Date: 14 Jan 2016 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow, she was pretty honest. I wonder if there are actually companies that do this!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2016 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow, Esme sounds like a royal bitch! What is she holding over Edward to make him work for her like this? I'm assuming from the prologue that there is a child involved - or perhaps a woman that Edward once loved? I'm not sure if anyone else has mentioned this, but I almost felt nuances of The Red Line in this story... Curious to find out more about the relationship between Esme and Edward. I don't think I like her right now!
Date: 13 Jan 2016 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 34
That's horrible that a human being can treat another like Jasper and Edward and who knows how many others like that. I hope that they're able to make sure Esme gets what she deserves! Can't wait until the next chapter!
Date: 13 Jan 2016 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 34
I am scared that this time Esme broke our sweet Edward.
Date: 13 Jan 2016 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 31
Bella is letting her pride rule right now. She insulted Edward and the place he has his mother. She knows he does the best he can. She is forgetting that everyone is not so rich.
Date: 13 Jan 2016 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 27
I worry about the torture Edward will have to endure when he gets home.
Date: 13 Jan 2016 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 34
Poor Alice and Jasper. Esme really fucked Jasper up bad. I am really worried about Edward. It as been months since Bella saw him. There is no telling what all Esme has done to him. Hope we hear from Edward soon.
Date: 12 Jan 2016 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 34
Esme has no clue that she's a walking, dead woman.
Date: 12 Jan 2016 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 34
Poor Jasper. Hope B can get help for E before he is totally broken, physically and mentally.
Date: 12 Jan 2016 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 33
Glad Alice agreed to see her. I can understand why she is really worried about Edward now. I can understand why, but sucks they won't help the investigation.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2016 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 34
Carlisle now has the information he needs to help Emmett pursue legal action against Esme Platt and her human trafficking business.
We all hope Edward is still in a state of health that will allow him to escape. Will his driver become part of this plan? He needs a better job as well. Maybe Bella should hire herself a new driver.
Date: 12 Jan 2016 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 34
im really running my mind on ways to kill esme
very violent ways
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2016 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 34
Thanks for the update! The first thing I do every morning is look for one. ;~)
Date: 12 Jan 2016 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 34
Go bella, go! Don't leave edward to be tortured much longer.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2016 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 34
Poor Jasper. Esme is evil
Date: 12 Jan 2016 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 34
Poor, brave Jasper....
Having to relive his life with Esme in therapy probably is bad enough, but on his own to help out a friend? That must be so much worse...
Not sure if I was in Alice shoes if I could sit by and "allow" him to get through that hell even once more than necessary to get better :(
Date: 12 Jan 2016 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 34
Go get 'em girl!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2016 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 34
Ahh... you have me nervous about Edward's condition. Poor Jasper, his story was so sad. I'm all for Bella storming in and saving the day.
Sherry
Date: 12 Jan 2016 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 34
OMMFNG!!! Esme has to GO!! It has to be gruesome! She's an evil BITCH!! I am anxiously waiting for more!
Date: 12 Jan 2016 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 34
Jasper's story made me cringe and cry at the same time. I hope Bella is not too late to save Edward....
Date: 12 Jan 2016 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 34
hoping she gets to e fast enough
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2016 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 34
I"M SO WORRIED ABOUT EDWARD!!!!
Date: 12 Jan 2016 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 34
Jasper is amazing so glad he is helping and Bella is going to get her man
Date: 12 Jan 2016 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 34
Well if she love him she better step on it before she is left with only a shell to rescue.
Date: 12 Jan 2016 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 34
I want to give Jasper a huge hug!
Date: 12 Jan 2016 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 34
I really hope they can take Esme and the rest of them down for good. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
[Report This]Date: 11 Jan 2016 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 33
Jasper's testimony may be the only thing that opens the door to prosecuting Esme Platt to the fullest extent of the law.
Date: 10 Jan 2016 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 33
A month! God knows what state Edward is in after a month of Esme's torture! I hope Bella doesn't give up. She just may save his life! I'm not fond of hearing about torture, but Jasper's story should be interesting.....
[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2016 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 33
I hope they do help
Date: 10 Jan 2016 10:22 AM Title: Prologue
Poor Edward!
Date: 10 Jan 2016 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 33
A whole month? And only now she really gets nervous about him not calling her back or anything?
Honestly I'm starting to doubt her feelings were as deep as she thought - because even pissed off at a person I wouldn't allow a person to suffer that long if I could’ve done something... and as little as it seems, this phone call might be the key to get him to safety :(
Date: 10 Jan 2016 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 33
Carlisle needs to pay Esme a visit to find out about Edward. I month is a longtime to not hear from him, so I'm certain it is not of his own free will.
[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2016 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 33
“I hope you have a strong stomach, Bella. My Jazzy’s story is not pretty.” This sentence gave my chills, and not in a good way.
