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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2014 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 30

Pretty sure it is her ex and I think her mom is involved.  I think Bella has had a lot of time to think with help from Alice.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2014 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 30

OMG! I am hoping Bella was getting help during the last month. I also think it could have been James, Rose, Tanya or even Irina after finding out about Bella from Rose! I am excited to see where you go from here! This is fantastic!!! :)=)

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2014 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 30

I'm reading this here now....Did James set the fire? Did Bella get some help in the past month? Emmett's attitude is a bit harsh....

Reviewer: Cullenbabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2014 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 15

Keep up writing a good story. I love all the stories that I've read 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2014 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 30

=)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2014 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 30

So because she could not share her misery with them Emmett thinks she is a bitch. Well in my life experience I would call that someone that is embarressed by it as well as still scared of letting people get close.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2014 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 30

Hopefully bella stops shutting them out

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2014 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 30

Her mom set the fire so she'd come back tail between legs and becUse she is jealous that Bella got the house.  

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2014 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 30

Chapter too short. Maybe Bella has been going to rehab??

 

love the story, thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2014 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 30

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2014 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 30

:)

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2014 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 30

I'm not quite sure what happened to Bella in that month, other than ignoring the one person who truly cares for her.    But it is obvious that she is in a better place, though, at least for the time being.    I am glad that she reached back out to Edward to go and talk with him.   I'm really hoping thing improve between them, because he really likes her.  And Emmett, good for Edward for sticking up for Bella even if he is upset with her.   He knows it wasn't done intentionally, and that she has real issues going on. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2014 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 30

I can't believe that Bella has not talked to any of them in a month.  I am thinking that James is definitely behind the fire. Can't wait to see what she tells Edward when they meet. 

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2014 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 30

Maybe she started counseling on her own. I think it's James, or someone he hired. 

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2014 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 30

It was probably close or around the date that she lost the baby.  Understandable. 

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2014 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 30

I have a feeling about the one setting her garage on fire, but I think it's too obvious to be him right away...

emmett really isn't happy with her:( I get that he's frustrated, but loosing his professional side by it? That's low...

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2014 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 29

I understand that Bella is effed up, but she needs to lean on somebody; have somebody in her corner, and Edward is the guy who not only is volunteering, but I think at this point in the story, he's the only one she really opens up to.    She needs him, and pushing him away isn't the right thing to do.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2014 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 29

She thinks he only wants to stay because he feels sorry for her she doesnt want that but she needs him

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2014 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 29

Poor thing. 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2014 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 29

I think he is going to and the rest of them help her get help so she can move forward. 

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2014 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 29

Wow! I'm feeling very sorry for Bella and really want to kick Rose's ass!!! Does someone get to do that?? Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2014 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 29

Yeah. I hope this helps her seek our help. It may make the difference now that she gas some support.

 

hopecully she has done support before the asshole James shows up.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 29

Come on good times for Bella...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 29

I'm not happy with her sending him away, but I get it completely!

Reviewer: lushlou Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 29

Ooh we hope Bella works out her issues ,she is a lovely soul and deserves to be happy ...... with Edward of course

Cheers LOu

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 29

Wished your chapters were longer. But I enjoy getting updates everyday.  I wished she would have let Edward stay.  Can't wait for the next update. 

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 29

They're right. Unless someone wants help, iy won't work.

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 29

:)

Reviewer: LilCullen454 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 29

I really hope Bella gets some help even if she talks to a grief counselor!

Reviewer: errant diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 29

Yup, I'm pretty upset with her. She is royally fucked up. She has a wonderful man who wants her and to help her and she is acting....ugh, don't get me started.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 29

=)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 29

poor Bella

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 29

I need more! ;)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 29

Not surprising B finds it hard to let anyone in.  E and company are all good friends to her.    wowser for em's story

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 29

Bella thinks she is worthless and needs to talk to someone to help her.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 28

That guy is lucky that is all that happened to him Thank god Edward was there for her.

Reviewer: luvyateamedward Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 28

Thanks for the updates! Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 28

Wow, go Edward!!

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 28

Great chapter!

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 22

I knew it wasn't going to be a pretty story but i want expecting that. .. wow  poor Bella and brave Bella for getting out.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 28

Oh my!!   Poor Bella.    Edward is definitely becoming someone that Bella can rely on, not to mention that she trusts him implicitly.   And Alice totally dropped the ball in this one, and I'm glad that Edward basically called her out on it.   

Reviewer: MPMassen Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 28

Been out of the loop since chapter 15 so I has to play catch up. Love it! Can't wait for more!!! :)

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 28

Poor Bella one step forward two steps back because of some asshole. 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 28

WOw  the landlord has nerve.  He should be suing Rose as well not taking it out on Em.  

 

Poor Bella

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 28

Didn't think it was, or not all of it. 

Edward is a very good friend, no doubt.

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 28

Poor Bella everywhere she goes bad things seem to just keep happening to her...it's a good thing Edward can at least reach her when she panics...

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 28

good

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 28

I don't know if I can handle any hard drama!!  I just hope that edward the gang can handle things for bella until she is stron enough to handle things on her own

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 28

oh..... Poor Bella!

