Date: 08 Feb 2020 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 22
Wow was für ene Geschichte. Bin gefesselt. Ein sehr dunkles Thema aber gut geschrieben. Es ist offensichtlich das viele Fehler von Edward gemacht wurden, er kannte den Schmerz nicht. Niemand kann es sich vorstellen. Bitte schreib weiter
Date: 10 Apr 2019 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 20
I just want some happy for them both ..
Bella needs to get help, she needs to stop believing she deserves everything ..
Maybe she should speak with Garrett more since he has been where she is where Carlsile is concerned?
I hope that Edward finds his sister and returns to his wife and soon !
Date: 09 Apr 2019 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 20
I wonder what it's going to take for Bella to realize she isn't evil and damned? And, wow, I had not expected that story from Garrett.
PS: Some of us are having issues leaving reviews for Whispered Hope. Sorry. But, it was a great chapter!
Date: 05 Jul 2018 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
I understand, more than you know. I accidentally deleted one of my stories, instead of a chapter. I had to reload it on here, & I had several chapters posted. It was so frustrating. I am pretty curious about this one. I saw it posted in the STARS group on Facebook. I’m not much much of a C/B reader. Would this one stand alone or do I need to read the prequel to make sense of this one?
To get the true impact of Bella's life, you need to read the first one of the series.
Date: 04 Jul 2018 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
I’d really like to read this, but I’d rather read it on FFN. If you ever decide to post it over there, I’ll put you on alert. Thanks!
The only reason it's not on FFN is because when I had all my other fics on there, FFN yanked them twice. I just don't have the energy to repost them again, as I have like 50 fics and most of them are 30+ chapters.
Date: 27 Mar 2018 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 18
Thanks for the update. Hopefully they will get away safely. If the authorities have any idea the sighting of Bella was true, they may need to leave the country entirely. Will be looking forward to the next chapter whenever it is ready for us.
Date: 26 Mar 2018 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 18
Oh, man, Bella's got a long road to finding forgiveness for herself. As much as the others, except maybe Edward, are pissed at her for going rogue and killing Leah, I think Bella truly thought she had to be the one to kill her.
Date: 26 Mar 2018 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 18
"She didn’t hate me because I couldn’t stop her from being hurt. She hated me because they wanted me more than her!" It's what I was thinking, Leah ended linking it and obssessed, maybe even in love, that's why she hated Bella, she took them away from her.
Date: 23 Feb 2018 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 17
It was inevitable.... Either Leah died or she would've ended up exposing them all. I feel sorry for her, she was broken beyond repair and all thanks to Psycho Carlisle. Thanks for the update, hon. Can't wait to see how pissed Edward is going to be! YIKES!
Date: 23 Feb 2018 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 17
I really wanted to yell at Bella when she decided to go where she knew Leah would be. But, that is what had to happen. Like Bella, I wish she could have done more for Leah, but as Leah said, she was already dead.
Date: 17 Oct 2017 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 15
Carlisle's legacy is gonna haunt Bella for the rest of her life, damn his soul to hell! The best therapist in the world would have a hard time soothin' her soul so I don't hold out much hope for Leah when they find her *sigh!*
Date: 21 Feb 2017 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 14
Yikes. Not sure if everyone is going to come out of this alive. Leah definitely won't, I think. Hope they get those that aren't hunting Leah safely into the bunker. I hope Leah doesn't manage to blow their cover stories sky high. She could easily out of spite. Anyways, thanks for the update, and will be looking forward to seeing what comes next.
Date: 21 Feb 2017 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wow, a few surprises in this chapter. Edward gave in to Bella so quickly--didn't expect that. And, Aro blasted Bella. And, even though Alice is worried Bella won't come back, at least she seems to understand why Bella has to go with Edward.
Date: 20 Feb 2017 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 14
Now if they had just listened to Bella sooner about her concerns with Leah than this wouldn't be happening !!
Edward should have paid better attention too !!
In a way I agree with Aro ..
I know I know Bella's her ownn person but still ..
Cannot wait for more
Loved it X
Thank you. I debated for awhile on if Bella should stay or go, but I just couldn't see her letting Edward go without her.
Date: 14 Jan 2017 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 13
Yikes. Bet she's on her way back to try to get at Bella again. Wondering if Mike Newton really does have any evil intent, and if he is linked to the Sandman in any way. Time will tell, I guess. Thanks for the update, and I will be looking forward to the next chapter whenever you have it ready for us.
Date: 13 Jan 2017 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 13
I was so excited to see this in my inbox !
Though you should be resting after your fall lovely X
I hope you are feeling better ??
You'd think Bella'd get a bit of a break but no such luck ..
Bloody Leah's gone missing !
Is it horrible for me to want her to be taken out by a car on her escape?
Maybe then Bella will get some contentment ..
As for the others all looking or not looking at Bella ..
I wonder if that's to do with her not wanting to go with Leah?
Surely they could put themselves or try to put themselves in her shoes and see why she can't !!
Mike .. Eek the puppy has arrived .. hopefully Edward put an end to him coming around ..
Anyways rest up !
& as always can't wait for more !
If it helps, I'm writing in bed. Thank God for laptops. Still sore. The bruising is just starting to really show. Arm and thigh are still swollen. Head aches again, and all that crap. Think my body just hates me.
Date: 13 Jan 2017 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 13
I had a feeling that trip with Leah was not going to go well. How will they find her? And, poor Bella--knowing she is out there as a loose cannon. It's so sad, but I have to agree with Bella--Leah is a lost cause.
I debated a lot on which way to go with Leah, but in the end, I followed my gut.