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Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2024 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 34

Awesome chapter,  I love Jake's enthusiasm and I can never get enough of Princess Harper.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2024 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 34

There seems to be light at the end of the tunnel for the band.
Jacob's sincerity surrounding his self improvement is a positive for the band's future.
Jamie needs to verify that Leah sent Edward the picture of Harper and him in front of Swan Sounds.
Harper's fascination with the Ladies of Swan Sounds may be a positive rather than negative for Edward.
What will Jamie learn from Bella about this breech of confidential information regarding Harper's life?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2024 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 34

:) 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2024 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 33

Oh boy, Bella has her hands full.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2024 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 33

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2024 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 33

Bella is honing in on proving Emmett the douchebag's lies, schemes and stealing.     She is putting out fires left and right.     Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2024 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 32

So much his happening for the band with Edward taking on the role of spokesperson.
Harper left a delightful impression on the ladies. Lauren did a great job helping sooth Harper’s nerves so daddy could get down to business.
Nice to see Jake following through with his therapy and discussing it with Edward.
How accurate was Edwards thoughts on Mick?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2024 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 32

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2024 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 32

I think everone had a great impression at the Swan's Sounds meeting.    :)    

Wonder what Jasper is needing the meet for...   hmmm....

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2024 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 32

I think everone had a great impression at the Swan's Sounds meeting.    :)    

Wonder what Jasper is needing the meet for...   hmmm....

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2024 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 31

I hope Mick is not covering or somehow involved with the bleeding of funds via non business related transactions. I’m thinking Rosalie has fallen victim to Emmett’s manipulation and is helping him.
Looking forward to Bella’s meeting with Jamie, Laurant, and Edward.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2024 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 31

I hope Mick is not covering or somehow involved with the bleeding of funds via non business related transactions. I’m thinking Rosalie has fallen victim to Emmett’s manipulation and is helping him.
Looking forward to Bella’s meeting with Jamie, Laurant, and Edward.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2024 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 31

So exciting to finally get to read about them meeting soon

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2024 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 31

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Reviewer: crazykatwp Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2024 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 31

Can't wait for next chapter. So good

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2024 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 30

Wow

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2024 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 30

A therapist can help Jake analyze his thoughts and possible reasons behind them. But, Jake has to want to improve his personal head space. Feelings of inadequacy and being second rate is all based off low self esteem.
Leah might think about couples therapy as well.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2024 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 30

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2024 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 30

I don't know if a therapist can help Jake with being a jealous asshole.    What a dick!     Poor Leah and everyone else having to deal with him....   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2024 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 29

I love Leah

Reviewer: biblepam Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2024 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 29

Thanks for the update. Harper is a doll. I'm glad Leah came with Jake to the meeting. It sounds like she's wrestling with her own toddler.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2024 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 29

Hmm...   I still don't trust Jacob not to be a "dead weight".   It sounds like Leah is the one forcing him to be there and be civil.   

Harper sure is a cutie.   

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2024 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 29

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Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2024 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 28

It's good to see Bella setting boundaries in her new work environment.
Hiring Laurie is one of Bella's best business decisions so far.
Jenks had better spill everything he knows about the partnership.
I'm thinking Emmett has turned Rosalie against her based on old childhood stories. They might be the reason Bella's spidy sense is kicking in to something shady going on with the unbalanced budget.
James was real smooth calling her Charlie's kid, lol.
Looking forward to the Edward meeting up with Swan Sounds.

Reviewer: annacaroll Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2024 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 28

Amo tanto essa história!!!! Não perco nem um capítulo!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2024 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 28

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2024 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 28

Bella is doing great so far.    Her decision to hire Lauri helps with what she doesn't know.   She might have to do some firing soon...ahem....Rosalie....ahem......Emmett      LOL

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2024 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 27

Three months are up and Bella’s offering Edward Cullen a recording label to work under. Yay.
Jacob now has to face his wife and explain why she might loose her job as the bands PR person.
Hopefully she will figure out what is causing him to have a meltdown.
Jaime and Laurent are very good with Harper.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2024 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 27

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2024 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 27

Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: crazykatwp Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2024 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 27

Great chapter! Can't wait for Edward and Bella to meet

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2024 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 26

Charlie may have been an absent dad in Bella’s youth, but he always strived to provide her with everything she needed. Their time together as adults may have been short, but they strengthened their bond learning from each other every day.
I love how Charlie orchestrated Bella’s wardrobe for the celebration of his life. He knew his daughter so well that he set up a timeline to guide her into this new path of being the CEO of his company.
Will Jasper tell Bella he’s the brother of one of Charlie’s recording artists?
Hopefully Bella will learn quickly to live her life in honor of Charlie, but most of all for herself.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2024 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 26

Charlie may have been an absent dad in Bella’s youth, but he always strived to provide her with everything she needed. Their time together as adults may have been short, but they strengthened their bond learning from each other every day.
I love how Charlie orchestrated Bella’s wardrobe for the celebration of his life. He knew his daughter so well that he set up a timeline to guide her into this new path of being the CEO of his company.
Will Jasper tell Bella he’s the brother of one of Charlie’s recording artists?
Hopefully Bella will learn quickly to live her life in honor of Charlie, but most of all for herself.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2024 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 26

Too say Bella is sad and overwhelmed is an under statement.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2024 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 26

So sad... Poor Bella 

Reviewer: allrain Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2024 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 25

omg

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2024 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 25

What the hell is Jake malfunction?   Dam!    Edward is not your dam slave man!   ugh....    grrr.....

Harper is cute as hell. :)

Charlie's death is on a continuous news loop, I guess because of his fame.    Edward respected Charlie, so he'll be bummed.   

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2024 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 25

Not only is Jasper’s week an extremely rough one, but Edward is also having a difficult time as well.
In a unique way, they will both be grieving over the death of Charlie Swan.
Is Jake’s marriage to Leah suffering? What’s got him all wrapped around the axel?

Reviewer: crazykatwp Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2024 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 25

Jacob is a douche.  Wow! Can't wait to see what happens now.  Poor Bella Charlie died. Really sad 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2024 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 25

Poor Charlie 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2024 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 24

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2024 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 24

That was a tear jerker chapter.     How soon can Bella fire Emmett?   ;)   Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: crazykatwp Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2024 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

Such devastating news.  But I can't wait for Edward and Bella

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2024 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 23

BPOV of that evening was interesting.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2024 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 23

:) 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2024 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 23

Charlie and Bella are in for a long journey together as they navigate his health issues.
RA is a ravaging disease. It take the most hale of bodies and breaks it down leaving the mind locked into a crippled shell of their former self.
Hopefully Charlie’s fortune can buy him time and cutting edge therapies.
Ugh, Tanya was the worst option for Edward. Thank goodness he’s beyond her now.

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2024 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 22

Yes!!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2024 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 22

I'm still curious how Charlie sprained his knee.   Hmm...   The image of Emmett in a suit while everyone else is in an ugly Christmas sweater sounds so awkward.

Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2024 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 22

Bella’s tribe of friends fit in so well with Charlie that they can become the family that both Charlie and Bella need.
Riley did a great job of putting Jin and Emmett in their place.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2024 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 22

Bella’s tribe of friends fit in so well with Charlie that they can become the family that both Charlie and Bella need.
Riley did a great job of putting Jin and Emmett in their place.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2024 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 22

:) 

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2024 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 21

Excellent story, I love it

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2024 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 21

Bella, Laurie, Poppy and Riley have become their own little family.    Bella is seeing that Charlie is aging a little now.   Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2024 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 21

:) 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2024 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 20

Charlie has found ways to check in and support his beautiful daughter when she needs it most.
Promotions and newly defined relationships will fill Bella and Riley’s life’s ambitions.
Lauren and Poppy made dress hunting a fun /funny affair.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2024 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 20

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2024 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 20

Riley and Bella both got promotions and a new lifelong sibling out of the evening.   :)

The dress shopping was too funny and lovely at the same time.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2024 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 19

:) 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2024 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 19

Roomies look out for each other.
Lauren’s access to the vault of designer dresses takes a load off of Bella’s mind and schedule.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2024 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 19

