Date: 09 Feb 2016 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 43
I hope they get Edward away from that Bitch soon!!! As for the Bitch slow and painfull very painfull!!! lollollol
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2016 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 43
The good Doc's conscience got the best of him. Too bad it cost him his life.
But maybe Felix was sloppyband this event will lead straight back to Esme and her dirty dealings.
Please tell me a judge outside this jurisdiction will sign a warrant regarding the sale of this young female to some kingpin in another state.
Date: 09 Feb 2016 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 43
I hope Esme has the most painful death anyone could have and Felix too.
Date: 09 Feb 2016 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 43
Esme had Dr. Grandy killed. She is one evil bitch. I can't wait to see what you do to her. I love how Bella is always talking about sticking her stilettos in Esme!!!!
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2016 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 43
Esme deserves to be beaten, starved, tortured!
Date: 09 Feb 2016 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 43
I hope they find him in time. Looks like they really may have something on Esme, finally! I hope so. Rose and Emmett are a hoot. They play the comedic relief here....
Date: 09 Feb 2016 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 43
I'm thinking a Seven Pounds ending for Esme. Parcel out her body parts to people who need them. Keep her alive as long as possible by taking minor pieces first, so the most vital parts stay fresh.
Date: 06 Feb 2016 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 42
It was sweet of Bella to visit Edward's mom, I'm sure up until she asked for Edward senior she loved talking about her boy...
Let's hope she'll be able to get Elizabeth some better care now
Date: 06 Feb 2016 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 42
OMG! WOW!! Bella is getting right in there!! Come on girl you can work things out!!! :)
Date: 06 Feb 2016 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 42
Hmmmm!! How will Bella help Edward's mom without bitchme finding out.
What about Jared? If he is being followed, will they find out he went to see Bella and would they hurt him again?? I hope not, he is a nice man and doesn't deserve that treatment.
In all stories Carlisle usually ends up with Esme, but in this one she doesn't deserve happiness or a good man. I'm curious to know if Carlisle will have someone in his life.
Good chapter and thank you for the update :)
Date: 06 Feb 2016 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 42
Esme will never let Bella take over her care!! That Bitch needs to get what is coming to her and soon!!!
Date: 06 Feb 2016 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 42
I hope Bella can somehow take over Mrs. Masen's care! Me heart breaks for everything Edward and his mother have been through! Hopefully Aro Volturi can help get a search warrant to save Edward! Of course that won't be the end of their story! They've got a lot to work through especially Edward! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 06 Feb 2016 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 42
Bella needs to start working miracles.
Date: 06 Feb 2016 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 42
All Isabella needs to do to gain the rights is to take Bitchme to court and contest that she is having important medications withheld do to cost. Assuming, of course that the witch doesn't have the Family Court Judge in her pocket, as well. The cool thing is, Bella could call Edward as witness, and her attorney could question him about Esme's treatment of HIM as part of the character witness' statement. That, coupled with Jasper as a character witness should be PLENTY to take the bitch down.
Date: 06 Feb 2016 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 42
Yah sure youbetcha, Mrs. Platt will make a fuss! This story is getting harder to read; need something good to happen to these folks (not Esme ).
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2016 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 42
I hope Bella can help Elizabeth
Date: 06 Feb 2016 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 42
I'm dying here....this story is moving at an excruciatingly slow pace. I know, I know. It's your story, and I love reading it, I just want Esme to get a stiletto in the eye sooner rather than later. No criticism intended, just venting.
Date: 06 Feb 2016 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 42
I hope Aro is one of the good guys and will help them. Carmen said next of kin OR legal guardian. Edward is her next of kin. Can't he change it?
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2016 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 42
Esme has weaseled her way into every aspect of Elizabeth's and Edward's lives.
I hope Edward will give legal guardian ship over to Bella. But that will send red flags to Esme.
Date: 06 Feb 2016 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 42
Bella needs to work fast!
Esme has to be taken out ASAP!
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2016 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 42
Well hell, no doubt Esme will make a fuss, but I'm hoping Bella can get Elizabeth's legal guardian changed soon.
I need more of this fic.
Sherry
Date: 06 Feb 2016 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 42
Dang it, Esme has her claws in everything
Date: 05 Feb 2016 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 41
I want to hope that they will be good and help them bring Esme down.
Date: 05 Feb 2016 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 36
Ohh!!! poor Edward!!!
Date: 05 Feb 2016 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 35
What if Bella told Charlie everything, maybe he could buy Edward or put her in jail. He seems to have influence too.
Date: 04 Feb 2016 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 31
I hope it's good news for Bella, so she can bring Esme down.
