Date: 26 Jan 2016 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 39
Oh please don't let Felix get his way, Edward is enduring enough already my heart is bleeding for him. Great chapter, I hate cliffies.
Date: 26 Jan 2016 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 39
ugh, your killing me. post soon please
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2016 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 39
Please tell me that Felix doesn't do that to Edward!
Date: 26 Jan 2016 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 39
OMFNG!!! OMG!!! OMG!!! NOOOOO!!! He has to get away before Felix hurts him!!! OMG! OMG!!
Date: 25 Jan 2016 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 38
Hope everyone involved in Esme's little empire pays dearly.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2016 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 38
Is it bad that I want Esme taken down like yesterday, and Edward freed.
Sherry
Author's Response:
I'm working on that now! :-)
Date: 23 Jan 2016 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 38
This is a great story when do you plan on doing more chapters.
Date: 23 Jan 2016 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 38
I know he's just a fictional character, but I am cringing just thinking what Esme may be doing to Edward. I know you promise a HEA so I'll hang on and wait, knowing you will save him. I hope Jasper will come forward to testify, or at least file a complaint! Maybe that is how they will catch her...
Date: 23 Jan 2016 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 38
I hope they get Edward out before Esme causes any more damage to him, physical and mentally.
Date: 23 Jan 2016 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 38
I sure hope they'll get things clear up and Edward away from Bitchme sooner than later
Date: 23 Jan 2016 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 38
Bella should have made him stay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 23 Jan 2016 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 38
I have a feeling that the Chief of Police is on the take. It's gonna get ugly up in there!
Date: 23 Jan 2016 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 38
Love this story and glad Emmett, Sam and Carlisle are on the job to help.
Date: 23 Jan 2016 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 38
Esme goes deep they need to take her down like NOW
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2016 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 38
So damned worried about Edward!
Date: 23 Jan 2016 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 38
OMG!! OMG!! I'm crying! I hope Emmett can find some things out soon! :'(
Date: 23 Jan 2016 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 38
I really hope they can work this out quickly before Esme kills Edward. thanks for writing
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 22 Jan 2016 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 37
Bella did not have to let him leave. She could have gone with him to the nursing home with him and checked Esme out. Bella is rich she has the best security and has nothing to fear from Esme. Jasper can testify about what he went through. Bella is PATHETIC, RICH, and STUPID! This story is driving me crazy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 21 Jan 2016 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 37
OMFNG! I would have been dragging his ass to that facility and signing his mother out!!!
Date: 21 Jan 2016 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 37
The first step is not to talk to Carlisle but to get Edward's mom out of the stinky nursing home and to a place Esme doesn't know so that she can't blackmail Edward any longer!
But this is SO exciting.... I can't wait for the next part to appear ;-)
[Report This]Date: 21 Jan 2016 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 37
Please take BitchMe down soon.
Sherry
Date: 20 Jan 2016 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 37
XOXO XOXO LOL I LOVE THIS STORY
Date: 20 Jan 2016 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 37
Does Esme have someone on the police force working with her? Edward said a police officer told Esme about Edward. That was wrong. I am glad that Edward told Bella his story.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2016 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 37
Bella should have never hit Edward for any reason, other than that, hope they take bitchme down soon.
Date: 20 Jan 2016 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 37
Bella needs to go to the nursing home and pay someone to take care of Edward's mom. She has to take this leverage away from Esme. Then she needs to kidnap Edward and take him to a safe place. The next step is for Esme to have a horrible accident.
Date: 20 Jan 2016 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 37
I'm glad he/you again didn't went into too much detail about everything Esme did to him...
At the beginning I wasn't sure if things could be safed between them, because Edward didn't cope too well... but now I'm hoping they can get rid of Bitchme for sure ;)
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2016 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 37
thank you for the update...well done..Yes let's getr Esme
Date: 20 Jan 2016 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 37
Can't wait to see bitchme go down
Date: 20 Jan 2016 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 37
Sounds like there are alot more people than just Esme and Felix who need to go down. Now I'm thinking that the original beat down was arranged by Esme.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2016 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 37
Edward is a shattered man. Like Jasper, there are pieces of him that will never be repaired.
Is Jared okay?
Date: 20 Jan 2016 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 37
I hope Esme goes down soon!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2016 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 37
Poor Edward. Esme is twisted
Date: 20 Jan 2016 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 37
I am going to cry Esme needs to go down now. Edward has a lot of healing to do
Date: 20 Jan 2016 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 37
I'm glad you weren't graphic with his torture. I hope this is the beginning of the end for Esme!
