Login
Register a New Account


Follow Us
      

Reviews For Dreams Unwind
You must login (register a new account) to review.
Reviewer: Moltz Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2024 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 43

Bella unloading on Emmett was a long time coming.
That flash had better not be a setup. Emmett is already over his head in legal issues. Mick has one more task to do, kick Emmett to the curb no matter what his wife says. The twins seem to know what’s at stake.
Hope Wildflower get better so she and Rock Daddy can attend the Thanksgiving party.
The matter of Edward and Bella being lost in each other will have to wait a little while longer.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2024 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 43

I'm glad something finally clicked with Edward to go ahead and "care for" Bella in his way.   The holding and the face cradleing, the texting...I'm down for this.   :)

If Jax was confused or up in the air about Bella and Edward possibilities, he shouldn't be now.

Emmett is just ridiculous.   His mother should stay out of the fray.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2024 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 43

:) 

Reviewer: Daisy Mae Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2024 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 43

Emmett is the gift that keeps on giving. I believe that Rose is in cahoots with him, too. I so wish that Edward had mentioned her being in their sound studio when no one was looking. Bella needs to have scheduled scannings for bugs of the workplace. Something stinks about why she was in their studio and going to open the door for Emmett. Sioban needs to face reality. If she has constantly saved Emmett from the consequences for his actions, she has enabled his behavior.

Reviewer: Debbi84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2024 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 43

This story is so good, I wait for it every Saturday.  Another great chapter.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2024 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

I moved and have goven up reading for about 4 years. But saw this on facebook and remember reading your stuff before, so I decised to join the ride again

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2024 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 42

This chapter has so many questions floating through it.
1. Rosalie in the restricted studio of Avalanche, how? And why?
2. What does Emmett hope to accomplish by coming back?
3. Did Bella intend to let that much inner business information slip?

It's nice to know Bella has another supportive person in Marcus Beckford. Hopefully Caius (Kai) will become part of Swan Sounds family and Rosalie will find herself out of a job.
Edward sure is thinking about Bella most of the time.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2024 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 42

:) 

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2024 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 42

Fantastic chapter

What was Rosalie doing in the studio, sabotage or planting a recording device? 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2024 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 42

Ruh-ro! Bella spilled to tea

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2024 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 42

Bellamust be stressed to let that cat out of the bag.   Also WTF wasRose doing in the Avalanche area?   How did she get in?   Hmmm....    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2024 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 42

Looking forward to seeing how Marcus & Kai work with the band.  

Rosalie sure isn't even trying to get along with anyone.  She really doesn't have a clue, does she?

Reviewer: ericastelo Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2024 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 42

OMG! Before I forget.... what was Rosalie doing in the studio? Planting some microphone? Finding out something? And what is Emmett up to by coming back?

Reviewer: biblepam Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2024 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 42

I'd be super suspicious of Ms. Hale. I'd be thinking another bug check would be in order. 

Reviewer: Daisy Mae Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2024 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 42

Did Rosalie plant some kind of listening device on the underside of the keyboard to spy on Avalanche's new music/album? I wouldn't put it past her. Thanks for updating here when ff is totally down. It was nice to be able to read an update. :)

Reviewer: nel Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2024 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 42

Edward should have told Bella avout Rosalie snooping in the sound studio, a place their contract forbid her to go. Wonder if she's looking for the hidden bugs or cameras, which means she''s in on it. Bet Rosalie wasn't too happy at the arrival of their new sound engineer. I wonder if Bella was willing to reveal that new information about Emmett, especially to Rosalie. Rosallie is really on thin ice. Now that she knows about Emmett she better worry that she's the next one to go.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2024 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 42

Not like Bella to be so free with her words... wondering where you're going with that. I'm also surprised that no one mentioned Rosalie being in the studio. I know Edward doesn't know about the possibility of bugs, but they should be curious about it. Again, I know you have a plan and I need to be patient. 

Thanks for posting here today...I was re-reading this story at the time.

Reviewer: Debbi84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2024 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 42

Cat's out of the bag.  Don't think it will do much damage.

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2024 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 42

What exactly was Rose doing under the mixing board? Planting a bug or a recording device of some kind? Or fixing it so that nothing records??? I don't trust that B***h at all!!!!! 

And Edward didn't know anything about Emmett and Mitch. Interesting.

Reviewer: Momma Laura Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2024 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 42

Heating up now! Yep - the Swan is cooking!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2024 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 41

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2024 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 41

Bella is realizing she is starting to have the feels for Edward.   Hmmm...   Laurie is down for that.  :)     I like her party idea.

The sooner that Rose can be fired the better.   Ugh....

I see poor Mick selling his part of the business to help his criminal son out.   He should cut him loose instead.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Debbi84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2024 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 41

Looks like Rose's days are numbered.  Great chapter.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2024 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 41

Loving this story. I swear it's the highlight of my week...every week.

