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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2019 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 7

I love that they have officially met now.   :)

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2019 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 7

How long before Edward learns the real connection between them?

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2019 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 7

Precious little Ladybug could so easily get out of hand so it's good that the adults, especially Edward, don't tolerate her tantrums!

As for Bella's wicked observation, who could blame her for noticin' every delicious inch of that gorgeous man! Of course, it's good to see Edward notice her, as well!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2019 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 6

Sweet chapter.   Glad that everyone is doing so well. 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2019 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 6

nice update

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2018 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 6

I loved it 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2018 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 6

I loved it 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2018 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 6

I loved it 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2018 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 6

I loved it 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2018 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 6

I loved it 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2018 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 6

I loved it 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2018 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 6

I loved it 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2018 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 6

Keep on writing

Reviewer: SMBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2018 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 6

I love this story.  I am excited to see it unfold.

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2018 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 6

I’m so glad you were able to find your muse and help her make her way back on this road again. I adore this story and have missed it so.

Elizabeth seems like a mini-Maggie...hopefully without “two-left feet”. I hope she becomes the ballerina her mother AND Bella always dreamed of becoming. *Sighs* 

So now their eyes have met. And Edward’s heart “feels free” maybe to try to love again...or free from the wall he’s placed around it since Maggie’s death? I can’t wait to see where you take us from here. 

Thanks for the update. Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2018 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 6

They have finally seen each other.  Elizabeth sounds so sweet.  I enjoy reading stories with children in them.  

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2018 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 6

And so they meet. Bella with Edwards wifes heart in her and Edward with his own heart needing a partner. Elizabeth is drawn to her.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2018 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 6

Yeah, I sense that he is going to be very resistent to any type of relationship besides friendship.  We'll see.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2018 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 5

Wow.  I'll be wating for my shipment of tissues to arrive.  

Reviewer: Patriciadiane Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2018 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 6

Belly dancer  I love it! Too sweet

 

Awwww they meet.

Reviewer: Patriciadiane Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2018 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 5

Crying this whole chapter.

Reviewer: Patriciadiane Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2018 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 4

Edward’s loss is so painful to read about and Carlisle’s commitment to his patients resulting in loss of family time hard to read.

Reviewer: Patriciadiane Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2018 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 4

Edward’s loss is so painful to read about and Carlisle’s commitment to his patients resulting in loss of family time hard to read.

Reviewer: Patriciadiane Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2018 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 4

Edward’s loss is so painful to read about and Carlisle’s commitment to his patients resulting in loss of family time hard to read.

Reviewer: Patriciadiane Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2018 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 4

Edward’s loss is so painful to read about and Carlisle’s commitment to his patients resulting in loss of family time hard to read.

Reviewer: Patriciadiane Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2018 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 3

So much love, tradegy, family gains and losses

 

love this story

Reviewer: Patriciadiane Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2018 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 3

So much love, tradegy, family gains and losses

 

love this story

Reviewer: Patriciadiane Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2018 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 3

So much love, tradegy, family gains and losses

 

love this story

Reviewer: Patriciadiane Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2018 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 2

I don’t understand how people can’t support organ donation.  

The love story of the Swans and the Cullens made my heart smile.

Edward’s love story with Maggie both broke my heart and made me smile.

Great story

Reviewer: Patriciadiane Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2018 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 1

What an amazing and yet sad.  Such a love shared. Edward and his father so sad. Really love this story.

Reviewer: drpharmgrl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2018 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 6

The first meeting! Yay!!! Excellent job bringing it all full circle. 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2018 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 6

I think their hearts will recognize each other. 

Reviewer: justginger Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2018 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 6

I loved this chapter!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2018 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 6

Yay! STARS is back!  Anyway, I'm excited to have Edward and Bella, and Carlisle and Esme all in the same place! Let the love games begin!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2018 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 6

He is a goner already but will she feel the same at first or will it take awhile?

Reviewer: Daisy Mae Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2018 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 6

So, Carlisle never told him who got Maggie's heart? I suppose maybe he couldn't due to doctor/patient confidentiality. I wonder how Edward will feel when he finds out. Glad you found your muse and thanks for the update! :)

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2018 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 6

yay new chappy :) i love this story 

 

Reviewer: justginger Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2018 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 2

I love how their lives are woven together

Reviewer: justginger Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2018 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 1

wow - what an amazing first chapter~

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2018 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2018 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 6

Bellisimo! Cant wait to read more. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2018 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 6

Hopefully they will get to talk soon.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2018 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 6

OMG!!! Hello!! I love this story!! ;)

Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2018 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 6

Lovely. I love Elizabeth. Can't wait for next update.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2018 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 6

:) 

Reviewer: Bbkjv2008 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2018 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 5

Wonderful story so far can’t wait to read more

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2018 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 5

OMG, this was a tear jerking, but you did a great job putting this together.   I am so glad Edward and Carlise reunited.   You did an amazing job bringing it all together.   I am so looking forward to the update.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2018 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 5

My heart is breaking it is heartbreaking but beautiful too

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2018 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 5

Absolutely heartbreakingly beautiful. Him dealing with being a father and a widower at the same time...so overwhelming. He’s also finally getting his father back. I think Carlisle will be there for him and Elizabeth.

Curious to see what happens at the time jump. Will he meet Bella then? Guess we’ll find out.

Thanks for the update, I missed this one. Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!}

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2018 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 5

good update

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2018 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 5

Love your story can't wait to read more 

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2018 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 5

Well done...great emotion...

Reviewer: trojangirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2018 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 5

This was not the tear jerker?  Holy crap I better stock up on tissues.  This just about killed me. 

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2018 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 5

Well done...great emotion...

