Date: 24 Mar 2023 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 44
I don't know on how thing will go with her daughter. She is her mom and the adoption is not legal but at the same time she is not ready to take care of her. Really Ben and Angela do have an standing as Bella never signed the papers but they raised her. No matter what someone will be hurt.
Date: 24 Mar 2023 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 44
Love that Bella is taking a stand for herself. She admitted to Sam killing her parents. She called him by name. I hope she gets enough self-confidence to scream and yell at Sam. I also hope she gets to hit him just one time. Bella is going to get to see her little girl. I don't blame Angela and Ben for being worried about Bella being able to take care of Hope. I am too.





Date: 23 Mar 2023 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 44
The amount of people Bella has enraptured keeps on growing. if they were all to line up in front of her, that would be a very long line.
But, how Marcus said, she needs to do her part, she needs to take the stand and that will be quite the task. Thankfully there are so many who will help her keep it together.
I am with Kate in woring what Eleazar will try while defending Sam. Sam has been very lucky so far, but luck goes so far. I really hope his is finished.
There are a lot of people involved in this, and all those who turned their heads, did nothing or ignored things... how are they feeling now? I really hope they are feeling regret and remorse for their actions or lack of.





Date: 22 Mar 2023 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 43
Thank you for the update..well done..I don't know if these people will ever pay for their crimes. I sure as hell hope so. This is crazy that no one stood up for these young girls. I hope EVERYONE involved will be punished. until you post again
Date: 22 Mar 2023 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 43
You are doing an amazing job with this story. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Date: 22 Mar 2023 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 43
Every single chapter leaves me speachless!! I am trying to find the words to express my feelings while I read, sadly, I can't find them, yet.
Marcus is right, they all have a long way to go. Not only Bella, but all of the people who have fallen in love and afection for her. And Edward.. he is a teenager and I wish to be wrong, he could make a wrong move at any moment. However, until now, he has been the best at helping Bella. Somehow, he knows and feels what she needs. Something tells me that somehow Marcus has realized it and he will do all he can, along with Edward, in the difficult path in front of them. Bringing Bella back to believing life can be good, warm, sunny, nice. Making her beliee she is SOMEONE and EVERYTHING to so many people.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much
Date: 18 Mar 2023 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 42
They are both hurting so much.





Date: 18 Mar 2023 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 42
Thank you for the update..well done..Sam & his council buddies need to be castrated..until you post agin
Date: 18 Mar 2023 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 42
That tribe is truly sick
Date: 17 Mar 2023 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 41
Sick sick sick





Date: 15 Mar 2023 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 35
Such a sad story
Date: 13 Mar 2023 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 41
Oh my!!!!! That is just sick. Why did the Forks police not listen about Sam?





Date: 11 Mar 2023 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 41
Poor Bella. The council are monsters





Date: 09 Mar 2023 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 20
Oh my goodness





Date: 08 Mar 2023 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 40
Wow just wow. I can't believe this. They have to get to the bottom of this. No way are they married. I hope they can fix this. I like that the judge isn't having any bs in his court room. I'm happy Edward & Carlisle got a chance to talk. I can't wait to see what happens next. well done. until you post again





Date: 07 Mar 2023 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting storyline





Date: 07 Mar 2023 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 40
There is no.way he married her. He didn't let her out. I hope.someone kills him in jail!





Date: 07 Mar 2023 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 39
I think u did great! Marcus is so.intense!





Date: 07 Mar 2023 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 38
I love that Kate and Garrett are together! If Carlisle is smart he'll bring her some pancakes. I also hope she wants to go back with him to his house. I thought it was funny she doesn't like Rosie's cooking.





Date: 07 Mar 2023 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 37
Edward always needs to be there for any of these meetings





Date: 07 Mar 2023 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 36
Peter is still a little.creepy and so is Marcus.





Date: 07 Mar 2023 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 35
I really want Bella to see Hope. Her being a toddler might be overwhelming to her.





Date: 07 Mar 2023 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 34
I don't think I like Peter either.