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2024 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 40

Excellent!!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2024 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 40

:) 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2024 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 40

Great chapter,  so happy to see Emmett get his comeuppance 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2024 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 40

Edward presenting Harper's artwork to Bella and Laurie is so sweet.   And I love the idea of the wall of fame.   Harper and everyone else will too.

Is Emmett convinced that he's screwed?   I hope so.   

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Debbi84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2024 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 40

One down, one to go.  Fantastic chapter.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2024 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 40

Brava, Bella

Reviewer: biblepam Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2024 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 39

Loved this. Rosalie needs to go. Harper is a love. 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2024 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 39

Jasper’s brief display of emotion when Bella is mentioned is a bit puzzling. Jealousy perhaps or a form of protection for his patients daughter?
Looking forward to Bella’s perspective in the next chapter.
Mick must know now that his son is a thief and royal screw up.
Hopefully Edward will put Rosalie in her place.
Vic and Lauren might be an interesting couple.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2024 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 39

:) 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2024 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 39

Great chapter 

Reviewer: Debbi84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2024 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 39

Loved it!  Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2024 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 38

Awesome chapter.  I can't wait to see it all unravel for Emmett as well.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2024 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 38

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2024 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 38

:) 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2024 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 38

The detective work has paid off.
Mick and Siobhan are going to be extremely embarrassed and disappointed. They coddled Emmett for too long.
I wind how Rosalie will take this news on top of Beu called out for her unprofessional behavior.
Daddy Swan would be exceedingly proud of his daughter’s handling of the business so far.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2024 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 37

Harper was extra adorable in this chapter.   Mick still makes me wary, and Rosalie just makes me ragey.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2024 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 37

:) 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2024 11:15 AM Title: Chapter 36

Great chapter.  I am going to also enjoy Bella and friends taking Emmett and hopefully Rosalie down.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2024 11:15 AM Title: Chapter 36

Great chapter.  I am going to also enjoy Bella and friends taking Emmett and hopefully Rosalie down.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2024 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 36

Emmett is a complete dumb ass.   I'm still wary of Rosalie as well though    Could they be in it together?   Hmmm ...    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2024 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 36

:) 

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2024 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 35

Wow
Interesting spin on jazz

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2024 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 35

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2024 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 35

Both men have had horrible luck in the relationship department.  I hope for better days for both of them soon.     Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2024 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 34

Awesome chapter,  I love Jake's enthusiasm and I can never get enough of Princess Harper.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2024 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 34

There seems to be light at the end of the tunnel for the band.
Jacob's sincerity surrounding his self improvement is a positive for the band's future.
Jamie needs to verify that Leah sent Edward the picture of Harper and him in front of Swan Sounds.
Harper's fascination with the Ladies of Swan Sounds may be a positive rather than negative for Edward.
What will Jamie learn from Bella about this breech of confidential information regarding Harper's life?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2024 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 34

:) 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2024 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 33

Oh boy, Bella has her hands full.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2024 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 33

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2024 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 33

Bella is honing in on proving Emmett the douchebag's lies, schemes and stealing.     She is putting out fires left and right.     Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2024 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 32

So much his happening for the band with Edward taking on the role of spokesperson.
Harper left a delightful impression on the ladies. Lauren did a great job helping sooth Harper’s nerves so daddy could get down to business.
Nice to see Jake following through with his therapy and discussing it with Edward.
How accurate was Edwards thoughts on Mick?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2024 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 32

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2024 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 32

I think everone had a great impression at the Swan's Sounds meeting.    :)    

Wonder what Jasper is needing the meet for...   hmmm....

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2024 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 32

I think everone had a great impression at the Swan's Sounds meeting.    :)    

Wonder what Jasper is needing the meet for...   hmmm....

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2024 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 31

I hope Mick is not covering or somehow involved with the bleeding of funds via non business related transactions. I’m thinking Rosalie has fallen victim to Emmett’s manipulation and is helping him.
Looking forward to Bella’s meeting with Jamie, Laurant, and Edward.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2024 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 31

I hope Mick is not covering or somehow involved with the bleeding of funds via non business related transactions. I’m thinking Rosalie has fallen victim to Emmett’s manipulation and is helping him.
Looking forward to Bella’s meeting with Jamie, Laurant, and Edward.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2024 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 31

So exciting to finally get to read about them meeting soon

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2024 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 31

:) 

Reviewer: crazykatwp Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2024 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 31

Can't wait for next chapter. So good

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2024 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 30

Wow

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2024 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 30

A therapist can help Jake analyze his thoughts and possible reasons behind them. But, Jake has to want to improve his personal head space. Feelings of inadequacy and being second rate is all based off low self esteem.
Leah might think about couples therapy as well.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2024 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 30

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2024 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 30

I don't know if a therapist can help Jake with being a jealous asshole.    What a dick!     Poor Leah and everyone else having to deal with him....   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2024 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 29

I love Leah

Reviewer: biblepam Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2024 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 29

Thanks for the update. Harper is a doll. I'm glad Leah came with Jake to the meeting. It sounds like she's wrestling with her own toddler.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2024 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 29

Hmm...   I still don't trust Jacob not to be a "dead weight".   It sounds like Leah is the one forcing him to be there and be civil.   