Bella sure gets guilted into going on dates with people she's not really into a lot.    ;)    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2024 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 18

The wacky-walk is a great way for seniors to let off a bit of stress.
It's time to adult once commencement is over.
Two kittens named after guitars, lol.
I probably shouldn't laugh at that because my husband named our eldest daughter after a guitar model he wanted.
Charvel, as in a Charvel Jackson.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2024 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 18

Bella is about to hit NY by storm.   :)    Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2024 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 18

:) 

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Date: 27 Jan 2024 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 18

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2024 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 17

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Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2024 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 17

Bella's been surrounding by an amazing network of family and friends.
She off to her next adventure on her own.
The father daughter time was fun to read.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2024 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 17

Charlie and Bella got to spend some quality time together.  :)   Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2024 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 16

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2024 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 16

I'm relieved that the friends are still living together and still friends.   Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2024 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 15

Bella and Laurie are such good good friends.     Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: biblepam Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2024 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 15

Thanks for the update. Bella iss a good friend for sure. That conversation with Lauren could have gone several different ways. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2024 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 15

:) 

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2023 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 14

Another great chapter ! Can't wait to read more 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2023 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 14

Bella seems to have gotten a nice funny roommate.   :)   Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2023 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 14

You've written a likeable Lauren.  That's good to see

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2023 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 14

:) 

Reviewer: biblepam Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2023 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 14

So far, I like this Lauren. Usually she's not the best of people in most fics. She seems genuine so maybe she'll stay, "not that blond" and a decent gal. 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2023 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 13

Emmett learned quickly that life changes and a back up plan is necessary.
Bella and Charlie have a unique yet strong relationship.
The car was a very cool gift.
Edward left a lasting impression,lol.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2023 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 13

Bella got another good memory of high school friends for a change.   :)    Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2023 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 13

:) Happy Holidays to you 

Reviewer: v3rut Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2023 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 12

Awww can't wait For more

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2023 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 12

Bella is extremely level headed and mature for a fourteen year old, but a lot of things really hurt.   Emmett and his douchbagitis for example hurts her more than she is willing to admit.    Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2023 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 12

Emmett has distanced himself so he can find his own popularity.
What a sad existence for Bella.
Where did she get her love of science and her intelligence?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2023 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 12

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2023 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 11

Edward definitely has his head on straight and it sounds like he has made a few decisions.    I feel bad the little ones when they hurt.    Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2023 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 11

Parenting is a difficult task even with a fantastic support team.
He'll get there.
Looking forward to Bella's appearance and back story.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2023 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 11

:) 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2023 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 10

Gradually Edward has figured out what it takes to balance his life. Add in a little human to take care of and he’s a mess.
Family is great and helpful yet they have busy lives also.
Mrs. Cope to the rescue.

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2023 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 10

Love it, can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2023 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 10

Edward and Harper have a lot of good support.   :)    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2023 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 10

:) 

Reviewer: annacaroll Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2023 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 9

Ai que lindo !!!!❤️

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2023 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 9

I said before great story, and can't wait for next chapter. Thank you for writing this wonderful stories

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2023 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 9

I knew Tanya would get pregnant.
The name Edward chose is much cuter than the predictable one chosen by Tanya.
What kind of fuss will Aro put up as he loses access to his biological granddaughter?
Edward's support system has been amazing from the start and it appears they will be picking up the slack for him now as well.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2023 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 9

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2023 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 9

Well that was a shock.   Hmmm....    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: SMBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2023 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 9

The band will be shocked, but 'in love'.  Can't wait until Bella meets the daddy/daughter pair.  

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2023 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 8

Leah is going to be angry when she finds out what happened and how he was coerced.
Does this change their contract in any way?
Tanya isn't going away so easily.
Even with her breaching the agreement, she'll find a way to bring up their physical encounter using it against him.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2023 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 8

:) 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2023 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 7

Well its about time someone told Tanya the way the publicity industry works. Edward laid out her shortcomings nice and clear. She has no other opportunity to achieve her goals without his exposure.
This had better work.

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