[Report This]Date: 09 May 2010 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 9
OMG - if it was Kate (and we all know it was) - I would terminate her parental rights once and for all. What a b*^ch!
Also, if you do get a chance, can you summarize what happened to Bella and her baby? Did she have a miscarriage, etc. or.... just tell me what chapter and I'll reread!
Thanks
Author's Response:
It;s in the end of Chapter 6 that explains what happened with Bella and her baby
Date: 09 May 2010 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 10
Oh that was so hard to read. Please say she didn't leave town with Emma. I hope he gets her back quick. I'm so glad Bella flew out to be with Edward during all this and I love how she said she had to be there because Emma was like her daughter. Loved that!! Please update quick!!!
Date: 09 May 2010 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 10
OMG, reading about my worst fear is so scary. I won't kill you...but I hope this gets fixed soon....how sad! Great chapter, it was awesome that you were able to update so fast...I thought I was seeing things!
:)
Date: 09 May 2010 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 9
:) :) :)
Please please please update soon soon soon..*
Alice R..*
Date: 09 May 2010 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 9
That evil Kate. I hope he is able to prove it was her that stole his debit card and withdrew his money. I know I would be in some serious trouble if it happened to me, no rich parents to bail me out. LOL Thanks for the quick update.
Date: 09 May 2010 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 9
Love this story! Good job!
Date: 09 May 2010 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 9
I think ought to be put in jail and never get the privilege to see emma and edward EVER AGAIN!
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2010 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 9
LOVE it :)
Date: 08 May 2010 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 9
I loove this story, and I love how fast you are updating! This story owns my heart! I really missed it!!!!
YAY!
Date: 08 May 2010 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 9
great chapter. can something really bad happen to Kate? pretty please
Date: 08 May 2010 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 9
Kate is something else. It's one thing to screw the guy over and take his money. It is something else when that money is being used to care for your child.
Date: 08 May 2010 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 9
He's gonna press charges right? She stole from him.
Date: 08 May 2010 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 9
OMG, Kate is such a bitch! Can I say that in a review here? I'm not sure, but I'm saying it anyway! How can someone do that to the father of there child??? This must be what she wanted all along...his money, and now that she knew that she and Edward weren't an options, she did what she had to do to get a hit. Ok, maybe I'm just ranting! Anyway, great chapter! Loved it and can't wait for more!
Date: 08 May 2010 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 9
great story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I hate Kate!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please next one:-)
Date: 08 May 2010 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 9
Freaking Kate. that woman needs to be hit upside her head with a baseball bat. I can't wait till tonight. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 08 May 2010 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 9
Awesome chapter. I love Daddyward. He's is such a good father. Kate well...she is just a very not nice word. I love how Bella is with Emma. Please keep going. this story is so awesome.
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2010 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 9
loved it as always and pimp yourself away thanks for sharing and I have loved everything so far thanks....
Date: 08 May 2010 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 9
I have a feeling that Emma won't seeing much of Kate in the near future....if ever again.
Date: 08 May 2010 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 8
Good chapter. Favourite part :
She told me everything she had done with Alice, Jasper, Bella, Mom, and Dad. Her favorite part so far had been the sleepover with Bella. I was jealous; that sounded like the best part to me, too.
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2010 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 8
I really like this story & your previous lemons were beyond HOT!!! But since you asked, I thought the buttsex wasn't as good as you other scenes. It was fine but I guess maybe not enough build up or foreplay. I get it's NYE & everyone is tired & drunk so maybe not a lot of foreplay goin' on but I liked the earlier stuff better.
Glad to see they're communicating & willing to do th ld stuff for awhile. Hope Kate leaves for good or relapses so we can be rid of her!
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2010 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 8
LOVE the chapter :)
Date: 08 May 2010 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh thank goodness they are official out to all and all are happy I am so happy.
Date: 08 May 2010 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 8
great first ass scene:)
Date: 08 May 2010 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 8
Great chapter! :) So happy that they are together now! :)
Date: 08 May 2010 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 8
I am so falling in love with this story. I love Bella with Emma. Love a drunk Bella. HaHa!!! Great job with the lemons. I just wish that Jake could have seen Bella and Edward after their declaration of their relationship. I would have loved to read that Bella rubbed it in Jake's face.lol.
Date: 07 May 2010 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 8
I wished I had someone that would hold my hair when I got sick...that is probably the sweetest thing anyone can do for someone they love. It is all about the little things in life for me.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!! I made a thread over at Twilighted for the story, it has a teaser for the next chapter! Come say hello! http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=9789
Date: 07 May 2010 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 8
Wow! That was hawt! Personally, I'm a chicken shit when it comes to that...but you make me wonder?? Of course...I'm NOT married to Edward and I may be wrong but I think that has A LOT to do with it! Ha ha...shh, don't tell my husband that...he'll get all pissy! Great chapter, I love this story...I'm so glad that I found it...I'm hooked!!
