[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2023 11:09 AM Title: Outtake One
Wow!!! This was such an emotional ride from start to finish. Incredible story and so completely well done! Amazing job.
Date: 07 Jul 2023 9:00 PM Title: Outtake Seven
Oh no, I've loved this story right from the start. I was hoping for more outtakes - Edward being able to make love to her and then them having a baby together. Both experiences really significant for Bella due to her past, I was kinda hoping to see how she would have managed these. Until next time xxx
Author's Response:
I debated it a lot, but felt like wrting a sex scene in this story just didn't fit.
Date: 07 Jul 2023 9:55 AM Title: Outtake Seven
Such a beautiful finish
Date: 07 Jul 2023 8:08 AM Title: Outtake Seven
Poor Bella, so nervous and anxious. I loved that the important men in her life were there for her that morning, with her favorite pancakes. Fitting that her Rosie got her ready. And the ones who rescued her and fought for her walked her down the aisle. Her Uncle James who almost lost his life for her wanted to perform the ceremony. But the best part wwas Edward, standing there, calming her when she was in the closet, ready to marry her. Ready to be her forever.
Date: 07 Jul 2023 12:58 AM Title: Outtake Six
There are things in life that mark you for every. Some you learn to live with, some I guess you cannot.
Not konwign if your child is alive and how has to be one of the worst feelings in the world; so a part of me gets Bella and her fear that something like what heppend to her could happen to her little girl. HOwever, life is filled with fear and courage ang friends and love. The last two can take us almost anywhere... I wish Vanessa Hope will go so, so so far, and I guess in your heart and mind she is already on her way.
Date: 06 Jul 2023 11:52 PM Title: Outtake Seven
Love love love!!!!!!!!! You have done an amazing job!!!!!!!!!!! I hope she can let Edward make love to her and show her how good it can be. I also hope one-day they will have their own baby.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2023 5:38 PM Title: Outtake Six
Thank you for the outtake
Date: 04 Jul 2023 12:28 PM Title: Outtake Six
So sweet how she is so attached to Bella. I love that she calls her "Momma" and Angela "Mommy."
Date: 04 Jul 2023 12:18 PM Title: Outtake Five
A that was only a taste of what was to come for Sam Uley. Or should I say, for another man to come, lol.
Date: 03 Jul 2023 11:41 PM Title: Outtake Six
These are beautiful snippets
Date: 03 Jul 2023 11:06 PM Title: Outtake Six
oh wow. this was a great epilogue. i love seeing how the relationship with bella and vanessa started to grow. i think bella handled that wonderfully. excited for the next one.
Date: 03 Jul 2023 6:26 PM Title: Outtake Six
Such a sweet moment.
Date: 02 Jul 2023 5:12 AM Title: Outtake Five
Karma tipping the scales of justice
Date: 01 Jul 2023 10:58 PM Title: Outtake Five
His life if over!!!!! I do not feel sorry for what is happening to Sam or any other child abuser.
Date: 28 Jun 2023 12:26 AM Title: Outtake Four
Nice to see this side of James. He's a really good guy who was looking out for his girls and afraid they wouldn't accept the person he is. Words of wisdom from Bella.
Date: 27 Jun 2023 1:34 AM Title: Outtake Four
This was beautiful!
Date: 27 Jun 2023 12:52 AM Title: Outtake Four
I love that it was Bella who encouraged James to be himself with Laurent
Date: 27 Jun 2023 12:24 AM Title: Outtake Four
This was so damn sweet..Thanks for the outtake. (FF wouldn't let me review..)
Date: 27 Jun 2023 12:04 AM Title: Outtake Four
Everyone is starting new
Date: 25 Jun 2023 8:40 PM Title: Outtake Three
Thanks for sharing Ben and Angela's story. I hope we get a future take on Edward and Bella having a baby/children. I would love to see how Bella handles her pregnancy when she has support and knows what is happening to her body.
Date: 25 Jun 2023 7:41 PM Title: Outtake Three
What a beautiful perspective of her arrival and crossing paths with Carlisle.
Date: 25 Jun 2023 7:14 AM Title: Outtake Three
So this is how they came to meet Vanessa. She was never cleaned after she was born. Oh, how she would become the center of so many people's lives.
Date: 23 Jun 2023 7:47 AM Title: Outttake Two
Oh this one had me ugly crying, pissed off and laughing
Brava my friend!!
Author's Response:
I think this is my favorire of all my fics so far. Completed at least.
Date: 20 Jun 2023 2:05 PM Title: Outttake Two
Elizabeth loved her boys
Date: 20 Jun 2023 12:15 PM Title: Outttake Two
Family time when the family was all together. How sweet and sentimental.
