Date: 02 Feb 2023 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 9
I'm grateful for the time jump. The beach scene got to me a wee bit. I keep holding out hope Edward will open up to Jasper and Emmett about what happened and who he truly is. I think the pseudo brothers would make some awesome guards for the prince. I think Edward was imgining Lucy as Bella and that's why he put up with her so long. Lucy definitely wasn't any good for him. I'm dying for more.
Date: 30 Jan 2023 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 8
I kinda thought Edward would end up with Emmett and Jasper, but when you interduced them in this chapter and their eating habits I cracked up. I couldn't help but imagine Timon & Pumbaa. Will you be time jumping a little here and a little there to get us up to Edward's return? I'm kinda holding out for Bella to accidentally running into Edward when they a little older.
Date: 27 Jan 2023 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 7
Oh man, you weren't kidding when you issued a tissue warning. Such a heartbreaking chapter. So glad Charile and Renee know something is up with Caius.
"And the award for Best Actor goes to Caius Cullen for his performance of the bereaved brother."
Date: 18 Jan 2023 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 5
First thing I would've asked is how the kids knew about the scrapyard. IDK if Edward would've given up his uncle since he promised he wouldn't. E/B are learning a hard lesson. You're right, this slow burn is killing my feels. I'm dying for more.
Date: 08 Jan 2023 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 2
Is it Wednesday yet? Man, I just wanna junk punch Caius. What a total dick he is. I really can't wait until he gets what's coming to him. I'm curious as to what will become of Esme and the baby once Carlisle is killed. I can't get updates quick enough.
See you Sunday.
Date: 05 Jan 2023 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
Another great chapter. I half expected Carlisle to be ambushed at the cabin with Edward. I'm so glad you've decided on an update schedule; I'm already looking forward to Sunday. I loved how anxious Edward is to learn how to use a gun and about how to 'rule' things as it were. His curiosity will probably get him into trouble sometime soon.
Date: 02 Jan 2023 2:21 AM Title: Prologue
I'm so enthralled with this first chapter. I'm ready for the next one. Carlisle is going to have to deal with Caius before Caius gets the upperhand on him. Too bad Carlisle will put it off until it's too late. I want more because I'm a greedy bitch.