 

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 28

LOVE, LOVE,LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 28

LOOKING FORWARD THE NEXT UPDATE. THANKS READ YOU SOON.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 28

Oh my! Good thing Edward was there for her!

Why can't that be all the drama? ;)

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2014 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 28

Poor Bella

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2014 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 28

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2014 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 28

Poor Bella.  She can't even enjoy a night out with friends.  Edward is really getting attached to her. Can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2014 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 28

Rose is something else in this story. Hope he has her locked up. Poor Bella. What next for her?

Reviewer: PrincessBrat78 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2014 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 28

Thank you for the Birthday update!! I love this story!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2014 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 28

I'm glad that Leah has such a big heart and decided to loose an old "friendly" customer for a sweet new face! I'm sure Bella's connection with Edward has something to do with Frank being thrown out permanently though...

Hm... I'm curious how Emmett moving in with Edward for now will affect ExBs relationship;)

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2014 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 28

Poor Bella can't get a break.  At least she is letting Edward in.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2014 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 28

loving this

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2014 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 28

I. LOVE. THIS! :)=)

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2014 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 27

Wonderful story!!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2014 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 27

Hahahahaha! Sorry, Leah! *snickers* Go, Edward! ;)

Reviewer: bellagirl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2014 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 27

LOL well at least Leah's not an out right bitch. What I don't get is Rosalie? She's acting like a spoiled self centered little whore. Even worse than in the books. What is her deal? No one deserves to be cheated on, not for any reason and sure as shit not because they feel they weren't getting enough sex or the type of sex they wanted.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2014 11:15 AM Title: Chapter 27

:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2014 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 27

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2014 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 27

I'm with Edward, in regards to his feelings about Bella.   Hopefuly, the more times she spends with him, the more comfortable she'll get.   She really already is, she just doesn't realize it totally yet.

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2014 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 27

Poor Leah;)

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2014 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 27

READ YOU SOON.

Reviewer: LadyAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2014 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 27

yup another great chapter, can't wait for the next one!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2014 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 27

ROFL for Leah.   Hope Rose goes to jail.  What a biatch

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2014 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 27

Hahahaha now I need friends like them ehhehehehehehe poor emmet I hope he takes rose for everything update soon,

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2014 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 27

Okay.. LOL

Reviewer: Texas Twimom Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2014 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 27

I am absolutely loving this story!! Thanks so much!!

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2014 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 27

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2014 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 27

Lol Leah knows a good thing when she sees it

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2014 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 27

LOVE IT!!! :)

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2014 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 27

Funny. Leah is too much!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2014 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 27

Is Jacob going to go for Bella too????? Can't wait to realize what his reaction is.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2014 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 27

good

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2014 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 26

This is a fun read so far. Looking forward to the drama and, of course, the hot sex.

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2014 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 26

So when is the other shoe gonna drop? I'm sure that thanks to her mother James will be arriving soon. Will we get to meet Carlisle and Esme? What about Charlie? Is Rosalie gonna cause more problems? Can't wait for more. How often do you update?

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2014 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 26

That was great as long as it lasted but it is not over yet I hope she doesnt think he is blowing her off.

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2014 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 12

Generally I'd go with Jacob as being that ass from the past, but since he works with Edward that blows that. So I'm thinking maybe, James?? Or Aro?? Maybe even Phil??

Off to read more!

Reviewer: Molly May Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2014 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 26

Hmmmm

I can see Edward getting very very very protective at the bar.

Hmmmmmm

Yes I can ....

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2014 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 26

=)

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2014 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 26

I hope Bella realizes sooner than later how awesome edward is

Thanks for updating, enjoying this story

Reviewer: mct Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2014 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 26

Thanks for the update... as always, looking forward to more!!!  :)

 

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2014 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 26

Oh my cuteness! Loved it! 

Too bad it got cut short, but hooray for Seth! LOL

xo

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2014 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 26

Nice afternoon. Hopefully Bella won't get too overwhelmed at the bar. I can imagine she has not been going out much lately and we all know guys in bars are not always perfectly behaved.

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2014 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 26

I'm with Bella on movie soundtracks. Love them.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2014 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 26

Can't wait for more! :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2014 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 26

Love that she is trusting Edward.

 

Looking forward to more  :)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2014 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 26

Thanks for the warning for the drama to start soon, I appreciate it, but it could NEVER stop me from reading;)

I'm sad that their outing has been cut short, but their time together by themselves surely was great! And that Bella decided to tack along to Clear Waters is another good step in my book:)

not to forget that he admitted to REALLY liking her a lot;)

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2014 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 26

Wow what a great day I wish I was there now how will a night at the bar go hmmmm update soon

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2014 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 26

I love how edward is being with her... taking it slowly.  I really hope he can keep her safe!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2014 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 26

:)

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2014 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 26

At least they did have a good part of the day to spend together. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2014 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 26

Glad Edward has admitted to himself that he is falling for Bella.  Now to see how long it takes Bella to figure out she has fallen for Edward.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2014 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 26

E's falling hard.  so cute

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