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Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2023 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 10

I thought I couldn't dislike Caius's character anymore, until this chapter. I want to kill him myself. I can't wait for Edward's return.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2023 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 10

Poor Bella 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2023 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 9

Keep writing,when will he Bella again?

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2023 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 9

Keep writing,when will he Bella again?

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2023 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 9

Keep writing,when will he Bella again?

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2023 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 9

Thank you for the update..well done..I can't wait to see what happens next.  Until you post again

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2023 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 9

I'm grateful for the time jump. The beach scene got to me a wee bit. I keep holding out hope Edward will open up to Jasper and Emmett about what happened and who he truly is. I think the pseudo brothers would make some awesome guards for the prince. I think Edward was imgining Lucy as Bella and that's why he put up with her so long. Lucy definitely wasn't any good for him. I'm dying for more.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2023 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 9

:) 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2023 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 8

Thank you for the update..well done..unil you post again

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2023 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 8

I kinda thought Edward would end up with Emmett and Jasper, but when you interduced them in this chapter and their eating habits I cracked up. I couldn't help but imagine Timon & Pumbaa. Will you be time jumping a little here and a little there to get us up to Edward's return? I'm kinda holding out for Bella to accidentally running into Edward when they a little older.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2023 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 8

:) 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2023 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 7

Oh man, you weren't kidding when you issued a tissue warning. Such a heartbreaking chapter. So glad Charile and Renee know something is up with Caius.

"And the award for Best Actor goes to Caius Cullen for his performance of the bereaved brother."

 

Sherry

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2023 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 7

Thank you for the update..well done..Cauis can not get away with this.  I can't wait to see what happens next. until you post again

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2023 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 7

Poor Edward 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2023 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 6

Thank you for the update..well done..sorry Edward had to see his father shot & killed.  maybe if he wouldn't have called his father's name Carlisle could have focused on his suroundings.. so sad until you post again

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2023 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 6

horrifying.....   poor Edward and poor Carlisle....    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2023 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 6

Can I fastforward to Wednesday? What a horrible incident for a child to witness. But I'm ready for Edward to toughen up and learn to harness his need for revenge.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2023 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 6

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2023 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 5

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2023 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 5

Thank you for thr update..well done..I hope they find out before it's to late. Renee is going to train Bella, I hope Carlisle trains Edward now also.  Can't wait to see what happens next.  Until you post again

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2023 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 5

:) 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2023 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 5

First thing I would've asked is how the kids knew about the scrapyard. IDK if Edward would've given up his uncle since he promised he wouldn't. E/B are learning a hard lesson. You're right, this slow burn is killing my feels. I'm dying for more.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2023 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 5

Good story.. keep it coming.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2023 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 4

Thank you for the update..well done..I wanted Carlise to realize it was his brother.  until you post again

Reviewer: Rubikens1002 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2023 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 4

The slow build up is making me anxious :) can't wait for weds!

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2023 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 4

Things could've gone so much worse. I thought Felix was going to give up Caius' name for a second, but that would've been way too easy.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2023 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 4

Edward and Bella got a dam bad scaring in the yard.    Little Edward thought on his feet pretty well though.     Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2023 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 4

hmmm wonder how they found the kids.  Should have taken those two out.  Bet it will come back to bite them later :-(.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2023 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 4

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2023 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 2

ugh Really not liking Caius at all.  Esme and Renee are smart to be watching him.  Kids really can be trouble.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2023 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 3

ugh such naughty kids.  Ugh Caius is making me shudder and I'm just reading.  Eeek

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2023 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 3

Kids can be sneaky little buggers.    Thanks for writing and sharing.     

(((Hugs))) to your mom to get better soon. 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2023 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 3

Yikes!!!

 

Sherry

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2023 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 3

Thank you for updating. You be there for your mum and I wish her a speedy recovery 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2023 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 3

Thank you for updating. You be there for your mum and I wish her a speedy recovery 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2023 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 2

Caius is all kinds of wrong.    Bella and Edward are cute little friends though.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2023 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

Carlisle is trying to teach Edward in an age appropriate way.   It's kind of sweet.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2023 7:52 AM Title: Prologue

He seems to be an obvious jealous hot head.    hmmm....     Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2023 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 2

Is it Wednesday yet? Man, I just wanna junk punch Caius. What a total dick he is. I really can't wait until he gets what's coming to him. I'm curious as to what will become of Esme and the baby once Carlisle is killed. I can't get updates quick enough.

 

See you Sunday.

Sherry

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2023 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 2

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2023 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

Sadly e is going to have to grow up too fast soon. Aww for B being his best friend. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2023 9:02 PM Title: Prologue

Great start. Can't wait to see where you take it

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2023 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 1

Another great chapter. I half expected Carlisle to be ambushed at the cabin with Edward. I'm so glad you've decided on an update schedule; I'm already looking forward to Sunday. I loved how anxious Edward is to learn how to use a gun and about how to 'rule' things as it were. His curiosity will probably get him into trouble sometime soon.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2023 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 1

yikes

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2023 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

:) 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2023 2:21 AM Title: Prologue

I'm so enthralled with this first chapter. I'm ready for the next one. Carlisle is going to have to deal with Caius before Caius gets the upperhand on him. Too bad Carlisle will put it off until it's too late. I want more because I'm a greedy bitch.

Sherry

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2023 9:48 PM Title: Prologue

:) Looking forward to more.  Happy New Year to you 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2023 8:02 PM Title: Prologue

Carlisle benevolence will be his undoing.

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