Date: 04 May 2016 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 63
OMFG you are kidding me please just let the wond be a through and through she has to live. Esme should of been gut shot
Date: 04 May 2016 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 63
Please tell me there is someone like Jane from His Cimmerian View in bitchme's future since it doesn't look like Edward will get to take his revenge.
Date: 04 May 2016 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 63
I'm so proud of Edward for finding his inner strength to face Esme. Of course Bella would jump in front of Edward. She'll do anything to protect him. I can't wait to find out what happens to Esme! Looking forward to next chapter.
Date: 04 May 2016 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 63
OMGosh! No you did not leave us there!!!!!!!!! I am very proud of Edward going in all confident. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 04 May 2016 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 63
Ugh! That BITCH! Make it right!! 😢
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2016 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 63
Oh my god so good But you are mean stop with the Cliffys lady LOL
Date: 04 May 2016 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 63
What??????? NOOOOOOOO
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2016 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 63
Leaving it that way is pure evil! ;)
Date: 02 May 2016 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 62
I suspect Bitchme will be slippery, and hard to catch, and will choose suicide over capture in the end. Elizabeth is likely traumatized and Bella badly injured. Hopefully, her spirit isn't broken.
Date: 30 Apr 2016 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 62
I dont think Edward is going to stay in the car!!! Or Esme is going to get in with him and Rose and take off again!!! uggggg Just get her already!!! lol
Date: 30 Apr 2016 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 62
terrible people who do human trafficing. They will stop at nothing.
Date: 30 Apr 2016 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 62
It was sweet that Bella recognized Edward, or better the memories about his father before and with the accident. Maybe this will help them really do their best, especially given their own experiences with human trafficking :(
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2016 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 62
Rose isn't very confident. I hope she is wrong
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2016 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 62
Sooooooooooooooooooooooo unsure
Date: 30 Apr 2016 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 62
They are getting closer to them and I dont think Edward is going to lisen and stay in the van he is going to rescue his ladys and take the bitchme down.
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2016 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 62
I'm with Rose, it's far from over.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2016 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 62
I think that Esme's road has...finally...come to an end.
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2016 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 62
I make no predictions at this point in time. Just get them to safety.
Date: 30 Apr 2016 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 62
Like myself, I bet every one of your readers are salivating for the chapter(s) where bitchme gets what's coming to her. So so looking forward to it.
Date: 30 Apr 2016 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 62
I hope everyone except Esme comes out of this ok. Can't wait for more.
Date: 30 Apr 2016 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 62
I'm hoping they will get both Bella and Elizabeth out safely, and that Bitchme will be killed in the battle!
Date: 29 Apr 2016 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 61
I'm glad this brought back Edwards fire instead of making him shrink within!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2016 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 61
I think that's the most fierce I've seen Edward be. He's right, he deserves to be there when Esme goes down.
Sherry
Date: 26 Apr 2016 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 61
Please don't let one of the good guys get hurt! I want Esme to get what's coming to her and don't care if she's caught or killed.
Date: 26 Apr 2016 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 61
Edward is pissed. Love it. Can't wait for bitchme to get hers.
Date: 26 Apr 2016 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 61
I am so proud of Edward
Date: 26 Apr 2016 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 61
I think it's great Edward put his foot down and made it clear he's going with them. He's right, he should be there (and maybe get the chance to get his revenge)! Not to forget pretty sure both Bella and his mom might need him there;)
Date: 26 Apr 2016 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 61
Loved it and I`m pleased you to the "guest reveiwer"to go jump good on you sister !!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2016 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 61
The logic behind Esme taking Edward's mother is still evading my mind. She has way too much to lose. She should be on the run right now. Unless she thinks she can keep Bella as collateral damage. Make a tidy sum by selling her off to some sick foreigner.
Date: 26 Apr 2016 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 61
Let me at the evil bitch!
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2016 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 61
Can't wait to see who kills the bitch. ;)
Date: 26 Apr 2016 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 61
Holy shit! I can't wait for more!! :)
Date: 26 Apr 2016 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 61
I like Agent Dean! Go Edward! I hope Bella is able to torture Esme at least some before they get there.
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2016 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 61
Glad that Edward stood up to them. That strength will help him...and his mom and Bella. So sad about the agent's sister.
