Date: 17 Sep 2023 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 29
So his past is coming back to bite him in the butt. Good! He was horrible to Izzy, how could he say he loved her. He left her and treated her badly. And now that he's found out his neighbor, whom he's criticized and done nothing but cause trouble for her, expects her to believe him. He's delusional. If she could ever forgive him he has a lot to make up for. But she can't ever forget. And she shouldn't forgive him. Maybe someetime in the future they could be friends? If he finds out his family has helped and supported her he might feel betrayed by them. SMH... Louanne, I hope your meds help you and you get to feeling better. I love this story, please don't abandon it. I really like your writing, not only this story. I think you're a fantastic writer. Your attention to detail about your characters just keep me waiting for the next update.
Date: 03 Aug 2023 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 28
How has Teddy not figued out Marie is Izzy? I thought Izzy and Alice would see Izzy's teddy in Teddy's bedroom when they went in there. How has he not lost his job because he's so unprofessional with his homelife? I really wish Chelsea was completely out of the picture. Love the little war Izzy has going on with Teddy. The balls in the car was priceless. Crisckets in the bedroom would bug the hell out of me.
Date: 02 Aug 2023 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 28
Teddy has really turned into a grumpy man. Glad his family is on Marie's side with the tricks. Teach him not to mess with her and her family. I'm surprised he didn't recognize Izzy when she came over to his house. She's getting braver venturing from her property.
Date: 25 Apr 2023 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 26
Oh no!!! Not a cliffhanger. Come on, Linda. I need the next chapter fast. I thought Teddy got a restraining order against Chelsea several chapters back. I also thought she was going to a school in Cali; where she thought Teddy was going. Seems like Teddy is thinking with the wrong head. Please don't keep us waiting too long for Izzy's answer to Esme's question.
Date: 25 Apr 2023 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 26
Thank goodness nobody tried to hurt Bobby. I was afraid someone from the cult had found Marie and tried to hurt her through her dog. Chelsea has some nerve complaining about Marie playing her guitar on her porch at night, or putting Marie down for knitting on her rocker. If Teddy doesn't want Chelsea around why does he encourage her by sleeping with her. The rumors about him are not good for his reputation as a teacher and he needs to clean his act up and get rid of Chelsea instead of complaining. Teddy still acts like the arrogant entitled brat he became when he was younger. And now Esme recognizes Izzy? What will be Emmett's reaction? And will anyone else find out who Marie is? Caan't wait for that next update!
Date: 24 Apr 2023 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 26
I'm sorry but why is everyone blaming Edwzrd for Chelsea being a stalker? It's like they still blame him for everything and I don't see Carlisle or anyone else suggesting he should put a restraining order, especially since he's been trying to keep away from her. And I don't like Charlie, either he's proud of how Edward changed or he still see's him as a screw up and drug addict, honestly Ennet is not helping either, if Chelsea is doing stuff that doesn't set a good example than why did he hire her, especially knowing how much trouble she is
Date: 05 Apr 2023 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 25
Izzy doesn't see a future with a mate fpr herself. That's so sad. No one has shown an interest in her romantically because she has so little selfworth she pushes people away. I'm sure Charlie would love to see her in a relationship but he knows she shies away from people she doesn't know. I think he worries about her future too. I wonder if she will ever meet Edward again and what their reaction would be. He doesn't seem interested in anyone. I wonder if he ever thinks about Izzy, he's so busy living his life.
Date: 05 Apr 2023 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 25
I'm surprised Izzy is wanting to go back to Forks on her own.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. She won't be on her own. They are sending Leah and Seth. Charlie and Sue will be with her to begin with. But teddy is living across the road from Charlie's house .
Date: 15 Mar 2023 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 24
I'm thrilled Rose recognized the subjects in the painting. I'm conflicted about Jasper slipping up and confessing he saw Izzy in the hospital. He certainly broke a HIPPA law there and it's consquence is being fired if his supervisor ever finds out.
Date: 13 Feb 2023 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 23
Jasper probably said too much about the patients, even if it were in general. He'll probably end up letting it slip he's seen Izzy. Racheal is a wild card. Hopefully we've seen the last of her. After everything Izzy has been through she's still such a sweet soul.
Date: 12 Feb 2023 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 23
Jasper saw first hand the damage that was inflicted on those kids physically and mentally. Izzy may never have a normal relationship. Edward feels a lot of guilt for the way he treated Izzy. Thankfully he is away from Siobahn and will be away from Rachel. He has a lot of anger toward himself.
