Date: 23 Feb 2016 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 47
I want to hear from Carlisle and I want to know about the raid.
Date: 23 Feb 2016 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 47
I really want to hear what's happening with Elizabeth
Date: 23 Feb 2016 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 47
Carlisle is so cool. Hope he finds a nice HEA for himself too.
Date: 23 Feb 2016 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 47
This is fantastic!! Carlisle is the greatest!:)
Date: 23 Feb 2016 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 47
I'd like to hear from Carlisle about Esme's demise.
Date: 23 Feb 2016 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 47
Would love to hear from Carlisle and Rose. Poor Edward. I am glad that he is not turning away from Bella.
Date: 23 Feb 2016 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 47
I'm so relieved and glad he's safe now. I hope they rescue his mother soon. That might raise his hopes some and enable him to believe this is real. I hope you plan a really terrible and grisly end for Esme!
Date: 23 Feb 2016 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 47
Carlisle is a great person with a lot of love in his heart. Bella is heart broken poor thing.
Date: 23 Feb 2016 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 47
That poor man must be so confused with everything that happened over the last 24 hours - not to mention the time he was with Esme and without any other human contact. Of course he has trouble to get a clear thought - but I love how much he trusts Carlisle! I'm sure that the old guy doesn't have a problem with "adopting" Edward, probably did already in his heart; )
Oh no, and poor Bella. Not knowing what to do to help him see that all she wants is to help him get better and loving him through all this and much longer after it...
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2016 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 47
He would make a great father
Date: 22 Feb 2016 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 47
Love Carlisle too. Love to hear from him.
Date: 22 Feb 2016 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 47
Poor Edward! I really hope Esme never gets her hands on Edward again! Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 22 Feb 2016 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 46
hmm why do I get the feeling that the thing with E's mom isn't going to go well.
Date: 21 Feb 2016 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 46
Edward doesn't need sex. He needs love.
Date: 20 Feb 2016 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 46
A rousing reunion isnt really a logical kond of reunion.
Thanks for the update!
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2016 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 46
Omg!! MY Heart hurts so much,... so sad
Date: 20 Feb 2016 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 46
go bella
i hope bella inflicts so much hurt on esme
Date: 20 Feb 2016 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 46
I think him being so skittish is totally understandable, he's been through so much abuse and it would be more than wrong if he was over it magically now....
I'm just a bit worried if things with Elizabeth will go as smooth as they hope, because as far as u understood they were at her office with the FBI but without Esme herself there....
Date: 20 Feb 2016 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 46
It was a perfect reunion. Great fic!
Date: 20 Feb 2016 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 46
It is going to take time he just needs to know he is loved. Esme much die slowly Please
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2016 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 46
Poor Edward. It's going to be a long road for them both
Date: 20 Feb 2016 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 46
It makes me nervous that they have to wait until morning for Esmes case to be heard...
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2016 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 46
Oh man, this chapter, so heartbreaking. I just wanna hug Edward and make it all go away.
Sherry
Date: 20 Feb 2016 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 46
I hope Esme or her people don't get to Judge Trask before he can sign that order tomorrow morning. Poor Edward! My heart aches for him!
Date: 20 Feb 2016 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 46
THEY HAD BETTER GET ELISABETH BEFOR ESME DOES!
Date: 20 Feb 2016 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 46
Your doing such a great job with this story
Date: 20 Feb 2016 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 46
Finally Edward is safe and the Bitch is hopefully in jail!!! Now i just hope they get custody of his mother to Bella!!
Date: 20 Feb 2016 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 46
I'm glad things are finally falling into place for Edward. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 20 Feb 2016 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 46
So happy he is safe! !!!!!!!!!! Happy he did not turn away from Bella.
Date: 20 Feb 2016 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 46
I really wish Bella would have some guards with Edward's mother. Just because they may have Esme doesn't mean all of her minions have been captured. Who knows if Esme isn't working for or with someone else as well...
Date: 20 Feb 2016 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 46
He's a survivor!
Date: 19 Feb 2016 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 45
I'm so glad they're rescuing Edward. He's been through so much torture! My heart breaks for him. I can't wait for the next chapter! Have a great weekend!
Date: 17 Feb 2016 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 45
YES FELIX AND ESME LET THEM TAKE ALL OF THE PAIN AND THEN SOME
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2016 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 45
Felix is a victim of manipulation as well. He just happens to have sold his soul to the devil in Prada.
Will Esme figure it out before Carlisle and the authorities get to her?
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2016 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 44
So glad Esme is oblivious to who Marie is and what is in store for her prize possession.
Date: 16 Feb 2016 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 45
Again Poor Edward. He's going to need alot of therapy I bet.