Date: 04 Feb 2016 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 30
:(
They're all hurting... Esme is pure evil!!!
[Report This]Date: 04 Feb 2016 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 41
Wow, I'm thinking that Aro and Marcus will be good guys this time (I hope 😊).
I'm feeling a bit encouraged, can hardly wait for next chapter! Thank you!
Date: 03 Feb 2016 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 41
I was wondering why Felix drove Edward to his appointment with Rose, but I didn't think it was because someone tried to get rid of him - the old way...
Each time the Volturi get involved my gut thinks it's better to stay cautious
Date: 03 Feb 2016 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 41
Oh I hope they are good in this incarnation ! Poor Edward has been through enough !
Date: 02 Feb 2016 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 41
They better call the feds before Esme kills Edward's soul as well as body.
Date: 02 Feb 2016 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 24
I wish Edward would tell her already about bitchme
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2016 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 41
thank you for the update...Let's hope they help Bella & Carlisle base on Jared word...well done..I with Bella ready to punch Esme in her vagina and a few other places...she needs to endure what Edward and Jasper have...jail is to good for her...until you post again
Date: 02 Feb 2016 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 41
Oh my Sure hope Aro et al will be on the good side. Bella needs something to go her way.
Date: 02 Feb 2016 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 41
Well, I guess Aro and Marcus will be on the good side of things if they have these affilitaitions... So I hope that this talk has really helped to get things going! Probably Edward is better off with Esmes mean friends than with the devil and his right hand herself... but even this is disgusting and just horrible...
Hurry with the next part and get well soon!
Date: 02 Feb 2016 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 41
Thanks for the update. Please keep them coming!
Date: 02 Feb 2016 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 41
They have to be good guys Jared trusts them
Date: 02 Feb 2016 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 41
I hope Aro and Marcus are good guys in this story. I can't believe that Esme went after Jared. I can't wait for Esme to be taken down.
Date: 02 Feb 2016 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 21
Ahh!! Carlisle was so sweet, he didn't judge her either. :)
Date: 02 Feb 2016 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 41
Well, is Esme is the the bad guy, I'm onboard with Aro being good!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2016 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 41
Oh the plot thickens.......
New characters. I do hope they are good. But considering everything Esme has her hands on, it will be a miracle if there will help Carlisle's investigation.
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2016 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 41
Poor Jared.
Sherry
Date: 02 Feb 2016 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 41
I can't wait!! :)
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2016 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 41
I hope Aro & Marcus are good guys, I want them to be, I think they will be.
Date: 02 Feb 2016 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 18
It seems that Edward is about to break from all the beating his getting.
Date: 02 Feb 2016 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 16
I don't know how Edward does it, how can he let them do this to him.
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2016 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 41
I hope they are good guys!
Date: 01 Feb 2016 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 14
Yay!!! She got rid of that good for nothing husband
Date: 01 Feb 2016 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 41
Oh I hope they're good guys. At least I hope they are willing to help Jared and Bella help Edward. I shudder to think how he just can't take much more from Esme before he dies! I KNOW you won't let that happen!
Date: 01 Feb 2016 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 13
Bella is indeed perceptive, her feeling about Esme is right. I wish she would help Edward escape.
Date: 01 Feb 2016 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 41
I hope they are the good guys! Edward & Bella need a break.
What about a dual kidnap/escape plan? Remove/kidnap Elizabeth & Edward at the same time and hide them? Esme can't do much as they are all adults and if she tried to press charges or sue, I'm sure Bella would pay off his debt.
Felix need to get reamed, literally. What a sick fuck!
Date: 01 Feb 2016 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 40
Gawd I want her to die so badly....or better yet, get sold to some slave company overseas along with felix.
Date: 01 Feb 2016 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 40
This story just hurts. I can't stand the pain that Edward is in all the time. Esme needs to have a horrible accident.
Date: 01 Feb 2016 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 10
That's just mean and evil!!! This Esme is definitely cruel!!
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2016 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 8
Edward is so sweet, he takes care of her. :-)
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2016 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 7
Ohhh!!!! Poor Edward... Esme is a witch!!! I hope Bella brings her down!!!!
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2016 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
I just found this story and I'm already in love!
Date: 30 Jan 2016 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 40
Okay, he needs some sunshine. He's been put through hell too many chapters now.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2016 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 40
Poor Edward, Esme is total bitch. I'm all for pulling Edward away.
Why doesn't Edward give the nursing home his approval to allow Bella to take over care of his mother and have her moved somewhere Bitchme can't find her?
Sherry
Date: 30 Jan 2016 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 40
oh thank god! i don't know how much more of this he can take! please send help soon. my heart bleeds for Edward.
