[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2016 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 58
The question is.... What can Esme really gain from taking Edward's mother?
Edward has unlimited funds now for his recover. Thanks to Bella and her unconditional love.
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2016 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 57
hea hea hea
Date: 15 Apr 2016 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 8
Awe! They're in love!
Date: 14 Apr 2016 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 57
It was pretty clear that Bella picked this facility for its good reputation and high standard of care. I'm so glad to see their security is also top-notch. /s
Date: 13 Apr 2016 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 6
Poor Edward! Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2016 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 57
I knew Esme would get to Elizabeth first. Damn bitchme, she's god-awful. I don't know how much more Edward can take before he folds in on himself for good.
Sherry
Date: 12 Apr 2016 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 57
I can't help but wonder if the kidnapping will be a twisted sort of blessing in disguise. Maybe, Esme will start telling Esme all of the terrible things that were done to her son, and it will wake her out of her emotional stupor. She has been hiding inside her own mind for years, rather than deal with her husbands death. Maybe, this will reignite her passion for life and bring her back from that dark place she's hidden herself.
*huggles*
Date: 12 Apr 2016 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 56
Why am I afraid Esme got there before them?!?!
Date: 12 Apr 2016 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 57
I'm gonna hang in because you"re such an excellent writer. I gotta say though it's getting to be too much. I'd skip chapters to get to a little bit of lightness but you can lose pertinent information when you do. Still I trust you as an author. I'm just not very good with the heavy.
Date: 12 Apr 2016 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 57
I had a feeling Esme would get to Elizabeth first. Hopefully they find her before she hurts Elizabeth too badly or worse! Poor Edward! He's on such an emotional roller coaster! From the sounds of the nursing home and it's conditions, I wonder if they will work to get the place closed down or at least make them clean house with their staff that have no business being there.
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2016 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 57
Esme always has a contingency plan. It was inevitable that she would go after Edward's mother. She probably had Dr. Gerandy sign all the paperwork as a backup just before she had him killed.
Poor Edward. His hopes continue to be shattered.
Date: 12 Apr 2016 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 57
OMFNG!!! I knew it would happen but it still feels like it hit me from out of no where!! :( Poor Edward! Poor Elizabeth! Poor Bella!! I am just so sad and angry for them all! >:'(
Date: 12 Apr 2016 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 57
I can't wait for that bitch to die she is so evil. My heart is just breaking for them both
Date: 12 Apr 2016 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 57
I'll chant it with you, but I'm still furious
Date: 12 Apr 2016 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 57
I knew you wouldn't let this chance slip, but it's still not making the sting any easier... Poor Edward, I can't imagine how he must be feeling already - topped off with guilt...
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2016 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 57
I hope Elizabeth is alright
Date: 12 Apr 2016 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 57
I knew Esme was going to get to Edward or Edward's mom. What is she going to do, contact Edward and tell him if he doesn't come back that she will kill his mother?
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2016 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 57
Hmmm how should Esme die?? Bitchme needs to fry (Much the same way as the chick in the first Blade movie did lmao)... Like every other chapter you have written so far in this journey, I love, Love, Love it :D
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2016 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 57
DEATH TO ESME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 12 Apr 2016 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 57
Maybe this is better. Now Bella and Edward can find Esme and get their revenge before the cops got to them. But I hope his mom will be alright.
Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 12 Apr 2016 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 57
How could they release her to someone who wasn't listed on her records? I know this is a plot device, but it's almost too much to take....I trust you'll give us the HEA, but will Edward be too damaged by then to be able to fully participate in the relationship with Bella? Ugh! Sorry, I'm frustrated!
Date: 10 Apr 2016 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 56
Please make everything be alright. If his gut is warning him, Bitchme must have gotten to his mom first. Wouldn't Bella been informed if something had happened to Elizabeth? Thanks for the update.
Date: 10 Apr 2016 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 56
BitchMe is going to be waiting for them THAT'S what's going to go wrong!! Ugh! I can't watch..lol
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2016 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 56
I have a feeling things aren't going to go as planned.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2016 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 55
Glad Edward has so much support and understanding.
I had a thought, probably wrong, but still... I thought with how long its taken to get a court date set and get Edward's mother to safety from Esme, what's the chances she has already had his mother moved, hidden from him, to force him back?
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2016 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 54
Looking forward to more.
Sherry
Date: 10 Apr 2016 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 56
Goodness I hope.not!
