Date: 17 May 2017 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it can't wait for more 💙
Date: 16 May 2017 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 4
Boy, Rose has some nerve. It is one thing to call Bella names because she does not know her. But to talk about Edward like that especially with his mother standing right there. Wow, Rose is lucky thgat Esme did not pull a gun on her.
Date: 16 May 2017 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 4
Love this.Updae soon please!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 16 May 2017 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 4
As soon as I'm done reading a new chapter I'm ready for the next. This was another chapter well done and I'm glad Bella isn't intimidated by Rosalie. I really hope Bella out shines everyone's expectations as far as her being a Mob Wife. READ YOU SOON 🌺
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2017 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 4
Awe Edward is too cute when he is talking about or thinking about Bella and I love Esme and Alice but what is wrong with Rose does she have a icicle stuck up her a s s
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2017 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 4
Is Rose angry that Edward didn't choose her or was she expecting one of the Denali sister's to be his future wife?
Emmett needs to lay down the law regarding her behavior. Rose's actions are a reflection on the family and her husband.
Alice did a wonderful job of taking the lead with reassuring Bella of Edward's intensions.
Will Edward learn about this public display from his mother?
Date: 15 May 2017 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 2
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!!!!!! THANK YOU FOR CONTINUING IT!
Date: 15 May 2017 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 4
Love Esme she put some fear in Rose that is good she is such a bitch. Bella is perfect love her and how she says what is on her mind.
Date: 15 May 2017 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 4
Glad they are learing about each other and she is challenging him. Rose is a witch
Date: 15 May 2017 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 4
Hate rose loved how Edward slipped the fact that Bella is the women for life and just kept talking like it was nothing.
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2017 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 4
I really wanted Bella to stand up to Rosalie herself, instead of Esme taking up for her. Rose is a lovelly bitch, lol.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2017 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh my goodness rose hest watch what she says in front of edward. He will destroy her if he hears her talking like that to bella.
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2017 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 4
OMG, I can hardly wait for the next update! I run to my computer looking to see if there are any updates!... I know, ty anyway.
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2017 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 4
That would be intimidating and rude as hell if someone called you a skank when they didn't even know you. Dam! I wonder what Rose's REAL problem is..... Is she jealous of Bella, because she secretly has the hots for Edward? Is she a mole? Is she secretly related to the Denali skanks? hmmmm......
Date: 14 May 2017 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 4
I attend Northwestern in the psych department, I wish we had a person like dr. Rivera.
I hope emmett dumps Rosalie or she wises up. Cant wait for next chapter.
Date: 14 May 2017 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 4
Thanks for the chapter. Yeah, Rose is a bit much. Guess that's just how she is, right? I like Alice. Perky without being over the top!
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2017 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it!
XoxoxoxoX
Alia
Date: 14 May 2017 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
This story is fantastic! I love it and all your stories. Please update soon!
Date: 09 May 2017 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 3
They are perfect for each other. Both incredibly dtubborn.
Date: 09 May 2017 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 2
Edward is so sweet. He really likes her.
Date: 06 May 2017 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 3
I love it!!!!
Date: 06 May 2017 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it can't wait for more 💙
Date: 05 May 2017 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it and can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2017 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 3
I love reading your stories and please continue soon
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2017 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 3
They've come to a new understanding. Now the fun begins as they make time to get to know each other.
Jacob is a true protector, Jasper is Edward's trusted friend and guardian.
How close are they to figuring out Bella's attack?
The Black and White Ball will be interesting.
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2017 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 3
If Edward is going shopping, does that mean he will have a ring to make the engagement official? Will he propose again before the Ball or during?
Jasper's friendship is more than just protection from Edward's enemies.
Date: 03 May 2017 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 3
UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU POSSIBLY CAN PRETTY PLEASE?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
Date: 03 May 2017 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 3
I loved it! Thank You for sharing!
Date: 03 May 2017 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 3
She needs a ring. I like Jake he is wating out for her.
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2017 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 3
Just can't get enough of this story. Love it.
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2017 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 3
I loved it now she opened her eyes and sees that he really does care for her now what's next hmmm
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2017 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 3
One of my favorites- can't wait fir more! So glad you continued it!
Date: 03 May 2017 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 3
Wow, Bella's professor's such a jerk. I am glad that they both admitted that they have enough feelings for each other.
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2017 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 3
Sounds like ring shopping is coming!!