Date: 20 Jan 2016 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 37
Remove mom, kidnap Edward - destroy, expose & humiliate Esme!
done!
Date: 20 Jan 2016 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 37
I also want to see the officer that allowed Esme into his life taken down! He sold Edward down the river.
Date: 20 Jan 2016 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 37
Poor Edward. Couldn't he sign over control of his mother to Bella? Thanks for the update! Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2016 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 37
I was really hoping that Edward wouldn't have to go back to Esme ever again :(
Date: 19 Jan 2016 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 36
Bella needs to call Carlisle, right-the-fuck-now!!
Date: 19 Jan 2016 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 36
Wow, I think Esme is no longer safe... With Bella seeing what she has done to Edward this is the final point of no return for her, I'm sure.
Hopefully she can convince him to stay and get his mother out of that horrible place... She must be somewhere Esme can't reach her so that Edward knows she will be ok and cared for. ONly then he will be able to concentrate on himself and getting out of this situation...
See you soon!
Date: 19 Jan 2016 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 36
I don't know whom will have the harder time getting over this...
Date: 19 Jan 2016 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 36
Poor Edward!! Lots of virtual huge for him! Love this story!
Date: 19 Jan 2016 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 36
Poor baby. Bella save him. I can think of lots of ways to take Esme and Felix down. Maybe will leave that to our trusted driver.
Date: 19 Jan 2016 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 36
OMG I want Esme dead now and Felix. Edward has to let her in
Date: 19 Jan 2016 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 36
Post soon, this was terrrible as far as Edward. Please post soon.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2016 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 36
Poor Edward. I'm really hoping this is a turning point and Bella is able to convince Edward let her help him and his mother.
Sherry
Date: 19 Jan 2016 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 36
Oh heart breaking... please, don't let him go back to Esme. Save him Bella!
Date: 19 Jan 2016 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 36
yes E is def broken. first thing they need to do it get his mom somewhere safe.
Date: 19 Jan 2016 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 35
Time for Esme and Felix to pay. I hope they can help E before he gets hurt even worse....or his mother.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2016 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 36
too short-please hurry back
Date: 19 Jan 2016 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 36
oh God!!!! This is getting good
Date: 19 Jan 2016 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 36
OMG. POOR Edward! *tears*. What he had to endure from Esme AND Felix. No words. I wish he would of told Bella everything when he was in Napa with her. (Btw, I really dreaded reading this chapter. I knew it was going to be bad) My heart is broken for Edward & his mother. I hope Esme and Felix pay for what they did!!!
Date: 19 Jan 2016 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 36
They need to get Carlisle and other there to help protect Edward and have some go stay with his mother too.
Date: 19 Jan 2016 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 36
Bless Edward's heart. He is having a mental breakdown. I hope Bella just takes him and tells him, gives him no choice but to let her help him. As always, you leave me wanting more.
Date: 18 Jan 2016 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 36
Yikes! Don't leave us hanging. Please give Edward the sense to let her help
Date: 18 Jan 2016 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 36
I hope Bella keeps Edward but most important, rescue his mom ASAP
[Report This]Date: 18 Jan 2016 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 36
Did Rose watch everything that happened between Edward and Bella?
Carlisle needs to be called in. Edward's mother needs to be removed from that care facility immediately by the local police and placed in a hospital under protection. Then Edward needs to be guarded and nursed back to physical health, followed by a psychological evaluation.
This will take some time.
Date: 18 Jan 2016 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 36
Let her please send someone to save his mother so she can save him! Esme and Felix need to be taken into custody! I'm in agony here for Edward!
Date: 18 Jan 2016 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 36
Bella has to make it where he never has to see Esme again. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 18 Jan 2016 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 36
Aaargh! Hurry. I need more!!! ;)
Date: 18 Jan 2016 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 36
OMFNG!! Bella better tell him to give the okay to get his mother out of that shit hole so she can put her someplace that will be good for her!! Ugh! :( Esme had got to go!! >:(
[Report This]Date: 18 Jan 2016 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 36
Poor Edward. He's going to need a lot of therapy after this
[Report This]Date: 18 Jan 2016 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 36
I am so glad he's with Bella! I hope that with the proper help, Edward will be able to heal. I imagine that Bella's next step is to get his mom somewhere safe, too. Esme may not realize it yet, but she is going down. Can't wait for some very bad sh*t to happen to her in prison.