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2016 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 61
Ur work is divine! And to guest reviewer .... Bring it on u ingrate! U anxious and aren't getting ur way??? Want to see what happens ??? Well my dear ... That is what a BRILLIANT writer does, draws you in and makes u anxious about the end game. Unlike u am am sitting impatiently but eager ....knowing the talent of this loveliness will not fail to reward me with a great roller coaster ride to a magnificent conclusion. If u don't appreciate then move along and stop tormenting a great artist. I have much more colorful words yet I will refrain as I hate to offend the wonderful readers that don't need my crassness . I bid u a deiu... Signed a fellow fic writer who could give a tinkers damn if you like my ideas ... GAH!
Date: 25 Apr 2016 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 60
I still think she needs to be tortured with a fire hot poking iron!
Date: 24 Apr 2016 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 60
Bella may not get the chance to kill the bitch. Edward might get to!
Date: 24 Apr 2016 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 8
Hey Marymary, that story was the red line and it is a lot different than this one actually. It was really good but also painful to read at times. d84;a039; Edward
Date: 24 Apr 2016 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 60
I absofreakinglutely love this story!!! :)
Date: 23 Apr 2016 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 60
I hope this ends soon. I want Esme dead so badly! I'm usually not a violent person, but she has pushed my limit. Bella, Edward, and his mother need some peace soon....Good for Edward for soldiering through all this hell....
Date: 23 Apr 2016 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 60
Go Edward!!! We knew Edward was intelligent and would do anything for his loved ones. Now we get to see him in action. I can't wait. I hope he's the one who kills Esme! Or at least hurts her a great deal! And I see an incredible future doing stuff with computers for him!
Date: 23 Apr 2016 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 60
Of course you wouldn't allow them to hear Bella runimg from the hotel... I didn't expect anything else; )
But I'm glad Edward finally felt he could do something again, he'll need that feeling to notgett stir crazy about the situation
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2016 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 60
Go get your girls Edward.
Sherry
Date: 23 Apr 2016 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 60
OMG how much can he take but he is stronger than he thinks than Esme thinks I want that bitch to die painfully
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2016 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 60
Edward finally has some support and backup. He will dig deep to find the strength necessary to save his mother and love. This may be the turning point for him. He may finally figure out the weak point in Esme's armor.
Date: 23 Apr 2016 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 60
I'm just so tired of that bitch Esme and want her dead. I don't care how or by who's hands.
Date: 23 Apr 2016 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 60
Saving Bella and his mom will probably help Edward in his healing. Can'twait for more.
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2016 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 60
Torture, then death, for Esme, is what I want to read.
Date: 22 Apr 2016 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 59
Good chapter ! I certainly hope she doesn't get away again ! Poor Edward !
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2016 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 59
thank you for the update...well done..although I don't like that Esme wasn't caught...I'm like Bella Bitch gona die!!!...lol...until you post again
Date: 20 Apr 2016 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 59
Nooooo, you can't stop there. I have a deep seated need to kow what happens and that this nasty Esme gets her just deserts. Really love the character development throughout this story xx
Date: 19 Apr 2016 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 59
well.. We shall see if wanting would do it we all want that. Kill the evil character.
Date: 19 Apr 2016 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 59
I'm sure she'll somehow manage to escape. I just hope Carlisle was paying enough attention to Bella that he'll follow her, discreetly of course. I'm afraid Esme will do something to hurt Bella and Elizabeth. I'll be on pins and needles until Friday!!
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2016 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 59
Esme is a sneaky bitch, she'll get the upper-hand on Bella. I'm hoping Carlisle follows Bella. Though Emmett is raising some red flags with his behavior. I'm hoping he isn't on Esme's payroll.
Sherry
Date: 19 Apr 2016 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 50
Damn this is making me cry.
Date: 19 Apr 2016 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 46
I agree on that last sentence. Jail will be too nice.
Date: 19 Apr 2016 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 42
Esme needs to be met with an accident. A really bad one.
Date: 19 Apr 2016 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 34
Boy I would hire goons and storm her business and beat the hell out of her and Felix. That is to start with.
Date: 19 Apr 2016 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 27
I think the Esme chapters I will skip. Too hard to read.
Date: 19 Apr 2016 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 21
put astop to esme
Date: 19 Apr 2016 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 59
Seeing that Bella has only limited experience with criminals and crimes, I'd say her chances aren't too high... But I really hope she will succeed
Date: 19 Apr 2016 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 59
Please let Bella get Liz safely!!!
