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Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2023 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 14

Keep on writing faster 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2023 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 14

I really hope you come up with some fool proof revenge for us to read.    They all deserve it.     Thanks for writing and sharing,

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2023 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 14

:) 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2022 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 12

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2022 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 11

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2022 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 10

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2022 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 9

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2022 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2022 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 7

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2022 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2022 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2022 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 4

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2022 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it!

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2022 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it!

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2022 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2022 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2022 3:19 AM Title: Prologue

Great prolong!

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2022 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 12

Write fast

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2022 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 12

Heads will roll

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2022 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 12

Oh hell....   This is waaaaay uglier now and Edward, Bella and the rest are all trained up now too.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2022 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 12

OMGOSH!!!!! The agency set them up. That is just wrong. I hope Edward makes them pay. Why is Edward limping????? 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2022 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 12

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2022 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 11

OMG were is Edward

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2022 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 11

Oh my goodness Bella, way to stay strong and fight back.  

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2022 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 11

Oh my goodness Bella, way to stay strong and fight back.  

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2022 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 11

Write  faster 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2022 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 11

Bella is bad ass.    Now some asses need kicking.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2022 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 11

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2022 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 11

Oh my!!!! Why didn't she remove his mask and find out who he was? WE NEED ANSWERS!!!!!!! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2022 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 10

Oh my!!!!! Can't wait for the next update!!!! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2022 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 9

Well......the end was explosive!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2022 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 9

Well......the end was explosive!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2022 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 8

So glad Bella got her chance with Tito.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2022 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 7

Ok, I am ready for them to get Quinn back and put Holden in his place. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2022 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 6

So glad Quinn is not being tortured.  He seems to be doing ok. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2022 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 5

Tito is making me nervous.  I hope all the Cullens come back home. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2022 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 5

Tito is making me nervous.  I hope all the Cullens come back home. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2022 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 4

He finally got Holden!!!!!! Lol. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2022 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 4

He finally got Holden!!!!!! Lol. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2022 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 3

Holden is still an ass. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2022 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 2

Such anguish. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2022 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 10

Was not expecting that lol

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2022 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 10

Bella's radar is still going off and I'm still suspicious as hell.    Hmmm.....    I think Holden might have even had a fake explanation ready if he was caught with that phone.    I'm becoming extreme paranoid of your characters.   LOL

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2022 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 10

Keep  writing  faster please 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2022 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 10

:) 

Reviewer: Emo4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2022 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 9

Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2022 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 1

Ok, what happened to their son????

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2022 3:14 AM Title: Prologue

Oh I can't wait.  I love all your other stories. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2022 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 9

Hopefully Edward's devil side will be even better to kick kidnapper ass now.    ;)     Dam!

I'm still sus as hell of Holden.   Hmmm.....

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2022 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 9

Wow, keep  writing 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2022 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 9

They needed that

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2022 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 9

:) 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2022 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 8

Can I ask a question?  Why is all the languages on here every chapter?  Just wondering.  Please write a new chapter  soon

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2022 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 8

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2022 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 8

Good riddens to the ass hole

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2022 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 8

Tito is a smarmy asshole that didn't think he would get caught not apologizing or attacking Bella.     He sure didn't expect her to kick his ass.   What a douche....     

And Holden, af all people, is guarding him??     I'm sus as hell.    Hmmm....

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2022 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 7

my heart is breaking for them

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2022 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 6

love it

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2022 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 7

Glad to see a new chapter,  keep  on writing 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2022 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 7

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2022 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 7

I wondeer what Holden gets out of mocking Bella and Edward.   Hmmm....     Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2022 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 6

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2022 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 6

What Quin is doing is important and someone has to do it, but it sure seems like he is having regrets and missing his wife and daughter.

Hopefully everyone working with him is loyal.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2022 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 5

That Ass is going to get shot in the face he has been warned lol

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2022 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 5

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2022 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 5

Is that Tito dude really that much of a sexist, harassing pig?    Or is he testing Bella in some jerkish way?    Either option is not cool.   So maybe it's something else.    Hmmm....   

Edward and Bella both, are going to have to be brutal to get through this.   

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2022 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 4

They will be ready to kick ass

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2022 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 4

I love that Edward surprised the trainers too.   James defintely had that ass whoopin' coming.     :)

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2022 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 4

:) 

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2022 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 4

Poor Edward is scared for his wife..but Edward will succeed since it's his family

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2022 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 3

Yes James is a dick lol can't wait for next chapter 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2022 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 3

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2022 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 3

Holden  is definitely an ass.   Ugh....    Hopefully they all get bulked up and/or trained up to go to the middle east.    It sure will be different.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2022 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 2

Thnk you for the update..well done..until you post again.  great story



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading!

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2022 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 2

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2022 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 2

They will bring him home cant wait to see how



Author's Response:

They'll do whatever it takes.

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2022 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 2

Oh hell, ....   The not knowing, like Layla described, would be the hardest to deal with.     

It sounds like Edward, Bella and the others have some working out and practicing to do to get ready.

Maybe Quinn will quit the CIA after his (hopeful) rescue.

Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading!

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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2022 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 1

love them 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2022 6:08 AM Title: Prologue

sounds like fun lol

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2022 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2022 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 1

Thanks for the sexy times.   The sad dinner times made me uncomfortable.   Poor Layla and Bella and Edward.....    I wonder how long Quin has been gone.    Do they think him kidnapped, dead or something else?   Hmmm....    

Can't wait to read more...    Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Hmm, I wonder.

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Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2022 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

I am forgetting why Layla is alone! Back reading prior story



Author's Response:

Oh, it's new for this story.

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2022 10:39 PM Title: Prologue

Oh....rubs hands together in glee.....   I'm hooked already and wondering who the "big bad" is.    Can't wait to find out....   ;)    Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm excited as well.

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2022 7:19 PM Title: Prologue

Looking forward to more 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

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