Date: 29 Apr 2021 4:33 AM Title: Sequel
OMG shit
Author's Response:
I agree with that!
Date: 28 Apr 2021 1:17 AM Title: Sequel
OMG! This had better be a dream. A very bad dream
Author's Response:
It isn't...
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2021 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 51
Thank you for a wonderful story!! I so enjoyed it..waiting patiently for sequel
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Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 18 Nov 2020 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 51
Loved the story!! Actually I have enjoyed all of your stories. Keep the stories coming!!! I love reading them.. Thanks
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Thank you so much!
Date: 09 Nov 2020 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 51
Love this chapter a
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Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2020 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 51
Thank you for a wonderful story..I can't wait for the sequal..Well Done!! Bravo!!! They deserve to be happy!!! Until the sequal begins
Author's Response:
They do deserve that! Thank you.
Date: 27 Oct 2020 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 51
Loved it
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 26 Oct 2020 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 51
Thank you so much for this story. You definitely earned some time off. However I will be anxiously awaiting the sequel and all the babies.
Author's Response:
Lol, definitely! Thank you!
Date: 26 Oct 2020 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 51
I am over the moon for you and cant wait for more of these two. Thanks so much for a great story.
Author's Response:
That's so great, thank you!
Date: 26 Oct 2020 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 51
Thanks for giving me an escape to read this story! I look forward to more from you!!! :)
Author's Response:
Absolutely! Thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2020 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 51
:) loved this story. Looking forward to reading the sequel. Enjoy your break
Author's Response:
Thanks very much, Deb!
Date: 25 Oct 2020 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 51
Thank you! Can't wait for sequel
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 25 Oct 2020 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 50
Glad they are making their own family.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 24 Oct 2020 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 50
Loved it can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thanks very much!
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2020 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 50
:)
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:)
Date: 23 Oct 2020 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 50
Just so perfect love it thanks so much
Author's Response:
That's very sweet!
Date: 22 Oct 2020 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 50
Love love love it!
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Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2020 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 49
Love your story.
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Thanks very much!
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2020 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 49
:)
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:)
Date: 20 Oct 2020 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 49
Loved it can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 19 Oct 2020 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 49
Bella is my hero I am so proud of her
Author's Response:
Thank you, this means everything to me!
Date: 18 Oct 2020 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 49
So glad that Edward is OK. I too didn't believe that Carlisle was dead but he is now.
Author's Response:
He sure is, lol.
Date: 18 Oct 2020 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 49
I'm so glad Bella is the one who killed Carlisle and that the last person he saw was Bella! I'm glad they're both okay and home with Quinn!
Author's Response:
She deserved that chance!
Date: 18 Oct 2020 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 49
Awesome chapter! Absolutely loved it!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 18 Oct 2020 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 49
Loved the ending of this chapter. Actually all the chapter. So Carlisle was not dead.....but he is now. Between Carlisle and Esme it is a wonder that Edward is so normal. Lol. Alice not so lucky.
Author's Response:
It's remarkably true.
Date: 17 Oct 2020 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 48
What who now??
Author's Response:
I know!
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2020 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 48
I hope Edward is alright
Author's Response:
Always!
Date: 16 Oct 2020 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 48
OMG! LOVED IT! That was crazy! I wonder who they just shot! I know Edward will be okay, but are they going to be taken hostage or will backup arrive in time? Can't wait until next week!
Author's Response:
There are so many options!
Date: 16 Oct 2020 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 48
Oh my god they can not catch a break OMFG
Author's Response:
No, not yet.
Date: 16 Oct 2020 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 48
Loved it can't wait for more more
Author's Response:
Thanks very much!
Date: 15 Oct 2020 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 48
OMG!!!!!!!! Esme.....Wow. I really did not see that. She was one cold hearted bitch....Queen Bitch. Ok, but who is shooting at Edward and Bella????? Hope you update soon.
Author's Response:
So much going on!
Date: 15 Oct 2020 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 48
Holy crap that's a lot to take in! Awesome chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2020 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 47
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 13 Oct 2020 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 47
What????!!!!!
Author's Response:
Lol. Thank you.
Date: 12 Oct 2020 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 47
What!!
Author's Response:
Lol. Thanks.
Date: 12 Oct 2020 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 47
Esme??
Author's Response:
Yep!
