Date: 16 Oct 2023 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 23
Thanks for the update and at least I know here the reveiews are going through, lol. Caius was not a graceful loser in his race for presidency but in this case the best person for the role was elected by the people, though I do wish you'd written Alabama as a state for President Swan. (lol). Till laters, Pam b
Date: 27 Aug 2023 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 20
I was 17 the first time I was in NY. My older brother had been home there for 10 years by that point. It didn't matter what direction I looked: those Towers were always there. My second trip I was in my early 30s, on a bus trip, and it was 2003 or 2004. There was still debris where the Towers once stood. I recall walking through a tunnel with news clippings, pictures of the missing, and notes to those lost on a black painted piece of plywood on one side and glass on the other overlooking Ground Zero. Fast forward a couple years and I was in NY for the thrid time, visiting with my brother. The only sign of what once was embodyed in a bronze statue of the world and a plaque. The true memorial hadn't been started yet. We walked along the Hudson River, in Battery Park, and he pointed out the places of triage he passed that day, and told me how close his office truly was to Ground Zero. In those moments I remembered my fear for the two or three days after the attack: there was no communicaton, so I had no clue if my brother was okay. I was lucky. He was lucky. My heart goes out to those that weren't. Thank you. You've told someone's story in this chapter.
Date: 11 Aug 2023 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 19
Great chapter. I hope all goes well for Alice's recovery





Date: 17 Jul 2023 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 18
OMG ! Your story is wonderful I can't wait to read more. I don't know what else to say but don't stop writing .
Date: 02 Jul 2023 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 17
FF would not let me post (says I already had) so I'll just do here..lol... I appreciate the update. If things progress in their frienship, will Rosalie be a bridesmaid consideration I wonder? See ya in Minneapolis!!!! Pam b.
Date: 22 May 2023 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 15
Thanks for the update. I'm glad Madam President and Edward are offically engaged. I'm hoping Bella will be able to throw Mr. Charles for a loop when the announcemnt is made public.
Date: 14 May 2023 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 13
Poor Alice that sucks
Date: 14 May 2023 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 12
OMG fun times a head
Date: 14 May 2023 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 10
She know how to get what she wants
Date: 07 May 2023 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wow, I was sweating bullets with that intense chapter. Can't wait to read more soon
Date: 07 May 2023 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wow, I was sweating bullets with that intense chapter. Can't wait to read more soon





Date: 31 Mar 2023 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 11
Love Love your story can't wait for more.





Date: 27 Mar 2023 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 11
Keep writing faster please
Great chapter





Date: 05 Mar 2023 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 10
Keep on writing faster please
Date: 27 Feb 2023 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 8
Loving this story





Date: 24 Feb 2023 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 9
Not nice, don't like cliffhangers
Write faster please





Date: 24 Feb 2023 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 8
Great chapter, keep on writing faster please





Date: 05 Feb 2023 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 7
Keep on writing faster please
Date: 05 Feb 2023 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 7
She needs him more now than ever
Date: 05 Feb 2023 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 5
There has to be away





Date: 09 Jan 2023 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 5
Sad, keep on writing faster please
Date: 08 Jan 2023 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 5
I can"t wait to read more!





Date: 26 Dec 2022 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 4
:) Merry Christmas to you





Date: 26 Dec 2022 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh my keep on writing faster please
Date: 26 Dec 2022 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 4
He is in deep shit





Date: 09 Dec 2022 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 3
Interesting storyline keep on writing
Date: 09 Dec 2022 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 3
Wow so many changes
Date: 23 Nov 2022 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds great thanks so much
Date: 13 Nov 2022 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great first chapter and I'm looking forward to following along.





Date: 09 Nov 2022 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to more