Date: 28 Jun 2017 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 9
Hot stuff! Love it
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2017 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 9
Ugh Rosalie is a skank, I mean wow she has no shame and for Emmett, her own husband to see the photographic proof of her cheating, I feel so sorry for him because he truly loved her. I can't wait for the heat to turn up for Edward and Bella.
Melissa
Date: 28 Jun 2017 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 9
I loved it girl!! Ready for more already!!
Date: 28 Jun 2017 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 9
Glad Em will finally be allowed to get rid of the Whore. He needs a nice girl like Angela or something. Hope Maria will be ok
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2017 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 8
I'm looking forward to more. Rosalie is gonna shit a brick. lol
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2017 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 7
I feel bad for Bella, that she's been caught in the middle of a terrible situation.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2017 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 8
I don't think rose can be redeemed. She has crossed to many lines.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2017 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 7
I'm looking forward to her being more inappropriate with Edward!!
Date: 24 Jun 2017 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 8
I'm loving this story!!! Can't wait for more!!
Date: 23 Jun 2017 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 8
love that they are talking and gathering and becoming a couple
i don't think rose can be redeemed, she will be out for revenge now
keep it coming
Date: 22 Jun 2017 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 8
II am loving this story. I am glad that they talked about saying I LIVE YOU.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2017 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 8
You make me feel about Jacob a way that I never do. I want to hang out with him, and I want to throat punch anyone who makes fun of him. Love this story!
Date: 22 Jun 2017 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 8
I dont really like when the canon couples get separated because one of them it´s the traitor in the story
but I definitely love your story
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2017 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 8
thank you for the update...well done...I loved that Emmett got to have a little fun...Rosalie is a hot mess...wondering what Emmemt is up to..lol..he knows your a whore
Date: 21 Jun 2017 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 8
Ooooh can't wait for the sauce thing
Date: 21 Jun 2017 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 8
No redemption for Rosalie, she betrayed her "family" repeatedly.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2017 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 8
I'm struggling with the idea that Rosalie might be redeemable. The only way that could possibly happen is if it was revealed that she is protecting someone that Uncle Stephan and Riley King threatened. Keeping her under their thumb as an informant. But it's a stretch at this point. Her bitchy behavior leans toward total independent actions against Edward's family, not a reactionary approach to a loved one being threatened.
Emmett and Mrs. Cope are right, Bella is exactly what their family needs.
Jacob is a good body guard and straight forward friend to Bella. His simplicity makes him more endearing.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2017 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 8
Rose has seriously screwed up, and I don't trust her at all. I can understand why Bella has issues with committed relationships as she's been shuttled around her whole life. I hope she gets there soon with Edard because he really does love her.
Great chapter and really love this story. You've given it a great feel of serious Mafia family business and the new found feeling Edward's discovered. Chapter length so great. Thank you for writing and all the hard work to post. It's really appreciated!
Date: 21 Jun 2017 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 8
I think Emmett needs to kick Rose's ass to the curb and fast. Bella is bring everyone together .
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2017 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 8
I loved it poor Emmett I feel for him and Bella she is perfect for this family this is where she is meant to be
Date: 21 Jun 2017 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 8
Don't see any redeeming qualities in Rose. She's got real nerve being pissed at him.
Awww for hte party
Date: 21 Jun 2017 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 8
Im so in love with this story
Date: 21 Jun 2017 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 8
I'm betting Rosalie won't ever be trustworthy. She has never been close to anyone, and has been cheating regularly. Why would she change now? Their dinner party sounded fun. Everyone felt at home and all had a good time. I love that Edward and Bella can be candid with each other. Thanks for the chapter!
Date: 21 Jun 2017 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 8
Can't wait for more.
Date: 21 Jun 2017 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2017 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 8
Awesome chapter. I can't wait to read the next chapter, I love mobward stories.
Melissa
Date: 21 Jun 2017 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it can't wait for more ’
Date: 16 Jun 2017 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 7
What the heck just happened to Bella?