Date: 11 Oct 2020 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 46
This story can not end before we know Jasper has found love please
Date: 11 Oct 2020 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 47
ESME??????? Is she there by herself or with Carlisle? Did Edward or any of his men see Esme enter the restaurant? What are they going to do now?
Author's Response:
We'll find out soon!
Date: 11 Oct 2020 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 46
Wow, Jasper did kill his own wife. I'm glad he didn't double cross Edward.
Author's Response:
He's trustworthy.
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2020 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 46
Wow thank you for the update..I can't believe Jasper did it..Well done now to find Carlisle..Bella by Edward's side..until you post again
Author's Response:
He stepped up.
Date: 10 Oct 2020 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 45
Glad Leah and Jake will be with Quinn. I love the closeness with Edward and Bella.
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2020 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 46
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 08 Oct 2020 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 46
So I guess Jasper is trust worthy.
Author's Response:
He is to me!
Date: 08 Oct 2020 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 46
Good riddens to Alice I think we can trust JASPER
Author's Response:
I think so!
Date: 07 Oct 2020 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 45
Loved it can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2020 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 45
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 05 Oct 2020 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 45
I am hoping it is Alice
Author's Response:
That would be good!
Date: 04 Oct 2020 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 45
I'm thinking its Jasper
Author's Response:
We'll see!
Date: 04 Oct 2020 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 45
I am thinking Leah is going to die and then Jake is going to join Edward
Author's Response:
We'll see!
Date: 04 Oct 2020 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 44
Great chapter! Thanks for updating and helping us take a break from our reality!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading!
Date: 03 Oct 2020 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 44
Oh Edward
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2020 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 44
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 02 Oct 2020 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 44
Literally shouted "FINALLY!" when they said it, forgetting I'm around people haha. Such a nice chapter!
Author's Response:
That's the best reaction!
Date: 02 Oct 2020 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 44
Finally I was getting very frustrated. I am glad you didn't write it with Bella asking for a divorce. This is how it should have been from a long time ago. It shouldn't have taken so long for the I love you's
Author's Response:
It's merely how I saw it happening, and there was no catalyst for her to go back to Forks before this.
Date: 01 Oct 2020 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 44
I was hoping that's where you were going with that. And YAY for Edward for finally removing the last stick!!!!!
Author's Response:
It made everyone happy, lol.
Date: 01 Oct 2020 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 44
I am so happy the words have been said about time now they can be happy
Author's Response:
They sure can!
Date: 01 Oct 2020 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 44
Love love love this chapter. Great awesome job.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!
Date: 01 Oct 2020 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 43
I am guessing it is either Alice or Carlisle. Boy I can't believe her parents acted like that towards her and Quinn.
Date: 01 Oct 2020 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 44
You got me!! Thank you for the reconsiliation!! Now Jasper is bugging me so, until next time!! Thank You for sharing your work!
Author's Response:
Is he? We'll see if he can redeem himself. Thanks for reading!
Date: 01 Oct 2020 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 42
Oh wow, Jasper is the King of pain.
Author's Response:
Lol, I guess he is.
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2020 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 43
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks
Date: 28 Sep 2020 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 43
It's either Edward surprising her or someone completely out of left field.
Author's Response:
Lol, something like that.
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2020 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 43
I bet she saw her parents there? Keep on writing
Author's Response:
Maybe so.
Date: 28 Sep 2020 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 43
Edward's dad, Alice to explain what is happening or Edward
Author's Response:
Good guesses.
Date: 27 Sep 2020 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 43
That is an evil cliffhanger!!! Who was it?!!!!
Author's Response:
Ah, yes it was.
Date: 27 Sep 2020 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 43
I think Carlisle is there. Her parents can just fuck off
Author's Response:
Lol, they can.
Date: 27 Sep 2020 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 43
I really hope it's Edward
Author's Response:
We'll find out today.
Date: 27 Sep 2020 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 43
Esme is in town
Author's Response:
She could be.
Date: 27 Sep 2020 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 43
Alice and Carlisle!!
Author's Response:
Maybe!
Date: 27 Sep 2020 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 43
Well I sure hope its Edward.
Author's Response:
That would be fun.
Author's Response:
That would be fun.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2020 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 42
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 26 Sep 2020 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 42
Loved it can't wait for more more
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
Date: 25 Sep 2020 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 42
Oh my
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 25 Sep 2020 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 42
Poor Jasper a pattsy all the way
Author's Response:
I wish I could say if I agree!
