




Date: 26 Apr 2023 4:20 PM Title: Epilogue
AWESOME !!! Thanks so much for sticking with it until the end ;D





Date: 25 Jan 2023 4:38 AM Title: Epilogue
Great story
10++





Date: 24 Jan 2023 11:07 PM Title: Epilogue
:) loved this story





Date: 20 Jan 2023 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 16
Great chapter keep writing faster
Date: 19 Jan 2023 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 16
Awesome chapter.
Date: 21 Dec 2022 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 15
Oh my goodness, that was an intense chapter!
Date: 21 Dec 2022 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 15
Oh my goodness, that was an intense chapter!





Date: 15 Dec 2022 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 14
Keep writing faster
Date: 13 Dec 2022 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 14
Holy crow, what an action packed chapter. Awesome job.
Date: 13 Dec 2022 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 14
Holy crow, what an action packed chapter. Awesome job.





Date: 05 Dec 2022 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 13
Oh my, keep on writing faster
Date: 05 Dec 2022 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 13
Whew, Bella just dropped the match on a powder keg! Great chapter





Date: 30 Nov 2022 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 12
Keep on writing faster please
Date: 28 Nov 2022 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 12
Oh my goodness, I love how suspenseful things are getting!
Date: 28 Nov 2022 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 12
Oh my goodness, I love how suspenseful things are getting!
Date: 27 Nov 2022 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 12
Yet another great chapter and I'm still loving this story, until next time x
Date: 27 Nov 2022 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 12
Yet another great chapter and I'm still loving this story, until next time x





Date: 22 Nov 2022 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh my. Get to writing the next chapter fast
Date: 04 Oct 2022 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 10
Oh my goodness. So glad Edward is alive.
Date: 04 Oct 2022 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 10
Oh my goodness. So glad Edward is alive.
Date: 26 Sep 2022 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 9
Keep on writing, faster please
Date: 20 Sep 2022 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 8
Wow, keep on writing
Date: 20 Sep 2022 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 8
Wow, I love the twist and turns. Can't wait to see what is next.
Date: 13 Sep 2022 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 7
Ugh, what a cliffhanger. What was on the news Emmett??? I'm on pins and needles to find out!
Date: 12 Sep 2022 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wow, now I can't wait for the 'news'.
Date: 30 Aug 2022 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 5
I'm so glad that Bella befriended Jane, she needs a girl in her corner.
Date: 23 Aug 2022 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 4
Hanging on pins and needles to hear about Smashfist and Rosebud
Date: 22 Aug 2022 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 4
I love this modernized version of the Batman...keep it coming.
Date: 07 Aug 2022 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
Keep on writing
Date: 07 Aug 2022 8:30 PM Title: Prologue
Interesting storyline
Date: 27 Apr 2022 1:30 AM Title: Prologue
Really liked it...can't wait for the next chapter.





Date: 15 Apr 2022 3:01 PM Title: Prologue
Looking forward to more
Date: 14 Apr 2022 6:02 AM Title: Prologue
Oh wow, absolutely loved this. You have me hooked already, cannot wait for the next chapter x