Date: 16 Feb 2016 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 44
Poor Edward. Can't wait till Bitchme and Felix get whats coming to them.
Date: 16 Feb 2016 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 45
Edward needs a really good psychologist.
Date: 16 Feb 2016 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 45
Is Edward still in love with Bella? If it wasn't for her Edward would be with an actual client to be tortured by. He just does not seem to be happy about being safe, and Bella going to get Esme out of the nursing home.
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2016 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 45
*raises hand* lol At least Edward is away from Esme now, but I have a feeling his gonna either push Bella away or run from her. I'm curious though... if they forged Edward's signature to make Bella is wife, is there legal documentaion showing they are legally married now? I can hardly wait for Edward to be reunited with Bella, and his mother safe out of Esme's grasps.
Sherry
Date: 16 Feb 2016 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 45
Felix should be everyone's bitch in jail.
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2016 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 45
Oh man!! That was a little short for me, but thank you for the update. As much as I want Bitchme dead, that would be too easy. She and Felix should suffer, yes make them rot in jail and be everyone's bitch. A slow and painful death. I look forward to Edward reuniting with his mom and Bella.
Date: 16 Feb 2016 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 45
Hope Bitchme gets what she's been giving to her victims!
Felix? Needs to get what he's been taking from the innocents! *raising hand*
Date: 16 Feb 2016 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 45
Felix doesn't seem like a victim. He was wanting to rape Edward till he bleed. He did that to Jasper. I hope he gets taken care of from someone in jail. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 16 Feb 2016 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 45
Both my hands are up. I vote for the same thing to happen to Esme and Felix and all her other minons. Please let the prison wardens turn a blind eye to both of them becoming all the prisoner's new bitch/s. They both deserve to be passed around the prison and so much more.....
Date: 16 Feb 2016 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 45
I am raisingmy hand for Felix! !!!!!!
I hope Edward lets Bella hold him. Hope things work out ok for Edward's mom. Can't wait to see what happens to Esme.
Date: 16 Feb 2016 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 45
My hand is up lol. Poor Edward has a lot of healing to do.
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2016 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 45
Felix may have been a victim but he still took pleasure in Edward's abuse
Date: 15 Feb 2016 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 44
Carlisle is a good man.
Date: 15 Feb 2016 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 45
Esme will get her just desserts.
Date: 15 Feb 2016 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 45
Oh, no he isn't, that beautiful boy. Now hopefully they will get caught and Edward never see them again.
Date: 15 Feb 2016 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 45
He is free! He is still so sad. I hope he will accept the help and love from these wonderful people helping him!! Esme needs to suffer!! As for Felix, definitely Bubba's bitch! ;) Big hug for Carlisle, Bella and Rose!! :)
Date: 15 Feb 2016 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 45
I think it may be a while before Edward feels worthy of love. Damn Esme. I hope she rots in a place worse than where she kept Edward. Are there going to be more bumps in this story? My heart aches for Edward!
Date: 15 Feb 2016 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 45
Two hands up for Esme to go to jail. I will even donate the soap on the rope for her
Date: 15 Feb 2016 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 45
Raising hand for Felix.
So happy they are rescuing Edward and his mom.
I really want Esme to get what's coming to her
Date: 15 Feb 2016 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 45
Definitely someone's bitch who likes to give lots of pain. Esme should be placed as someone's plaything who uses chains and starves someone like she did Edward.
Date: 15 Feb 2016 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 45
Looks like the first step of freeing Edward was a success, I just have a feeling in my gut it was too easy....
Date: 14 Feb 2016 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 44
Please let them save Edward. I can't handle reading about Edwards torture anymore. I know this is fiction but this is hard to read.
Date: 14 Feb 2016 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 44
I flove Carlisle to he is so sweet and cares so much. The evil bitch needs to get an infection and die a slow and painful death.
Date: 13 Feb 2016 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 44
I knew it... mistress Marie is Bella and the new doctor is Carlisle. Happy that Edward will finally leave Bitchme. Just hope she doesn't find out before he gets away from her clutches. Thank you for the update :)
Date: 13 Feb 2016 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 44
Let's torture that sadistic biatch!!!!! Pretty please??
Date: 13 Feb 2016 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 44
Finally!!!! He will be getting away from the BITCH!!!
Date: 13 Feb 2016 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 44
It's about time!
Date: 13 Feb 2016 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 44
OMG! This is fantastic!! I am so happy they are getting him out! I hope nothing else happens to him before meeting Marie!!!!