Date: 24 Sep 2020 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 42
Oh my! Can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 24 Sep 2020 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 42
I hope Jasper is really loyal. I can't wait for Edward and Bella's I love yous
Author's Response:
It'll be worth it!
Date: 24 Sep 2020 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 41
I don't blame Edward for wanting revenge. So Carlisle poisoned everyone. Did Alice help him? Did she know what he was going to do? I can't believe he just left. Why didn't he say goodbye? I would be pissed.
Author's Response:
They think it was him. Edward wouldn't have been able to walk out if she was awake.
Date: 21 Sep 2020 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 41
Edward needs Bella to figure this out.
Author's Response:
Maybe he does.
Date: 21 Sep 2020 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 41
I think Edward is right he needs tp take them bastards out to keep his family safe
Author's Response:
Definitely.
Date: 21 Sep 2020 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 41
This was a well written chapter...
Heck yeah, Edward needs to lay down the law
Let them know that he will not stand for any of their
Disrespectful BS! Otherwise they'll keep testing him
Author's Response:
I agree with you.
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2020 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 41
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 20 Sep 2020 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 41
Loved it can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 20 Sep 2020 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 41
Well.... he's goin' on a rampage with every right. So it was Carlisle. That sneezy little rascal. It doesn't surprise really. Where's Esme? Haven't heard from her in a while. I cant wait for Charlie 's and Renee's reaction to baby Quinn.
Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
He sure thinks it was.
Date: 20 Sep 2020 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 41
Oh man. Of course he fell asleep and didn't hear her.
Author's Response:
Unfortunately.
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2020 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 40
Poor Bella
Author's Response:
I agree. Thanks.
Date: 19 Sep 2020 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 40
Oh no. When Edward finds out for sure who did this......they are dead. Will this be the last straw to break Edward and for him to leave the business somehow.
Author's Response:
Interesting. Thanks!
Date: 18 Sep 2020 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 39
Oh wow, I bet Alice did help Carlisle. Loved the HOT sex scene.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I love this dirty talking Edward.
Date: 18 Sep 2020 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 40
Ohh poor Bella. Well the sgit will hit the fan now.
Author's Response:
I think you're right.
Date: 18 Sep 2020 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 40
Loved it can't wait for more more
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 18 Sep 2020 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 40
Oh no!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
Date: 18 Sep 2020 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 40
Oh no! How heartbreaking. Both times something has happened to the, one of them has had the feeling that something was going to happen. I think they need to pay closer attention to their gut instincts. Can't wait until next week and see what some of the fallout will be.
Author's Response:
It's true, they have the instincts for it but it's yet to save them.
Date: 17 Sep 2020 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 40
OMG so sad Bella new something was not right
Author's Response:
She has good instincts.
Date: 17 Sep 2020 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 40
Oh poor Bella. I bet Bella is right about Carlisle and Alice for that matter.
Author's Response:
It could be!
Date: 17 Sep 2020 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 40
Oh wow.... that's heart breaking, I hope they get through this because and they don't bottle up the grief. I think it's the Santiago's cause they did say that he didnt mind the rules to harm the women and children but still I have this nagging feeling. How can Carlisle and Alice betray the family. Esme is a puppet in all this.
Wonderful as usual and please update soon like maybe tomorrow or the the day after.
Author's Response:
Lol, sorry about not updating early.
Date: 15 Sep 2020 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 39
Wow! I certainly didn't see that coming. As bitter and angry as Carlisle is I can definitely see him selling Edward out to the other Families. What about Esme? Is she involved in all of this too? Can't wait for the next chapter. I love this story!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2020 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 39
oh my!! Thank you for the update..well done..What is going on with Alice & Carlisle? Did Alice know Bella was pregnant and didn't tell her brother? why would a sister do that to her brother? until you post again
Author's Response:
Alice has reasons, probably not good ones.
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2020 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 39
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 14 Sep 2020 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 39
Loved it can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 14 Sep 2020 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 39
Good to see them working together! Edward is finally letting down more walls both in and out of the bedroom! Great chapter!
Author's Response:
He's working on it!
Date: 13 Sep 2020 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 39
OH SHIT I had a feeling Alice is evil not just a bitch I seel so bad for Jasper
Author's Response:
She's definitely evil.