[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2010 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 11: Charge of the Cavalry
Finally....these two have gotten their act together!
Great timing!!
Date: 24 Dec 2010 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 11: Charge of the Cavalry
LOL. The whole driving around in the Ford Fiesta reminded me of the Keystone Cops.
And yay for communication! ;)
Date: 23 Dec 2010 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 11: Charge of the Cavalry
poor emmett
Date: 29 Nov 2010 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 10: Best Laid Plans
Hafta revoke this bar's liquor license, way too much underage drinking. Alice is a freshman. Emmett's only a year or two more.
I'm getting wiplash. First Bella says it was years ago she received the letter - her Senior year was only months ago. And he gave her the letter close to the end of the year. The you talk again about Edwards Freshman year, again his Senoir year would have been only months ago.
Bella will have to return the money with her own version of 116.
[Report This]Date: 29 Nov 2010 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 9: To Be or Not To Be
Oh Edward, how fucking noble. Now you really have made her think she is a very expensive prositute. Stupid wanker.
[Report This]Date: 29 Nov 2010 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 10: Best Laid Plans
I am shocked
I thought he would have fought harder for his dream. I guess her dreams where more important
Date: 28 Nov 2010 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 9: To Be or Not To Be
Oh, my stomach hurts!
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2010 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 10: Best Laid Plans
NO no no no nooooo.....
Just started reading this last night and im sad to have already caught up....
more soon plz
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2010 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 6: The Moment of Truth
Damn!!! you know exactly how to write such Adventures in the bedroom... ;-)
Date: 27 Nov 2010 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 10: Best Laid Plans
It would be rather interesting to get Emmett & Alice together. Giant bear with little pixie. That could be the sequel!
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2010 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 10: Best Laid Plans
loving this story more please
jules
Date: 24 Nov 2010 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 10: Best Laid Plans
Awwww ALice and Emmett will take care of them and they will be back together in on time.
YAYYY!!!! can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 24 Nov 2010 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 10: Best Laid Plans
Sometimes Edward is too self-sacrificing, so I am very glad Alice knows what is going on and has a plan along with Emmett to reunite these 2. Good Chapter!
Date: 23 Nov 2010 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 2: Decisions
loving it
Author's Response:
Thanks! :D
Date: 23 Nov 2010 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 10: Best Laid Plans
Great Chapter!
Date: 23 Nov 2010 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 10: Best Laid Plans
Emmett and Alice to the rescue. Edward and Bella have sure made a mess of things.
Date: 23 Nov 2010 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 10: Best Laid Plans
Poor Bella and Edward. I loved that Edward spill to Alice. Emmett priceless in purple tights. Cant wait for more.
Date: 23 Nov 2010 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 10: Best Laid Plans
:D
Date: 23 Nov 2010 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 10: Best Laid Plans
lol for how Alice found out about her mysterious coffee guy.
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2010 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 10: Best Laid Plans
i like this story.. good job
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2010 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 10: Best Laid Plans
Loved it! Between Emmett & Alice, it's gonna be a doozy! I loved maestro's pathetic word vomit to Alice. Fate, I tell you!!
Date: 23 Nov 2010 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 10: Best Laid Plans
Okay you guys have definitely redeemed yourselves for the long wait between chapters. This chapter was GREAT. Loved it. Thank goodness for Emmett and Alice. Who was the blonde? Im guessing it was Rosalie but hopefully E & B have had enough drama that you're not throwing in another twist. Cant wait for the next installment
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2010 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 10: Best Laid Plans
i hope Alice and Em can make some progress with these two.
Date: 23 Nov 2010 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 10: Best Laid Plans
well i hope they can get them back together!
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2010 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 10: Best Laid Plans
thanks good chapter
Date: 23 Nov 2010 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 10: Best Laid Plans
Emment you just have to love him... and Alice... she is so sneeky. Love the fic!
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2010 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 9: To Be or Not To Be
Great story, but this chapter is killing me, can't he discuss it with her before he tries to break her heart and his in the process.
Date: 14 Nov 2010 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 9: To Be or Not To Be
I've been wanting to read this story for ages. I love it. I don't understand... yet... why Edward "broke it off". I guess it has something to do with him not wanting her to fell obligated to not take the money... Hopefully you'll update soon, so that I understand a little better.
Date: 13 Nov 2010 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 9: To Be or Not To Be
My only guess is that Daniel Marks is some kind of financial advisor? You know to manage her money now.
Date: 13 Nov 2010 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 9: To Be or Not To Be
I'm guessing Daniel Marks is an attorney handling the money or something. Hope you guys don't make us wait another several months before the next update.
