[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2023 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 11
Thanks for sharing this story with us.
Sherry
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading this story Sherry. β€οΈ
Date: 08 Aug 2023 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 10
Jessica is over-the-top. She needs reigned in,
Sherry
Date: 08 Aug 2023 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 9
Yeah, he should've listened to Bella and stayed put. Jessica has something up her sleeve.
Sherry
Date: 08 Aug 2023 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 8
Duh, Duh, Duh.... and the plot thickens.
Sherry
Date: 08 Aug 2023 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 7
Another miscarriage?
Sherry
Date: 07 Aug 2023 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 6
Is Carlisle going to ba a douche?
Sherry
Author's Response:
No, he will not be a douche.
Date: 07 Aug 2023 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 5
I really think it's Jessica behind all the miscarriages.
Sherry
Date: 07 Aug 2023 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 4
Is Jessica doing something to make Tanya lose her babies. Did she do somehting to Bella?
Sherry
Date: 07 Aug 2023 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 3
They got chemistry, for sure.Is it wrong I can't wait for Jessica to overhear them?
Sherry
Date: 07 Aug 2023 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
Well, I'd say they were completely knacked after all tat exercise. Time to reenergize and nap.
Sherry
Date: 07 Aug 2023 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
Aside from Jessica being a jealous pain Bella is gonna own Edward. It's refreshing to read a nice Tanya. Great start.
Sherry
Date: 24 May 2023 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 11
This has been a great story! what a beautiful and perfect ending! Thank you for writing this story, I have truely enjoyed reading it despite it being shorter than other stories I am used to reading.
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2023 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 11
:) loved this story
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2023 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 11
Thank you for a very interesting story. well done. Jessica got what she deserved. I'm happy Eduarda was able to risa above all her mothers bad deeds. BRAVO!!!
Date: 23 May 2023 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 11
I was hoping Jessica would make a fool of herself when she was arrested. But I am glad she got what she deserved. Also glad that Eduarda turned out to be a good girl and nothing like her momma. Thank you for sharing this story with us. I really enjoyed reading it
Date: 23 May 2023 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 11
sweet ending. Thank you for writing and sharing
Date: 23 May 2023 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 11
Beautiful finish, so glad Jessica got what she deserved.
Date: 21 May 2023 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 10
Wow! How can anyone justify fifty thousand on a party for a 4 yr old that won't remember much other than from photos, maybe for a 16th but not a 4th. Hope Jessica's end is good for all that she has done even though Edward's eldest isn't going to be happy, shes only a toddler and can grow up being helped to understand everything, but justice needs to be served.
Cant wait til the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2023 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 10
Thank you for the updates well done. Bella & Tanya are happily pregnant, Edward is ecstatic about his new babies coming. Tanya threw a nice children's part for the twins, I don't know what kind of party Jessica threw for a 4yr old? what would she do for a 5yr old. the party was way to extravagant for a 4yr old. Even though everyone had a great time. Jessica is to much!! I can't wait for the shit to hit the fan. Eduarda really loves her daddy telling everyone who would listen her Mom killed her daddy. Until you post again!!! BRAVO
Date: 17 May 2023 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 10
50k for a bday party ! Dang. I'd have divorce papers as a gift to Jessica for that move.
Author's Response:
You're hilarious π
She'll get served alright!
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2023 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 10
This story is awesome.
Date: 16 May 2023 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 10
I love reading about Edward enteracting with his children. Jessica has lost her mind. I hope Bella and Tanya get to be there when they arrest Jessica.
Date: 16 May 2023 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 10
Glad Bella and Tanya are safe and ok. Wow Jessica has really gone off the deep end. Poor Jane. SOunds like Jessica's family won't be supporting her through the storm that is rightfully coming her way.
Author's Response:
They'll try to help but the case is strong. They have lots off evidence against her. Edward also has an ace up his sleeve that will shock some people.
Glad you're still here and that you take time to read π what I put out.