Date: 12 Feb 2023 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 23
I can't wait until Teddy and Izzy reunite. It will likely be bumpy and Teddy will have earn trust, but I bet he will be the incentive she needs for more education. Her painting and drawings will be things he should recognize at some point - or her signature (on her paintings).
Date: 24 Jan 2023 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 22
It's nice that Jazzy wants her back with her former friends but they hurt her too much. Siobahn had a bad influence on Teddy. It was mean of Izzy's mother to say that she was a bad friend and that's why she had no friends in Forks.
Date: 02 Dec 2022 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 21
B was brave to go on America's Most Wanted. Because of her courage some of the wanted people who had been hiding in plain sight were captured. What a nice reunion for Jasper and Izzy. Un fortunately, because of the danger she still faces, Jasper can't tell any one about her.
Date: 02 Dec 2022 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 20
Izzy has a lot of memories of the people in the compound. She helped identify some of them. I think the stories she was told while in the compound might be wrong. Some of the young women became breeders having children starting at the age of fifteen. Sounds like the broker sold those children.
Date: 16 Nov 2022 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 20
Izzy is getting there. I'm wondering when she'll meet back up with Edward.
Hi Sherry, I'm getting better at answering reviews. Yes Teddy and Izzy will be meeting back up in a few chapters. Her feet will get fixed first. But when Izzy goes back to Forks she's going to have one heck of a shit list.
Date: 05 Nov 2022 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 19
Those girls that made fun of her were friends of Leah. I wonder why Izzy cut all her hair off. Maybe when she gets her feet and ankles fixed she will feel better about herself. She's making such good progress with on-line schooling and working for Heidi. Petal was right, Charlie was too busy to notice what was happening to Izzy. Plus he would have noticed the strangers hanging around town. He was too absorbed about his own grief about Renee. But he's trying to make things right with his daughter.
Izzy cut her hair in frustration, stupid I know be she doesn't feel good about herself and being bullied pushed her over the edge.
I think Charlie is aware of his short falls. He truly believe the Cullen had Izzy there. So many people could take the blame.
Date: 03 Nov 2022 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 19
Some things bugged me about this chapter.
- Edward is basically being sexually harassed by Rachel and nothing's done about it. Maybe it's time for at least a restraining order?
- Sue's on the right track. The commune was using Izzy for their own finanical benefit. They should be responsible for the cost of materials Izzy had to purchase to make the painting they asked her to make for them. They should be court ordered to reimburse Izzy for her out of pocket costs and her time.
- Leah's friends verbally and physically assaulted Izzy. Where is the justice for Izzy there. Those girls should be prosecuted for their assaults. Leah, included since she didn't stop them. What if Izzy weren't able to swim and were thrown into the deep in of the pool and drown. Leah needs more than a light smack to the wrist for allowing Izzy to be harmed, especially in her own home.
- Izzy's entire life people have gotten away with abusing her mentally and physically. They all should face criminal charges.
Love that Helen is taking additional interest in helping Izzy get the medical treatment she needs.
Date: 18 Oct 2022 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 18
Meme finally saw how Willow treated Bell and make her do all her work. She will make sure that Willow does her share like everyone else. Belll/Izzy is finally going home. Will she be comfortable living that way again. She has much to gain. At least she will not be going back to Forks.
Date: 03 Sep 2022 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 15
Renee shows no remorse. She actually thinks she did nothing wrong in her treatment of her daughter. She knew Izzy wanted to go home but she just wanted to be with Jacob. I hope the commune where Izzy is now finds a way to get her hoime. The story of the trial must be in the newspapers. Maybe someone will see it and contact Charlie or the FBI.
Date: 28 Aug 2022 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 14
Edward has found new better friends. He's living with the regrets and mistakes he made. At least now he knows Siobahn is no good for him. Hopefully they can find Izzy. Maybe with Phoenix's help they can find out what happened to her. But she's at a place where she is safe and can heal. She can't go home because that's where Wolf will look for her and kidnap her again.
Thank you for reading and leaving me your thoughts. All you have to remember is Sparrow is going to find away to get her home safely to her daddy. But she has been left with people who will keep her safe.
Date: 28 Aug 2022 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 14
Looks like Edward is turning a new leaf. Maybe he is redeemable.
Thank you for reading.