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2017 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 7
Love your story can't wait to read more
Date: 14 Jun 2017 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 7
I think I have no clue who is watching her. I am so happy that they are truely together now and happy but scared .
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2017 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 7
I like the story so far but afraid for Edward that Bella will break his heart. She still doesn't love him and is still thinking she's done after a year, if she's gonna leave him like that she at least should tell him so he can build that wall and treat her like a business arrangement. He has spilled heart out, I get she's been through a lot, but come on.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2017 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 7
Oh wow so Rose is up to no good and Vicky is too damn they are two crazy women now who is watching Bella and what do they want with her
Date: 14 Jun 2017 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 7
This was great! Thank you so much. I like Uncle Jimmy.
Date: 14 Jun 2017 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 7
Can't wait for more please update ASAFP. I think maybe Rose or one of Edward's uncles men maybe even Icky Vicky.
Date: 14 Jun 2017 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it can't wait for more ’
Date: 14 Jun 2017 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 7
Great chapters keep up the good work !
Date: 14 Jun 2017 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 7
Fantastic chapter
Date: 13 Jun 2017 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next! I think it's Victoria, Rosalie, or one of Edward's enemies!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2017 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 7
Any chance Victoria is now working for the enemy?
Rosalie will break. She will give up the goods on who she is aiding. Poor Emmett though.
Carlisle even has to keep a tight reign on Esme. Hehe
Date: 13 Jun 2017 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 7
Oh cruel cliff hanger. Lol i am hoping its in her head
Date: 13 Jun 2017 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 7
lovely tattoo searching time. Rose is nasty. can't wait for Em to be able to be rid of her. Vicky is such a skank. Glad they've realized it and changed stuff before he is totally bankrupt.
Date: 13 Jun 2017 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 7
I enjoyed the almost lemon...the lemon light...LOL! I do like that you made James a good guy in this story. It's rare, but a nice change from the usual. Who is after Bella? Why is she blacking out? More mysteries to be solved! I'm glad Bella knows how to shoot a gun. She still needs to protect herself even with Jasper and Jacob around. Thanks for the chapter!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2017 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 6
That's a lot to take in. I feel bad for Emmett, but I really want Rosalie to slip up.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2017 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 5
Holy hell!!! Awesome chapter.
Sherry
Date: 10 Jun 2017 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 6
loving it, all caught up, oh rose is going to be so much trouble
hope edward and bella do more talking, need to communicate!
Date: 08 Jun 2017 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 6
Yea Rose has a lot of pain coming her way.
Date: 07 Jun 2017 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 6
Can't wait for more.
Date: 07 Jun 2017 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it can't wait for more ’
Date: 07 Jun 2017 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next! Poor Emmett!
Date: 07 Jun 2017 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 6
Morning!
Woke up to a whole heap ofupdates...and just had to read this one first.
Thank you for another great chapter.
Xx T
Date: 07 Jun 2017 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 6
My heart just broke for Emmett. Rose is a vilie bitch. Bella loves him so happy for them. Carlisle doesnt like people messing with his family WOW.
Date: 07 Jun 2017 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 6
So good, as usual... I like that Emmet finally knows what Rosalie has been doing. I can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you!
Date: 07 Jun 2017 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 6
I think Rose is the mole. Boy she has some nerve. I hope Bella get a to bitch slap her in one of the chapter. I do feel sorry for Emmett. I hope he can find someone who will truly love him and not use him.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2017 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 6
Dito on the cool likeable Uncle Jimmy. Keep him that way, please.
Emmett needed to hear about his wife's other life. Her infidelity, her disloyalty to the family. She is the weakest link. Even Seth is stronger in his conviction towards the family.
Will you give Emmett something else to occupy his lonely mind? Or possibly someone else that takes an honest interest in his well being?
Esme is a Piller of restraint. Her prior knowledge of Rosalie's betrayal would have set off any other mother. Finding a way to exact revenge.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2017 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 5
Wow, I didn't expect the marriage proposal to come so soon. It's even better that they have yet to consumate the relationship. Will Edward wait until the wedding night?
