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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2022 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 1

sounds like fun times



Author's Response:

Thank you!

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2022 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 5

Wow Edward was naive in his past working for criminals.    Maybe he delivered something to the 'wrong' person.   Hmmm.....

I wonder how his sister got him out of jail.   Is she involved?    So many mysteries.....

Edward coming back and kissing Bella proves his lonliness won out over his 'go it alone' mentality.   I'm glad.

Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

It's true, his need for her company won out.

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2022 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 5

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

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Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2022 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 4

God's forgiveness is permanent. Forgiving yourself is much harder. 



Author's Response:

Very true!

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Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2022 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 2

It is life. Not always rainbows.. Sometimes it rains



Author's Response:

Thanks!

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Reviewer: chelsea_feeney Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2022 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 4

I am so very intrigued with this story. I'm more of a reader than a reviewer but this story just intrigues me. I cannot wait to read more of it!



Author's Response:

I appreciate all my readers! I'm glad to hear you like it.

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Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2022 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 3

I’m guessing he’s trying to hide because he protected someone in the past and is in trouble from it. He knows some good fighting moves. Alos his knuckles are maybe used to be cracked from fighting.



Author's Response:

That's a good guess!

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2022 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 3

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

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Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2022 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 3

Interesting storyline 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading!

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2022 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 3

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2022 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 3

Some nice, good people in town are noticing Ward.   But he isn't ready yet to make friends.    Heidi is gonna have to lead the way.   Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

I agree with that!

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Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2022 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 2

Keep on writing 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2022 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 2

Bella is just as sad and lost as Ward.   She just hides it better from people.   ((HUGS)) to your characters....    Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

You're so right!

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2022 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 2

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2022 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

sounds like fun



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2022 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wonder what happened to Edward and why he goes by ward.



Author's Response:

I really wanted to use that name, but he has a reason for it, yeah.

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2022 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

Looking forward to more 



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

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Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2022 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh poor Ward, what have you been through to react like that and to have nothing but Heidi as his friend 



Author's Response:

That's an excellent question.

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Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2022 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

So Ward you have been injured. Don't touch me is a give.. sorry



Author's Response:

It's a dead giveaway, yeah.

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2022 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

Poor Ward....   If Bella's gasp means anything, I bet his hands hurt like a bitch.       Heidi and Charlie seem very sweet though.   :)     Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

I bet they do. I loved adding pets to the story.

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