I'm glad its come to the part of the story where Teddy has turned over the new leaf. I was told when I first started writing to be careful what I do with the main people. I've been told to go to hell more times over how I have written Teddy in this story than I have from my new daughter in law. x
Date: 14 Aug 2022 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 13
Edward learned some valuable lessons. I hope he takes Charlie's advice to heart. Those friends of his only used him to change their grades. Edward needs to talk to a psychiatrist or psychologist to get his head and his life together. Bells is settling in with her new family. I only hope Wolf's commune doesn't see the name Phoenix or that Renee doesn't recognize her art. I wonder what happened to Phoenix, if Bells will ever find out.
Date: 14 Aug 2022 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 13
I would say Teddy/Edward got a little comeuppance. Charlie's a good man, trying to give him another chance to pull his head outta his ass and be a good person. Poor Bella. How long has passed since her disappearance at this point. Charlie moving to NY; does that mean he's closer to finding Bella.
Date: 12 Aug 2022 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 12
Edward needs an old fashion ass beating Momma needed to have him pick the switch...Love Bella she is so strond willed and determinded to get home to her dad...I hope renee get what she deserves
Thank you for reading and leaving me your thoughts.
Date: 07 Aug 2022 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 12
Sparrow is back where he feels he belongs. I hope they can keep him safe and not drag him back to Wolf. Wolf is evil, he wanted to bed Sky. But now maybe they can keep Izzy safe until it's safe to bring her home to her dad. Edward is out of control. Maybe staying with his aunt and uncle and then boot camp will straighten him out. He'll be away from Siobahn, who has proven to be a bad influence on him.
Thank you for reading and leaving me your thoughts. You're right about the intentions of Wolf with Izzy.
Date: 06 Aug 2022 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 12
So glad Sparrow fled with Izzy. But shouldn't River call Charlie and explain everything that happened to Izzy so they wouldn't get into trouble for kidnapping? Edward needs to go to boot camp. Military school would be the best solution to straighten him out.
Thank you for reading Sherry.
I was going to tell Charlie, but he would do things his way. Sparrow knows what his dad is like and what rescouces he has. Plus I don't think they would have the convicttion on Renee if they knew she was still around. The wolf is obsessed with Izzy and Sparrow knows that.
Edward will grow up I'm sure.
Date: 30 Jul 2022 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 11
Edward is on a downward spiral. His friends are a bad influence. Poor Izzy. She got caught. The other kids probably noticed her missing and told one of the adults.
Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts.
Date: 30 Jul 2022 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 10
Izzy is smart. I hope the Sheriff is not friends with the Wolf. Renee, or Harmony, is not well liked. Meadow wants out of the commune but Harmony saw her letter and blackmailed her to get Izzy. Harmony doesn't love Izzy but she wants favor with Wolf by getting more members to work in the commune.
Date: 29 Jul 2022 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 11
SMH at Edward. When is he ever going to grow up? Carlisle and Esme needs to get their heads out of their asses and realize what a downward spiral he's on. At least they cut him off seeing his friends. Poor Izzy. I was really hoping she'd get out ot there. Maybe Edward should be taken too and put on the compound with Izzy. He wouldn't like that any too well.
Thank you for reading this chapter Sherry.
I believe people can redeem themselves. I don't know how Teddy will be it but I have a feeling he will make many more mistakes. Izzy time is coming.
Date: 22 Jul 2022 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 10
Someone needs to take Renee/Harmony out. Poor Izzy. I hope Charlie finds her soon. Esme and Carlisle better do something about Teddy soon.
Thank you for reading and reviewing. Renee is a bitch, and selfish. She only does thinks to benefit herself.
Date: 18 Jul 2022 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 9
I wonder if Edward feels any remorse for the way he's treated his former best friend. I'm glad someone in that family cares about her. Carlisle is just covering his ass. But Esme and Jasper are worried. And when Emmett and Rose come home I bet they will be concerned too. There will be a lot of anger directed at Edward from his family. Serves him right.
Date: 18 Jul 2022 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 7
Renee is a mean mommy. Luckily Charlie has found people to step in and help. Alice and Jane were real nice to watch over her and now Esme has invited Izzy into their home when Charlie has to work nights. Good friends that care.
Date: 18 Jul 2022 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh my feels. You had me in tears. I really want to wring those kids' necks that were so cruel to Izzy. IDK how you will turn this around and make it a E/B HEA. I really want Edward to realize how much he was in the wrong about how he and his friends treated Izzy. I was glad to see how Jasper reprimanded his parents' for cuddling Edward. I'm dying to know if Izzy will be found as a child or will she come back when she's older?