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Reviewer: ChristianMom54 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2023 6:35 AM Title: Epilogue

Love your writing skills. Thank you once again for sharing your talents with us.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2023 4:05 PM Title: Epilogue

Thank you for a lovely story!! I'm happy all is well. Edward came home Esme & Rosalie are doing fine now I hope. Edward & Bella are getting married. Jasper & Emmett are still by his side.  Great story.  Well done. I so enjoyed it.  Thank you. I look forward to sequel

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2023 4:04 AM Title: Epilogue

Happy 13the Writing Anniversary!!! Chicky, you nailed this fic to the f*ucking wall. Chapter after chapter you kept me dying to know more. I hated Shaw as much as Bella and wanted her to get her revenge. I despised Ciaus to hell and back and couldn't wait for him to get his. My heart ached for young Edwwrd for the trauma he endured; as welll as the self-blame he inflicted on himself. Don't ever let anyone tell you you can't write mob stories because you wrote a hellava story. I'd love to read a sequel someday. Loved this epi.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2023 2:59 AM Title: Epilogue

So freaking awesome, yet sad to see their journey come to a close. Thanks for sharing it with us 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2023 11:39 PM Title: Epilogue

:)    This was a great story.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2023 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 29

Shaw got what he deserved, and Bella got her revenge. E/B are made for each other.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2023 9:28 PM Title: Epilogue

:) loved this story.  I hope there will be a sequel 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2023 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 29

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2023 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 29

Edward and Bella are just so.....good together.    :)      Everyone seems to be finding their groove.     Thanks for writing and sharing

 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2023 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 28

I love that Edward and family have restored the council structure. Props to Nella for getting vindication from James. 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2023 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 28

I freaking love how badass Bella was being with James after Edward got him all riled up.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2023 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 28

I'm happy to read that you have Edward setting into things       Jasper and Emmett are too.      Bella hopefully will be at peace after she deals with Shaw.     Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2023 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 28

:) 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2023 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 27

Overwhelming is saying it lightly. I couldn't imagine the feelings running through Edward at the moment. He does have one hellava inner circle. He'll do just fine getting into the groove.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2023 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 27

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2023 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 27

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2023 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 26

Good for Rosalie, she deserved to feel the vindication of caius death 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2023 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 26

Thank you for thr update..well done.  Go Rosalie!!!. I can't wait to see what happens next.  Until you post again

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2023 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 26

I hope Bella & Edward get that piece of shit that raped her.Great writing wonderful chapter !

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2023 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 26

:) 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2023 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 26

You're right. Rose deserved to have her moment, but wouldn't it be glorious if Caius has two gunshots; one from Rose and one from Edward's gun. Either way, it's about time the dirtbag got what was coming to him. I'm anxious to see how Edward handles everything as boss. 

 

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2023 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 25

Oh man, my stomach is in knots. Uncle Ciaus is a dead man. Hopefully. Edward better pull himself together and regain control of this situation quickly.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2023 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 25

Holy cliffhanger! 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2023 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 25

!!!!!   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2023 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 25

OMG !! Not nice Lol.  Can't Wait Till Wednesday .

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2023 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 25

:) 

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2023 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 24

Love Love your story can't for more .

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2023 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 24

Thank you for the update..well done..I can't wait to see what happens next.  until you post again

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2023 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 24

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2023 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 24

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2023 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 24

This is getting so exciting. I'm glad that Bella is giving Rose some hope for a better future 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2023 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 24

I'm so geared up for the next few chapters. I want Caius to lose his cool and admit his roll in Carlisle's death and that he knew Edward ran away. 

 

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2023 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 23

Esme's reunion with her son got me a little choked up. I'm so ready for hell to break loose, but I have a feeling things aren't going to go down as smoothly as they hope and plan for it to happen.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2023 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 23

Esme just found another reason to be strong.   :)    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2023 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 23

Thank you for the update.,well done. I'm happy Esme got to see her son. Until you post again

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2023 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 23

That's a beautiful chapter and reunion.  Definitely Kleenex level stuff. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2023 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 23

:) 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2023 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 23

Thank you for the update.  well done.  I can't wait to see what happens next.  I hope esme gets to see her son soon. I hope the reunion is a good one.  until you post again

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2023 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 23

"Caius Cullen is a dead man walking." I can't tell you how excited I am to read those words. You have me sitting on the edge of my seat, awaiting for more. Thank you for an awesome chapter.

 

Sherry 

 

 

Reviewer: crazykatwp Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2023 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 23

Go get him Edward!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2023 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 23

:) 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2023 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 21

Thank you for the update..well done.. until you post again.  I can't wait to see what happens.  I hope Edward can see his Mom today also.

Reviewer: crazykatwp Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2023 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 21

Omg!  I hope they are ready!  Can't wait for more

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2023 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 21

I'm sitting on the edge of my seat. I'm dying for Charlie'a reaction when he sees Edward after so many years. Edward is going to be bambarded with quesitons. When Edward does get face-off with Csius, I hope he slips up and says something about he's the one put the hit on Carlisle and he'd killed Edward too if he hadn't ran off. I'm spazzing for the next chapter.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: born joyfull Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2023 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 21

I literally said NOoOo... you stopped it there!!! Luckily today is the Lords day and I can say nothing, but tomorrow I've got a bone to pick with you ­čść jokes

Till next chapter 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2023 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 21

:) 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2023 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 20

Thank you for the update..well done.. I'm happy they had a talk, I'm sure if they survive bring Caius down they will be together like their Parents wanted.  until you post again

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2023 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 20

I can't wait for Esme, Renee and Charlie to find out Bella found Edward and he's coming home.

