Date: 27 Jun 2010 10:30 PM Title: A Cosmic Event
They finally took that step! I'm so happy that it finally happened and that Bella is realizing that Edward is not Jacob. Can't wait until next week!
Rhonda
Date: 27 Jun 2010 9:10 PM Title: A Cosmic Event
excellent chapter, loved their little get away how beautifuly romantic and they are together for the first time wonderful, thanks tracy
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2010 8:44 PM Title: A Cosmic Event
Wow, no condoms, I didnt see that coming. Loved the chapter.
Date: 27 Jun 2010 8:02 PM Title: A Cosmic Event
they did it and it was perfect!
Date: 27 Jun 2010 7:45 PM Title: A Cosmic Event
Edward was so sweet. :-)
Date: 27 Jun 2010 7:37 PM Title: A Cosmic Event
gosh, i hate jacob and his stupid, douchebag friends. seriously! ican't believe bella put up with him for as long as she did. how can he not defend her against his friends? he thought it was cool to talk about their sexual experiences to his friend to brag? and his friends then went on to make fun of her and he didn't do anything about it??? not cool....
i really liked edward in here, when he defended bella when emmett made his joke. i felt bad for emmett, because he obviously didn't mean any harm... but bella is really sensitive about sex, espeically because of her past experiences, so i'm glad that edward understood that and protected her
Date: 27 Jun 2010 6:49 PM Title: A Cosmic Event
aww that was sweet and Bella is a vixen. lol she totally got him to sleep with her without a condom. that girl is on fire. lol Nah but I really did like this chapter. it was sweet and we got information on how much of an immature boy Jacob was. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 27 Jun 2010 6:36 PM Title: A Cosmic Event
Oh my god...that has to be one of the sweetest love scenes I've ever read! Loved it! You are such a talented writer. I have this story on alert on ffn but not here. Thank you for the a/n at the top stating that a lemon had been edited but that it was in it's full glory on this site. Now, I'm going to be sure to alert it here as well.
Kat
Date: 27 Jun 2010 6:34 PM Title: A Cosmic Event
phew..that was hawt
yay for shybella!
Date: 27 Jun 2010 6:18 PM Title: A Cosmic Event
Awww. These two are so sweet. I'm happy for them. I hope she talks to him about her past though. He needs to know what a jerk Jake was to her and how he demeaned her. If she doesn't tell him about it edward won't know what to avoid... and that will be problamatic, I'm sure.
Date: 24 Jun 2010 1:06 AM Title: Interruptus
The whole merchandise thing was cool but WHY is she not getting any of that money? You would think that her manager would have made the deal...of course this is fiction. Sorry my accountant was coming out of me and all I could see was the money she was not earning from the sales. ;)
I'm glad to see that Tanya didn't ruin their relationship now hopefully her self-worth will not either.
Date: 23 Jun 2010 8:36 PM Title: Interruptus
Reallity check for Bella she need to understand she is not the only person to ever have these feelings. I cant wait for more
Date: 23 Jun 2010 3:32 PM Title: Interruptus
great chapter, love it!! thanks tracy
Date: 23 Jun 2010 1:11 PM Title: Interruptus
great chapter
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2010 7:43 AM Title: Interruptus
Poor guys, the really need privacy. lol
Date: 22 Jun 2010 9:55 PM Title: Interruptus
And the cock blocks just keep on coming! I feel bad for these two. The way things are going, they are going to be celebrating their golden anniversary before they get any action.
Love the scene in the mall where the girls discover Iz's product line.
Date: 22 Jun 2010 9:27 PM Title: Interruptus
good chapter, it was nice to seem them interact away from people and how shy bella really is. can't wait for more
Date: 22 Jun 2010 6:19 PM Title: Interruptus
loved it ,can't wait for more!!
Date: 22 Jun 2010 5:48 PM Title: Interruptus
Poor Bella, so shy!
I'm certain compatability won't be a problem for these two but I'd be interested in seeing whether or not she loosens up a bit.
Date: 22 Jun 2010 5:34 PM Title: Interruptus
i wish bella would overcome her fear of racing... i wouldn't want anyone to say that she's dragging him down...
i love that they're beginning to take their relationship to the next level. i understand bella's fears about them not being compatible sexually, especially since he seems more experienced and adventurous than she is. i hope she will just push her inhibitions aside and not hold back with him.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2010 4:59 PM Title: Interruptus
So difficult to have a relationship in the glare of the media spotlight as well as all the crew members. At least Edward is willing to take it slow in spite of his "obsidian balls".
I love the fact that she has her own line of clothing for little girls as well as big girls. I would love an Izzy Swan T-shirt but I think the Edward Cullen would be a much better fit! Haha !
Looking forward to the Monday updates since SF has ended and yes, I'm still wiping away the tears from the ending !
Date: 22 Jun 2010 4:28 PM Title: Interruptus
dang that Dave! lol I really hope Bella does loosen up a bit, Edward is used to Tanya after all, and its probably hard to rein in his desires. Although I feel bad and understand what Bella feels she has to compete against as well. Love this story and cant wait for more
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2010 4:15 PM Title: Interruptus
damn he is the too sweet! i loved how he stayed near her during the race, but he can't coddle her either, they'll both lose out on points and finishes. Wouldn't want them to be threatened about losing their ride next year (and separating them) if they don't make the numbers
Date: 22 Jun 2010 3:43 PM Title: Interruptus
aww poor Edward and his obsidian balls hahaha. great chapter!!