Sherry
Date: 10 Jan 2016 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 33
I hope they will now be able to take down the evil bitch! Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 10 Jan 2016 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 33
Once Bella hears Jasper's story she will not stop until she gets him away from Esme. I just hope she does not get to down on herself for not going after him sooner.
Date: 10 Jan 2016 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 33
Oh crap! I hope Esme really really get what she deserves!! >:(
Date: 10 Jan 2016 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 33
I am so glad that Alice and Jasper have agreed to talk to Bella. I know Esme or Edward will not answer any of Bella's attempt. But why does Bella other try to get Rose to arrange an escort, requesting Edward. Bella could request under a different name.
[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2016 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 33
I just hope Edward isn't in critical condition when Bella finally gets to him.
Date: 07 Jan 2016 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 32
She'd better help him!! If she doesn't, who will?!?!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2016 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 32
Too bad Alice isn't willing to meet Bella to help explain away some of the illogical guilt Edward is experiencing at the hands of a wicked woman.
Date: 06 Jan 2016 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 32
She should realize he was being forced to behave badly to her.
Date: 05 Jan 2016 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 32
oh I hope she decides to fight for Edward. After hearing about his past, and about what Esme did to Jasper, how can she not know that Edward was scared whitless of Esme and that's why he pushed her away! Maybe Jasper will get the courage to come forward one day also and help put Esme out of business and in prison! or worse....
[Report This]Date: 05 Jan 2016 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 32
thank you for the update...Yes U hope Bella does something about it...Jasper & Alice were very helpful.. Jasper will help Edward they were friends..There is hope afterall.
Date: 05 Jan 2016 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 32
I get that Bella stills feels hurt, even if she now sees right through Esme's plans to put a ruft between her and Edward...
And yes, all the information Carlisle gave her, there's a lot to think about. But that she even considers leaving Edward alone in this mess, that feels completely wrong :(
Date: 05 Jan 2016 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 32
Bella is not able to let it go, she's already in too deep I would say... Jasper and Alice made it out of Esme's grip, and according to their reaction they still live in some fear that will only vanish if Esme gets caught :( If Bella learned what Esme does to Edward I think she would also buy him out immediately, but this would not end things since Edward thinks he does not deserve it... But I'm sure that he will be forever grateful if Bella can take Esme down...
[Report This]Date: 05 Jan 2016 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 32
Edward is definitely worth it!!! Esme needs to be stopped
Date: 05 Jan 2016 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 32
She will go for him anyway she can
Date: 05 Jan 2016 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 32
OH SHE CANT GIVE UP THAT NOT BELLA ,WHEN HER MAN"S IN TROUBLE..
Date: 05 Jan 2016 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 32
Hope they can get Jasper to testify to help Edward out. Afraid Esme is going to blackmail Bella.....or try to....or go to her father......ACK my brain is spinning with possibilities.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jan 2016 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 32
I despise Esme more. At least now Bella knows Bitchme has something holding over Edward. Esme needs to go down, hard. Bella will probably call and schedule him for a date and confront him.
Sherry
Date: 05 Jan 2016 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 32
Oh Bella, be his princess in shining armor!
Date: 05 Jan 2016 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 32
Bella is hurt and angry but I know she'll book him to see him. She can't give up on him no matter how angry she is. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 05 Jan 2016 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 32
She's into deep
Date: 05 Jan 2016 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 32
Bella is going to help him. She can't turn her back on him.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jan 2016 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 32
she won't give up on him
Date: 05 Jan 2016 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 32
OMG! Don't give up Bella! He is so worth it! :)LOVE THIS!
Date: 05 Jan 2016 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 32
would think jasper/alice would want to help someone who is in the position he used to be even if it is personally difficult for them
Date: 05 Jan 2016 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 32
Listen to your heart Bella. See beyond Edwards words.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jan 2016 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 32
How can she give up on Edward now that she knows things are even worse than she thought?
Date: 05 Jan 2016 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 32
Bella needs to take the bitch down! Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 03 Jan 2016 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 31
sorry it took me so long to read this chapter. I traveled 150 miles to attend a service for a woman I met in a Twilight FB group years ago. She stayed at my home while a group of us attended the red carpet for BD1. She was only 58....so I'm home now and back to reading....I hope Bella finds out what Esme is doing to Edward and gets her good!!
Date: 03 Jan 2016 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 31
I can't wait to find out what Carlisle found out!
Date: 03 Jan 2016 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 31
and you had to stop there? Why?? Please post soon, this is a great story.
Date: 03 Jan 2016 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 31
Don't leave us or Edward hanging for too long. Can't wait to read more!