Author's Response:
Dang, I guess my mystery cliffie wasn't that big of a mystery. You're very close with your guess. And RB and I do apologize for the long wait -- it was seriously too long. But the next chapter should be up in about a week and the last chapter not too long after that. We do ask for our readers forgiveness!
Date: 13 Nov 2010 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 9: To Be or Not To Be
Aw, hell. Here I thought it was HEA.
Author's Response:
Aw, don't jump to conclusions -- it's not over yet -- the fat lady hasn't sung! Be back soon with the next chapter -- promise!
Date: 13 Nov 2010 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 4: Whatever Could Go Wrong, Probably Will...
Bella is not the sweet girl in this one. She stings of Lauren... grrr.
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2010 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 9: To Be or Not To Be
Ahhhhhh no Edward no! Bad Edward very, very, very bad Edward! I'm goin to cry, I wanna know what Bella's about to do. She needs to smack him silly LOL Uhhh how can he think that? Om my God I wanna smack him for Bella. Tell him to wake up and smell the coffee! Ahhhh I need more...like now, RIGHT NOW! Please, please, please update soon. I'm goin through with-draws already. See I told ya I need more! Great chapter can't wait to read the next. Love your story you two rock!
Author's Response:
Your review is too funny. I have never been part of a story where the readers so want to smack BOTH of the main characters. I guess this was my overexaggeration of the miscommunication that kept pissing me off in the Twi saga. But, upon reflection, very typical of young people who's brains haven't fully developed!! Thanks for your review. We will post next chapter shortly!
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2010 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 8: The Morning After
LOL a date :) I love it. Great chapter as always. You two out do yourselves!
Date: 13 Nov 2010 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 9: To Be or Not To Be
Edward has done it again. Thinking he knows what's best for Bella and making decissions for her without her knowing. I tell you what. Some men need to learn that they can't decide what's best for others; and that someone else can be right.
This is a very good chapter. I'm glad that this story is not over yet.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review. Yes, to me this was very typcial of Edward -- and Bella too. Two more chapters left to this story -- and an epilogue and maybe an outtake. We have grand plans, but little time!
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2010 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 7: Fairytales Really Can Come True
Oh one more night of hot hotel sex! Sounds like a plan to me. Great chapter loved it like always!
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2010 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 6: The Moment of Truth
Wow just wow. I need to stand in front of my freezer! That was H.O.T hot! Great chapter you two! Awesome as always!
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2010 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 5: Second Chances
Gahhhhhh you can't leave it there LOL Great chapter you two are awesome!
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2010 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 4: Whatever Could Go Wrong, Probably Will...
LOL what a mess up! Poor Edward and Bella. I love your story!
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2010 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 3: Regrets
Your killing me LOL I wanna see what Bella does when she see's Edward! Awesome chapter Love it!
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2010 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 2: Decisions
Oh so she read read the letter from high school! Wow that was a lot of condoms LOL Great chapter I love it.
Author's Response:
Delighted to hear it! Thanks so much for reading! The outtake is up to explain the condoms. lol
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2010 3:30 AM Title: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures
Awesome first chapter I love it!
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2010 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 9: To Be or Not To Be
I really liek this story and I am looking forward to reading another update soon!
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review. The next chapter will be posted soon!
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2010 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 9: To Be or Not To Be
stupid boy
Author's Response:
Young, stupid boy.
Thanks for the feedback!
Date: 12 Nov 2010 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 9: To Be or Not To Be
ugh poor b.....She's really gonna feel like a slut now.
Author's Response:
Oi, you got that right. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2010 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 9: To Be or Not To Be
Two stupid kids trying to make the other happy while being miserable themselves. If they would just talk & COMPROMISE maybe they Bella could go to school & they could still date. It shouldn't have to be one or the other. Typical Edward playing the martyr & typical Bella, not speaking her mind!
Hope these kids get their act together before anymore heartache is wasted!
Good job...appreciate the synopsis so we didn't have to reread to get caught up!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I think miscommunication is Bella and Edward's hallmark. And it is why people can write long ass stories about them -- it takes that long to get them on the right page at the same time. Oh, to be young again. Next chapter will be up soon -- it includes some intervention...that's all I'm gonna say...
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2010 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 9: To Be or Not To Be
i don't know weather to slap him if i was bella.awesome story update soon
Author's Response:
Good news! The next chapter is about ready to go, so no ridiculous delay like before! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 12 Nov 2010 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 9: To Be or Not To Be
This was a terrible ending of the weekend. Edward would not do it this way. He is too much of a romantic.
Author's Response:
Sorry to disappoint! We felt Edward always had the best of intentions, yet somehow they backfire on him everytime (ala New Moon). As another reader said, what fun would it be if they got it right the first time!