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2016 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 56
Something could always go wrong. As long as Esme is still on the loose.
Edward's journal entry has already aided in returning some of the power back to him.
Date: 09 Apr 2016 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 56
What a horrific ordeal he went through! Now, finally, the police have an official record of it! I'm so happy his mother has been moved to a decent place now. You planted a seed with that last sentence...could Esme be watching the move and getting ready to attack? I hope she gets shot dead if that is her plan. That kiss he gave Bella bodes a return to their passion once he heals a bit more, I think!
Date: 09 Apr 2016 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 56
Elizabeth's transfer better go smoothly
Date: 09 Apr 2016 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 56
Of course it will Esme is still out there!! I can't wait for more! :)
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2016 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 56
just amazing
Date: 09 Apr 2016 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 56
I hope that his worry is unnecessary but knowing you, its a big possibility with Esme on the run... And it would be the perfect opportunity for her to really hurt him once more:(
Date: 09 Apr 2016 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 56
So much pain. Esme can't get his mom?
Date: 09 Apr 2016 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 56
So glad the judge granted Bella guardianship.
Date: 09 Apr 2016 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 56
Please don't let Esme mess with his mom!!!! Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 09 Apr 2016 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 56
Oh No!! Please dont let Esme do anything to them. Edward is so fragile right now if she gets him back I am afraid he will completely break!!!
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2016 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 56
I'm worried about Esme making a reappearance,
Date: 07 Apr 2016 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 55
That was both very sad and very sweet. He has so much love from everyone. I hope he realises this. LOVE YA!!!!!!!!!
Date: 05 Apr 2016 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 55
Has anyone told him that Jared is there for him, still? He probably has no idea about the accident, or the fact that Jared risked a lot by talking to Bella later. Edward needs to know that he has two father figures who love him very much.
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2016 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 55
thank you for the update.....Please catch Esme already...I'm ready for her to be dealth with...she needs to feel the same pain as her victims...until you post again
Date: 05 Apr 2016 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 55
What a wonderful and caring way to help Edward get started toward working through his recovery and journaling. Hopefully as Edward starts journaling and working on healing, whenever he has doubt or has difficulty believing he can overcome he will go back and re-read those entries to remind him that he is loved and has people who love him!
Date: 05 Apr 2016 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 55
He needs them all
Date: 05 Apr 2016 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 55
I think with such great back up and knowing their stories it'll be a lot easier for Edward to start using his journal!
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2016 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 55
The journal is a very nice gesture but, Edward is light years away from recovery with the simple act of jotting down his confused thoughts.
Will he get there? Yes, with the help of counseling and friends. He may try to run away emotionally and hide for a while though.
Date: 05 Apr 2016 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 55
Love all the entries in his journal. Can't wait for Edward and Jared to see each other again.
Date: 05 Apr 2016 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 55
Loved this perspective
Date: 05 Apr 2016 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 55
I really Bella gets guardianship of Edward's mom. Is that the next chapter? Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 05 Apr 2016 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 55
It's rare, indeed, to have so many people in one's life who care so deeply. Edward is very lucky. Maybe one day he will heal enough to realize it. Very touching chapter!
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2016 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 55
That is so kind of all of them!
Date: 04 Apr 2016 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 54
I'm so glad Edward met with the therapist. Looking forward to reading the journal entry. And can't wait to see how court is going for Bella. And where is Esme? I'm afraid she's gonna get to Edward's mother before Bella can get things changed over. Until next time, have a wonderful day!
Date: 04 Apr 2016 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 54
I think the new doctor is what he needs
Date: 03 Apr 2016 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 54
I think Dr Benson is going to be very good for Edward.
Date: 02 Apr 2016 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 54
Maybe now Edward can start to heal, but he cant really start until the bitch is caught she will always be in his mind until she cant hurt anyone anymore!!!
Date: 02 Apr 2016 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 54
Great chapter ! I can see this is going to be a very long and difficult process for Edward , as it must be for anyone who has suffered from such abuse. Can't imagine how I would deal with it! Great writing job, as usual !
Date: 02 Apr 2016 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 54
Great Chapter. I'm super anxious to find out what's going on with Bella at court though I would also love to know what's written in the journal. I am really enjoying your story.
Date: 02 Apr 2016 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 54
The good doctor seems to not believe in pussy footing around the issue but rather speaking her mind right away.... I was surprised that she began their relationship with her past already, as I'm not sure this approach might work with everyone.