Date: 15 May 2023 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 9
Hopefully Edward is ok and nothing too bad happens while he is away and that nothing happens to Bella or Tanya while he is gone either as no one deserves anything else bad happening. Jessica needs a reality check, big time!
Date: 14 May 2023 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 4
Jessica is poisoning Isabella like she did Tanya so she lose the babies.
Date: 07 May 2023 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 9
I am glad Bella and Tanya get along so well. I am wondering what Bree told Edward. Can't wait for more. I don't understand how they are getting away with Bella suppose to be on the hospital all these months. Also, the meds/herbs that caused Tanya to miscarriage would it be dangerous for the twins since she is still breastfeeding.
Author's Response:
Thank you for being one of the few that understands this. I got trashed by a few after this chapter. You'll know what bree said soon enough, it's coming. They're getting away with it because the hospital staff that tended to Bella and her doctor are in on it. The Mare Program has its own hospital (which is where she was) and as Edward as the council for help they signed NDAs and agreed to lie. What was done to Bella and Tanya is a threat to the program and it made them wonder if it has been done before.
Tanya was out in the hospital after the miscarriage she had after the twins they were fed with breastmilk you can get at the hospital until it was out of her system. Thanks for being concerned about Eliza and Eden. And Tanya's last miscarriage was due to birth control not the tea. If you want to discuss the story more feel free to join me on Facebook or email me zaichaforfanfictionsite@gmail.com
Date: 07 May 2023 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 9
I can't wait to read more as the mystery unfolds!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing
Date: 07 May 2023 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 9
I can't wait to read more as the mystery unfolds!
Date: 07 May 2023 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 9
I can't wait to read more as the mystery unfolds!
Date: 07 May 2023 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 9
I can't wait to read more as the mystery unfolds!
Date: 07 May 2023 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 9
I can't wait to read more as the mystery unfolds!
Date: 07 May 2023 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 9
I can't wait to read more as the mystery unfolds!
Date: 07 May 2023 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 9
Evil one not telling us what Bree said. Glad B&T got alone time with him.
Author's Response:
Oh you'll find out what she said. You just wait. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 30 Apr 2023 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 8
Oh I hope that Jessica gets whats coming to her, but I hate that Edward and her daughter will be caught in the cross fire, but hopefully everything works out.
Author's Response:
Eduarda will definitely be caught in the crossfire. She's 3 she very dependent of her mother, she loves her daddy but doesn't get to see him or spend too much time with him. In the chapter Jessica questions Edward about that when she's the one keeping his child away from him. She barely lets her leave her room. She's either at school or with Jessica's mother. She calls Tanya and Bella whores because that's what Jessica calls them. She kind of likes her baby sisters but can't spend any time with them. Edward used to sneak her out of her room to spend some time with them but now eduarda tells him she can't go out of her room or mommy will be mad. Little girl misses her daddy, but can't do anything about it.
Date: 30 Apr 2023 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 8
Ooh Jessica needs to pay. Wonder what the girl at the end knows. Hmmm
Date: 29 Apr 2023 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 8
I have a feeling Jessica has made this young girl do something that she really didn't want to do. Or she saw Jessica tempering with Tanya's tea. Can't wait for the next update.
Date: 29 Apr 2023 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh my goodness I'm on the edge of my seat with this cliffhanger!
Date: 25 Apr 2023 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 7
I think Jessica found out Tanya and Edward were sleeping together again and she started poisoning Tanya again.
Date: 25 Apr 2023 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 7
Oh my goodness. So many twists! Can't wait to read more
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2023 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 7
Thank you for the update.. I still think it's Jessica unless there is a mare we are unaware of. I think the plan to keep Bella isolated was a good one. I think Jessica gave her something. If not Tanya is the culprit and doing a very good job of throwing suspicion off of her. until you post again. well done.
Author's Response:
Thank you π
More things will be revealed on the next. Chapter. Some people are just evil and conniving.
Date: 24 Apr 2023 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 7
Ack for poor Tanya. Jessica is def a prime suspect. Still not liking Carlisle's attitude.
