Date: 22 Apr 2010 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 17
lol jazz puking ha ha
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2010 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 17
LOVE it :)
Date: 22 Apr 2010 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 17
i love this story and can't wait for you to update
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2010 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 17
So cute! They're finally getting there :) I absolutely LOVE how you've created Charlie's character. The peak inside his mind is awesome. I definitely think you do both his smart-ass side and doting father side so well! I am so anxious to see B's reaction to the big question! Congrats and good luck with Baby Run!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 17
this chapter was awsome..Loving the fact that bella is starting to come out of her shell.Emmett is my fav and always will be.Love that bell is starting to tease and joke around with him.
Date: 22 Apr 2010 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 17
I loved this chapter. Poor Jasper and his queasy stomach. Edward seems to be a little better about holding down dinner. Maybe Jasper should have asked the dads and Alice before taco night. This was great. I have to say that i am so loving this story. It's so hard to not badger you about updates. I just can't wait til the next.
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2010 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 16
Beginning of the chapter was hard to read but necessary but the middle of the chapter was so damn funny I spit out my milk while reading and I love milk. I should have cut and pasted but I got to in to it and I'm being lazy today. Okay i should start beta'ing now. Until next time. Noel, Em, Rose, TI, CC, Bella, Papa drama, dates oh its gonna be good I can feel it.
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2010 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 16
You have got to continue with this story!!! I am totally going to add this as one of my favs. please e-mail me when you have added to it!! forthosewhohavefallen at yahoo dot com.
Date: 19 Apr 2010 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 16
I totally loved this chapter, I can't wait until the next one. I loved the Big Bertha comment, she totally has that coming to her. This was a nice chapter, the progression of E/B and J/A is very sweet and leaves me hopeful for more good things to happen.
Later.
-Rae
Date: 18 Apr 2010 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 16
great chapter!! renee is behind bars. Wohooo!!!! cant wait for the next chapter :)
Date: 18 Apr 2010 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 16
That was great sad also
Date: 17 Apr 2010 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 16
Commence happy dance! The only way to make it better would be if Renee suffered a terrible illness and died a slow, painful, humiliating death.
Great chapter. I'm glad Edward has finally come to his senses. How could he not see he was a huuuge hypocrite when it came to him and Jasper? Come on! LOL. I can't wait to see what the Dads say to the boys dating the daughters. My guess is they will give them a hard time but will be fine with it. Maybe an 'I told you so' for Edward.
Date: 17 Apr 2010 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 15
I really liked EPOV of the party. He is such a wonderful guy. I like when Charlie and Carlisle give him advice and he has no idea what they are talking about. hehehe.
Bella got such wonderful, thoughtful gifts. Great job with this chapter. I am a little frightened to read the next one given the way this one ended.
Date: 17 Apr 2010 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 16
You did a great job with this
chapter! Thanks for the
updated! :)
Date: 17 Apr 2010 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 16
i want me an emmett hug! so how many more chapters will there be? is the story drawing to a close?
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2010 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 16
Excellent chapter. when you had them ask bella for an example, i totally thought it was going to be her explaining the stab wound carlisle found way back earlier. With the one you revealed, I'm surprised Emmett didn't go over and crush the evil bitch's head in his massive hands. I've always hated Renee and the reneesme thing always pissed me off. I love when people vilify her cause she fits that role perfectly. I am sad though that there is no torturing of her involved in her sentence. Hopefully she'll get tortured in jail.
I enjoyed this chapter immensly, even though Alice and her color-coordination thing is slightly irritating. I love how the guys confronted Edward though and that the only way Em agreed was if he could watch them talk to the dads. HAHA. that's going to be priceless. I can't wait.
Date: 16 Apr 2010 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 16
Loved Emmett and Jasper ganging up on Edward about dating. Glad that Renee is going to jail.
Date: 16 Apr 2010 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 16
Great chapter, I'm glad Edward said he likes Bella. Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Date: 16 Apr 2010 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 16
I'm really enjoying this story, and your writing style is very easy to read as well as engaging.
Keep it up, as I can't wait to see the developments of the characters and the storyline!
