Date: 26 Mar 2016 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 52
OMGosh! ! ! ! ! ! ! I can not believe that Esme got away. That just sucks.
Date: 26 Mar 2016 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 52
Nooooooooo!!!! I hope she doesn't come to hurt him again while Bella is at court. Poor Edward he has been hurt enough and now he hurt his feet in the broken dishes and I just can't phantom Bitchme hurting him more.
Date: 26 Mar 2016 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 52
oh dear god! how much more can Edward take? What will Esme do now? Just when I thought it was safe to come out....you weave a murderously wonderful tale here, dearie!!
Date: 26 Mar 2016 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 52
just dont let her take edward back
he has been thru way too much
please
Date: 26 Mar 2016 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 52
Wherever she is I hope it's not anywhere near Elizabeth
Date: 26 Mar 2016 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 52
Well, as happy as I am, that it wasn't Esme waiting for Bella in the kitchen, as still worried I feel over her being on the run
Date: 26 Mar 2016 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 52
Is Esme going after his mom? Poor Edward he has been through so much.
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2016 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 52
How close will Esme get to Edward before she is finally apprehended?
Will any of the victims sold be recovered? They should testify against Esme.
A large portion of her money should be awarded to her victims.
Maybe her body will become disfigured by abuse while serving her life sentence.
Date: 26 Mar 2016 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 52
Let's start with hang drawn and quartered and then get to the really rough stuff on her.
Date: 26 Mar 2016 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 52
That woman is slipperier than an oil soaked eel!
Date: 26 Mar 2016 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 52
hoping she doesn't get to e's mom
Date: 26 Mar 2016 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 52
Let's hope esme isn't messing with his mom before court tomorrow
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2016 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 52
She should be captured and tortured by someone she abused or who she screwed over in a busniess deal.
Date: 25 Mar 2016 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 52
Please tell me someone has thought of keeping an eye on Edward's mother?? She's looking for revenge and I can't think of a better target...
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2016 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 52
I hope they catch her before she finds Edward
Date: 25 Mar 2016 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 52
I really want something sadistic, sick and demented to happen to her. I want her to be ripped open from vagina to ass hole, beat to a bloody pulp, hair ripped out, finger nails ripped off, burned, pissed on, nipples cut off, and then injected with adrenaline and wounds cauterized so we can do it all over again!
Author's Response:
Um, wow! That is quite the descriptive punishment/torture/maiming! I love it! LOL! :D
Date: 25 Mar 2016 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 52
So Esme got away... I have a feeling she went after Edward's mom. I hope they have security on her. You did say she wasn't done so that is the only thing I can come up with. Hope you update soon.
Date: 23 Mar 2016 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 51
Bless Edward's heart. He is so sad. Bella will help him. What is going on in the kitchen? I am thinking that Bella is pissed at Esme and probably throw a plate in amger. Can't wait for more.
Date: 23 Mar 2016 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 51
YOU CAN'T LEAVE IT THERE! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
Date: 22 Mar 2016 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 51
My heart breaks for Edward and Bella. I hope Bella is ok.
Date: 22 Mar 2016 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 51
OMG! What now!?! I am dying to find out!! ;)
Date: 22 Mar 2016 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 51
He is opening up to her. I think Bella is having a break down
Date: 22 Mar 2016 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 51
Wonderfully sweet !
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2016 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 51
Edward bared more than his physical injuries. His broken heart, mind, and soul have been placed once again in the hands of another. Bella needs to proceed with caution and gentle loving hands.
Date: 22 Mar 2016 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 51
Who broke into her home??
Date: 22 Mar 2016 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 51
I hope that Bella was just expressing her rage at Esme once she was out of the room and that nothing else bad is happening in her house. I hope they are safe there!
[Report This]Date: 21 Mar 2016 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 51
It's great Bella can see past the scars and torture that Esme has forced on Edward. Her disgust is directed at the right person. Edward needn't feel disgrace for something he was forced into doing.
What happened with Bella becoming Edward's mothers guardian?
I'm not sure if Bella has just had a fit of rage or if someone uninvited has shown up to take Edward back.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 21 Mar 2016 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 51
OMG! Esme better not be there! That bitch needs to suffer and then die!
Date: 21 Mar 2016 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 51
I hate that he's so full of self hate, but this is a natural reaction for a victim at his age I guess... and he's not alone anymore and that should help him get over it all at some point in the future; )
Knowing you, I'd guess Bella met an unwanted visitor in her kitchen...
Date: 11 Mar 2016 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 50
These are such hard chapters to read. The pain Edward feels just tears at your heart.
Date: 10 Mar 2016 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 50
Love the story, could not stop reading.