Author's Response:
I can say that Carlisle will come around. Everything will unfold soon. Thanks again for reading and reviewing
Date: 23 Apr 2023 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 6
Yea Jess is pretty much the main suspect. Think she might have done it to Tanya too. Not liking Carlisle's comment at the end.
Date: 23 Apr 2023 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 6
Yea Jess is pretty much the main suspect. Think she might have done it to Tanya too. Not liking Carlisle's comment at the end.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! Let's see what happens in the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2023 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 6
Thank you for the update..I'm not sure what's going on now. I don't trust Jessica, I'm not so sure about Tanya, she seems genuinely concernd about Bella. I don't know what to think of CARLISLE. Does Bella come from money? She is renting out her family home does Carlisle want her inheritance? I'm confused unless there is someone else we don't know about yet. If I was Bella I would leave also, not safe. until you post again
Author's Response:
Hi thanks for your review. Tanya went through the same thing twice, she didn't leave because she had the twins. She's still hoping to get pregnant again. Do you think she will get pregnant successfully? The cullens are loaded Carlisle has no claim over Bella's inheritance. The house is paid for and it's hers. The apartment she lived in before its also hers she got it for cheap. The Cullen's (and any family that has Mares) have to sustain the Mares. Their children (if any) will be given an inheritance whenever the father dies or when they come of age (21). But every child has a trust fund. (Edward barely touched his so it belongs to Eduarda)
Bella technically hasn't fulfilled her contract. (Meaning she hasn't give birth to a legitimate child of Edward) That's what he means. But that will be explained in the next chapter.
Date: 19 Apr 2023 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 6
I don't blame Bella for being scared. I'm worried about Carlisle and his reaction. I still think it's Jessica poisoning .
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading π π
Let's see how Carlisle truly feels.
Date: 18 Apr 2023 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 5
I smell a Jessica rat...
Date: 18 Apr 2023 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 5
I smell a Jessica rat...
Date: 17 Apr 2023 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 5
Poor Bella. Does she think that Tanya did something to her??? I think it is Jessica.
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2023 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 5
Poor Bella
Author's Response:
Poor Bella indeed
Date: 17 Apr 2023 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 5
Do you think Jessica did it. She can't have so nobody should.
Author's Response:
You're saying that Jessica did it because if she can't have kids the Mares shouldn't have them too?
Thanks for reading and reviewing β€οΈ
Date: 17 Apr 2023 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 5
Do you think Jessica did it. She can't have so nobody should.
Date: 17 Apr 2023 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 5
Still thinking that Jessica is behind the miscarriages.
Date: 13 Apr 2023 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
Thank God Edward is no fool. Until you post again..thank you gor your response
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2023 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 4
New reader to your story. I can't believe these woman. They know what the Mare program is about. You have to share your man. Now you want to kill any new children that come along. Edward needs to keep everyone seperate, these woman will kill each other. until you post again
Author's Response:
Hello! Your review made me laugh π π π π π€£
Are you sure you don't read minds? How did you know what Edward is going to do after this? Just wait until you read the next chapter. π thanks for reading and reviewing π₯°
Date: 09 Apr 2023 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh my goodness, i pray that Jessica doesn't do something to harm anyone
Date: 09 Apr 2023 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 4
With all the history., I'm thinking Jessica is putting something in their food and/or drink to cause the miscarriages. Wow for Jessica teaching Edwina to be nasty. Poor kid.
Author's Response:
Edwina! π Eduarda (Edward in Spanish) right who teaches that to her kid? But really the little one just repeated what she hears her mother say.
Date: 09 Apr 2023 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 4
I think Jessica is doing something to make the other women to miscarry. I can't believe Jessica taught her daughter to call Bella where. That is just awful.
Date: 09 Apr 2023 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 4
I think Jessica is doing something to make the other women to miscarry. I can't believe Jessica taught her daughter to call Bella where. That is just awful.