Date: 02 Jan 2016 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 31
Oh I really hope he found something good, because Esme's clue of Edward being a bit tied up at the moment has me really worried - but I get that Bella is a) too pissed off at him to react right away and b) doesn't know how bad Edward is kept by Esme...
Date: 02 Jan 2016 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 31
Esme is doing not nice things to Edward
Date: 02 Jan 2016 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 31
I can't believe you left it there. That was to short! Thank You
Date: 02 Jan 2016 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 31
I hope this gets resolved soon. Edward is going to die literally & figuratively if he stays with Bitchme much longer. She'll break him.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2016 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 31
Let's hope Carlisle has enough on Esme Platt to destroy her slave/sex trade business.
Who knew Rose could be so intuitive.
Date: 02 Jan 2016 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 31
Esme is such a bitch, I can't wait for them to take her down a peg or 10!
Date: 02 Jan 2016 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 31
Can't wait to hear what he's found out
Date: 02 Jan 2016 2:25 AM Title: Prologue
I hope Bella can save Edward soon. I hate the way he is being treated by Esme. Breaks my heart.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2016 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 31
Please tell me thar Bella is able to help Edward( and his mom) soon!
Date: 02 Jan 2016 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 31
OMG! I am freaking out! I am dying to know what Carlisle found!!! Edward, oh poor, Edward! That evil bitch has him tide up and suffering!! >:(
Date: 02 Jan 2016 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 31
hope Carlisle has something to help Edward. Bitchme needs to go down soon and hard!!!
Date: 02 Jan 2016 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 31
Can't wait to see what Carlisle found
Date: 02 Jan 2016 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 31
I really hope he found something she can use against Esme. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2016 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 31
Is it crazy that I'm super excited to see what Carlisle has found out. I want Bella to bitchslap Bitchme and knock her down a peg or two.
Sherry
Date: 01 Jan 2016 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 31
Oooh! I am SOO eager for the next update...well, the next one with Carlisle and Bella's conversation. I know you too well to think that the actual next update would be that one. The next one will likely be Edward describing his misery and the abuse he is suffering at Esme's hand. *sigh*
Well, Happy New Year, anyway! LOL
*huggles*
Mary xo
Date: 01 Jan 2016 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 31
I hope Carlisle can give her some insight into Edward's past. I am glad that Rose seems to be on Edwards side as far as the way he was acting. Can't wait for your next update.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jan 2016 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 31
I hope Carlisle has found out something useful
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2015 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 30
I love this story and can't wait to read more. I hope Carlisle will find out whats going on and tell Bella so she can fix it. Bella can afford to have Elizabeth moved some place better and I'm sure once she knows the truth about everything she will be more than willing to do it to help Edward get out from under Esme. I can't wait to see Esme get whats coming to her for all the shit she is doing. I hope you can update again soon.
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2015 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 30
Bella can ask Carlisle to look into the decrepit nursing home facility. Maybe Bella will buy it and change the protocols as well as upgrade the care center.
Will Edward call Bella like he promised?
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2015 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 29
Esme is going to use the hospitalization of Edward's mother as the final nail in his coffin.
I hope that Jared finds the courage to tell Bella about the situation Edward is in.
Date: 30 Dec 2015 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 30
I,m never sure why people blame themselves for not being able to provide more for aged parents who need medical care. If your parents were poor and you were poor, there no other choice but Medicare aand Medicaid. My mother spent 7 years in a nursing home before her death, and while I was able to provide some extras, all of her medical care was provided by the nursing home. Would it have been nice to have her in a fancier or nicer facility? Sure. Buy it was not and is not an option at todays costs and thru our current medical system. But I didn't blame myself and neither should Edward
Date: 30 Dec 2015 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 30
Oh Edward you fool. You had help in Bella and and was too chicken s*** to tell her the truth.
Date: 29 Dec 2015 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 30
yes....hide. I want Esme and Felix both in prison for a LONG time.
Date: 29 Dec 2015 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 29
Poor Edward. Esme is going to make things so much worse for him I'm afraid.
Date: 29 Dec 2015 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 28
Can't wait for Esme to be taken down for her extortion and explotation of Edward
Date: 29 Dec 2015 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 27
aww for the present.
Date: 29 Dec 2015 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 30
Oh this really sucks....
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2015 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 30
gonna miss E for a while
Date: 29 Dec 2015 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 30
If Bella figures out who is in the nursing home, she certainly has the cash to move Edward's mom someplace nicer. I hope her inappropriate nosiness holds out a bit longer!
Date: 29 Dec 2015 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 30
Damn that woman! She is hateful. I'm sort of hoping Bella can get some info out of Jared.
Thanks!
Sally
Date: 29 Dec 2015 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 30
Why is he ashamed for Bella to know his mother is there? That he is caring for her the best way he can with the resources given him?? It isn't like she can't get this figured out in a heartbeat. I really hope she sees through his sudden change in demeanor.