Date: 06 Mar 2016 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 50
Poor guy. Hope Esme gets what's coming to her soon
Date: 06 Mar 2016 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 50
That is 15 days!!! No way, do what you can, love this story.
Date: 06 Mar 2016 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 50
Oohhh! Musical! Fun! Good luck!
Date: 06 Mar 2016 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 50
Ooh! What musical are your kids doing?! They didn't do musicals at my HS until two years after I graduated. My former choir teacher decided to get his fingers into the drama department too late for me. 😕 They actually did Les Mis and Into the Woods in the past few years. Lots of huge talent.
I am glad they are getting him so much help. I can't wait to find out what happened on the raid, and what happens in court.
*huggles*
Author's Response:
We're doing The Wizard of Oz. It was one of the only options we could do with the serious lack of males in our program. Acting/singing-wise, we're in good shape. However, we don't have a set. Kind of stressed about that. o.O Hugs to you!
Date: 05 Mar 2016 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 50
My heart breaks for Edward! I'm so glad that he's gonna talk to Bella before police. It shows that he does trust her. Can't wait to hear about the raid! Hopefully they got a lot on Esme! She deserves to have done to her what she did to Edward and Jasper and all the others. And the sooner the judge grants guardianship of Edward's mom to Bella the better. I worry that Esme will somehow get her hands on her.
Date: 05 Mar 2016 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 50
This is fantastic!!I can't wait to find out what happens to Bitchme!!
Good luck with your production! :)
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2016 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 50
Poor Edward. The torture he has gone through is unimaginable. Opening up to Bella, I think, will be his first real step to recovery. I surely hope Bitchme was caught and arrested, but I have a feeling she'll evade for a bit.
Sherry
Date: 05 Mar 2016 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 50
Great installment, and take care of yourself!
Date: 05 Mar 2016 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 50
I am glad that Edward is going to tell Bella everything. Get needs to tell his story and Bella needs to hear it so she can truly understand. I am afraid Esme is not going to get what she truly deserves for everything she has put Edward through.
Date: 05 Mar 2016 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 50
Thanks for not leaving us with a major cliffie over this time, and good luck - or is it break a leg? - for your production...
I'm not sure if a female therapist is really the best choice for Edward, maybe he can't be more open with males, seeing he feels more at ease with Carlisle and Dr. Banner...
Date: 05 Mar 2016 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 50
He is already starting to heal by talking about it that is the hardest part
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2016 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 50
I hope he talks to Dr Benson
Date: 05 Mar 2016 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 50
I hope her comment didn't mean that Bitch me got away! Have to wait to find out , I guess . Break a leg with your show!
Date: 05 Mar 2016 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 50
Directing a school musical must be very satisfying for you and I wish you all the best!
It looks like Edward is in good hands for now. He has a long road of healing ahead. See you in about 2 1/2 weeks!
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2016 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 50
Dr. Banner and Carlisle are the best male mentors and defenders Edward could hope to have in his corner.
Date: 02 Mar 2016 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 49
Hurry hurry next chapter pls.... Can wait ugh!!! Whatvtonknownwhat happens next will things ever be the same will there still be hidden secrets
Date: 02 Mar 2016 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 49
Bella's doing so well with him. Felix needs to pay along side Bitchme
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2016 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 49
Carlisle bridged a gap for Edward. He represents healing and physically recovery. A fatherly bond is slowly growing for Edward. Something he lost a long time ago.
What's the word from Emmett and the detectives that raided Esme's home business?
Date: 01 Mar 2016 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 49
Poor Edward. He has so much healing to do. Thank God that he has Bella and Carlisle on his side.
Date: 01 Mar 2016 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 49
I won't give up on them - it's good to see that even now Edward can acknowledge that it wasn't his fault.... This is huge for someone in his situation, so I'm fairly sure that things will improve and that he is coming back to his former self, but stronger.
Keep going!
Date: 01 Mar 2016 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 49
I think it's good that Edward has at least one person he trusts fully, or with his health at least. Who knows how much further his trust in Carlisle goes at this moment in time...
As for Bella, she's a woman in love, deeply afraid of loosing said person due to his wounds, of course she'll have some weak moments in her head as well
Date: 01 Mar 2016 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 49
Our is going to take time for v him to trust.
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2016 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 49
I hope he stays strong and continues to want to fight
Date: 01 Mar 2016 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 49
He needs a good counselor in PTSD and abuse victim's cases.
Date: 01 Mar 2016 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 49
I can't wait to hear what happens to Esme and the rest. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 01 Mar 2016 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 49
Bitchme needs to be tortured!