Esme is going to be beside herself with enthusiastic joy. Alice will finally have a true friend.
Is Rosalie redeemable?
How will Emmett recover from this level of betrayal?
Date: 07 Jun 2017 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 6
❤️❤️❤️❤️ I love when I see that you've posted it makes my day
Date: 06 Jun 2017 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 6
Love this story so far! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 06 Jun 2017 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 6
Excellent chapter. My heart goes out to Emmett. I hope she gets what's coming to her. I wonder if the Denali sisters are going to go after Edward.
Date: 06 Jun 2017 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 6
I feel bad for Emmett also. He is getting played and deserves so much more than that! The way that they tortured Embry made my stomache roll, but he deserved it. I just get queasy reading about torture. Thanks for all the info about who is behind this. It was an informative chapter.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2017 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 6
I loved it wow oh wow the family is in for a fight now will they stop who is after them
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2017 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 6
Wow that was quite a chapter and we got more info. They love each other, loving this story and I can't wait to read what happens next!
melissa
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2017 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 6
Amazing and can't wait to see what happens with rose
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2017 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 5
They bettter need the condoms later tonight. This cliffie was soooo evil!
Date: 04 Jun 2017 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
What Happneded to Uncle Jimmy? I get the releationship with Edward is heating up but. she hasn't called Jimmy once. Wouldn't Bella's remaining family be worried about her?
Date: 01 Jun 2017 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 5
This was really good. Rose is a piece of work, that's for sure. Thanks for this chapter!
Date: 01 Jun 2017 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 5
Rosalie is gonna get what she deserves real soon. poor Emmett.
Date: 01 Jun 2017 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2017 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 5
thank you for the update....awwww...That was very nice...well done....Rose Rose Rose...she can't be helped...why would she do that to Emment? Edward was better than me..I guess he thought about his brothers feelings...Rose sure didn't...I hope they have a nice time and Bella say's YES!!! absolutely!!!
Date: 01 Jun 2017 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it can't wait for more ’
Date: 31 May 2017 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 5
Omg that was so mean of you
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2017 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 5
Love Love it!Can Not wait to read more
Date: 31 May 2017 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it can't wait for more ’
Date: 31 May 2017 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 5
OMG that was perfect she will say YES!!!. Rose is a slimmy slut that is evil I loved how Edward took care of her. I feel sorry for Emmett so sad he loves and evil bitch.
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2017 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 5
I bet Bella didn't expect that. Holy cliffy Batman indeed........
I can't believe Rose is trying to hide so much shit of her own and being all rude to people at the same time. If I did all of that much wrong stuff, I would be pretty meek and quiet around people who could kill me basically. She is so dumb.
Emmett is going to be hurt so badly....poor guy.
Esme and Alice are sure welcoming to Bella though.
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2017 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh my Rose messed up big time but what is her end game and I love Esme but wow what beautiful words Edward said more please
Date: 31 May 2017 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 5
You are so mean please don't make us wait long❤️❤️
Date: 31 May 2017 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 5
That was unexpected! I thought he would wait a while before proposing, but I see the effect on him is magical. Will she say yes? I think she will! Rosalie seems to be skating on thin ice. What else is she into that they don't know about yet. I think any more secrets might kill her! Thanks for the lovely chapter!
Date: 31 May 2017 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 5
loved it please update ASAFP.
Date: 31 May 2017 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 5
Omg I really do hate rose. Love this chapter
Date: 31 May 2017 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 5
Wow, Rose has some nerve cheating on Emmett. I mean he is part of the Mafia. Glad Esme and Bella are getting along so good. Loved the ending. Hope you update soon. Loving this story.
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2017 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wow! Great chapter.
XoxoxoxoX
Alia
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2017 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wow Rose is a real idiot. Serve her right if Emmett left her. aww for the proposal
Date: 19 May 2017 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 4
Never mess with Esme or anyone she loves.