Date: 20 Jun 2023 2:40 AM Title: Outttake Two
Beautiful family memories
Date: 18 Jun 2023 2:17 AM Title: Outtake One
Love reading about them being a happy family.
Date: 11 Jun 2023 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 65
Awww... Totally loved this chapter it has came full circle with the closet. Cannot wait to see where you take it next with their future x
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 11 Jun 2023 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 65
Love love love this chapter. Love how Edward proposed. I hate to see this story end. I hope you do a future take so we can see how their lives turned out. Thank you for sharing with us.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!!
Date: 11 Jun 2023 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 65
Love love love this chapter. Love how Edward proposed. I hate to see this story end. I hope you do a future take so we can see how their lives turned out. Thank you for sharing with us.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2023 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 65
:) loved this story
Date: 11 Jun 2023 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 65
Loved the epilogue. Rosalie got her sister back and her HEA. Bella got her life back, her sister and the love of her life. I love the closet, it was such an important part of her healing. And now it's filled with happy things. And the proposal with her mom's ring was just perfect.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 11 Jun 2023 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 65
Oh that was so touching. I'm so proud of how far that they all have grown.
Author's Response:
Thank you!! They've all grown so much.
Date: 11 Jun 2023 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 65
Fanfic is being wonky with their postings today and I was determined to get my review in so I just mosied on to this site..I've loved every chapter of this fic though I learned early on to have tissues nearby. You did an awesome job with this and as I've stated before, I'm not ready for these characters to be done with their story so I'm glad you've got outtakes planned. Thanks again for sharing your tale.. Big hugs, girlie, Pam b.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!!
Date: 10 Jun 2023 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 65
Oh what a beautiful epilogue! Such a good ending for her story. Excited for the outtakes.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!!
Date: 10 Jun 2023 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 64
Beautiful conclusion to the journey
Date: 10 Jun 2023 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 64
It's finally over. Sam Uley will spend the rest of his life in prison. And the three members of the tribsl council will pay for their part in Sam's treatment of Bella. For violating young girls who deserved a normal life.
Date: 10 Jun 2023 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 64
I had truly enjoyed reading this story. I look forward to your updates. I am sad to see it ending. I can't wait to see where you take their future.
Date: 10 Jun 2023 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 64
A beautiful ending. Excited for the epilogues and outtakes.
Date: 06 Jun 2023 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 63
Finally. Sam Uley got the verdict he deserved. Why he seemed surprised and shocked astonishes me. Something wrong in that man's head that he thinks what he did was okay because he loved those girls.
Date: 05 Jun 2023 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 62
Awwww makes me cry. How sweet of Edward to set up a movie night where she would be comfortable. And showing her videos of her family, letting her see how much thery loved her.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2023 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 63
Thank you for the update..well done. YES he is GUILTY!! I hope the rest of them that turn the other way and let him harm those little girls get in trouble also. Bella has a long road ahead of her but with her family & the Cullens help she will recover. Very good story sad but very good. Unilt you post again
Date: 05 Jun 2023 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 63
I love how much support Bella has around her. It's beautiful to see.
Author's Response:
She definitely needs it!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2023 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 63
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks
Date: 04 Jun 2023 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 63
GUILTY!!!!!!! Yes, Sam will get his in jail . He will suffer. He needs to be raped everyday while he is in jail.
Date: 04 Jun 2023 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 63
Im so glad Angela, Ben, Vanessa, and Felix went to Bella and everything that was said. Im glad she got her justice. Excited for more!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2023 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 63
I agree Bella needed the closure of realizing that everything Sam did was wrong. She needed to see that people who do not know her, knew what had happened to her was wrong. Had Sam been killed already would have left her with the doubt that she might "he" was not as guilty as those who love her have been telling her.
I belive that living can be a bigger, tougher and better punishment than death. Sam tortured Bella for eight years, he has been on the recieving end for weeks only. How long will Sam survive in prison now... that is not as important as Bella being able to cry relieved and free like she is dong at the end of this chapter.
Thank you so very much for this story, I have no words truly to say how much you have touched me, and many other with it.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2023 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 62
Thank you for the update..well done. I really appreciated this chapter especially after their last court appearance. I sure hope they convict his sorry ass. until you post again
Date: 01 Jun 2023 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 62
Beautiful chapter, my heart is full. What a wonderful date.
Date: 01 Jun 2023 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 62
Wow so cute! I loved the bit with Carlisle. Excited for more.
Date: 01 Jun 2023 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 62
Love love love this chapter
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2023 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 62
Ugg! Why you making me cry? That was so sweet but made me cry right along with Bella. Thanks for a little lightheartedness before we are dropped into the drama again.
Maria
Author's Response:
I ugly cried. This scene had been in my head for three days, while at work and i kept getting emotional!
