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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2024 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 22

I can't believe Edward let him leave alive. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2024 7:30 AM Title: Epilogue

I have enjoyed ever word Thank You

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2024 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 28

NOOOOOOOOOOOO

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2023 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 9

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2023 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2023 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 7

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2023 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2023 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2023 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 4

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2023 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2023 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2023 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2023 1:11 PM Title: Prologue

Loved it 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2023 8:28 PM Title: Epilogue

I can finally breathe again.    Thanks for writing and sharing this nail biting story.   :)

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2023 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 28

I'm scared. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2023 10:22 AM Title: Epilogue

:) loved this series 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2023 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 28

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2023 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 27

Wow what a twist

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2023 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 26

Fun times

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2023 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 25

Things are looking up

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2023 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 24

Love it

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2023 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 23

Wow the plot goes deep love it

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2023 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 27

Wow!   Batshit crazy twist!    I'm shocked as hell!    Wow!    Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2023 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 27

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2023 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 26

If Bella and Edward are suspicious, then they should be suspicious.    Until the VP is taken down... and anyone else in on things.

At least they have some time for sexy time.   ;)

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2023 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 26

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2023 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 25

It's about time our sexy couple finally catch a break.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2023 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 25

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2023 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 24

Is it wrong of me to imagine Blithers suffering immensely?    I hated and was disgusted by him.     But you sure have a lot of truly awful characters in this story.

I hope they get their just due as well.

Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2023 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 24

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2023 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 23

loving it

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2023 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 23

Keep on writing faster please 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2023 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 23

Well, they have some new leads/ideas to follow.   :)    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2023 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 23

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2023 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 22

I think that went well lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2023 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 21

It has to work OMG

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2023 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 20

That ass is going down

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2023 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 19

Together forever

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2023 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 18

Power goes to head

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2023 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 22

My heart was in my throat when Edward revealed himself to an armed Blithers.    They don't have the element of surprise anymore.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2023 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 22

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2023 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 21

Can't wait for this meeting.  Hope it goes in their favor.  

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2023 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 21

They are all so disgusted with Blithers and the VP.    rightfully....

Tito makes me all kinds of wary despite him being threatened by the bad guys.

Lets hope that Blither's wife can give them more info.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2023 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 21

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2023 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 20

Things are moving and getting serious 

 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2023 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 19

Edward is really struggling. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2023 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 18

Blithering is a sleazy person. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2023 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 17

Love how they got Blithers affair out there. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2023 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 16

What is Edward struggling with????? 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2023 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 15

I still don't trust James. Glad Leah gave Jake shit. LOL 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2023 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 14

I hope they get their revenge.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2023 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 13

I hope they do make them pay. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2023 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 20

They are losing their inside crook with Tito bailing on the bad guys.    I agree with Bella's comment about letting him sleep in the garage.    Or even the back yard....    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2023 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 20

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2023 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 19

You rock

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2023 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 19

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2023 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 19

Hopefully Edward has been convinced to work with Bella and quit hiding shit from her.   These are tough people to bring down so Bella and Edward need to work together.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2023 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 18

The slime balls just keep getting slimier.   Ugh....     Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2023 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 18

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2023 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 17

Big guys are going down

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2023 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 16

Its a good thing Bella loves him 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2023 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 17

So they are going to offer the untrustworthy sanke, Tito, money and HOPE he gives them real information and doesn't double cross them?     It sounds hella risky to me.

Dylanm the reporter, isn't starting to well in the honesty department.    But Edward and the others could care less if the girl's face was blurred or not.    shrugs....

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2023 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 17

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2023 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 16

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2023 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 15

James is an ass but what is up with hisa wife

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2023 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 14

They are together

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2023 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 15

Leah standing up to Jacob was all kinds of awesome.      James acting like a moody teenager that's embarrassed by his parents' sex lives is is very annoying.    I am so suspicious and wary of him.    Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2023 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 15

Good job to Leah! Can't wait to read more

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2023 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 15

Keep on writing 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2023 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 15

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2023 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 14

Getting woken up by that little sweetie would be OK even getting over a migraine.   :)    Edward's swoonie words would help it disappear altogether.   ;)

Now that they are all in a safe place (hopefully), all hell can rain down on Blithers.    mwahahaha.....

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2023 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 14

:) 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2023 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 13

Keep on writing faster 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2023 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 13

I really hope you come up with some fool proof revenge for us to read.    They all deserve it.     Thanks for writing and sharing,

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2023 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 13

:) 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2022 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 12

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2022 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 11

Loved it 

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Date: 15 Dec 2022 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 10

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2022 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 9

Loved it 

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Date: 15 Dec 2022 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it 

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Date: 15 Dec 2022 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 7

Loved it 

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Date: 15 Dec 2022 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it 

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Date: 15 Dec 2022 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it 

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Date: 15 Dec 2022 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 4

Loved it 

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Date: 15 Dec 2022 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it!

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2022 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it!

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2022 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2022 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2022 3:19 AM Title: Prologue

Great prolong!

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2022 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 12

Write fast

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2022 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 12

Heads will roll

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2022 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 12

Oh hell....   This is waaaaay uglier now and Edward, Bella and the rest are all trained up now too.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2022 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 12

OMGOSH!!!!! The agency set them up. That is just wrong. I hope Edward makes them pay. Why is Edward limping????? 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2022 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 12

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2022 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 11

OMG were is Edward

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2022 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 11

Oh my goodness Bella, way to stay strong and fight back.  

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2022 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 11

Oh my goodness Bella, way to stay strong and fight back.  

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2022 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 11

Write  faster 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2022 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 11

Bella is bad ass.    Now some asses need kicking.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2022 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 11

:) 

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