Date: 30 May 2023 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 21
Can't wait for this meeting. Hope it goes in their favor.
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2023 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 21
They are all so disgusted with Blithers and the VP. rightfully....
Tito makes me all kinds of wary despite him being threatened by the bad guys.
Lets hope that Blither's wife can give them more info. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 23 May 2023 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 20
Things are moving and getting serious
Date: 23 May 2023 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 19
Edward is really struggling.
Date: 23 May 2023 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 18
Blithering is a sleazy person.
Date: 23 May 2023 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 17
Love how they got Blithers affair out there.
Date: 22 May 2023 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 16
What is Edward struggling with?????
Date: 21 May 2023 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 15
I still don't trust James. Glad Leah gave Jake shit. LOL
Date: 21 May 2023 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 14
I hope they get their revenge.
Date: 20 May 2023 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 13
I hope they do make them pay.
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2023 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 20
They are losing their inside crook with Tito bailing on the bad guys. I agree with Bella's comment about letting him sleep in the garage. Or even the back yard.... Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2023 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 19
Hopefully Edward has been convinced to work with Bella and quit hiding shit from her. These are tough people to bring down so Bella and Edward need to work together. Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2023 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 18
The slime balls just keep getting slimier. Ugh.... Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 05 Apr 2023 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 17
Big guys are going down
Date: 05 Apr 2023 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 16
Its a good thing Bella loves him
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2023 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 17
So they are going to offer the untrustworthy sanke, Tito, money and HOPE he gives them real information and doesn't double cross them? It sounds hella risky to me.
Dylanm the reporter, isn't starting to well in the honesty department. But Edward and the others could care less if the girl's face was blurred or not. shrugs....
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 24 Feb 2023 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 15
James is an ass but what is up with hisa wife
Date: 24 Feb 2023 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 14
They are together
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2023 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 15
Leah standing up to Jacob was all kinds of awesome. James acting like a moody teenager that's embarrassed by his parents' sex lives is is very annoying. I am so suspicious and wary of him. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 24 Feb 2023 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 15
Good job to Leah! Can't wait to read more
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2023 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 15
Keep on writing
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2023 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 14
Getting woken up by that little sweetie would be OK even getting over a migraine. :) Edward's swoonie words would help it disappear altogether. ;)
Now that they are all in a safe place (hopefully), all hell can rain down on Blithers. mwahahaha.....
Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2023 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 13
Keep on writing faster
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2023 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 13
I really hope you come up with some fool proof revenge for us to read. They all deserve it. Thanks for writing and sharing,
Date: 15 Dec 2022 3:19 AM Title: Prologue
Great prolong!
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2022 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh hell.... This is waaaaay uglier now and Edward, Bella and the rest are all trained up now too.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 07 Nov 2022 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 12
OMGOSH!!!!! The agency set them up. That is just wrong. I hope Edward makes them pay. Why is Edward limping?????
Date: 06 Nov 2022 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 11
OMG were is Edward
Date: 25 Oct 2022 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh my goodness Bella, way to stay strong and fight back.
Date: 25 Oct 2022 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh my goodness Bella, way to stay strong and fight back.
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2022 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 11
Bella is bad ass. Now some asses need kicking. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 24 Oct 2022 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh my!!!! Why didn't she remove his mask and find out who he was? WE NEED ANSWERS!!!!!!!
Date: 04 Oct 2022 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh my!!!!! Can't wait for the next update!!!!
Date: 04 Oct 2022 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 9
Well......the end was explosive!!!!!
Date: 04 Oct 2022 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 9
Well......the end was explosive!!!!!
Date: 04 Oct 2022 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 8
So glad Bella got her chance with Tito.
Date: 04 Oct 2022 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 7
Ok, I am ready for them to get Quinn back and put Holden in his place.
Date: 04 Oct 2022 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 6
So glad Quinn is not being tortured. He seems to be doing ok.
Date: 03 Oct 2022 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 5
Tito is making me nervous. I hope all the Cullens come back home.
Date: 03 Oct 2022 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 5
Tito is making me nervous. I hope all the Cullens come back home.
Date: 03 Oct 2022 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 4
He finally got Holden!!!!!! Lol.
Date: 03 Oct 2022 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 4
He finally got Holden!!!!!! Lol.
Date: 03 Oct 2022 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 3
Holden is still an ass.
Date: 03 Oct 2022 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 2
Such anguish.
Date: 02 Oct 2022 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 10
Was not expecting that lol
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2022 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 10
Bella's radar is still going off and I'm still suspicious as hell. Hmmm..... I think Holden might have even had a fake explanation ready if he was caught with that phone. I'm becoming extreme paranoid of your characters. LOL
Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2022 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 10
Keep writing faster please
Date: 18 Sep 2022 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ok, what happened to their son????
Date: 18 Sep 2022 3:14 AM Title: Prologue
Oh I can't wait. I love all your other stories.
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2022 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 9
Hopefully Edward's devil side will be even better to kick kidnapper ass now. ;) Dam!
I'm still sus as hell of Holden. Hmmm.....
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 17 Sep 2022 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 9
Wow, keep writing
Date: 30 Aug 2022 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 8
Can I ask a question? Why is all the languages on here every chapter? Just wondering. Please write a new chapter soon
Date: 27 Aug 2022 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 8
Good riddens to the ass hole
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2022 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 8
Tito is a smarmy asshole that didn't think he would get caught not apologizing or attacking Bella. He sure didn't expect her to kick his ass. What a douche....
And Holden, af all people, is guarding him?? I'm sus as hell. Hmmm....
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 16 Aug 2022 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 7
my heart is breaking for them
Date: 11 Aug 2022 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 7
Glad to see a new chapter, keep on writing
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2022 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 7
I wondeer what Holden gets out of mocking Bella and Edward. Hmmm.... Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2022 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 6
What Quin is doing is important and someone has to do it, but it sure seems like he is having regrets and missing his wife and daughter.
Hopefully everyone working with him is loyal.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 01 Jul 2022 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 5
That Ass is going to get shot in the face he has been warned lol
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2022 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 5
Is that Tito dude really that much of a sexist, harassing pig? Or is he testing Bella in some jerkish way? Either option is not cool. So maybe it's something else. Hmmm....
Edward and Bella both, are going to have to be brutal to get through this.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 15 Jun 2022 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 4
They will be ready to kick ass
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2022 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 4
I love that Edward surprised the trainers too. James defintely had that ass whoopin' coming. :)
Thanks for writing and sharing.