so cute

they are so cute together

I hopr Charlie does a search at James´place.

hot

i'm a little worried that i haven't been getting updates for this story, or from any story on the writers coffee shop... eek... dunno what i'm doing wrong. but i will try to check this site weekly to make sure that i don't miss out on this story!

you're really left us hanging on the edge of hte seat, waiting in anticipation.

nice

such a smart pig

really hot! He as a Dom is soooooo hot

pig

Bella seems sometimes so stupid that I could shout from frustration!

He is the biggest pig jerk I ever know. Carlisla is such a fine Dom, he cannot be falling for James´crap

Wow, so intense!  I'm on the edge of my seat!  I really love this story and am so glad you found a new home.  I simply have to know that all of this will turn out ok for Bella and Edward, and even Victoria and the baby.  It's nice to see that Victoria isn't the evil one in all this.

Eek!

So they finally notice that Bella and Victoria are missing. I feel so horrible for Edward. So Aro was getting played, too. Though it seems someone would notice a private jet messing a lot sooner. Laurent is the link in all of this and he was a lot smarter than I thought he was, but since James killed him I'm curious as to what will happen next.

I'm hanging by a thread here.  Can't wait to find out what their rescue plan is.

I have been reading this story so far so intersting i am only commenting now i wanted to ask  acouple of questions 1 my new name for James is the FUCKTARD BASTARD no offence you as an author are great at describing his point of view by the way 2 how innocent is bella i kinda feel you arent exactly staying true to here charatar (spelled wrong i know) at one point of reading this i wanted to litteraly smack upside the head.2why hasnt anybody figured it out by know carlsie saw the nastyness in james demeanor and bella always seems to be described as scared to DEATH basicly.3 i love edward and bella together but i think you got there toooo fast but so far this is my fave chappie oh and you really stayed true to everyone eles persona from the actual book you total PROPS for that one .oh and i dont want to ende this on a werird note but i was always intrested in the DOM /SUB lifestyle but me as an actress would not be able to keep it up all the time and i would most likely be the DOM

---theyoungest cullen---magali

OH. MY. GOD.  I have been freaking out about that dam 'chip' since day one and now Edward is gonna use it in his favor....AWESOME.  EXCELLENT chapter.....oh man, James is gonna pay soon.  CANNOT WAIT....the other James punishment stuff was fantastic, but now Edward is going to get to him?!?! mwhahahahahahahaha

he is disgusting

pig pig pig

what a pig

what a pig

Great chapter. Thanks for the update. Can't wait to see what happens.

omg

now, James seems to be bested by his own plan, losing the phone. I hope Rose wants to "meet" him again, once they find him

Poor Rose.  She did a good thing tho.

cant wait for the next chapter ;)

Oh Edward. You need a hug and proly a stiff drink. Good job as ever.

Shit!  I need the next update!  How perfect that he dropped the cell! 

Glad to see that tracking device being used for good. Love that james is unintentionally leading them right to him.

Is it just me? Or was that like really short?

Im hanging on the edge of my seat... this chapter was so short. I love u two, though. Love this story!!!

Thanks for the update!!! Been waiting and it was good...that stupid ass James dropped his phone and thank God he did!

Angel

YEAH!!!!! *jumping for joy*

Thank goodness he dropped his phone & Alice found it :)

I really was worried how they were going to find Bella... but of course you have to give us a HEA!!! After all Bella & Edward have been through - they so deserve it!

Wow, poor Edward feeling like this was his fault.  I can't wait for the rescue.

thank god for small miracles.............stupid ass left his phone yippppeeee!!!!!!!!!!

Yay for James leaving his phone!

Great chapter.

OMG!!! the next chapter is going to be freakin awesome. I can feel it already

GREAT!!! oh the anticipation! I can't wait for what's next. this chapter makes me feel so much better after the last 2. hope the new one is up soon.

THANKS - BB

OMG! I can't wait, I can't wait!! Please, on my knees, so to speak, don't keep me hanging. Sleep is overrated and what's a personal life when complete strangers are begging for your brilliance.

Short but necessary chapter!  I'm so glad they founds the phone!!!  I'm on the edge of my seat ladies!

:)

Ack!  Go get them!!  Exciting as always.  Thanks for the update! 

I got my email notice. Actually I got 3 for this chapter.

I am so glad that James dropped his phone. I just hope they get there before James does something to Bella.  Rose is so calm. What does she do for a living? Is she also in law enforcement? Or does her controling personality just take over in this case.

Well, one thing is for sure, James can't go a long way like this. Hell, with Laurent dead, he just made it even worse for him.

Loved the chapter, =)

best wishes, Linda

OMFG. 

as always, LOVE IT!

again, i forgot about the gps device.  phew!

didn't like edward totally losing his shit and bawling, but i could totally picture him running off after them.

can't wait to read about aro's visit, too.

thx for the update!

OMG poor Edward he really really loves her although i always knew he did it just shows even more........ I didn't even think about that damn phone thank god...I was thinking they would have to go to Laurents house and start from there. So good can't wait to read more..........

But shit would James be stupid enough to keep the GPS on her unless he can't remove it or he doesn't know he dropped it or it's a set up......OH god did he leave it on purpose to set Edward and them up cuz i know he wants to kill Rose and Emmett and Carlisle for what they did to him and u know he wants to kill Edward.....So now i am thinking he left it on purpose so they would follow him into a Trap.........fuck.

great chapter - ha james is an idiot and dropped his phone ha ha

Ok, I kinda got distracted from all the fuckery in this chapter from having the image of Edward in handcuffs thrust into my cerebal cortex. Of course said handcuffs were attached to my bedhead.

Anywho.....

Thank god his phone somehow managed to get dislodged. I wonder if it was from Bella's spectacular knee to the groin moment? We just have to hope that they can get to them before James realises it's missing and jams the signal somehow.

Poor Edward, what an emotional wreck. At first I wanted to snicker at his apparently sex change to girl, but seeing as though he just had his worst nightmare come true I overlooked the hysterics akin to a tween missing out on Taylor Swift tickets.

If/When they manage to capture James, I've got dibs on belting out some tunes on his cock cage with a pair of drumsticks. I think I'll start with Little Drummer Boy.....snicker.....

James dropped his phone!! OK, this is perfect because Laurent was the mastermind and James is a devious, smart psychopath. James' undoing will be his arrogance and temper. He is so sure he won't get caught and doesn't need anyone. He's already killed his greatest asset, Laurent, could be killing the money and transportation, Heidi, and, even better, doesn't even plan to leave WA state. He hasn't even realized he doesn't have his phone and probably won't until he tries to call Demetri to get an abortion for Victoria.

I'm sooo looking forward to that motherfucker's end!!

I missed this chapter due to the alret failure, so I'm catching up now. I received 3 emails alerts for the next chapter, so that might be an issue.

I love seeing Esme stand by her man, Carlisle take blames and responsibility, and the troops rally around and process things in their own way. Aro's involvement will be interesting and Heidi's dayplanner is going to be very helpful in Jacob's investigation. Of course, given James' activities, there may not be anyone but CArlisle left to prosecute...