Date: 06 Mar 2023 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 32
Now Bella has to meet her kiddo. It's going to be so heart wrenching.





Date: 06 Mar 2023 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 31
I keep meaning to say I think Carlisle will like his nickname the pancake man.





Date: 06 Mar 2023 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 30
I still have a bad feeling this is going to be another road block.





Date: 06 Mar 2023 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 29
Yeah York's and his minions need to have their balls removed!





Date: 06 Mar 2023 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 28
This is where the justice system sucks!





Date: 06 Mar 2023 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 28
This is where the justice system sucks!





Date: 06 Mar 2023 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 27
Ok.I can take a breath now, Garrett gets it!





Date: 06 Mar 2023 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 26
I'm so glad Sam was not in the hospital!





Date: 06 Mar 2023 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 25
I'm so.worried she's going to see him in the hospital! Why would Harper not realize Sam would be having surgery.





Date: 06 Mar 2023 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 24
I was just thinking that. Do we even know if that was really sam? And does he escape the hospital? I'm nervous!





Date: 06 Mar 2023 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 23
Oh my gosh! I wasn't expecting this so soon!





Date: 06 Mar 2023 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 22
He's basically a serial killer and that tribal counsel needs to be shot!





Date: 06 Mar 2023 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 40
Thank you for the update..this can be real. There is no way they are married. I hope there is not a marriage license for them. No way. well done. until you post again. Bella has to get herself together to be able to speak on what this man did to her. until you post again





Date: 06 Mar 2023 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 21
I didn't even think about her not realizing she could shower.





Date: 06 Mar 2023 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 20
This guy must have cameras set up and watching from his phone.





Date: 06 Mar 2023 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh crap! Let's hope he doesn't follow him.





Date: 06 Mar 2023 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 18
There might be finger prints on the photos!





Date: 06 Mar 2023 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 17
Wow that was an extreme response from Peter!





Date: 06 Mar 2023 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 15
I wonder if the baby was still alive when he took it.





Date: 06 Mar 2023 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 14
Edward and her are so bonded.





Date: 06 Mar 2023 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 13
Sam needs.to be skinned alive.





Date: 06 Mar 2023 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 12
Again goose bumps! He might have killed that 10 year old too.





Date: 06 Mar 2023 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 11
I love this take charge Jasper!





Date: 06 Mar 2023 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 10
I was worried that was the case. So did he sell it?





Date: 06 Mar 2023 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 9
I hope rose remembers someone by that name.
Date: 06 Mar 2023 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 40
Who the hell would marry them? She is a child!!!!!!





Date: 06 Mar 2023 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 8
I wonder if she knows the mans real name? And who was the baby she held?





Date: 06 Mar 2023 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 7
I was worried she would run.





Date: 06 Mar 2023 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 6
I can't wait to see her reaction to Edward!





Date: 06 Mar 2023 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 5
The road back to real life is going to be so hard!





Date: 06 Mar 2023 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 4
I have goosebumps reading this chapter.





Date: 06 Mar 2023 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 3
Rose is going to freak when she meets her!





Date: 06 Mar 2023 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 2
Is it rose's missing sister?





Date: 05 Mar 2023 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 39
Woman. This story has me crying, but I love it. I hope Sam gets locked up and they throw away the key.
Author's Response:
If it helps, I've cried through every chapters. Your tears are mixed with my tears.
Date: 04 Mar 2023 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 39
I got up this morning hoping there would be an update in my email. I am loving this story. I am glad that she is not upset with Carlisle any more. I truly hope that Marcus can help her. I am also glad that Rosie was honest with her about getting Hope back.





