




Date: 24 Sep 2023 8:28 PM Title: Epilogue
I can finally breathe again. Thanks for writing and sharing this nail biting story. :)





Date: 23 Sep 2023 10:22 AM Title: Epilogue
:) loved this series
Date: 06 Sep 2023 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 27
Wow what a twist
Date: 06 Sep 2023 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 25
Things are looking up
Date: 06 Sep 2023 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 23
Wow the plot goes deep love it





Date: 17 Aug 2023 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 27
Wow! Batshit crazy twist! I'm shocked as hell! Wow! Thanks for writing and sharing.





Date: 31 Jul 2023 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 26
If Bella and Edward are suspicious, then they should be suspicious. Until the VP is taken down... and anyone else in on things.
At least they have some time for sexy time. ;)
Thanks for writing and sharing.





Date: 24 Jul 2023 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 25
It's about time our sexy couple finally catch a break. Thanks for writing and sharing.





Date: 06 Jul 2023 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 24
Is it wrong of me to imagine Blithers suffering immensely? I hated and was disgusted by him. But you sure have a lot of truly awful characters in this story.
I hope they get their just due as well.
Thanks for writing and sharing.





Date: 21 Jun 2023 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 23
Keep on writing faster please





Date: 21 Jun 2023 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 23
Well, they have some new leads/ideas to follow. :) Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 18 Jun 2023 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 22
I think that went well lol
Date: 18 Jun 2023 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 21
It has to work OMG
Date: 18 Jun 2023 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 20
That ass is going down
Date: 18 Jun 2023 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 19
Together forever
Date: 18 Jun 2023 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 18
Power goes to head





Date: 07 Jun 2023 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 22
My heart was in my throat when Edward revealed himself to an armed Blithers. They don't have the element of surprise anymore. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 30 May 2023 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 21
Can't wait for this meeting. Hope it goes in their favor.





Date: 30 May 2023 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 21
They are all so disgusted with Blithers and the VP. rightfully....
Tito makes me all kinds of wary despite him being threatened by the bad guys.
Lets hope that Blither's wife can give them more info. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 23 May 2023 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 20
Things are moving and getting serious
Date: 23 May 2023 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 19
Edward is really struggling.
Date: 23 May 2023 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 18
Blithering is a sleazy person.
Date: 23 May 2023 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 17
Love how they got Blithers affair out there.
Date: 22 May 2023 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 16
What is Edward struggling with?????
Date: 21 May 2023 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 15
I still don't trust James. Glad Leah gave Jake shit. LOL
Date: 21 May 2023 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 14
I hope they get their revenge.
Date: 20 May 2023 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 13
I hope they do make them pay.





Date: 18 May 2023 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 20
They are losing their inside crook with Tito bailing on the bad guys. I agree with Bella's comment about letting him sleep in the garage. Or even the back yard.... Thanks for writing and sharing.





Date: 07 May 2023 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 19
Hopefully Edward has been convinced to work with Bella and quit hiding shit from her. These are tough people to bring down so Bella and Edward need to work together. Thanks for writing and sharing.





Date: 08 Apr 2023 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 18
The slime balls just keep getting slimier. Ugh.... Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 05 Apr 2023 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 17
Big guys are going down
Date: 05 Apr 2023 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 16
Its a good thing Bella loves him





Date: 10 Mar 2023 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 17
So they are going to offer the untrustworthy sanke, Tito, money and HOPE he gives them real information and doesn't double cross them? It sounds hella risky to me.
Dylanm the reporter, isn't starting to well in the honesty department. But Edward and the others could care less if the girl's face was blurred or not. shrugs....
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 24 Feb 2023 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 15
James is an ass but what is up with hisa wife
Date: 24 Feb 2023 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 14
They are together





Date: 24 Feb 2023 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 15
Leah standing up to Jacob was all kinds of awesome. James acting like a moody teenager that's embarrassed by his parents' sex lives is is very annoying. I am so suspicious and wary of him. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 24 Feb 2023 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 15
Good job to Leah! Can't wait to read more





Date: 23 Feb 2023 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 15
Keep on writing





Date: 07 Feb 2023 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 14
Getting woken up by that little sweetie would be OK even getting over a migraine. :) Edward's swoonie words would help it disappear altogether. ;)
Now that they are all in a safe place (hopefully), all hell can rain down on Blithers. mwahahaha.....
Thanks for writing and sharing.





Date: 17 Jan 2023 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 13
Keep on writing faster





Date: 15 Jan 2023 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 13
I really hope you come up with some fool proof revenge for us to read. They all deserve it. Thanks for writing and sharing,
Date: 15 Dec 2022 3:19 AM Title: Prologue
Great prolong!





Date: 07 Nov 2022 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh hell.... This is waaaaay uglier now and Edward, Bella and the rest are all trained up now too.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 07 Nov 2022 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 12
OMGOSH!!!!! The agency set them up. That is just wrong. I hope Edward makes them pay. Why is Edward limping?????
Date: 06 Nov 2022 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 11
OMG were is Edward
Date: 25 Oct 2022 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh my goodness Bella, way to stay strong and fight back.
Date: 25 Oct 2022 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh my goodness Bella, way to stay strong and fight back.





Date: 25 Oct 2022 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 11
Bella is bad ass. Now some asses need kicking. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 24 Oct 2022 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh my!!!! Why didn't she remove his mask and find out who he was? WE NEED ANSWERS!!!!!!!
Date: 04 Oct 2022 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh my!!!!! Can't wait for the next update!!!!
Date: 04 Oct 2022 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 9
Well......the end was explosive!!!!!
Date: 04 Oct 2022 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 9
Well......the end was explosive!!!!!
Date: 04 Oct 2022 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 8
So glad Bella got her chance with Tito.
Date: 04 Oct 2022 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 7
Ok, I am ready for them to get Quinn back and put Holden in his place.
Date: 04 Oct 2022 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 6
So glad Quinn is not being tortured. He seems to be doing ok.
Date: 03 Oct 2022 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 5
Tito is making me nervous. I hope all the Cullens come back home.
Date: 03 Oct 2022 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 5
Tito is making me nervous. I hope all the Cullens come back home.
Date: 03 Oct 2022 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 4
He finally got Holden!!!!!! Lol.
Date: 03 Oct 2022 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 4
He finally got Holden!!!!!! Lol.
Date: 03 Oct 2022 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 3
Holden is still an ass.
Date: 03 Oct 2022 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 2
Such anguish.