Date: 06 Apr 2022 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 19
Such a great story, excited to see what's to come!
Date: 10 Dec 2021 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 19
Enjoyed this update to the story. Please try not to leave it for so long even though I know it's hard when you've got kids and other commitments occurring x
Date: 10 Dec 2021 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 19
Oh my goodness! I cant wait to read more. I love protective momma Bella.
Date: 09 Dec 2021 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 19
Im glad it's colds and not CoVid. Thanik you from coming back. Take care of you and your family. They always come first. Can't wait to read this chapter. I already know it will be great. If you celebrate, have a good holiday.
Date: 09 Dec 2021 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 19
I am so glad that you all are okay and all is almost well. As for Jacob, we know he can be very messy but the Cullen will protect Bella and Evie. I will be staring at my computer waiting on the next chapter. ;-)
Date: 08 Dec 2021 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 19
Ugh Rose is such a bitch trying to start crap up. Eww for him ever touching Skankya. Of course they had to run into Jacob...... sigh
Date: 25 Aug 2021 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 18
Lol for the end to an awesome day. Poor B & Alice.
Date: 20 Aug 2021 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 18
Great chapter, poor Edward trying to understand the minds of women. Lol. Good luck with that one
Date: 20 Aug 2021 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 18
Great chapter, poor Edward trying to understand the minds of women. Lol. Good luck with that one
Date: 20 Aug 2021 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 18
Great chapter, poor Edward trying to understand the minds of women. Lol. Good luck with that one
Date: 11 Jun 2021 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 17
Omg for the bottle demo. Too funny.
Date: 13 Apr 2021 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 16
4-13-21 I'm up to the current chapter(16) and I'm loving another story from this author. Can't wait for more!
Date: 31 Mar 2021 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 16
Love this story
Date: 24 Mar 2021 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 16
New reader to your story!! I love it!! Well done! I started reading uf thus morning before work, I rwad it all day. Sad to say I did very little work today but I realky enjoyed your story and can't wait for the next chapter....until you post again
Date: 22 Mar 2021 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 16
Good story I reviewed on FUN more about the comments you had that were upsetting! I thought good chapter. Wolves??
Date: 22 Mar 2021 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 16
Lol wow Carlisle is like the Lion tamer at the circus.
Date: 12 Mar 2021 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 15
Glad!Bella is getting him to admit things to her. Can understand her mistrust considering everyone who wanted to kill Evie before she was even born.
Date: 10 Mar 2021 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 15
Wonderful story. Mama and baby come first, so take all the time you need. :-)
Date: 25 Feb 2021 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 14
Thanks DollyBigMama for helping. This story is soooooo awesome with wonderful creativity and dedication from you both.
Date: 23 Feb 2021 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 14
Hairballs indeed. Ack for forks and Jake. Guess Alice didn't see that coming.... Or did she?
Date: 23 Feb 2021 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 13
Awe sweet outing. Ugh for the cougat
Date: 23 Feb 2021 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 12
Em is such a great guy underneath all the jokes and snark.
Date: 22 Feb 2021 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 14
Oh my goodness. I am so anxious to see how things unfold
Date: 22 Feb 2021 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 14
I thought Jacob was the speak donor. I don't blame Edward for wanting to smack Alice
Date: 12 Feb 2021 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 13
I can totally imagine how adorable miss Evie looked in her cute outfit with Santa
Date: 12 Feb 2021 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 13
I hope you get to feeling better. I am enjoying your story.
Date: 12 Feb 2021 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
Edward is so damn cute. How can he be so sweet and thoughtful. Bella is nutz if she doesn't go for that!
Date: 29 Jan 2021 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 12
Thank you so much for this new chapter! I enjoyed it a lot! Edward getting advice from Emmett was extremely funny to read! I Wish You all the best!
Date: 29 Jan 2021 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 12
Thank you so much for this new chapter! I enjoyed it a lot! Edward getting advice from Emmett was extremely funny to read! I Wish You all the best!
Date: 24 Jan 2021 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wow. So glad they got that hell hole closed down. Poor girls. Yet for him getting her to stay
Date: 16 Jan 2021 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 10
I have been reading fanfiction for about 10 yrs. and have never reviewed. I've never felt the need to until now. You are the first. God bless you for promoting civility, freedom and kindness.
BTW, I do love your stories!
Date: 16 Jan 2021 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 11
Beautiful chapter, so glad that they used their superior abilities to help those poor women.
Date: 16 Jan 2021 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 11
Beautiful chapter, so glad that they used their superior abilities to help those poor women.
Date: 16 Jan 2021 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 11
Loved the take down.
Date: 16 Jan 2021 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 11
Thank you so much for this new chapter! I appreciate this story so much! There is so muchvcharacter development inbit and you have such a sensitive way of writing - it is very, very Special. I Wish You and Your family all the best!
Date: 10 Jan 2021 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 10
Hmm now I'm wondering who the Mercer's are selling them too. Prob some slave trade, but I'm wondering about the Volturi wanting pregnant blood? Ack wracking my brain
Date: 10 Jan 2021 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter. Just riveting.