Date: 30 Jan 2016 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 40
Sounds like Bella might be able to have an ally in Dr. Gerandy, if she can play it right.
Thanks!
Sally
Date: 30 Jan 2016 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 40
Esme is stupid crazy. How can Edward NOT lose weight when he is underfed, beaten and tortured? How can he be an effective date to ANYONE??
Date: 30 Jan 2016 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 40
Please save Edwards from anymore torture! He doesn't need anymore....
Date: 30 Jan 2016 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 40
Wow, there are more levels of evil to Esme than I ever thought possible
Date: 30 Jan 2016 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 40
I'm losing faith here!
Date: 30 Jan 2016 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 40
Loving seeing Edward have a small spark
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2016 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 40
Only a possibility that Edward will escape Esme's controlling grip?
Maybe Dr. Gerandy can seek treatment for his addiction elsewhere and then turn on Esme? The penalty a suspended license until medically cleared to practice.
Felix is twisted.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2016 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 39
Will Carmen be a factor in assisting the take-down of Esme Platt?
Date: 30 Jan 2016 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 40
Let Bella come get him and rip Esme apart
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2016 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 38
Too little too late?
Date: 30 Jan 2016 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 40
How many chapters is this story going to be???
Author's Response:
I honestly don't know. I have it planned, but not down to the chapter. I know where the story is going and the ending. If you're familiar with my work, it'll probably be similar to Caught in the Flames or Mafia Princess. 175 to 200 chapters. All shorter chapters.
Date: 30 Jan 2016 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 40
I was quite sure, Bitchme would have at least one doctor on her side, but didn't expect him to be that deep in shit with her too...
The only good thing in this chapter to me, was Felix not being able to follow through his threat about claiming Edward fully.. .
Date: 30 Jan 2016 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 40
I am glad Edward got sick. Thank you for notletting Felix have his way with Edward. Hopefully Bella and Carlisle and Emmett will find a way to get Edward out soon. If Esme beats Edward all the time and straves him how does she except him to perform. It is HER fault he is like that, not his. As always, you leave me wanting more.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2016 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 40
Poor Edward. I hope Bella can do something soon
Date: 30 Jan 2016 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 40
She calls them her victims! Jail won't be harsh enough for Esme and Felix. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 29 Jan 2016 4:12 PM Title: Prologue
I'm hooked on the song Angel by The Weekend right now and every time I hear it this story runs through my mind
Date: 28 Jan 2016 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 39
You can't let Felix rape Edward. He won't survive that torture.
Date: 28 Jan 2016 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 39
I've caught up with this one and can't wait for more :)
Date: 27 Jan 2016 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 39
OMG!!! Poor Edward!! Please just say Esme and all the others will get what they deserve????
Date: 26 Jan 2016 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 39
They have to get to him before Felix gets he way.
Date: 26 Jan 2016 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 39
Felix is a nasty piece of work. Can't wait for him to become someone's bitch in prison
Date: 26 Jan 2016 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 39
Please please please don't let Felix fuck Edward. Please find some way to stop it, a police raid or something. Please update soon.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2016 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 39
Poor Edward. Felix is as evil as Esme
Date: 26 Jan 2016 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 39
I hope someone will be interrupting Bitchme before Felix can get his plans accomplished. ..
Date: 26 Jan 2016 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 39
Ireally hope that Edward will not have to suffer THIS... And I'm sure that Bella will do something about his mother very soon, so this is a very small step but in the right direction!
Date: 26 Jan 2016 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 39
BELLA COULD HAVE SAVED HIM ALREADY!!!!!!
Date: 26 Jan 2016 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 39
If Felix rapes Edward and breaks what little is left of him, I may lose it!
Date: 26 Jan 2016 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 39
At least he was able to get a message to the nursing home and to notify Bella that he did. I hope she can get him out of there before more awful things happen to him....
Date: 26 Jan 2016 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 39
So glad that he has at least getting Bella to help him with his mother. I hope she can come through quickly and assist him with getting away from Esme.
Date: 26 Jan 2016 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 39
hoping e is able to escape before felix gets him
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2016 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 39
not happy, not at all
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2016 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 39
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Date: 26 Jan 2016 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 39
OMG! PLEASE DON'T ALLOW FOR EDWARD TO GET RAPED by
Felix! He's suffered so much already! Please!
Date: 26 Jan 2016 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 39
Happy to see that he's trusting Bella
Date: 26 Jan 2016 1:55 AM Title: Prologue
Please let Edward get away. I don't think him getting raped by Felix will add anything to your amazing story. I'm so sad and worried for Edward which is a sure sign your an amazingly talented writer.