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2018 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 5

I'm like a baby. Edward is an amazing father. Elizabeth will have so much love in her life. I can't wait for Edward to meet Bella and fall in love again. He needs it so much. I'm glad Carlisle was there for him. Edward is going to need his dad.

Reviewer: noway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2018 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 5

Woke up at 3am and deciced to read this story. Glad I was home and not somewhere public because I cried, loudly, through every chapter. Love this story and can't wait for the next update. Thanks, Maria

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2018 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: jukie Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2018 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 5

the feels and I am sobbing.   I love this story. Its wonderful

Reviewer: Cullenbabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2018 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 3

Finish the story please 

Reviewer: Cullenbabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2018 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 2

I hope you finish the story soon

Reviewer: Cullenbabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2018 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 5

Really good 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2018 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 5

Sad story

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2018 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 5

OMG I'm sitting Einstein bagels tying not to cry.  Ack

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2018 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 5

Lost my husband this year married 52 years. I can not read some of this... sorry

Reviewer: Cullenbabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2018 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

How sad but you it’s always going to be Edward and Bella 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2018 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 5

With tears in my eyes....I love this!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2018 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 5

So sad...... 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2018 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 5

So glad Edward let Carlisle go with him. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2018 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 4

I hope Edward and Carlisle both can heal. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2018 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 3

Poor Edward.  My heart breaks for him.  

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2018 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 5

*SOB!* Damn near didn't survive this chapter, it was so sad! But at least Edward and Carlisle have come a long way toward mendin' their broken fences!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2018 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 5

Dam!  This was gut wrenching.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2018 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 2

Oh my!!!!! What a chapter

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2018 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh my!!!! That is just awful. Poor Edward and poor Elizabeth.  So sad

 

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2018 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 5

Silence that song has a memory for all of us.

Can’t wait for the next chapter!!!

KEEP WRITING ✍️ ❤️’”‘

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2018 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 4

Oh man, too short.   Thank you!

Reviewer: Nonita Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2018 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 4

He as a doctor should understand the position his father is in. It is not easy to be the head of a cardiology department as is his father and more of a hospital as famous as the hospital for which his father works. I can’t wait to read the next chapter, thank you! 

Reviewer: Nonita Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2018 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 3

Thanks for another amazing chapter!

Reviewer: Nonita Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2018 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 2

Amazing chapter! Thanks! 

Reviewer: Nonita Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2018 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

😭’”😱

Reviewer: noway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2018 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 4

Man,I sitting  in my chair sobbing. The part where Maggie came to Bella and then Edward and Carlisle was just so sad. But I just love this story. Can’t wait for the next update. Thanks for the another great story!  Maria.

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2018 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 4

this is so bitter sweet...heart wrenching on one side, joy on the other...one thing about these type of situation for me at least is that, this makes it seem as if the husband, edward continues to love his wife and only loves bella because of his wife's heart. i know it goes deeper(hopefully) than that but it's hard to separate from that idea. how can we know he really loves bella? we dont. not really, esp with the wife appearing to bella to take care of edward and the baby. that's what i don't like about this. so if his wife's heart went to another girl, she would be the one ending up with edward, not bella, correct? sorry, don't mean to get too deep. but the story is sweet.

 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2018 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 4

This is so heartbreaking for them, but great for Bella.  I hope that this will be the start for Edward and Carlisle to work on rebuilding their relationship.   Can’t wait for the next chapter.  

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2018 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 4

I'm surprised they haven't made the connection. Carlisle knows where the heart came from. The transplant team has to go to the donor's hospital to pick it up. They are also given the basic statistics of the donor.

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2018 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 4

Omg I cried on this chapter as much as the other ones! Love your story can't wait to read alot more.

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2018 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 4

nice story so far.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2018 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 4

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2018 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 4

OMG......I'm beginning to think you love to torture us.   I'm literally bawling onto my keyboard here.   sigh........     You can redeem yourself by giving us some happy soon please.   LOL

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2018 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 3

It sounds like it's pure dumb luck that Edward doesn't already know Bella.   Still breaking my heart her....  ---wags finger---

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2018 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 2

You are killing me smalls!   Dam!   This is so sad.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2018 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

That whole chapter was heart breaking.

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2018 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 4

What an emotional chapter. First you feel such happiness for Bella at getting a chance at a new life. (Was that Maggie she met in “Heaven”? How amazing.) Then you are so broken for Edward who feels like his life ended with his wife’s. But there’s this beautiful baby who needs raising and love. Plus a father and son who have needed healing for so long...is it possible that could be happening? I hope so. 

I am so touched by this story. Can’t wait for more when you get a chance. Love you, sweet one! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2018 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 4

Oh my goodness my heart breaks for all of them poor Edward but he has his family to lean on

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2018 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 4

THis made me cry...so much emotion!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2018 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 4

Yea Edward has a right to be angry/upset but we all know Carlisle had to be there.  I'm really afraid of what will happen when E&B see each other after he finds out about who's heart she got.

Reviewer: Daisy Mae Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2018 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 4

When Edward finds out everything, I wonder how he will take it? He has built up so much anger and resentment. Poor Carlisle. He can't win. Whatever choice he makes, he let's someone down. :(

Reviewer: leinchen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2018 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 4

Thank you for writing this story!

I really enjoy readig it and I'm desparately waiting for the next chapter!

Greetings from Germany,

leinchen

Reviewer: noway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2018 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 4

Man,I sitting  in my chair sobbing. The part where Maggie came to Bella and then Edward and Carlisle was just so sad. But I just love this story. Can’t wait for the next update. Thanks for the another great story!  Maria.

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2018 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 4

OMG so wonderful

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2018 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 4

Families.

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