Date: 12 Nov 2010 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 8: The Morning After
I hope they have a long future together.
Author's Response:
That remains to be seen, eh? We can hope E will get his head out long enough to pull off a nice long future together! ;D
Thanks for reading and responding!!
Date: 12 Nov 2010 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 9: To Be or Not To Be
GAH! So many misunderstandings would just be solved by a little COMMUNICATION!
LOL. But then where would the fun be in that? ;)
Looking forward to the next installment...
Author's Response:
Hi MH! Gah, I hear you -- their miscommunication is so hard to write, but I can still remember some of my convoluted teen-angst thinking just enough to see this happening. We promise a bit o'fun in the next chapter!!
Date: 12 Nov 2010 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 9: To Be or Not To Be
*wants to slap some sense into Edward* Great story and I can't wait for more.
~Anna-Margaret
xx
Author's Response:
So Edward, no? I know it's frustrating, but we have some fun coming up in the next chapter! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 12 Nov 2010 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 9: To Be or Not To Be
You have got to be f@#ken kiddin me he is not just going to walk away from her it will kill them both. Hurry hurry cant wait to see if he is going to live or if I am going to have to kick his ass LOL
Author's Response:
Good news! We f@#ken wrote the next chapter already, so you won't have to stay pissed for long -- Edward needs a slap, but we'll leave his lovely little ass alone, can we agree on that? Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 12 Nov 2010 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 9: To Be or Not To Be
well i hope for her sake edward dosent do anything stupid keep the chatpers comming
Author's Response:
Oh, how did you guess? Dang. Well, at least we will keep the chapters coming....
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Date: 30 Oct 2010 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 8: The Morning After
Great story. Just found it and can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
So glad to hear you enjoyed! Thanks for reading!
More just as soon as RL permits me!! :D
Date: 17 Aug 2010 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 8: The Morning After
Enjoyed reading this chapter. Glad they finally got together.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the feedback! Thanks for reading!!! :D
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2010 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 8: The Morning After
Well I'm a little late in the reviewing, but great chapter, love the smut
Author's Response:
LOL! Don't we all! Thanks Love!
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2010 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 8: The Morning After
I love this story I am excited to see where you take these two from here I love the lemony goodness for sure very hot! LOVE LOVE LOVE it!
Date: 06 Jun 2010 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 8: The Morning After
great story
Date: 05 Jun 2010 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 8: The Morning After
Nice chapter. And Edward shouldn't feel guilty; sometimes passion overrules sensibility.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2010 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 8: The Morning After
oh how sweet it is to be loved by edward...wait did i just say that? what i meant was oh how hot it is to be sexed up by edward...bella is one lucky chica...i always felt that the perfect lover was one who took the time to find out what makes someone tick and then does everything in their power to make them twitch gasp moan..anywhooo you get the point... kudos to your edward for finding bellas special switch and learning how to flip it on ;) cant wait to see what edward has planned for bella and the date!! enjoyed the lemony greatness..
Date: 05 Jun 2010 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 8: The Morning After
Awwwww!
Date: 05 Jun 2010 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 8: The Morning After
I loved the shower lovin'... can't wait to see how the date goes.
Date: 05 Jun 2010 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 7: Fairytales Really Can Come True
Great chapter!
Date: 05 Jun 2010 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 6: The Moment of Truth
nice ;)
Date: 05 Jun 2010 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 5: Second Chances
such great speeches from them both!
Date: 05 Jun 2010 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 4: Whatever Could Go Wrong, Probably Will...
Make it good edward... make it good.
Date: 05 Jun 2010 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 3: Regrets
I can't wait to see what kind of music she faces
Date: 05 Jun 2010 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 2: Decisions
dum, Dum, DUM... has she figured it out yet? Hmm... I wonder
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and sharing your reactions!!!
Date: 05 Jun 2010 2:46 AM Title: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures
Interesting... very interesting!
Date: 05 Jun 2010 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 8: The Morning After
that was a tonne of fun....cant wait for more....
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2010 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 8: The Morning After
thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2010 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 8: The Morning After
Great job as usual.
Date: 04 Jun 2010 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 8: The Morning After
nicely done ladies! I really don't know what I'd like to see...as long as they're happy! I think I'd like to see something happen with the money that was going to change hands...
Date: 04 Jun 2010 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 8: The Morning After
absolutely wonderful
Date: 04 Jun 2010 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 2: Decisions
Update soon, can't wait!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 04 Jun 2010 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 8: The Morning After
Glad to see the new chapter. Man that was hot! I loved it......and now i need to drag my husband to the bedroom. I can't wait for the next chapter. Great job guys!
