Date: 07 Jul 2023 9:00 PM Title: Outtake Seven
Oh no, I've loved this story right from the start. I was hoping for more outtakes - Edward being able to make love to her and then them having a baby together. Both experiences really significant for Bella due to her past, I was kinda hoping to see how she would have managed these. Until next time xxx
I debated it a lot, but felt like wrting a sex scene in this story just didn't fit.
Date: 07 Jul 2023 8:08 AM Title: Outtake Seven
Poor Bella, so nervous and anxious. I loved that the important men in her life were there for her that morning, with her favorite pancakes. Fitting that her Rosie got her ready. And the ones who rescued her and fought for her walked her down the aisle. Her Uncle James who almost lost his life for her wanted to perform the ceremony. But the best part wwas Edward, standing there, calming her when she was in the closet, ready to marry her. Ready to be her forever.
Date: 07 Jul 2023 12:58 AM Title: Outtake Six
There are things in life that mark you for every. Some you learn to live with, some I guess you cannot.
Not konwign if your child is alive and how has to be one of the worst feelings in the world; so a part of me gets Bella and her fear that something like what heppend to her could happen to her little girl. HOwever, life is filled with fear and courage ang friends and love. The last two can take us almost anywhere... I wish Vanessa Hope will go so, so so far, and I guess in your heart and mind she is already on her way.
Date: 25 Jun 2023 8:40 PM Title: Outtake Three
Thanks for sharing Ben and Angela's story. I hope we get a future take on Edward and Bella having a baby/children. I would love to see how Bella handles her pregnancy when she has support and knows what is happening to her body.
Date: 11 Jun 2023 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 65
Love love love this chapter. Love how Edward proposed. I hate to see this story end. I hope you do a future take so we can see how their lives turned out. Thank you for sharing with us.
Thank you so much!!
Date: 11 Jun 2023 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 65
Loved the epilogue. Rosalie got her sister back and her HEA. Bella got her life back, her sister and the love of her life. I love the closet, it was such an important part of her healing. And now it's filled with happy things. And the proposal with her mom's ring was just perfect.
Date: 11 Jun 2023 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 65
Fanfic is being wonky with their postings today and I was determined to get my review in so I just mosied on to this site..I've loved every chapter of this fic though I learned early on to have tissues nearby. You did an awesome job with this and as I've stated before, I'm not ready for these characters to be done with their story so I'm glad you've got outtakes planned. Thanks again for sharing your tale.. Big hugs, girlie, Pam b.
Thank you so much!!
Date: 10 Jun 2023 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 64
It's finally over. Sam Uley will spend the rest of his life in prison. And the three members of the tribsl council will pay for their part in Sam's treatment of Bella. For violating young girls who deserved a normal life.
Date: 05 Jun 2023 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 63
Thank you for the update..well done. YES he is GUILTY!! I hope the rest of them that turn the other way and let him harm those little girls get in trouble also. Bella has a long road ahead of her but with her family & the Cullens help she will recover. Very good story sad but very good. Unilt you post again
Date: 04 Jun 2023 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 63
I agree Bella needed the closure of realizing that everything Sam did was wrong. She needed to see that people who do not know her, knew what had happened to her was wrong. Had Sam been killed already would have left her with the doubt that she might "he" was not as guilty as those who love her have been telling her.
I belive that living can be a bigger, tougher and better punishment than death. Sam tortured Bella for eight years, he has been on the recieving end for weeks only. How long will Sam survive in prison now... that is not as important as Bella being able to cry relieved and free like she is dong at the end of this chapter.
Thank you so very much for this story, I have no words truly to say how much you have touched me, and many other with it.
Thank you so much!
Date: 31 May 2023 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 62
Ugg! Why you making me cry? That was so sweet but made me cry right along with Bella. Thanks for a little lightheartedness before we are dropped into the drama again.
I ugly cried. This scene had been in my head for three days, while at work and i kept getting emotional!
Date: 29 May 2023 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 61
Esme and Bella have a right to be scared. If even one jury member decides he's not guilty they could declare a mistrial. And Sam Uley is angry, not only because he feels Bella betrayed him, but because all of those around her protected her. It's Bella's word against Sam's with James being the only other witness. Wonder what the jury will think.
Date: 29 May 2023 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 61
If he is found not guilty or mistrial, I want you to make sure one of the cops to shoot him for not doing their job in the first place. Why should society have to put up with him in it or in jail to pay to keep fed, clothed and sheltered for life?
Date: 24 May 2023 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 60
Sam Uley really is sick. I'm sure there were witnesses at the reservation that observed that Charlie Swan did not treat his daughter like that. Sam has developed this fantasy in his head. The man is a psycopath to think an eight year old little girl would have feelings for a grown man like that. Can't wait to see what info will come up during cross examination by Kate. The fact that he strangled his parents and set their house on fire for fun shows his mindset. That he had no regard for human life.
Date: 22 May 2023 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 60
Thank you for the update..I hope they see this is just a lie. What about the little girl he killed. I can't take Sam. I hope the jury realizes he is sick in the head. No way he should get off. I hope they find out the inmates got to him and did to him what he did to Bella.
Date: 20 May 2023 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 59
I love that she's not really scared of him anymore but isn't all of a sudden healed, that she's weary of being in public and though James was mad. Seems more realistic. I loved the convo with James and Rosie. Excited for more!
She's made great strides, but she is still a trauma victim for sure!
Date: 18 May 2023 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 58
Each day Bella gets stronger and stronger. And James testimony was very damning to Sam Uley, showing his pattern of behavior towards Bella. Sam seemed to think that Bella was his. He was obsessed with her. There's something seriously wrong with a man that was obsessed with an eight year old little girl.