Hope you can update soon, and I'd love a teaser! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!! I made a thread over at Twilighted for the story, it has a teaser for the next chapter! Come say hello! http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=9789
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2010 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 8
that was great can't wait to see what happens next thanks....
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!! I made a thread over at Twilighted for the story, it has a teaser for the next chapter! Come say hello! http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=9789
Date: 07 May 2010 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 8
You did a great job!! OMG is she sick from Jasper's food, drinking too much or pregnant? That would be too funny if it was Jasper's food. LOL Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!! I made a thread over at Twilighted for the story, it has a teaser for the next chapter! Come say hello! http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=9789
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2010 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 8
Great lemon! loved it!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!! I made a thread over at Twilighted for the story, it has a teaser for the next chapter! Come say hello! http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=9789
Date: 07 May 2010 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 8
no that was good. It was hot! I loved it. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!! I made a thread over at Twilighted for the story, it has a teaser for the next chapter! Come say hello! http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=9789
Date: 07 May 2010 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 8
no that was good. It was hot! I loved it. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!! I made a thread over at Twilighted for the story, it has a teaser for the next chapter! Come say hello! http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=9789
Date: 07 May 2010 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 8
no that was good. It was hot! I loved it. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!! I made a thread over at Twilighted for the story, it has a teaser for the next chapter! Come say hello! http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=9789
Date: 07 May 2010 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 8
great chapter. little emma is so cute
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!! I made a thread over at Twilighted for the story, it has a teaser for the next chapter! Come say hello! http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=9789
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2010 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 7
I'm really hooked on this story, I read all seven chapters today...I hope that you can update soon. Its really well written and I love the story line. Thanks so much for sharing!
Corina
Date: 29 Apr 2010 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 3
oooo... the plot thickens.
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2010 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 7
Haha, I watch the "A Christmas Story" marathon every year too! Hahahaha :)
Great chapter and I can't wait to read more!!!
I have a bad feeling about Kate trying to kidnap Emma or something...hope I'm wrong...
Date: 26 Apr 2010 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 7
Awesome chapter!!! Glad to see they are trying to work in out.
Date: 26 Apr 2010 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 7
I love Jasper such a wise man. Glad she hit the green button but then I almost freaked when Kate answer his phone I thought shit was going to hit the fan. I hope Kate means what she says and will be a good person but I dont think it is going to work out.
Date: 26 Apr 2010 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 7
aww that was so sweet
Date: 26 Apr 2010 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 7
Okay.. you have had me cryin here... I really love your story, so sweet....
Date: 26 Apr 2010 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 6
I am behind on my revewing and have already sent my review for the next chapter. OOPS!!!! I am so much in love with your story. You are doing an amazing job writing it. I love everything about it.
Date: 25 Apr 2010 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 7
I am sooooo glad that Jasper talked to Bella and she FINALLY called Edward. I am also glad that she did not freak out when Kate answered his phone. LOVE Emma. I am so glad that she is letting Bella do things for her. Was Bella telling Emma the truth about the name for her baby??? WOW!! Can't wait for more and more and more.
Date: 25 Apr 2010 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 7
So great! Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2010 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 7
Hummmm, I love seeing them get together. I can't wait for more.
Date: 25 Apr 2010 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 7
I'm glad Bella decided to give Edward another chance. Starting as friends is probably for the best. I hope Kate won't cause any problems in the future.
Date: 25 Apr 2010 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 7
Great chapter. Could they not have friendly with benefits. LOL Just kidding. I get it though. Friends first. Thanks for the update.
Date: 25 Apr 2010 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 7
Good story. Nicely written and I'm so glad Bella didn't ignore Edward for too long. Thanks for writing!
Date: 25 Apr 2010 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 7
I adore this story! Yay!
Date: 25 Apr 2010 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 7
that was great! I loved that Emma caught them under the mistletoe! LOL
Date: 25 Apr 2010 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 7
yes yes yes they were reunited. I'm so happy. :D I can't wait till the friendliness is thrown out the windonw. lol thanks so much. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 25 Apr 2010 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 7
Better than I expected! I love it
more and more every time I
read it! :)
Date: 25 Apr 2010 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 7
Beautiful chapter, I look foward to reading what happens next. I really hope happier times are to come for Bella she deserves it. Emma has to be the cutest thing ever and the way she has connected with Bella makes me smile. I hope you update soon.
Date: 24 Apr 2010 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow Dadward is a sexy Mofo!!
Yea!!!
icarly is number one at our house too.
Freddy rules, LOL!
Date: 24 Apr 2010 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 6
That chapter explains so much!
I look forward to see how he
plans to fix his mess! Please
update soon!! I'm hooked! :)
Date: 24 Apr 2010 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 6
Gah, it's frustrating that Bella won't even listen to the messages he's leaving for her.
