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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2023 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 21

Can't wait for this meeting.  Hope it goes in their favor.  

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2023 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 21

They are all so disgusted with Blithers and the VP.    rightfully....

Tito makes me all kinds of wary despite him being threatened by the bad guys.

Lets hope that Blither's wife can give them more info.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2023 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 21

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2023 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 20

Things are moving and getting serious 

 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2023 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 19

Edward is really struggling. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2023 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 18

Blithering is a sleazy person. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2023 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 17

Love how they got Blithers affair out there. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2023 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 16

What is Edward struggling with????? 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2023 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 15

I still don't trust James. Glad Leah gave Jake shit. LOL 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2023 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 14

I hope they get their revenge.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2023 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 13

I hope they do make them pay. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2023 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 20

They are losing their inside crook with Tito bailing on the bad guys.    I agree with Bella's comment about letting him sleep in the garage.    Or even the back yard....    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2023 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 20

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2023 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 19

You rock

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2023 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 19

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2023 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 19

Hopefully Edward has been convinced to work with Bella and quit hiding shit from her.   These are tough people to bring down so Bella and Edward need to work together.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2023 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 18

The slime balls just keep getting slimier.   Ugh....     Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2023 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 18

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2023 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 17

Big guys are going down

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2023 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 16

Its a good thing Bella loves him 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2023 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 17

So they are going to offer the untrustworthy sanke, Tito, money and HOPE he gives them real information and doesn't double cross them?     It sounds hella risky to me.

Dylanm the reporter, isn't starting to well in the honesty department.    But Edward and the others could care less if the girl's face was blurred or not.    shrugs....

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2023 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 17

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2023 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 16

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2023 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 15

James is an ass but what is up with hisa wife

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2023 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 14

They are together

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2023 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 15

Leah standing up to Jacob was all kinds of awesome.      James acting like a moody teenager that's embarrassed by his parents' sex lives is is very annoying.    I am so suspicious and wary of him.    Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2023 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 15

Good job to Leah! Can't wait to read more

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2023 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 15

Keep on writing 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2023 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 15

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2023 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 14

Getting woken up by that little sweetie would be OK even getting over a migraine.   :)    Edward's swoonie words would help it disappear altogether.   ;)

Now that they are all in a safe place (hopefully), all hell can rain down on Blithers.    mwahahaha.....

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2023 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 14

:) 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2023 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 13

Keep on writing faster 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2023 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 13

I really hope you come up with some fool proof revenge for us to read.    They all deserve it.     Thanks for writing and sharing,

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2023 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 13

:) 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2022 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 12

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2022 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 11

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2022 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 10

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2022 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 9

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2022 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2022 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 7

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2022 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2022 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2022 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 4

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2022 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it!

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2022 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it!

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2022 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2022 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2022 3:19 AM Title: Prologue

Great prolong!

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2022 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 12

Write fast

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2022 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 12

Heads will roll

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2022 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 12

Oh hell....   This is waaaaay uglier now and Edward, Bella and the rest are all trained up now too.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2022 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 12

OMGOSH!!!!! The agency set them up. That is just wrong. I hope Edward makes them pay. Why is Edward limping????? 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2022 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 12

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2022 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 11

OMG were is Edward

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2022 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 11

Oh my goodness Bella, way to stay strong and fight back.  

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2022 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 11

Oh my goodness Bella, way to stay strong and fight back.  

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2022 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 11

Write  faster 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2022 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 11

Bella is bad ass.    Now some asses need kicking.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2022 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 11

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2022 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 11

Oh my!!!! Why didn't she remove his mask and find out who he was? WE NEED ANSWERS!!!!!!! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2022 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 10

Oh my!!!!! Can't wait for the next update!!!! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2022 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 9

Well......the end was explosive!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2022 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 9

Well......the end was explosive!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2022 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 8

So glad Bella got her chance with Tito.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2022 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 7

Ok, I am ready for them to get Quinn back and put Holden in his place. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2022 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 6

So glad Quinn is not being tortured.  He seems to be doing ok. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2022 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 5

Tito is making me nervous.  I hope all the Cullens come back home. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2022 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 5

Tito is making me nervous.  I hope all the Cullens come back home. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2022 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 4

He finally got Holden!!!!!! Lol. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2022 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 4

He finally got Holden!!!!!! Lol. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2022 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 3

Holden is still an ass. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2022 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 2

Such anguish. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2022 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 10

Was not expecting that lol

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2022 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 10

Bella's radar is still going off and I'm still suspicious as hell.    Hmmm.....    I think Holden might have even had a fake explanation ready if he was caught with that phone.    I'm becoming extreme paranoid of your characters.   LOL

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2022 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 10

Keep  writing  faster please 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2022 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 10

:) 

Reviewer: Emo4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2022 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 9

Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2022 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 1

Ok, what happened to their son????

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2022 3:14 AM Title: Prologue

Oh I can't wait.  I love all your other stories. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2022 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 9

Hopefully Edward's devil side will be even better to kick kidnapper ass now.    ;)     Dam!

I'm still sus as hell of Holden.   Hmmm.....

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2022 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 9

Wow, keep  writing 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2022 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 9

They needed that

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2022 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 9

:) 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2022 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 8

Can I ask a question?  Why is all the languages on here every chapter?  Just wondering.  Please write a new chapter  soon

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2022 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 8

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2022 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 8

Good riddens to the ass hole

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2022 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 8

Tito is a smarmy asshole that didn't think he would get caught not apologizing or attacking Bella.     He sure didn't expect her to kick his ass.   What a douche....     

And Holden, af all people, is guarding him??     I'm sus as hell.    Hmmm....

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2022 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 7

my heart is breaking for them

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2022 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 6

love it

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2022 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 7

Glad to see a new chapter,  keep  on writing 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2022 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 7

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2022 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 7

I wondeer what Holden gets out of mocking Bella and Edward.   Hmmm....     Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2022 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 6

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2022 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 6

What Quin is doing is important and someone has to do it, but it sure seems like he is having regrets and missing his wife and daughter.

Hopefully everyone working with him is loyal.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2022 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 5

That Ass is going to get shot in the face he has been warned lol

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2022 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 5

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2022 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 5

Is that Tito dude really that much of a sexist, harassing pig?    Or is he testing Bella in some jerkish way?    Either option is not cool.   So maybe it's something else.    Hmmm....   

Edward and Bella both, are going to have to be brutal to get through this.   

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2022 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 4

They will be ready to kick ass

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2022 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 4

I love that Edward surprised the trainers too.   James defintely had that ass whoopin' coming.     :)

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2022 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 4

:) 

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