Date: 13 Feb 2016 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 44
Oh, glory hallelujah! There is finally some hope for the poor boy. I was beginning to dread opening each new chapter! You do realize you have created an icon here, don't you? This has to be the NASTIEST Esme in the history of fanfiction! Perhaps the nastiest and creepiest character of all. She gives original Aro a run for his money! Not to mention movie James! You must have had fun writing against type here, changing achingly sweet, motherly Esme into this epic bitch. Great job!
Date: 13 Feb 2016 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 44
I was really worried at the beginning of this chapter, Edward is in such bad shape.... At least Esme did care enough to see he was in need of a doctor here - thank god she called him!
And Carlisle seems to be a man of many talents here! I just wish he had found a way to take Edward away from them right away...
Date: 13 Feb 2016 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 44
Don't just arrest her. She needs to be beaten with whips and chains. Everything that was done to Edward and Jasper should be done to her. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 13 Feb 2016 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 44
Can't wait for Esme and Felix to get theirs in the end!
Date: 13 Feb 2016 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 44
Woohoo, please post soon
Date: 13 Feb 2016 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 44
He should have given Carisle his money and kept the phone in case. I bet he will want to have it.
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2016 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 44
You have me hoping everything goes as planned and Edward is far away from Esme for good.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2016 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 44
OMG! Horrible! James and Victoria and Esme should be tortured exactly the same way they have tortured others!
They need to get Edward out of there now!
Date: 13 Feb 2016 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 44
OMGosh! ! ! ! ! I am so glad that Edward is getting out. PLEASE let Esme endure some of the same sadistic torture that Edward had to endure and then some more.
Date: 13 Feb 2016 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 44
James and Victoria need to turn States evidence, and ensure Esme receives the maximum sentence possible. Someone more ruthless than she can use her as their toy on the inside!!
I flove Carlise, too.
Date: 13 Feb 2016 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 44
I so hope this is going into a HEA. Poor Edward. Great great story! 😀
Date: 13 Feb 2016 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 44
oh thank god! I wish for Esme, the same kind of treatment she gave Edward. For a LONG time.
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2016 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 44
I hope this plan works. He can't survive much more
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2016 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 43
Oh Josie, I'm so ready for Esme's demise. Anything quick would not be justice to the ones she's hurt. In a way, I'd like to see Felix turn on her. Looking forward to getting back to Edward's POV.
Sherry
Date: 10 Feb 2016 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 43
They need to get Felix as well.
Date: 10 Feb 2016 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 43
Oh , I have to go with "the bloodier" version, thank you very much! AlthoughI very much like the idea of the stiletto in the eye suggestion, I also like the idea of selling off her parts slowly , one by one . Bella needs some good news soon!
Date: 09 Feb 2016 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 43
I hope Edward is okay. I agree with Bella. Esme needs to die a very slow and painful death! Hopefully the FBI will kick things into high gear, especially after Dr. Gerandy's call and death (I'm thinking murder)! Can't wait for next chapter
Date: 09 Feb 2016 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 43
I say she goes to jail and gets cut and watches as her insides fall out of her body. I am so worried about Edward
Date: 09 Feb 2016 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 42
Bella will help to take care of his mom as soon as she can. Jared is a good guy to have on there side.
Date: 09 Feb 2016 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 43
Ooohhhhh, hopefully, Esme will suffer some of the same fate and Bella will get to kill her!
Date: 09 Feb 2016 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 43
I really hope from here on out, things will get better and the police / FBI will take Esme into custody just to loose the key and let her rot in hell forever!
Date: 09 Feb 2016 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 43
I don't think Esme shoul die, I think she should go to prison and be someone's prison bitch that like to inflect lots of pain in their partner!
Date: 09 Feb 2016 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 43
Oh yeah I'm SO looking for some action!! Esme really deserves to be caught now! It's great to see that Rose and Emmett get along well, but do they have to be so open in front of Bella in this situation? I think that's a bit tactless... but anyway, I hope that Edward will be fine soon and that they will get him out of Esme's claws... he has suffered enough for three lifetimes!!
Date: 09 Feb 2016 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 43
hoping e doesn't have to sucumb to felix
Date: 09 Feb 2016 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 43
Glad the FBI will get involved since Bitchme has fingers in everything in town. Dying is too easy for her. She needs to get a taste of what she has given out.
Date: 09 Feb 2016 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 42
hope that someone doesnt rat out Bella or Carmen to Bitchme.
Date: 09 Feb 2016 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 43
I am looking forward to Esme's demise! ;)
Date: 09 Feb 2016 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 43
I'd like to see Felix find a reason to turn on Esme. All of his nastiness turned loose on her. The police should bust in just after he's finished tearing her ass up, and she should be a beaten, bloody pulp. Yeah, I'm a bit vindictive sometimes.