Author's Response:
Delighted to hear our work is...inspirational! lol No better compliment to be had. :D
Thanks for reading and letting us know how it affected ya!!! *mwha*
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2010 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 8: The Morning After
Oh frick, I swear up and down that the only thing you two are capable of is fracking cliffies. I don't care what you say I have yet to see proof of otherwise.
Nice, long chapter, but seriously, do you know how to do nothing else?
Author's Response:
LOL Well, then go check out my story Forbidden Desire or TA's Honeymoon Suite! And afer 10 pages, we needed to create a break. Besides, the tantalization seems to motivate people to speak up! :D
We could have ended it with less tantalization, but then wouldn't have updated for another two weeks. We thought ya might like what we did better than a wait.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Date: 04 Jun 2010 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 8: The Morning After
Yay! I'm so glad you decided to continue this story a bit longer. I'm sure I'll be happy with whatever you two come up with, as long as they stay in character for what you've created here. :)
Author's Response:
Delighted to hear you are happy! That is the struggle, to maintain who we've created while pushing ahead quickly. Thankfully we have a good team to keep us in line!
Thanks for reading and sharing your reaction with us!!!
Date: 04 Jun 2010 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 8: The Morning After
loved it
Author's Response:
Thanks! :D
Date: 04 Jun 2010 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 8: The Morning After
Glad you are going to contiue for a bit I would like to know what happens once they leave the room. What reaction will Emmett have to them being together???? Will he pay for her eduacation will they get married??? So many ????
Author's Response:
lol That's where we're going next, some talking and future plans. :D
Thanks for reading and responding!!!
Date: 29 May 2010 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 7: Fairytales Really Can Come True
I read this from the beginning, and read straight through. I love this. Edward is so sweet it breaks my heart. So glad they were able to resolve things and just go at it like bunnies. Can't wait for more.
Date: 25 May 2010 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 7: Fairytales Really Can Come True
Of course we want more. Edward and Bella are just experiencing the joys of sex, let them explore ;)
I seem to remember a certain text sent to Alice letting her know that the night was a bust. We need some closure with Alice and even Emmett and Carlisle.
Date: 25 May 2010 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 6: The Moment of Truth
I feel like such a bad admin. I didn't realize this story was posted here. I've been reading and reviewing on FFnet.
Anyway, what a way to think with your hooha, Bella! High five, girlfriend.
Now is not the time to be a gentleman, Eddie. Bella needs to be well and thoroughly screwed. You can dew eet!
I'm so glad I ended up with a crisis to handle and got behind two updates. I would've been cussing up a storm if I would've had to wait for the next chapter.
Date: 24 May 2010 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 7: Fairytales Really Can Come True
The was another HOT HOT HOT chapter. GREAT JOB with your lemons. MORE AND MORE!!!!!
Date: 24 May 2010 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 6: The Moment of Truth
The is chapter was HOT HOT HOT!!!!!! GREAT JOB!!!!!
Date: 23 May 2010 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 7: Fairytales Really Can Come True
I love the chapter. Beautiful
Date: 23 May 2010 3:00 AM Title: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures
Great chapter! I love the writing style, so keep up the great work.
Date: 23 May 2010 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 7: Fairytales Really Can Come True
I loved it!!! I think that was the perfect ending.... now if you want to continue with one more chapter completely full of lemon after lemon.... well I would be happy with that as well! ;)
Date: 23 May 2010 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 7: Fairytales Really Can Come True
good chapter.
Date: 22 May 2010 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 7: Fairytales Really Can Come True
Yes! Keep going with this story! It's beautiful.
Date: 22 May 2010 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 6: The Moment of Truth
That got my heart rate up!
Date: 22 May 2010 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 2: Decisions
Yay! I can't wait till they meet!
Author's Response:
Thanks!!
Date: 21 May 2010 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 7: Fairytales Really Can Come True
definately satisfing! whew! is it hot in here?
Date: 21 May 2010 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 6: The Moment of Truth
hot, wow
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2010 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 7: Fairytales Really Can Come True
Two crazy kids wanted each other all along.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2010 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 6: The Moment of Truth
Yeah I can see her nato caring bad about her behavoir at the moment.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2010 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 5: Second Chances
I guess it would be his revenge to laugh and leave.
Date: 21 May 2010 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 7: Fairytales Really Can Come True
Yes, I want more!!! LOL Great story.
Author's Response:
LOL Glad to hear it! :D
Thanks for reading and for leaving some love!!
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2010 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 4: Whatever Could Go Wrong, Probably Will...
She is pretty heartless is she leaves.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2010 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 3: Regrets
Bella is crazy to let a secret admirerer go because of embarassment.