Date: 05 Jan 2021 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 9
When I had my daughter the dr took four months to tell me karo syrup with brown sugar she instantly started sleeping through the night and was way less fussy. Just a few drops in every bottle helped tremendously. The clingy that might be q little rough my daughter still preferred me over other people but it gave me enough space to not go crazy good luck!
Date: 04 Jan 2021 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 9
I love that Edward got the first evie smile. Hoping he comes to his jealous senses and tells Bella he likes her too.
Date: 03 Jan 2021 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 9
I think it's a phase you are going to have to go through:(. Maybe if you have a worn shirt or something next to her it might help.
Date: 03 Jan 2021 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 9
awww They are so cute together. Love Esme. Of course Rose would love Evie. Never thought otherwise. The Mercer's need to pay, thats for sure.
Sorry to hear about the colic. It really sucks. Sadly I have no advice.
Date: 03 Jan 2021 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh wow, thank you so much for still writing with all the "crazy" in your life. I hope your husband gets well soon and your little needy girl has a quick "mommy" faze. Take care of yourself !
Date: 02 Jan 2021 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 8
I'm sure Rose will.be on board with the plan for those people. Ugh. Now I was thinking it was the pack was the issue. Silly me
Date: 29 Dec 2020 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 8
Great chapter. I love protective Edward. bless him for finally sucking up his pride for Bella and evie's sake.
Date: 29 Dec 2020 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 8
Love this story.
Date: 29 Dec 2020 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 8
Not what I expected but glad to see it.
Date: 29 Dec 2020 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 8
Yess! I can’t wait for the family to come and the hunt. As usual, I really love your story. 😊
Date: 26 Dec 2020 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 7
Warmth to the stomach hold them with their legs hanging down on your arm. That helps. Sometimes on your lap. Always tummy toward what they are laying on. There is a rememedy of a bottle of half seven up and half boiled water. Shake it up a little getting some fiz out and try that. It does help with gas. and when the m.. stuff is getting out of the bowels.
:-) grandmother here
Date: 24 Dec 2020 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 7
:) Merry Christmas to you
Date: 23 Dec 2020 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 7
Colic is def a biatch. Thank gawd I didn't have to deal with it with my kiddos. Nice to see thier relationship/friendship growing.
Date: 23 Dec 2020 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 7
Great chapter, I'm really enjoying how the two of them are bonding.
So sorry to hear about so many covid deaths of your acquaintances. Scary times right now.
Stay safe and healthy.
Date: 15 Dec 2020 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 6
As always, this story is well written and has the best cliffhangers. I also wish you good health and yes this is exactly how I escape. Thank you in advance for more chapters.
Date: 15 Dec 2020 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh what a Maury cliffhanger, who's the daddy!?!
Date: 15 Dec 2020 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 6
Glad they came to an agreement. LOL. Whirlwind Alice appears.
Date: 14 Dec 2020 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 6
I have a feeling Jake is the father
Date: 14 Dec 2020 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 6
I have a feeling Jake is the father
Date: 05 Dec 2020 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 5
Love Bella's snark. Glad she let Carlisle see Evie. Wondering about who Evie's dad is and when he's going to be back in story.
Date: 03 Dec 2020 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter. Im so happy to see Carlisle and hopefully the rest of the family soon.
Date: 02 Dec 2020 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 5
Soooo good
Date: 30 Nov 2020 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 4
Hope you are safe and I’m absolutely invested in this story. Great story! I can’t wait for more chapters. 😊
Date: 29 Nov 2020 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 4
Lol for his whiplash moods. B is too funny
Date: 24 Nov 2020 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 4
Edward is changing.I like it very much! Thank you for this new chapter! Happy Thanksgiving!
Date: 24 Nov 2020 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 4
Mais mais, mkre, more.... please?????
Date: 21 Nov 2020 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 3
Love their interactions. E was awesome with the shopping. That manager was probably dancing an Irish jig when e left. Lol
Yea she's going to flip when he finds out he reads minds I think.
Date: 19 Nov 2020 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 3
that part of Stephanie's story Bella not wanting to accept help seems far off when she has a helpless baby. She needs diapers wipes formula soap. Clothes. blankets .. Perhaps a trip to a doctor for a clean bill of health.
Date: 19 Nov 2020 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loving this story. I can’t wait for more chapters!
Date: 18 Nov 2020 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 3
Excellent story, I'm so intrigued.
Date: 11 Nov 2020 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 2
I am loving this story already. Edward bumbling his way around as he tries to figure out what he's doing is really cute. Bella is fiercely proud, but determined to do what's best for baby Evie. Can't wait to see what all Edward buys and what the family will say about Edward being there with a human and baby!
Date: 11 Nov 2020 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 2
Perfeito, eu espero mais em breve. See you!!
Date: 11 Nov 2020 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 2
Awww glad they are both learning about each other.
Date: 11 Nov 2020 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 2
Awesome chapter. I love reading more of Edward's inner turmoil about what to do and how to react.
Date: 07 Nov 2020 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
OMG! I am excited for more! ;)
Date: 07 Nov 2020 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
I’m liking this very much! I can’t wait.
Date: 06 Nov 2020 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to more