Author's Response:
She didn't taught her per se... that's what she calls them behind their back. So she repeated what she says, when she saw that Edward got mad she called her by her name. Eduarda won't be a problem really. Funny thing is I don't know how old the twins are. I have to read what I wrote before and the last chapter to see how old they are. Eduarda is about three years old. But Tanya and Edward got together when she was eighteen months. So that makes the twins either nine months old or a year old. It's around that age, Tanya is still nursing them.
Date: 06 Apr 2023 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 3
I don't normally read these kinds of stories, but I loved this one so far so please update soon.
Date: 05 Apr 2023 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 3
I noticed she said Love me not make love to me. She is falling for him and wants him to fall for her.
Author's Response:
Maybe...
Date: 05 Apr 2023 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 3
I love the chemistry that these two have.
Date: 04 Apr 2023 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wonder if Jessica is 1) seeing someone on the side 2) uses her work to get out of childcare and leaving averything on Tanya.
Author's Response:
No spoilers but she's not seeing anyone else on the side. Eduarda as Edward said is in preschool while she works. She's only there for half a day. They have to divide the house work between the two of them. Tanya already has her hands full with the twins. There's also other employees that help. It's a big estate they all live together (not on the same home but on the same land) Edward, Tanya, Jessica and the girls live together in a three story home with an underground garage (hence they taking the elevator that 1st night)
There's more to Jessica's story. It will be revealed in upcoming chapters.
Do you think she's planning something? (You can email me your reply at zaichaforfanfictionsite@gmail.com) or just write another review. Thanks for reading!
Date: 04 Apr 2023 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 2
Glad women have a choice in the program or not. Well at least some of them. Hopefully E is as genuine as he seems.
Date: 04 Apr 2023 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting start. Hopefully Tanya will be awesome. Yeah, Jessica is going to be trouble. Wonder if she's going to start something to make B almost lose the baby.
Date: 04 Apr 2023 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
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Author's Response:
Thanks! Will join and will do. Have a nice day!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Will join and will do. Have a nice day!
Date: 02 Apr 2023 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 2
SHE COULD BE PREGNANT!!!!
READ YOU SOON ; )
Author's Response:
She could... we'll see in the next 2 chapters
Date: 02 Apr 2023 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
IT'S BEEN QUITE AWHILE SINCE A STORY HAS CAUGHT MY ATTENTION... I'M REALLY LOOKING FORWARD TO GOING ON THIS JOURNEY WITH YOU. JUST ONE QUESTION WAS BELLA A VIRGIN?
Author's Response:
No, she wasn't a virgin I would've said so, I'm very specific. Thanks for reading! Keep the story on alert for updates π
Date: 01 Apr 2023 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 2
Interesting storyline
Date: 01 Apr 2023 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 2
I can't wait to see more into their relationship and Edward's relationship with his other 2 wives.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading π π
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading π π
Date: 01 Apr 2023 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 2
I can't wait to see more into their relationship and Edward's relationship with his other 2 wives.
[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2023 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love it can't wait to read more
[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2023 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love it can't wait to read more
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading π π
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2023 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading π π
Date: 28 Mar 2023 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh I can't wait to see where you go with this story. I can't imagine being called a mare, lol. But if this is part of their society then they do not have a problem with it. I kind of thought about the TV show Sister wives when I was reading. But the show was not around breeding. I think Jessica will definitely be a problem. I'm not sure about Tanya yet. Edward is allowed to have more than one wife. But is he allowed to divorce any of them? I can't wait for you to update.
Author's Response:
Divorce is allowed, there are rules that if broken can lead to divorce. They also have criminal laws (as any society) that if broken they can go to jail too. We'll see about Jesisxa and Tanya. Im still mad the movie made her the valedictorian in eclipse urrggghh!! Yeah I thought about sister wives too but just the polygamy aspect of it.
Date: 28 Mar 2023 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
Storyline is a little different, but reads like it will be very good.
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking time to read. Hope it lives up to your expectations! Have a nice day. You can follow me on Facebook The Vampire Goddess and join the group The Vampire Goddess Fanfiction Appreciation Club.