Date: 24 Apr 2010 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 6
:) :) :)
Please please please update soon..*
Alice R..*
Date: 24 Apr 2010 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 6
I feel so bad for not just Bella but Edward too. They are both dealing with things that no one should have too. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 24 Apr 2010 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 6
wow! I can't wait for more. I hope there will be a reunion soon between them. :) keep up the great work and I WILL be looking for wicked Angel. thanks again bye
Date: 24 Apr 2010 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 6
oh that is soooo sad....he needs to get to her quick! Screw Kate....but it does add drama! And any good story needs some drama!
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2010 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 6
That breaks my heart! Poor Bella!
Date: 24 Apr 2010 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 6
Edward needs to jump on a plane and go to her or Jasper needs to talk some sence into her. Edward needs to be on gaurd of Kate all the time I dont trust her.
Date: 23 Apr 2010 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 6
Poor Bella. So how will they start talking again? At Jasper's event? OMG, I bet Kate will come around then and screw things up even more. Thanks for the great chapter.
Date: 23 Apr 2010 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 6
Great chapter, it was nice to hear about some of Bella's past. I look foward to another update! I hope everything works out for her and Edward. I just want to pinch Emma's little cheeks. I seriously hope Kate goes the hell away.
Date: 23 Apr 2010 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oh how sad. I have tears rolling down my face right now. I understand how Bella could think that and Edward is an ass for not telling her. I know he was lonely and wanted Emma to have her mother but damn. He screwed up everything he could have had with Bella all because he didn't talk to his family who could have given him an objective opinion. I sure hope that Edward can pull his head out of his ass and realize that Kate does not deserve another chance. Please update soon.
Date: 23 Apr 2010 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oh my... poor Bella :(. I can relate to her so bad, I know what she must be going through. She's trying to build that wall up so she can save herself from anymore hurt. Hopefully Edward can break it down.
Date: 23 Apr 2010 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 6
I LOVE THIS STORY! Yay!! Thank you for reposting it!
Date: 23 Apr 2010 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 6
God, this is getting to be so sad. Edward really needs to do something to prove to Bella that he really cares for her. He now realizes what his omission and Kate being in his life has done to Bella. He needs to fix this somehow.
Date: 23 Apr 2010 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 6
amazing chapter! :) jeez Bella just needs to answer her phone! LOL Keep writing..excited to see more
Date: 23 Apr 2010 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 6
great chapter love your story
Date: 23 Apr 2010 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 5
such a great daddy!
Date: 23 Apr 2010 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 4
i knew that was coming!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 5
That was intense. This is getting real good and i feel like biting my nails, nervous and anxious for what is coming up next. I am not a nail biter either, i think it's disgusting, but damn i am tempted. Now i finally understand why some peeps can't stop it!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 5
I LOVE this story! "Kate isn't bad news anymore?" That part was really funny:O
Date: 22 Apr 2010 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oooohh, your Edward is a very, very dirtyboy, I love it!
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2010 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 5
Ah, now I have to wait for more...more soon please?!?!?!?!?!? :)
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2010 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 4
Well, Kate I hope you don't expect anything...
And Bella just needs to kick Jake to the curb...
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2010 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 3
Good, I was about to have to smack them both for not attempting to work it out :)
Date: 21 Apr 2010 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 5
Ok Kate needs to leave, Bella needs to move and be with Edward and Emma or something lol....
Cant wait for next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2010 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 2
Intense from the beginning! Love the chapter :)
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2010 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow... :) Good first chapter and definitely not what I was expecting. I like being surprised :)
Date: 21 Apr 2010 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 5
great chapter. little emma is so cute
Date: 21 Apr 2010 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 5
I AM SOOOO GLAD THAT YOU DID NOT LET BELLA HAVE SEX WITH JAKE!!!!!!!!!
Thank you so much for explaining the history with Jake, Leah and Bella. And also the history of Kate and her drug abuse. Poor Emma.
Loved the phone sex with Edward and Bella.
Edward is so much trouble with Bella. I can't wait to see how he handles this.
I am really worried about Edward and Bella's relationship. Long distance relationships are always hard but when you throw all of these factors in, it makes it really HARD.
I will be waiting patenicely (yeah, right) for your next update. lol. Please hurry.
Date: 21 Apr 2010 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 5
ok so i just started reading this story but i can say that i love it and can't wait for more!
Date: 21 Apr 2010 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 3
awwwwww! they are so sweet! and hey there is always skype!
Date: 21 Apr 2010 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 5
Love the update! :)
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2010 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh oh ^^ Not so smooth Edward ...
Love the chapter
Date: 21 Apr 2010 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 5
I just don't know what to say here... Can I wait until the chapter to see where you are going with this???
Date: 21 Apr 2010 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 5
OMFG NNNOOOOO Kate bad news. Edward should of said something to Bella about Kate. Love that she said nice to see you Jake Loved it.
Date: 21 Apr 2010 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 5
cant wait till the next one
Date: 21 Apr 2010 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 5
Can't wait for more!
Date: 21 Apr 2010 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 5
love this story amazing