 

Sherrh

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2023 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 20

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2023 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 19

I feel for poor Rose.   Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2023 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 19

Thank you for the update..well done. I can't wait for the next chapter. Esme needs to see her son.  I can't wait for Caius to get his comeuppenced.  until you post again

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2023 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 19

Rosalie is in a dark space. It's good she has Esme, even though she's struggling too. Things with the plan needs to come together quickly or Rose will not make it.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2023 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 18

Time for Edward to get down to business since he's going back to face Caius. I don't blame Rose one bit for wanting to abort a pregnancy due to rape. I think that would be a common response for anyone in her situation. Time's ticking, and I'm excited for a showdown.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2023 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 19

Poor Rosalie 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2023 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 18

I feel so terrible for everyone but nasty cruel Caius.    Ugh...     He is just awful.     Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2023 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 18

I feel so terrible for everyone but nasty cruel Caius.    Ugh...     He is just awful.     Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2023 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 18

Thank you for the update..well done.. I can't wait for the next chapter. until you post again

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2023 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 18

:) 

Reviewer: crazykatwp Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2023 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 17

Edward needs to kick some ass

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2023 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 17

It's time Edward gets over his fear and channels it to take down Caius. Bella had good instincts of starting small and working Em and Jasper up to the more deadly arsenal.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2023 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 17

Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2023 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 17

Edward has a lot of buried trauma to deal with.    Bella seemed to help him sleep after his nightmare.      Jasper and Emmett definitely over stepped with Edward telling him not to have sex with Bella.    Ugh....

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2023 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 17

:) 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2023 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 16

Caius is the worst; he does need taken down/dethroned. I can barely wait for Caius to realize Edwrard is still alive.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2023 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 16

:) 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2023 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 15

What a ride. I hope time flies a little bit and Caius eats his own dick before too long.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2023 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 14

Both of them has been hit with a tidal wave of emotions. A lot to process for both of them. Hopefully Jasper and Emmett can help make a plan to get Edward back on the throne.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2023 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 13

Edward just had a happy birthday.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2023 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 15

Thank you for the update.,well done..Bella has Edward  and will train him & his brtotherrs...until you post again

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2023 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 15

Thank you for the update.,well done..Bella has Edward  and will train him & his brtotherrs...until you post again

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2023 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 15

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2023 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 14

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2023 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 13

ooh my  Go bella taking charge.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2023 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 12

Glad Bella is such a bad ass in her own right.  Wonder if B will be able to keep the secret of his being alive and well.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2023 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 11

Glad Bells has held on.  Poor Rose.  Glad when Caius and his group of nasites are taken out.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2023 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 10

Poor Bella.  Caius needs to die horribly and painfully.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2023 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 9

Aww for the beach day. Lucy sounds like a total skank. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2023 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 8

Glad Em and jazz are there to help him.   Also that Charlie will be carefully watching Caius.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2023 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 7

Heavy indeed.  Poor Edward.  Mind must be going crazy.  Guess Caius was far enough for E to not hear him.  Glad Charlie and Renee don't trust caius' account 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2023 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 6

Ack poor Edward.  That's going to leave a scar.  But I thought both parents died.... Or is that next.   Ack

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2023 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 5

Glad kids understand they screwed up royally. Martial arts are great idea. 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2023 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 13

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2023 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 13

:) 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2023 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 13

Thank you for the update..well done..I can't wait to see how it all unfolds...Will they be able to tell Esme & Charlie that Edward is alive?  I hope so, maybe not right away.  Until you post again

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2023 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 12

:) 

Reviewer: PandaBri Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2023 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 12

Ugh can't wait for Wednesday! Loving this story more and more...

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2023 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 12

Holy Hell!!! I'm excited!!! Is it Wednesday yet? i couldn't help but get a little emotional myself while reading this chapter. I really hope they talk long enough to surmise Caius was behind Carlisle's murder. Did I mention I'm excited!? I can't wait for more.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2023 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 12

Thank you so much for the update..well done..I can't wait to see what happens  next..until you post again

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2023 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 11

You just made me giddy to the point of chills running up my arms. Yes!! It's on like Donkey Kong.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2023 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 11

:) 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2023 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 10

I thought I couldn't dislike Caius's character anymore, until this chapter. I want to kill him myself. I can't wait for Edward's return.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2023 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 10

Poor Bella 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2023 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 9

Keep writing,when will he Bella again?

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2023 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 9

Keep writing,when will he Bella again?

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2023 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 9

Keep writing,when will he Bella again?

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2023 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 9

Thank you for the update..well done..I can't wait to see what happens next.  Until you post again

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2023 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 9

I'm grateful for the time jump. The beach scene got to me a wee bit. I keep holding out hope Edward will open up to Jasper and Emmett about what happened and who he truly is. I think the pseudo brothers would make some awesome guards for the prince. I think Edward was imgining Lucy as Bella and that's why he put up with her so long. Lucy definitely wasn't any good for him. I'm dying for more.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2023 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 9

:) 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2023 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 8

Thank you for the update..well done..unil you post again

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2023 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 8

I kinda thought Edward would end up with Emmett and Jasper, but when you interduced them in this chapter and their eating habits I cracked up. I couldn't help but imagine Timon & Pumbaa. Will you be time jumping a little here and a little there to get us up to Edward's return? I'm kinda holding out for Bella to accidentally running into Edward when they a little older.

 

Sherry

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