Date: 18 Jan 2016 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 35
Hopefully he won't close shut now... But I'm quite sure that Bella can convince him to stay and at least get some rest... who knows what Esme has done to him... I hope that they can sort out their dispute first but since Bella can now understand why he snapped and shouted at her she probably has already forgiven him...
Hurry with the next chapter ;)
[Report This]Date: 18 Jan 2016 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 35
Will Edward collapse in Bella's arms confessing everything?
Will Carlisle be called in to aid Edward's escape from Esme's death grip?
Maybe Bella can call Jasper so he can talk Edward into running. Bella needs to stress her concern for his mother's care
Date: 17 Jan 2016 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 35
Poor Edward. You left him hanging there like the rest of us! Update soon please.
Date: 17 Jan 2016 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 35
Oh man oh man
Date: 17 Jan 2016 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 35
I can't imagine what Esme is doing to him. Don't want to, really. Can Bella really get him out? Is she willing to pay for him like Alice payed for Jasper? Where will that leave his mother? So many questions!! I can't wait to see how you do this. I'm so eager and feel so bad for Edward!
Date: 17 Jan 2016 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 35
More, more, more! The eagerness and the horror are fighting each other in my brain!
Date: 16 Jan 2016 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 35
Please post soon. That is a vicious cliffy
Date: 16 Jan 2016 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 35
Good idea Rose!
Date: 16 Jan 2016 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 35
Poor Edward! I hope he let's Bella help him and not push her away. Need the next chapter(s) lol
Date: 16 Jan 2016 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 35
OMFNG! OMG! I need more! :(
Date: 16 Jan 2016 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 35
Oh poor Edward, I hope Bella doesn't let him go back, the suspense is killing me. Great chapter.xx
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2016 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 35
Yes, maybe finally she can help him.
Date: 16 Jan 2016 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 35
I really hope he lets her help him
Date: 16 Jan 2016 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 35
About time they came up with a way to really check up on him!
And from what little information you got us, I'm about to say it was just at the last minute for him :( Edward seems to be in more physical pain than ever and I don't want to know what SHE did to get him into that state...
Take up where we left as in this moment of their meeting again or starting where we left him at the hospital with his mother?!
Date: 16 Jan 2016 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 35
Please, tell me we get to see Esme rot and suffer.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2016 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 35
Poor Edward. Esme needs to go to prison for a long time!!!
Date: 16 Jan 2016 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 35
I am so happy they have him in there grasps.
Date: 16 Jan 2016 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 35
Finally they are going to talk, I hope! Can'take wait for next chapter . This is a great story .
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2016 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 35
Evil cliffie! More please!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2016 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 35
Oh hell, how I'd wished I'd waited to read this chapter with the next one back to back. Any chance of updating early? I never ask a writer that, but damn, I'm dying to know what happens.
Sherry
Date: 16 Jan 2016 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 35
Omg don't leave us hanging for too long!
Date: 16 Jan 2016 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 35
I am so glad that Edward is finally away from Esme, if only for the weekend. I hope he does not go back. I hope he let's Bella hexploded him and his mother. Esme is the devil. How does Esme expect Edward to fulfill these women dreams when he can barely walk and stand up.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2016 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 35
oh please hurry back
Date: 15 Jan 2016 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 8
Wow, Edward is really good! Worried that they'll run into someone he's "dated" in the past!
Date: 15 Jan 2016 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 7
From what I've read in the last two chapters I'm starting to think that maybe Edward's situation has something to do with his mother now? Is his mother ill or institutionalized? Trying to figure out the reason he would subject himself to this line or work. (I don't know why anyone would put up with it).
From Bella's perspective it must be so hard to know if what Edward says is sincere. I mean he does have sex with women for money. I know he seems sincere, but I would think she would have trouble trusting him given her history.
Date: 15 Jan 2016 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 6
Thanks for saying you won't write Esme abusing Edward because I don't think I could take it!
All I can say is that there better be an excellent reason that Edward is putting up with Esme's crap because I don't know what could possibly allow him to stay and do her bidding! She's satan!
Date: 15 Jan 2016 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 5
Well Edward certainly seems prepared and able to handle his job! I think it wil be hard to tell the difference for Bella between what is work, and what is real with him. I can see those lines becoming easily blurred...
Date: 15 Jan 2016 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 4
So Esme stood there and listened in on his conversation with Bella? Ugh, what is her deal?