If you have enough time between writing, could you take a look at one of my stories and let me know what you think? I'd love to have the opinion of a fellow fanfiction writer :)
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2010 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 16
ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER!
I LOVED ALICE SAYING "BIG BERTHA'S BITCH!" THAT WAS SO FRECKIN FUNNY!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2010 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 16
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2010 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 16
I can best express my feelings about this chapter in Lolcat form.
We can has Renee prison deths now? Plz?
Date: 16 Apr 2010 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 16
Yes! So happy. I hope there is more. I love this story.
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2010 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 16
Great chapter, but I have to admit that Alice's line at the end about big Bertha stole the show. Excellent, can't wait till the update.
Date: 15 Apr 2010 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 16
YAY - the wicked witch is gone - to jail!!!!! Justice has been served. Now hopefully, Bella can start to heal and try to get over all that Renee did to her over the years. And hopefully, Edward will be a big part of that healing process. He's so sweet with her, I can see that he will do all he can to help Bella get past this.
Date: 15 Apr 2010 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 16
Oh god I loved this chapter! I have been reading for a couple of days now when I get the chance. I have to tell you that although it is sad about the abuse Bella had to endure, I am so happy that she has her dad,brother Em, Edward and most of all Alice among the rest in her corner. Please update soon. I truly love this story.
IP28
Date: 15 Apr 2010 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 16
OH MY GOD!!!! I LOVE IT!!! IM SO HAPPY FOR THEM!!!
Date: 15 Apr 2010 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 16
I wanted Renee to go to jail but I was curious to see what the dads' plan was. Thanks for the story.
Date: 15 Apr 2010 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 16
Big Bertha's bitch? *snort* That was great! Made me laugh.
Date: 15 Apr 2010 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 16
Go Alice! That Big Bertha comment was hilarious!
Date: 15 Apr 2010 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 16
big bertha. Ha Ha
Date: 15 Apr 2010 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 16
"I hope you become Big Bertha's Bitch!" is now one of my fave fic quotes. That so deserves an avi :)
So glad the trial is over and Edward's feeligs are out in the open. I knew what was up with Em and Jazz when they were ignoring and being bitchy to Eddie. I love it.
Can't wait for the guys to ask the Dad's permission to date the girls. That could be quite entertaining if Carlisle and Charlie make them sweat.
Date: 15 Apr 2010 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 16
That was a wonderful chapter Renee got what she deserved and I think Bella is going to get some of what she deserves Love. Love Emmett and I cant wait for the father talk should be fun and then Alice reaction should be priceless. I wonder how Bella will react to Edward wanting to take her out.
Date: 15 Apr 2010 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 16
Yay!!!! Now hopefully Bertha will smother Renee with a pillow after she is done with her. I am so looking forward to the guys asking for permission to take the girls out. I can't imagine Charlie taking this well but from an earlier chapter, I know he can see it coming. I hope the dads make the boys sweat it out a bit, I mean we are talking about their baby girls here! LOL.
I've told you before but I am going to keep saying it, I totally <3 this story and look forward to each and every chapter!!!!
Date: 15 Apr 2010 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 16
Great chapter as usual. Can't wait to see what Charlie has to say about Bella dating! Please update soon!
Date: 15 Apr 2010 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 16
this is a really good story and i am so glad renee got found guilty. update soon please
Date: 15 Apr 2010 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 16
Really awesome update. I would love to have known what Charile and Carlisle had planned for Renee had she walked. Loved it.
Date: 15 Apr 2010 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 16
I am so glad the Renee got the maximum and the lifetime restrainging order. Maybe Bella can finally find some peace in her life. I have a feeling that Edward is going to be making a trip to the book store. That would bring a smile to Bella's face for sure!!! Great job...I can't wait for some first dates...thanks!!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2010 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 16
Love it ^^
Date: 15 Apr 2010 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 16
I'm so glad Emmett and Jasper finally called Edward on his feelings and actions towards Bella! They're so cute! And I think you more than did the trial justice. The way you described the range of emotions Bella went through was fantastic and the outbursts from Emmett and Alice were AWESOME!!! Big Bertha's Bitch....hahaha....omg I can't get over that one! Can't wait for the next chapter--keep bringing on the AWESOME!!!!