Date: 19 Apr 2016 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 59
Oh, GREAT plan, Bella. 😡
Date: 19 Apr 2016 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 59
I really hope Bella kills Esme. I hope Edwards mother is all right. I knew that Esme would get to her first and kidnap her while they were waiting on a court order.
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2016 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 59
Someone is bound to get hurt. At the rate things have been going, Isabella is next to experience the inherent evil that is Esme.
Other than a gun, what backup form of protection will Bella put in place?
Date: 19 Apr 2016 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 59
Please let Bella pop a cap in her ass and her head I want that bitch to die
Date: 19 Apr 2016 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 59
Esme needs to be tortured! She needs to have her lower lips prodded with a red hot iron!
Date: 19 Apr 2016 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 59
If I was Bella I would at least tell Carlisle what's going on. It's not like the bitch would know.
Date: 19 Apr 2016 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 59
She had better die this time! Grrr! I'll jump into the story and kill her myself!!
Date: 19 Apr 2016 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 59
Edward can't handle more if something happens to Bella. I hope she leaves a clue as to where she went. Bella is so naive thinking she can kill Esme by herself. Please don't make Elizabeth or Bella get hurt for Edward's sake.
Date: 19 Apr 2016 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 59
She can't kill Esme! Edward can't lose Bella and or his mother.
Date: 19 Apr 2016 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 59
Dumb dumb dumb Bellla.....you should rely on your firiends!
Date: 19 Apr 2016 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 59
OMGosh!!!!! I don't blame Bella for wanting to kill her. Hope you update soon.
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2016 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 59
Bella is an idiot if she thinks she can do it alone
Date: 19 Apr 2016 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 59
Idiot she needs to tell Carlisle at least
Date: 19 Apr 2016 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 59
Stupid Bella if she goes alone and/or doesn't tell anyone
Date: 18 Apr 2016 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 8
Read a story like this years ago. Victoria was his mistress and it was called Red something. Good story really different than most. Only that story he was a dancer.
Date: 16 Apr 2016 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 2
doing this is not manwhore. He is selling his self because he needs money and perhaps companionship of sorts. Pretty much the same reason women do this
Date: 16 Apr 2016 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 58
I'm not sure if Esme will hurt her. I think she will somewhat look after her, but she is so evil that she doesn't care about Elizabeth's condition and might mentally abuse her. Elizabeth still thinks Edward senior is alive so Esme may just let it slip out he died. I hope she doesn't physically hurt Elizabeth.
Date: 16 Apr 2016 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 58
Poor Edward... this devil put the fear of hell already on him, going through it in thoughts of his "helpless" mother - of course he's out of his mind:(
The only good thing I can see in Esme taking Elizabeth from the nursery home is, that she might get better without the wrong medication stuffed into her system... And imagine the moment clarity comes and she'll knock out Esme....
Date: 16 Apr 2016 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 58
Knowing Esme she has her locked in a room with no bed, food, clothes, or medication. This is such a sad story.
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2016 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 58
moving too (painfully and tearfully) slow ... love them, their story but we need some happy!
Date: 16 Apr 2016 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 58
That bitch had better leave his mom alone and that is what she is doing she has her locked up somewhere alone. She needs to be hung up by her nipples and her clit till she is dead of course that is also with sharp sticks all over her. I hate that bitch she much die slow and very painful. Edward needs his mommy with him and safe.
Date: 16 Apr 2016 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 58
Who knows what Esme will do to Edward's mom. I 'm thinking she thinks there's nothing more for her to lose now and might take it out on Edward's mom. I think she may try to kill her. I truly hope she doesn't succeed.
Date: 16 Apr 2016 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 58
Esme will let Edward think she's torturing his mom - psychological warfare
Date: 16 Apr 2016 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 58
Esme is a f*cking monster!! I can't wait to find out who will get to take her down!! She is so f*cking evil!!! >:(
I love this story! :)
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2016 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 58
I'm really hoping Esme doesn't do something to harm or kill Edward's mom. That would just push him over the edge. He can't mentally take much more.
Sherry
Date: 16 Apr 2016 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 58
I hope Esme is not being mean to Edward's mom. I am wondering if we hear Esme's POV. Can't wait for more.