can't get over it like snapping your fingers...
I hope Emmett can see and understand whatever Bella decides to tell him.
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2014 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 22
So sad, but thats Bella. Why can't she just kill his ass, oops, for got about her mom taking his side, evil mom from hell.
Date: 18 Jul 2014 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 34
HOLLA!!!!!!!
can't wait for Bella and Emmett's chat.