Date: 15 Apr 2010 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 16
Love this story! And I really like the Bella you portray. Yes, she's naive to the ways of the world, but actually knows more than she thinks she does. Look forward to seeing her relationships with everyone deepen.
Date: 15 Apr 2010 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 16
That was awesome!! I cried when the verdict was read!! Great story! Can't wait for the first date goodies! BTW, I like your banner!
Date: 15 Apr 2010 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 16
oh am the first to review this chapter!
I knew it would be a toughie emotionally to read and I was right but you handled it sensitively without the need to be graphic so well done and thank you.
great it ended with the right result and light hearted will now push you (gently!) towards writing chapter 17.
Date: 13 Apr 2010 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 15
well isn't little alice a fircracker? thinking that she had a free pass to jump jasper. hey at least a&j got a good kiss out of it. wonder if they will be able to stop or if they will start to sneak? poor bella, she just has to get through the trial and then she can continue down the road to recovery.
Date: 13 Apr 2010 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 14
ooooo... the first kiss together and her very first, at her first birthday party! the poor girl is gonna die of happy overload! so cute to see edward jelous of jake, but i wonder what emmy is gonna think of eddie kissing his baby sis
Date: 12 Apr 2010 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 15
ROFL. I love Alice. Her jumping on Jasper like that was total win. I wonder how long it will take for Edward to realize he wants a realtionship with Bella and allows Jasper and Alice to go ahead.
I knew Bella wouldn't get out of court without some of Renee's past abuse coming out. Thanks for the heads up about the chapter and also the B/E alone time.
Great job :)
Date: 12 Apr 2010 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 15
Great chapter, was so happy to see an update. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 12 Apr 2010 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 15
Thank you for this wonderful story!
I read it all weekend!! :)
Date: 12 Apr 2010 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 13
I LOVE IT! :)
Date: 12 Apr 2010 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 10
Holy Hell, I didn't see that coming! :)
Date: 12 Apr 2010 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 8
This is so awesome! :)
Date: 12 Apr 2010 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 11
Glad she fought even a little great chapter
Date: 12 Apr 2010 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 10
Woah didnt expect hm to show up
Date: 11 Apr 2010 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 15
Poor Bella, hopefully her testamony will put Renee away for a long time.
Date: 11 Apr 2010 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 4
I love it! :)
Date: 11 Apr 2010 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 15
OMG!!! I loved the party and I am soooo happy that Edward kissed Bella. Want to hear more about that. I am worried for Bella on the stand. But as along as she looks into Edward's eyes, she will be ok. As always, you leave me wanting more and more.
Date: 11 Apr 2010 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 3
Brilliant! :)
Date: 11 Apr 2010 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 15
I stayed up half the night to get these fifteen chapters read, and was NOT disappointed. You're doing a great job, and I can't wait to see what you've got coming!
Date: 11 Apr 2010 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 2
Em is the best big brother! :)
Date: 11 Apr 2010 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 7
So good great chapter
Date: 11 Apr 2010 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 6
Great chapter but so sad
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2010 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 15
Edward is so loveable in your story! Gah! The birthday kiss was awesome, so sweeeet!!! Loved this chapter! < looking forward to the rest of Bella's testimony.
Date: 11 Apr 2010 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 2
That was good i like it very much
Date: 11 Apr 2010 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
Really enjoying it
Date: 11 Apr 2010 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 15
I thought for sure Emmett was going to have a fit over the kiss. Alice is priceless she figure with Edward kissing Bella she got free rein with Jasper LOL. I know this is kind of sick but I cant wait to hear about the abuse Renne did to Bella I think it is so I can HATE Renee more that I already do. So Charlie already has it figured out that Edward is in love with Bella??????