Date: 03 May 2017 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 3
Glad Jake was with he. THe professor is an arse. That situation is why I don't like tenure. Glad Jasper talked to E about it.
Date: 03 May 2017 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 3
Yeah, STARS is beginning to post chapters, intermittantly, and I got this one. I like how protective Edward is of Bella. There ARE real feelings there. I'll give them time for them to notice just how much they care.
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2017 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 3
I am in love with Edward and Bella and what is developing between them.
Date: 02 May 2017 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 2
Edward is really putting his feelings out there for Bella to see. The truth is no confusion that he has feelings for her. I think Bella wants to have feelings for him but she's just worried about his line of work. She knows what he does is wrong.
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2017 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oh I loved it wow Edward is falling hard and fast for Bella will he be able to let her go if she still wants to after the year is up or will she want to stay
Date: 28 Apr 2017 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am enjoying the story so far.
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2017 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 2
Love it can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2017 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 2
There is so much goid stuff to come!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2017 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm so excited for this story!
Date: 27 Apr 2017 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 2
I'm still completely in love with this story. I'm looking forward to more chapters.
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2017 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 2
I love the split pov. They are both so cute and edward is awesome. Cant wait for another chapter.
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2017 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 2
Loving this story!🤓🤓
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2017 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 2
It's endearing to see how much Edward cares for Bella already in the short amount of time. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Sherry
Date: 26 Apr 2017 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 2
UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU POSSIBLY CAN PRETTY PLEASE?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
Date: 26 Apr 2017 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 2
Glad she is letting him help. Hope Vicky isn't going to get Jimmy hurt
Date: 26 Apr 2017 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm going to hate waiting for the next chapter...
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2017 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 2
Is Bella struggling with the idea of relinquishing her independence, or the fact that she truly needs and wants Edward's assistance?
Does Uncle Jimmy suspect that there is more to her story than the fees lines he was fed? Will he seek out Edward asking questions?
Date: 26 Apr 2017 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 2
Love it and can't wait for more!!!
Date: 26 Apr 2017 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 2
Was so excited to see your post I had to read right then. And like always a great chapter. Can't wait to read next post I love reading your story's they always pull me inâ¤ï¸â¤ï¸â¤ï¸â¤ï¸
Date: 26 Apr 2017 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 2
Love your writing! Love the story!
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2017 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 2
this is a great story and I can't wait to see what happens next. Thank you for your creativity and giving us this story.
Date: 26 Apr 2017 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 2
Uncle Jimmy sounds like a good guy, but you can have Victoria! I think Edward will take care of her like he promised. I wonder who attacked her and why. Was it really because she was with Edward? Thanks for all you give us, dear.
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2017 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 2
Loving this. Nice to see a nice James!
Date: 25 Apr 2017 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
I keep checking for your next post to be up so please post soon
Date: 25 Apr 2017 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
I keep checking for your next post to be up so please post soon
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2017 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love it cant wait for more
Date: 22 Apr 2017 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
ooo, nice start, keep it coming
Date: 21 Apr 2017 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
I enjoy all your stories, so I look forward to reading this.
Date: 21 Apr 2017 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
I LOVE IT!!! Can't wait until your next update.!
Date: 20 Apr 2017 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome start to the story. Nice to see a good "james" for a change. Wierd having a wimpy Emmett though
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2017 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait to see what is next... love this story.
Date: 19 Apr 2017 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm so glad you're continuing this story! I'm going to read it here on STARS, my preferred place to read fanfiction. I look forward to seeing this develop into a real love story. I sincerely hope you take it that way, but if you don't, I'll read it anyway! Thanks for all you give us, Josie!
Date: 19 Apr 2017 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
I can't wait for the next chapters. Please post them soon.
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2017 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was one of my top picks in the contest.
Looking forward to more.
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2017 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
:) loved this. Looking forward to more
Date: 19 Apr 2017 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great start, can't wait to read more.
Date: 19 Apr 2017 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
I loved this when I read it for the contest! I voted for u!!! I don't know who won but it should be u! So excited to see that u r turning it into a story! !!
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2017 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love it can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2017 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved the fucking hell out of this. I can hardly wait for more.
Sherry
Date: 19 Apr 2017 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is awesome as all your stories are. Can't wait for you to update.
Date: 19 Apr 2017 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
can't wait for the next chapter