Date: 12 Apr 2023 4:05 PM Title: Epilogue
Thank you for a lovely story!! I'm happy all is well. Edward came home Esme & Rosalie are doing fine now I hope. Edward & Bella are getting married. Jasper & Emmett are still by his side. Great story. Well done. I so enjoyed it. Thank you. I look forward to sequel
Date: 11 Apr 2023 4:04 AM Title: Epilogue
Happy 13the Writing Anniversary!!! Chicky, you nailed this fic to the f*ucking wall. Chapter after chapter you kept me dying to know more. I hated Shaw as much as Bella and wanted her to get her revenge. I despised Ciaus to hell and back and couldn't wait for him to get his. My heart ached for young Edwwrd for the trauma he endured; as welll as the self-blame he inflicted on himself. Don't ever let anyone tell you you can't write mob stories because you wrote a hellava story. I'd love to read a sequel someday. Loved this epi.
Date: 29 Mar 2023 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 26
You're right. Rose deserved to have her moment, but wouldn't it be glorious if Caius has two gunshots; one from Rose and one from Edward's gun. Either way, it's about time the dirtbag got what was coming to him. I'm anxious to see how Edward handles everything as boss.
Date: 13 Mar 2023 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 21
I'm sitting on the edge of my seat. I'm dying for Charlie'a reaction when he sees Edward after so many years. Edward is going to be bambarded with quesitons. When Edward does get face-off with Csius, I hope he slips up and says something about he's the one put the hit on Carlisle and he'd killed Edward too if he hadn't ran off. I'm spazzing for the next chapter.
Date: 06 Mar 2023 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 18
Time for Edward to get down to business since he's going back to face Caius. I don't blame Rose one bit for wanting to abort a pregnancy due to rape. I think that would be a common response for anyone in her situation. Time's ticking, and I'm excited for a showdown.
Date: 26 Feb 2023 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 17
Edward has a lot of buried trauma to deal with. Bella seemed to help him sleep after his nightmare. Jasper and Emmett definitely over stepped with Edward telling him not to have sex with Bella. Ugh....
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 13 Feb 2023 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 12
Holy Hell!!! I'm excited!!! Is it Wednesday yet? i couldn't help but get a little emotional myself while reading this chapter. I really hope they talk long enough to surmise Caius was behind Carlisle's murder. Did I mention I'm excited!? I can't wait for more.
Date: 02 Feb 2023 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 9
I'm grateful for the time jump. The beach scene got to me a wee bit. I keep holding out hope Edward will open up to Jasper and Emmett about what happened and who he truly is. I think the pseudo brothers would make some awesome guards for the prince. I think Edward was imgining Lucy as Bella and that's why he put up with her so long. Lucy definitely wasn't any good for him. I'm dying for more.
Date: 30 Jan 2023 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 8
I kinda thought Edward would end up with Emmett and Jasper, but when you interduced them in this chapter and their eating habits I cracked up. I couldn't help but imagine Timon & Pumbaa. Will you be time jumping a little here and a little there to get us up to Edward's return? I'm kinda holding out for Bella to accidentally running into Edward when they a little older.