Date: 11 Apr 2010 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 15
I really hope Bella has the stength to get through the hearing!!!! And be rid of that evil witch of a mother!!! On a lighter note I loved the Bella and Edward scene with the kiss and braclete!!!! I just love when he cass her baby!! Is he even conscience of the fact or it just come out? Well anyway I love this story and can't way for more!!!!!!
Date: 11 Apr 2010 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 15
I love the party. Bella deserves to be spoiled! Loved the kiss and Alice with Jasper. I am sure Bella is going to have a hard time on the stand. I hope she has had enough time with her real family that she will know they will be there for her not matter what it is she says up there and what she has been though in the past!!! I can't wait for more!!! Great job...thanks!
Date: 11 Apr 2010 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 15
thank you for the update
i really enjoy the story
it's not too dramatic or too sudden
every kind of emotion and relationship happens for a reason
the plots convince us their rightness just so naturally
please keep on writing and sharing, it's truly a refreshing story
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 15
*pout* I kinda hate cliffhangers :(. But hey, it's worth it to read this story! Normally, not an AH fan, but there are a few gems out there. I like this one and hope to see an update soon :-)
Marti
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2010 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 15
I so look forward to the next chapter. Charlie needs to hear what happen to his little girl.....
Date: 11 Apr 2010 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 15
Loved it. She so deserved a great sweet sixteen birthday. Glad Edward was her 1st kiss. Loved it.
Date: 11 Apr 2010 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 15
man why did u have to stop there???
Date: 11 Apr 2010 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 15
I love Neons. My fiance just bought my dad's off him. I'd love to get one, but they quit making them a few years ago. I think '05 or '06 is the last year they made them.
Date: 11 Apr 2010 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 15
I'm really looking forward to some B & E alone time; there hasn't been a lot of that. We all know how Bella feels about Edward and now he is starting to have those same feelings as well, things will start picking up between the two of them. He really cares about her and goes out of his way to make sure she is comforted and well. And now that they've both had that little kiss, I think they'd both like to try it again. And I'm so looking forward to Renee getting what's coming to her. She deserves everything she gets.
Date: 11 Apr 2010 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 15
Great chapter! I love Alice attacking Jasper
Looking forward to more. :)
Date: 11 Apr 2010 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 15
ugh that is evil leavng it there but I understand why.
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2010 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 15
Yay no cliffie next chapter! I am kinda scared about what Bella is going to say next but I hope she will be okay once she says it. I loved the chapter as always. Until next time. That was a quick update not that I mind but wow that was super fast.
Date: 10 Apr 2010 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 15
amazing as always. I love this edward and bella can't wait till hte next update.
Date: 10 Apr 2010 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 15
Every time I read a chapter update, my heart swells a little more for your story. I just absolutely adore it!. I am really looking forward to seeing how Edward is going to deal with Alice and Jasper while developing feelings for Bella himself. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
Date: 10 Apr 2010 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 15
I love Alice. Let her have some Jasper, already. Thanks for the story.
Date: 10 Apr 2010 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 15
Happy Birthday Bella! Another great chapter!
Date: 10 Apr 2010 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 14
Cant wait to read more, really enjoying this story.
Date: 10 Apr 2010 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 14
Good chapter. That was proly Bella's best birthday ever. She deserved it. And maybe she'll get a first kiss from that wonderful boy on her arm
Date: 09 Apr 2010 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 13
Okay, I'm typically pretty 'quiet' since between kids and life I barely have time to keep up with my reading, but I just had to let you know the following lines are some of the best, funniest things I've read in ages!
"... it would be awfully rude if I told her that I'm not sure she is even tall enough to reach Emmett's butt in the first place. Should I offer her a step stool?"
Great job keeping her in the characterization you've given while letting her subtle humor shine. This incarnation of Bella is smart, strong in her own way, and unbelievably charming.
Date: 08 Apr 2010 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 14
Oooh..Oooh!!! Can't wait for this kiss....:) Hopefully they will kiss! Good job and thanks for writing a great story! I LOVE it!
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2010 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 14
Love it ^^
Date: 07 Apr 2010 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 14
Yay, i'm glad Edward is going to be her first Kiss as Jake is an a**. Lol hope you update some more soon.