Date: 26 Jan 2016 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 2
Stoner Charlie lol I don't think I paid a whole lot of attention to him the first time through. Him telling Bella not to tell her mother what he was doing made me chuckle. Usually in the fics I've read it's Renee being the flighty one.
Date: 26 Jan 2016 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ok I flew through this without reviewing every chapter the first time I read it. I LOVE these 3 and I'm hooked on this story so now I'm re-reading and going to try to leave reviews like I should have done the first time.
Date: 23 Jan 2016 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 23
Love when you post
Date: 20 Jan 2016 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 23
Wow!! Sorry I haven't reviewed previous chapters but the way this was formatted on my phone it just read straight through. Forgive me for that because your story definitely deserved reviews before now! This story has so much depth that you can continue it for a very long time if you choose too. I can't wait to see what's next for these three. Let me just say that I adore the pace of this story. It's perfection! Thank you d84;a039;
Date: 20 Jan 2016 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 23
I found your story just the other day and could not stop reading. I'm loving it! I love these 3 together and can't wait to read more.
Date: 19 Jan 2016 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 23
He's gone! Hopefully the time will go by quickly for all of them. I loved how Esme and Carlisle dealt with Alice! And it was so creepy that she changes her appearance to resemble Bella! Looking forward to next chapter.
Date: 18 Jan 2016 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 23
I'm hoping once Bella knows the Whilocks better and feels more comfortable around them. She'll defend Edward to them like Jasper did. I think they'll listen to her more.
Date: 18 Jan 2016 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 23
Thanks for the update! Can't wait for more! 😆
Date: 17 Jan 2016 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 23
I freaking love this story! I don't care how long you take to update as long as you do. Lol :)
Date: 08 Jan 2016 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 22
Meeting the mom! I'm sure his mom will love Bella!
Where did Edward go? Didn't he want to spend Jasper's last night with him also?
Date: 08 Jan 2016 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 21
She finally told them!!! Yay! I have read this story straight through and I love it! Can't wait to see what's next!
Date: 24 Dec 2015 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 22
Where's Edward this whole time? Doesn't he want to spend time with Jasper?
Date: 18 Dec 2015 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love our stories thank you!
Date: 17 Dec 2015 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 22
This whole chapter was just great
Date: 15 Nov 2015 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 21
loved this one from your smut buddy brandi neri
Date: 14 Nov 2015 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 21
Awe, soooo sweet! I love this story so much and truly hope nothing will ever break this trio up! Please! Can't wait to read more!!!
Date: 13 Nov 2015 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 21
So worth the wait
Date: 12 Nov 2015 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 21
Awe I just love ur hardened tortured ed!
Date: 12 Nov 2015 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 21
This is such a great story, I cant waut for more
Date: 04 Nov 2015 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 20
damn momma need more
Date: 18 Oct 2015 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 20
This has been a great story so far can't wait for the next chapter sooooo please please post soon
Date: 15 Oct 2015 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 20
Steps out for a cigarette.
Date: 07 Oct 2015 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 19
Yes! God I love it when you update :) I'm totally loving this story!
Date: 03 Oct 2015 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 19
Very talented writer your story is on I definitely look forward to updates on
Date: 11 Aug 2015 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 17
You kill me, lol! Such fantastic writing! I'm re-reading this entire story (again, lol!) today. Please keep up the great work!
Date: 11 Aug 2015 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 17
I am so totally loving this fic...in a bit of a crap place myself just now, at the tail end of a 25 year relationship that's not very supportive...so reading this is like a little peek through the looking glass...a little fantasy of being loved by not just one, but two beautiful honest direct open men....sigh....
Thank you for sharing your work with us ! T
Date: 10 Aug 2015 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 16
What a great story!
I will never critique as I am not a writer but I will say it is a rare gem of a story that can draw me in completely as this has.
Date: 03 Aug 2015 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm loving this story! Its such a good cross between savages and twilight. Can't wait for more I'm hooked.
Date: 03 Aug 2015 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 16
Now the the fun really begins.
Date: 03 Aug 2015 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 14
Well, if you can't have everything all rolled into one then you obviously need two. I dont know why no one told me that years ago.
Date: 03 Aug 2015 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 16
Omg! I was sooo excited to see an update but now I'm frustrated because that was way too hot for you to stop there, grr.. I hope Jasp joins in lol.. I LOVE this story so PLEASE update SOON!!
Date: 02 Aug 2015 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 3
Charlie is a stoner and Jasper is a drug dealer!! I LOVE IT!! You've definitely got me hooked. Thanks so much for a fun read.
Date: 02 Aug 2015 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 2
I am loving your version of Charlie!! He is making me laugh so hard! It's a great change from the Charlie everyone else writes. I love you story!
Date: 02 Aug 2015 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
I think I just found my new favorite story!! How can anyone resist a threesome with Edward and Jasper? I sure can't. Great beginning. I can't wait to read more.
Date: 18 May 2015 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
I want more!
Date: 18 May 2015 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 13
This is so intense.
Date: 28 Apr 2015 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 28 Apr 2015 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 13
Uh-Oh!
In case you didn't realize there are 2 chapter 12's.
Date: 28 Apr 2015 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 12
Okay. I've got all kinds of questions about that.
But I'll read instead.
Date: 28 Apr 2015 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 11
:-o
That's my surprised face.
Date: 28 Apr 2015 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 8
Is anyone else getting hot? Or is it just me?
Date: 28 Apr 2015 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 6
I know Jasper has to be smart and is doing the right thing. BUT as someone who once was a 16 year old girl, can I just say "What a dick!"
I know I'll change my mind later. But that's my opinion at this point. :-)
Date: 28 Apr 2015 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 5
I read up until the beginning of this chapter on ffn. So, most of this chapter is new to me.
Date: 28 Apr 2015 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love this story b25;! This is like a trifecta for me, I am crazy about j/b/e poly stories, twilight AH fanfics and love the movie Savages! I also find it crazy that in the movie, Aaron Taylor-Johnson (Ben) kind of reminds me a little of Jackson Rathbone, therefore I've always kind of pictured the others being Edward (all beefed up w/ tats soldier boy *yummy*) and a more confident sexier Bella! BTW Charlie the pot head is hilarious!
Please don't keep us waiting too long. In a way I wish this was a completed story. The waiting is killing me! ='/
Date: 23 Apr 2015 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 13
OMG! I LOVE your story can not wait for more please .Great writing !and please don't leave us to long with that cliff mind blowing.