Date: 29 May 2023 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 61
Esme and Bella have a right to be scared. If even one jury member decides he's not guilty they could declare a mistrial. And Sam Uley is angry, not only because he feels Bella betrayed him, but because all of those around her protected her. It's Bella's word against Sam's with James being the only other witness. Wonder what the jury will think.
Date: 29 May 2023 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 61
If he is found not guilty or mistrial, I want you to make sure one of the cops to shoot him for not doing their job in the first place. Why should society have to put up with him in it or in jail to pay to keep fed, clothed and sheltered for life?
Date: 29 May 2023 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 61
I'd be nervous too, if I was in Esme or Bella's position.
Date: 29 May 2023 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 61
I'd be nervous too, if I was in Esme or Bella's position.
Date: 28 May 2023 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 61
I don't blame Esme for being worried.
Date: 24 May 2023 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 60
Sam Uley really is sick. I'm sure there were witnesses at the reservation that observed that Charlie Swan did not treat his daughter like that. Sam has developed this fantasy in his head. The man is a psycopath to think an eight year old little girl would have feelings for a grown man like that. Can't wait to see what info will come up during cross examination by Kate. The fact that he strangled his parents and set their house on fire for fun shows his mindset. That he had no regard for human life.
[Report This]Date: 22 May 2023 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 60
I hope nobody falls for his delusional lies
[Report This]Date: 22 May 2023 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 60
Thank you for the update..I hope they see this is just a lie. What about the little girl he killed. I can't take Sam. I hope the jury realizes he is sick in the head. No way he should get off. I hope they find out the inmates got to him and did to him what he did to Bella.
Date: 22 May 2023 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 60
Whew, it's frightening the reality he has convinced himself of. I can't even imagine how much this hurt Bella and James to hear Sam's delusional twist on what really occurred. Great chapter.
Date: 22 May 2023 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 60
Oh jeez, poor Bella and Rosalie and James but mostly Bella. I can't imagine having to sit through that. Excited for more.
Date: 21 May 2023 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 60
OH MY GOSH!!!!!! He just lied and lied. He has got to get life in prison or die. He will never leave her alone.
Date: 20 May 2023 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
I got a notice that you responded to my review, but I don't see anything. Am I missing something?
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2023 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 59
Thank you for the update..well done..Bella is really healing I'm so proud of her..until you post again
Date: 20 May 2023 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 59
Tough time for everyone!
Author's Response:
Date: 20 May 2023 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 59
Awww Bella makes James feel strong.
Author's Response:
Date: 20 May 2023 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 59
Here is Wishing James happiness too
Date: 20 May 2023 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 59
I love that she's not really scared of him anymore but isn't all of a sudden healed, that she's weary of being in public and though James was mad. Seems more realistic. I loved the convo with James and Rosie. Excited for more!
Author's Response:
She's made great strides, but she is still a trauma victim for sure!
Date: 20 May 2023 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 59
I want to know what Sam and Eleazar were arguing about. I love that he is beat up more and more everyday.
Author's Response:
We might find out.
Date: 18 May 2023 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 58
Each day Bella gets stronger and stronger. And James testimony was very damning to Sam Uley, showing his pattern of behavior towards Bella. Sam seemed to think that Bella was his. He was obsessed with her. There's something seriously wrong with a man that was obsessed with an eight year old little girl.
Date: 18 May 2023 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 58
Extremely proud of Bella
Date: 18 May 2023 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 58
Extremely proud of Bella
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2023 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 58
Thank you for the update..well done. I'm so proud of Bella. Uncle James put up quite a fight. Until you post again BRAVO!!
Date: 18 May 2023 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 58
I'm so glad she has so many people to support her.
Date: 18 May 2023 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 58
This was such a powerful chapter! Excited for more.
Date: 15 May 2023 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 57
Bella was so strong for standing up for herself and refuting Mr. Santiago's claims. And she showed her strength when she refused to let the bailiff shield her from Sam and just walked by him to her seat.
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2023 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 57
Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again..So proud fo Bella!!!
Date: 15 May 2023 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 57
Such a strong young lady. Bella deserves happiness and to never have to deal with bully lawyers or Sam ever again.
Date: 15 May 2023 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 57
Loved that she stood up and screamed what she did. She is taking back her life.
Date: 14 May 2023 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 57
Thank you for the update and well done Bella for speaking out and being so strong, until next time x
Date: 14 May 2023 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 57
Oh wow incredible! The very end, the realization she made and Edward saw, was so powerful! Excited for more.
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2023 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 55
Thank you for the update..enjoy your family. Bella has been through a lot. I'm happy she is strong enough to say what has happened to her & the other girl. Well done
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2023 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 56
Thank you for the update..well done. That was ruff but I'm so proud of Bella. Until you post again
Date: 08 May 2023 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 56
Bella was so strong as she told her story.