Date: 04 Mar 2023 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 39
This is my first review for this story. I promise I will go back and do them all. My plan was to start at the beginning; but this is a special chapter for me.
I am a psychologist and an Art Therapist I truly believe that art heals. We work with dance, clown, paint, movement, theater, music, writing, sculpture... any art element can turn into a healing tool.
Right now I can't find the words to thank you for bringing art therapy into this story. Marcus reminds me of two of my most beloved and dreaded instructors / therapis. They could be the sweetest or the harshest, they always knew what was needed. I can't wait to read how Marcus and Bella's journey will be. For me it will be amazing, painful, joyful, heartbreaking, inspiring, moving... the list goes on...
I will keep my promise and review every single chapter. I just need sometime, RL and feelings will slow me down.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I have done a lot of research for the type of therapy for her, and I want to donit justice. So thank you for your kind Words.
Date: 27 Feb 2023 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 38
Thank you for the update..well ddone..until you post again
Date: 26 Feb 2023 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 38
Poor Carlisle. I hope he can make things right with Bella. I also hope Kate can put Sam away for life. Wish he would get the death penalty.





Date: 24 Feb 2023 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 37
Thank you for the update..this is going to be a hard road for Bella. I don't know if she will get Hope back. I hope they can work something out where Hope is in everyone's life. Bella, Angela & Ben. I guessing the Cullens also. Edward will not leave Bella. Well done. Until you post again
Date: 24 Feb 2023 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 37
Sam has put Bella through hell for 8 years. She is still suffering. I hope to goodness Sam gets tortured and gets what he deserves.
Date: 21 Feb 2023 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 36
Bella is going to need LOTS of help. My heart breaks for her.





Date: 21 Feb 2023 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 36
Thank you for the update..well done..I don't know what they're going to do but I hope it works. Marcus, Maggie I hope they can help Bella get Hope back & heal. Until you post again
Date: 19 Feb 2023 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 35
My heart breaks for ALL of them.
Date: 19 Feb 2023 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 35
I feel so bad for Bella she wants her daughter back. It's also going to crush Angela and Ben as well I can't wait to see how you take this how far you go. She's going to need lots of there before she gets her daughter back can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 12 Feb 2023 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 34
Bella needs a lot of mental help. Bless her. My heart breaks for her





Date: 12 Feb 2023 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 34
Aww thank you for the update..Bella is crushed 😣 I don't know if there was any other way to tell her. I don't know what they're going to do. How does Bella get a chance to see Hope? Until you post again..well done





Date: 10 Feb 2023 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 33
Thank you for the update..well done..I don't know what they can do either. I hope there is a way for everyone to be happy. Bella has to get better. until you post again
Date: 10 Feb 2023 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 33
Bless ALL their hearts. No one really wins in a situation like this.





Date: 07 Feb 2023 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 32
Thank you for the update..thank god they found Hope. I hope Bella gets to keep her daughter. Angela & Ben can still stay in Vanessa life but Bella needs her Hope to recover from the hell she'd been in. Until you post again!! I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm also happy Samm didn't kill the baby.
Date: 07 Feb 2023 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 32
They found HOPE!!!!!!!!
Date: 01 Feb 2023 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 31
Oh my gosh!!!!! I hate it for Ben and Angela but o hope that is Bella's baby girl.





Date: 29 Jan 2023 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 30
Thank you for the update... well done..I sure hope tha that's Hope. I can't wait until the next chapter..until you post again. BRAVO!!!
Date: 29 Jan 2023 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 30
Oh my!!!!! Is this Bella's little girl. Did Sam send the bear with the baby?
I am glad that Bella and Rose are starting to have a relationship. They need each other!!!!!!





Date: 25 Jan 2023 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 29
Thank you for the update.. Forks police Arrgg..until you post again
Date: 25 Jan 2023 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 29
I am so glad to Jasper lite into the 3 from Forks. I wonder if Jasper will talk to Sam and see if he could possibly get any information out of him. I want to know why Sam did all of what he did. He is just sick.





Date: 24 Jan 2023 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 28
Wow Thank you for the update..I think they have enough info. What if Sam killed hope how is finding her going to help, I guess DNA but Bella would be crushed. Until you post again. I can't wait. They bettere find something they can hold him on.
Date: 22 Jan 2023 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 28
I want to say WHAT THE HELL????? To Kate. But she was just stating facts. I hope someone in jail kills him.