Date: 01 Mar 2016 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 49
Poor man, so glad he have someone like Carlisle to be his rock.
Date: 01 Mar 2016 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 49
I do not know if it is because the chapters are shorter, the time between updates too long or that I love the story so much that no pace will be quick enough, but I feel like the story is going so slow. I want more. I am also dying to find out about his Mom. Shouldn't Bella have left already to get her?
Date: 01 Mar 2016 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 49
Poor Edward! He seems so damaged, not only physically, but emotionally and mentally also. He will take a long time to recover from the 2 latter issues...
Date: 01 Mar 2016 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 49
Phew! I feel the need for a group hug! I am so sad that Edward has endured so much pain and I an sad that Bella's feelings are hurt but I am so happy that they are together. He is safe. I am excited for more!! :)
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2016 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 49
Poor Edward. I'd like to see Bella in a room alone with Esme for about 10 minutes. I was hoping for some news on Edward's mother and that situation.
Sherry
Date: 01 Mar 2016 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 49
Still with you
Date: 01 Mar 2016 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 49
As much as I want to hear about Edward's progress I want to know if his mother is safe
Date: 01 Mar 2016 2:15 AM Title: Prologue
Arrrgggg!!! I just want Bitchme to pay for everything. It's heartbreaking that both Bella and Edward are suffering. I hope he heals fast so they can start building a future.
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2016 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 48
I enjoyed Carlisle's POV.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2016 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 49
Glad he's safe, but he has a long road to recovery.
Date: 01 Mar 2016 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 49
At least Edward is talking to Bella. Can't wait for him to see his mom.
Date: 29 Feb 2016 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 48
Carlisle is such a great guy.
Date: 29 Feb 2016 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 48
Great story please keep going can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 28 Feb 2016 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 48
Carlisle is a good man.
Date: 27 Feb 2016 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 48
Great story, and bitchme needs to be exfoliated until she bleeds. Love your Charlise character as well!
Date: 27 Feb 2016 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 48
Carlisle really is heaven send in this fic ;)
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2016 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 48
Charlie lost his paternal instincts?
Bella's becoming bitter regarding people's ability to care. At least Carlisle is there to balance it all out for this confused couple.
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2016 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 48
too short a minute and I was done
Date: 27 Feb 2016 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 45
i feel like i held my breath for all of this time
and finally able to let some out...
phew.
hopefully, this means edward is at least free from
esme's clutches for good.
Date: 27 Feb 2016 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 48
Carlisle is the man love him
Date: 27 Feb 2016 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 48
This is a great Carlisle. But I want to sed Esme's reaction when they come for her! That is going to be epic!
Date: 27 Feb 2016 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 48
OMG! A huge hug for Carlisle! I love him! He's already a great father! ;)
Date: 27 Feb 2016 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 48
I'm wary of that last line... Like, why's it there? Is he that making of doing something rash? Something that could land him 6ft under?? 😳
Date: 27 Feb 2016 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 48
I liked having Carlisle's POV
I hope nothing happens to him in order to protect Bella and Edward from Bitchme and her minions
Date: 27 Feb 2016 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 48
Carlisle had been wonderful, helpful to both Bella and Edward. Edward has PTSD, I'm sure, from all he's been through. Please tell us that they got Edward's mother safely out of that horrible home she was in and away from Esme!
Date: 27 Feb 2016 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 48
Love Carlisle! !!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2016 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 48
I hope Carlisle doesn't have to die. Edward and Bella need him.
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2016 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 47
Either POV would add another layer of perception and direction to this area of Edward's confusion.
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2016 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 46
Will we get Emmett's perspective of the raid on Esme's business?
Date: 24 Feb 2016 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 47
Wow... it's good to see that Edward is safe now and that he has not totally lost his senses! Here's in there and Bella will help Eddie to come back out, even if it will take quite some time. But he's there and Carlisle will stay close. I think they may develop kind of like a father and son relationship and this is something that Edward needs right now. He needs reassurance and Carlisle can give this to him.
Now let's hope that they can also save Elizabeth in time... and hopefully Emmett and his team have found some proof on Esme's sick mind and doings...
Keep going on like this! :)
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2016 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 47
I just wanna comfort Edward and promise him everything will be ok, but a lot is still at risk. Carlisle is awesome. I can't imagine how confused Bella is over not knowing what to expect from Edward, or what to do for him.
Awesome story.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2016 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 47
I love Carlisle, he is a compassionate man. I'm glad Edward accepted Bella's love and decided to stay in her room.
Date: 23 Feb 2016 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 46
He is finally free!!!
Bitchme wouldn't know what hit her!!!