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Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2023 5:20 PM Title: Epilogue

Thank you for a lovely story.  I really enjoyed it

Reviewer: kareng Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2023 3:48 PM Title: Epilogue

Your story was different, meanining with a mean Alice, Carlisle and Emmet and a nice Rose!  But I loved it.  Though it ended, It seems you left possible window open?...  I'm a hopelss HEA romantic person.  Would love to see Alice's come uppance and eventually her apologies.

Hoping this story got you out of your "funk" and may 2023 be alot less "funky".

 

Thank you for all of your stories.  

 

From a person who can't write but loves to read the written word.  

 

kareng

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2023 2:43 AM Title: Epilogue

Awe...    Sweet ending....    Most everyone has learned valuable lessons and changed for the better.   :)    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2023 11:52 PM Title: Epilogue

:) loved this 

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Date: 06 Jan 2023 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 20

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2023 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 20

I'm so happy and relieved that they are together and safe.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2023 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 19

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2023 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 19

I'm so relieved that Edward found Bella.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2023 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 18

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2023 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 18

Edward is on a whirlwind chase looking for Bella/    I'm happy that he found out where Bella went, but I'm kind of upset that Ms. Cope told a relative stranger where Bella went.    Hmmmm.....

Thanks for writing and sharing.   :)

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2023 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 17

I'm glad that Edward is going after Bella.   And there might be hope for Emmett yet.   We'll see.....    

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2023 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 17

:) 

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Date: 02 Jan 2023 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 16

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2023 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 16

It looks like there are several wake up calls that happened after Bella left.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2023 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 15

Oh Bella....   I wish you didn't run from Edward.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2023 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 15

Poor Bella 

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Date: 01 Jan 2023 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 14

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2023 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 14

Yeah, Esme is about to lose her shit on Carlisle.   And he would deserve it.   

Rose has had it with Emmett and Jasper might be having second thoughts about Alice.

I'm worried about Bella and now Edward too.    

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2022 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 13

What the hell is wrong with those three assholes?    Ugh....    It feels like Rose is getting ready to leave Emmett.    But Esme is still trying with Carlisle.     But why is Jasper marrying the brat?    Hmmm....     Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2022 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 13

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2022 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 12

Bella and Edward are having a lot of brats to deal with.   Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2022 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 12

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2022 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 11

Rose is good people much like Jasper.     Maybe they can work on the "rude" siblings so that they don't turn into Carlisle.    Poor Esme though....     Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2022 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 11

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2022 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 10

Awe....     Great chapter...    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2022 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 10

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2022 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 9

At least Esme and Jasper were polite, friendly and welcoming to Edward and Bella.   It's a toss up to who was more rude...Alice or Dad....     Hmmm.....

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2022 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 9

:) 

Reviewer: Cullenbabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2022 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 8

Good 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2022 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 7

What a horrible life altering event Bella just described....   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2022 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 7

Poor Bella 

Reviewer: InspireRae Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2022 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 7

There is nothing like being in the arms of your love.
That feeling of comfort, love, and safety.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2022 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 6

Edward is ready to 'leap' and already wanting more with Bella.   Bella is a little slower, but feeling safe with him is a big deal to her.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2022 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 5

Bella and Edward are both finding characteristics and things they need in each other.   Hmmm....    I wonder who will realize that first.     Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2022 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 6

:) 

Reviewer: S J C Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2022 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 6

Loving this story, thank you for writing and updating.  Cannot wait to read more x

Reviewer: S J C Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2022 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 6

Loving this story, thank you for writing and updating.  Cannot wait to read more x

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2022 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 5

:) 

Reviewer: InspireRae Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2022 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 5

Cuddles are the best! Especially after amazing sex.  LOL

Reviewer: kareng Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2022 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 4

If you celebrate.... have a joyous holiday(s).  Hope this helps ger you out of your funk.  

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2022 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 4

Edward and Bella natch with their blunt honesty and sexiness.   ;)    Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2022 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 4

:) 

Reviewer: InspireRae Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2022 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 4

Gotta love an Ass man!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2022 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 3

They both are getting along very very well.   ;)

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2022 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 3

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2022 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 2

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2022 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

Looking forward to more 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2022 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 2

No passes allowed will make this little question and answer session very interesting.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2022 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 2

Can't wait to read more soon,  Bella's a hoot! Hot Doc sounds mighty fine too. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2022 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

Bella is taking care of Edward from the get go.   :)    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2022 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like it. Can’t wait to read more

Reviewer: randomly_mad Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2022 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 1

Looks Good. Seems like this Bella is confident in herself.

Glad Lauren is not a hag lol.

Good to see you back

Reviewer: InspireRae Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2022 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love it!
Hot Doc what a great saying.
Fearless Bella

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