Date: 27 Apr 2020 12:22 AM Title: Chapter Two ~ Low Blood Pressure
Holy smokes! And her first time too. I wonder when Edward will find out.
Date: 27 Apr 2020 12:11 AM Title: Chapter Two ~ Low Blood Pressure
I hope Edward finds her before she gives birth.
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2020 12:06 AM Title: Chapter Two ~ Low Blood Pressure
Wow, loving it.
Date: 26 Apr 2020 1:20 AM Title: Chapter One ~ First Blood
Can't wait for more
Date: 26 Apr 2020 12:36 AM Title: Chapter One ~ First Blood
Off to a great start! Something tells me he forgot to get her number. π
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2020 10:53 PM Title: Chapter One ~ First Blood
OMG ! Love it already can't wait to read more. Stay Safe . God Bless All
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2020 6:28 AM Title: Chapter One ~ First Blood
This first chapter has me hooked already. I love a Mobward and Bella story. Please update soon.
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2020 5:32 PM Title: Chapter One ~ First Blood
just had to ask because it sounded so familiar you are doing a great job so thank you for sharing ths story look forward to reading more
Date: 24 Apr 2020 3:39 PM Title: Chapter One ~ First Blood
is this a reposting ? sounds similar to one i read
Author's Response:
No this is a new story. I personally have never read anything similar and I would never copy someone's story or story idea.
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2020 2:08 PM Title: Chapter One ~ First Blood
Looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2020 5:46 AM Title: Chapter One ~ First Blood
OMG, I am hanging on a thread now! Update soooonnnn.
Date: 24 Apr 2020 4:16 AM Title: Chapter One ~ First Blood
Very intriguing! This is gonna be so good!
Date: 24 Apr 2020 1:19 AM Title: Chapter One ~ First Blood
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 23 Apr 2020 8:57 PM Title: Chapter One ~ First Blood
looks good..
Date: 23 Apr 2020 6:02 PM Title: Chapter One ~ First Blood
So far so good. Update soon.
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2020 5:52 PM Title: Chapter One ~ First Blood
Wow. Great start.
Date: 23 Apr 2020 4:37 PM Title: Chapter One ~ First Blood
Holy hawtness! After a night like that, a bad news phone call from his mother shook him up so bad he forget to get Bella's phone number...nor did he leave her his in his note! Well, at least they each know where the other goes to school, although I'd be surprised if "Tony" goes back.
Date: 23 Apr 2020 12:38 PM Title: Chapter One ~ First Blood
Wow, what a great start. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter, not to sound rude but I hope you will update regularly as you have piqued my interest in this story x
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2020 10:26 AM Title: Chapter One ~ First Blood
OMG!!! Can't wait for the next update!!! ππππ
Date: 23 Apr 2020 8:37 AM Title: Chapter One ~ First Blood
Love it already cant wait for more
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2020 4:21 AM Title: Chapter One ~ First Blood
Loving this story already.
Date: 23 Apr 2020 4:04 AM Title: Chapter One ~ First Blood
My interest is definitely piqued. Can't wait to read more soon!
Date: 23 Apr 2020 3:54 AM Title: Chapter One ~ First Blood
Got to watch out for those preacher kids!!! π Especially girls!!!
KEEP WRITING βοΈ β€οΈπ’π”₯π’π‘
Date: 23 Apr 2020 3:10 AM Title: Chapter One ~ First Blood
It seems he forgot something besides Bella in the bed. He forgot to wear a condom.
I loved this chapter. I can't wait for more.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 23 Apr 2020 2:59 AM Title: Chapter One ~ First Blood
This is going to be Awesome!! More Please!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2020 2:09 AM Title: Chapter One ~ First Blood
Great beginning... Cannot wait for mroe :D
Date: 23 Apr 2020 1:56 AM Title: Chapter One ~ First Blood
HOLYSMOKES!! I am dying for more of this story!!
Date: 23 Apr 2020 1:12 AM Title: Chapter One ~ First Blood
Wow. Hell of a start. Can'twait for more.
Date: 23 Apr 2020 1:09 AM Title: Chapter One ~ First Blood
The magic between them was amazing from the beginning. I can't wait to see it to the end.
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2020 12:51 AM Title: Chapter One ~ First Blood
I hope they continue their relationship. Please update soon
Date: 23 Apr 2020 12:33 AM Title: Chapter One ~ First Blood
This is a great first chapter, I always enjoy your stories so much and really look forward to reading the rest of this one.
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2020 11:48 PM Title: Chapter One ~ First Blood
More, more, more! PLEASE!
Date: 22 Apr 2020 11:12 PM Title: Chapter One ~ First Blood
Loved it. Now I want more. Do we know the updating schedule? No it also has me wondering if jasper is a hale and related to rose or if he is a Cullen or Whitlock
Date: 22 Apr 2020 11:10 PM Title: Chapter One ~ First Blood
Loved it. I love Mobward stories.
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2020 11:06 PM Title: Chapter One ~ First Blood
How is she going to respond to that note?
Date: 22 Apr 2020 10:38 PM Title: Chapter One ~ First Blood
OMG on repeat? Great, wonderful beginning. Brava!
Date: 22 Apr 2020 10:35 PM Title: Chapter One ~ First Blood
This sounds like a great story and I look forward to reading it!