Harper sure is a cutie.   

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2024 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 29

:) 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2024 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 28

It's good to see Bella setting boundaries in her new work environment.
Hiring Laurie is one of Bella's best business decisions so far.
Jenks had better spill everything he knows about the partnership.
I'm thinking Emmett has turned Rosalie against her based on old childhood stories. They might be the reason Bella's spidy sense is kicking in to something shady going on with the unbalanced budget.
James was real smooth calling her Charlie's kid, lol.
Looking forward to the Edward meeting up with Swan Sounds.

Reviewer: annacaroll Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2024 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 28

Amo tanto essa história!!!! Não perco nem um capítulo!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2024 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 28

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2024 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 28

Bella is doing great so far.    Her decision to hire Lauri helps with what she doesn't know.   She might have to do some firing soon...ahem....Rosalie....ahem......Emmett      LOL

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2024 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 27

Three months are up and Bella’s offering Edward Cullen a recording label to work under. Yay.
Jacob now has to face his wife and explain why she might loose her job as the bands PR person.
Hopefully she will figure out what is causing him to have a meltdown.
Jaime and Laurent are very good with Harper.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2024 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 27

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2024 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 27

Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: crazykatwp Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2024 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 27

Great chapter! Can't wait for Edward and Bella to meet

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2024 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 26

Charlie may have been an absent dad in Bella’s youth, but he always strived to provide her with everything she needed. Their time together as adults may have been short, but they strengthened their bond learning from each other every day.
I love how Charlie orchestrated Bella’s wardrobe for the celebration of his life. He knew his daughter so well that he set up a timeline to guide her into this new path of being the CEO of his company.
Will Jasper tell Bella he’s the brother of one of Charlie’s recording artists?
Hopefully Bella will learn quickly to live her life in honor of Charlie, but most of all for herself.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2024 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 26

Charlie may have been an absent dad in Bella’s youth, but he always strived to provide her with everything she needed. Their time together as adults may have been short, but they strengthened their bond learning from each other every day.
I love how Charlie orchestrated Bella’s wardrobe for the celebration of his life. He knew his daughter so well that he set up a timeline to guide her into this new path of being the CEO of his company.
Will Jasper tell Bella he’s the brother of one of Charlie’s recording artists?
Hopefully Bella will learn quickly to live her life in honor of Charlie, but most of all for herself.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2024 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 26

Too say Bella is sad and overwhelmed is an under statement.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2024 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 26

So sad... Poor Bella 

Reviewer: allrain Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2024 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 25

omg

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2024 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 25

What the hell is Jake malfunction?   Dam!    Edward is not your dam slave man!   ugh....    grrr.....

Harper is cute as hell. :)

Charlie's death is on a continuous news loop, I guess because of his fame.    Edward respected Charlie, so he'll be bummed.   

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2024 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 25

Not only is Jasper’s week an extremely rough one, but Edward is also having a difficult time as well.
In a unique way, they will both be grieving over the death of Charlie Swan.
Is Jake’s marriage to Leah suffering? What’s got him all wrapped around the axel?

Reviewer: crazykatwp Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2024 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 25

Jacob is a douche.  Wow! Can't wait to see what happens now.  Poor Bella Charlie died. Really sad 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2024 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 25

Poor Charlie 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2024 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 24

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2024 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 24

That was a tear jerker chapter.     How soon can Bella fire Emmett?   ;)   Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: crazykatwp Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2024 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

Such devastating news.  But I can't wait for Edward and Bella

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2024 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 23

BPOV of that evening was interesting.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2024 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 23

:) 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2024 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 23

Charlie and Bella are in for a long journey together as they navigate his health issues.
RA is a ravaging disease. It take the most hale of bodies and breaks it down leaving the mind locked into a crippled shell of their former self.
Hopefully Charlie’s fortune can buy him time and cutting edge therapies.
Ugh, Tanya was the worst option for Edward. Thank goodness he’s beyond her now.

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2024 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 22

Yes!!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2024 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 22

I'm still curious how Charlie sprained his knee.   Hmm...   The image of Emmett in a suit while everyone else is in an ugly Christmas sweater sounds so awkward.

Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2024 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 22

Bella’s tribe of friends fit in so well with Charlie that they can become the family that both Charlie and Bella need.
Riley did a great job of putting Jin and Emmett in their place.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2024 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 22

Bella’s tribe of friends fit in so well with Charlie that they can become the family that both Charlie and Bella need.
Riley did a great job of putting Jin and Emmett in their place.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2024 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 22

:) 

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2024 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 21

Excellent story, I love it

You must login (register a new account) to review.