Another interesting thing she said, was her want to sieak to Edwards mom - should I hope Elizabeth was more mistreated than we already know?!
Date: 02 Apr 2016 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 54
Love this fic! Always excited to read the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2016 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 54
finally!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 02 Apr 2016 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 54
I hope Dr Benson can help Edward. Hope Bella is having good luck at the courthouse.
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2016 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 54
She sounds like the perfect Psychiatrist for him.
Date: 02 Apr 2016 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 54
I liked the good doctor a lot!
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2016 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 54
Who lied to Edward about his mother's state of health?
Could Edward's father have been linked to Esme somehow? Could she have been involved in his accident?
Bella's already told Edward he can become anything he wants to be. But will her money scare him off in the long run?
Edward hasn't truly experienced unconditional love since his mother's breakdown.
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2016 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 54
Excellent chapter. Lots of food for thought.
Date: 02 Apr 2016 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 54
I had hoped to hear how the judge ruled in the case of Edward's mother and who has say over what happens to her. Next time, maybe? I'm not sure I like this new doctor...but then I don't like most of her kind....
Date: 30 Mar 2016 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 53
OMG! Is that the end??? I thought this was a completed work...where can I find the rest?! I LOVE this story and need to know what happens. Help
Author's Response:
It's not over. I don't know how long it will be, but at least 60 chapters (since that's what I have written as of right now).
Date: 29 Mar 2016 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 53
As long as you don't let Esme get away , you can do whatever feels right to you . I know we can trust your storytelling abilities !
Date: 29 Mar 2016 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 53
This is fantastic!! I loved the droopy ass scene! Edward needed a good laugh. I hope all goes well for Bella at court. I know Esme is going to pop up somewhere soon and I hope that she will be 'taken care of'!!!
Date: 29 Mar 2016 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 53
I get that you needed to loosen up the tension, and Carlisle doesn't strike me as a person without humor, I'm sure he'll gladly take a few jokes to see Edward grin;)
Bella's bad feeling is something I hope will be the most wrong thing ever. Why would a judge allow Edward's ex employer to stay guardian for his mother if his fiance could be there?!
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2016 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 53
The droopy ass content was a nice mix to breakup the seriousness. Poor Edward, he's so fucked in the head from Esme's bullshit. There's no reason the judge should deny Bella's request as Edward's wife to become his mother's guardian. I hope that situation is cleared up soon and she's moved to a better place.
Sherry
Date: 29 Mar 2016 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 53
I enjoyed the comic relief, but I will be quite vexed with you if Esme harms Elizabeth
Date: 29 Mar 2016 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 53
Love Carlisle's droopy ass. Lol. I am worried about Bella going to court. Surely Esme will not show up at court. I just hope that Esme does not have this judge in her back pocket.
Date: 29 Mar 2016 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 53
Edward is doing as well as he can be he is going to need a lot of help. I hope Esme did not get something on the judge.
Date: 28 Mar 2016 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 53
I laughed out loud about Carlisle's droopy ass!!! lollol I hope Bella can get Elizabeth's Care but i have a feeling the judge is bought. I also feel Esme is going to rare her ugly head and try and hurt Bella. Please don't let her get her hands on Edward again!!!
Date: 28 Mar 2016 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 53
I think with all the evidence against Esme, Bella SHOULD be a shoe-in, but that is sort of contingent on the judge not discovering the marriage is a lie. They may have been better off with a signed affidavit from Edward, Carlisle and Emmett requesting transfer to Isabella Swan. She and her family are too high profile for her to get away with lying to the courts about a marriage!
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2016 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 53
I hope Bella does become Elizabeth's guardian.
Date: 28 Mar 2016 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 53
Love the levity created by the humor about Carlisle's droopy white ass! I can relate, as I have one of those also...LOL! I surely hope Bella gets custody of Edward's mother. What could prevent her? That they are not really married?
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2016 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 53
The silliness was well placed.
Edward's concerns for Bella's safety are well within his current emotional state. It was right for Bella to validate this by having a police escort.
Will Edward's mother escape Esme's rath before the Judge can transfer legal care to Isabella?
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2016 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 52
I should have expected Bitchme to escape but it didn't cross my mind that would happen. I have images of Bertha executing some of Esme's punishments on her, but I seriously doubt Esme will make it to prison.
Sherry