Kristi
Date: 20 Jun 2010 7:28 PM Title: Breakaway
i like it! i was reading thru the Kevlar Knights outtakes (again!) when i saw this & i really like it.
Date: 20 Jun 2010 12:41 AM Title: Bold Exes and Unearthed Bravado
can not wait for more and they said it!!!!
Date: 19 Jun 2010 9:43 PM Title: Pushing Boundaries
wow i've never read this kind of date it was so original and very them!
Date: 19 Jun 2010 9:11 PM Title: Mr. Cullen’s Neighborhood
aw i loved edward in this and the house sounded awesome ands o cozy and so them!
Date: 19 Jun 2010 8:49 PM Title: You’re Asking Me This NOW?
aw so sweet!
Date: 19 Jun 2010 8:17 PM Title: Attacking Walls
aw that was so sweet i love him, he was so vulnerable here, so sweet!!!
Date: 19 Jun 2010 2:25 PM Title: New Connections
i love the pace!!!
Date: 19 Jun 2010 2:02 PM Title: Breakaway
i don't mind jumping forward i love this!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2010 11:50 PM Title: Bold Exes and Unearthed Bravado
wow!
Date: 16 Jun 2010 5:53 AM Title: Bold Exes and Unearthed Bravado
Tanya cock blocking LOL So happy they told each other they loved each other. Should be a fun ride.
Date: 16 Jun 2010 5:18 AM Title: Bold Exes and Unearthed Bravado
great chapter, glad all that tanya business was sorted out quickly, his gay ex lol, they told each other they love eachother that's lovely, thanks tracy
Date: 16 Jun 2010 3:17 AM Title: Bold Exes and Unearthed Bravado
well at least everything's under control now and its official, bella is a cock tease. lol I cant' wait for more. this is going great. thanks again bye
Date: 16 Jun 2010 1:27 AM Title: Bold Exes and Unearthed Bravado
Loved it! The ILY was really great and totally unexpected, but it was perfect!
Sarah
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2010 12:19 AM Title: Bold Exes and Unearthed Bravado
Shame on me, I was one of those that had forgotten about Edward's past with Tanya. I'm glad she isn't a heinous bitch and actually helped them before Bella left.
They said they love each other!!!!! And then they get cockblocked by the gay ex and frozen pizza...not too many people can say that is the reason behind their sexual frustration. And even though they will be alone together in Bella's trailer, I just don't see Edward taking her in a rocking trailer heading down Route 66. That is just too white trashy (at least for their first time). ;)
Author's Response:
LMAO! so very true on many counts! Thanks so much for the laugh!!!
Date: 15 Jun 2010 11:43 PM Title: Bold Exes and Unearthed Bravado
I knew it! Ex girlfriend sent from another planet to keep Edward and Bella apart! LOL! Just kidding! I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Rhonda
Author's Response:
lol....Hope you enjoy the ride!
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2010 8:48 PM Title: Bold Exes and Unearthed Bravado
Tanya is one crazy crack up. She did upset me when she told them it was pizza time. lol
Date: 15 Jun 2010 4:21 PM Title: Bold Exes and Unearthed Bravado
great chapter
Date: 15 Jun 2010 4:18 PM Title: Bold Exes and Unearthed Bravado
haha Tanya's funny. great chapter!!
Date: 15 Jun 2010 3:36 PM Title: Bold Exes and Unearthed Bravado
Loved it!!!
Date: 15 Jun 2010 3:28 PM Title: Bold Exes and Unearthed Bravado
I love Tanya. It's so funny. Hey, thanks for not making Tanya a hateful hag like most ff's. :-)
Author's Response:
LOL...I've done both, but since in SF I made her the bane of their existence, I wanted to make her a fun situation that forced a little deeper communication. I think it was pretty well received. Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 15 Jun 2010 3:25 PM Title: Bold Exes and Unearthed Bravado
BOOYAH!! Izzy Swan: 1 Team Volturi: 0!! Suck on that, Aro my man!! A-.
Author's Response:
LOL...glad you enjoyed it. That was a fun chapter to write with blunt Tanya and all the rest. Thanks for the review!
Date: 15 Jun 2010 3:22 PM Title: Bold Exes and Unearthed Bravado
I loved that chapter once everything was cleared up. Can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2010 3:07 PM Title: Bold Exes and Unearthed Bravado
Wow Tanya sure added some spice to the mix for a moment there, and they ultimately professed their love thanks to her and got some good communication going.
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2010 2:05 PM Title: Bold Exes and Unearthed Bravado
:D whew! crisis averted! lol! Thank god Tanya spoke up! and the ILY's *melt* can't wait for their time on the road!
Date: 15 Jun 2010 1:45 PM Title: Bold Exes and Unearthed Bravado
i really like tanya in here. she's blunt and straightforward and she genuinely cares for edward. i'm glad that she helped out so much in the bella and edward situation in this chapter.
i hope bella learns from her mistake when she doesn't commmunicate with edward. she is too quick to assume things without giving him the benefit of the doubt. she has to learn to trust him. sure, she's been burned before buut she can't kep living in the past
Date: 15 Jun 2010 11:27 AM Title: Unexpected Visitor
So what is it then? And what did HQ want without Bella being there?
Date: 14 Jun 2010 11:22 AM Title: Schooling Cullen
I love it when women put men in their place when he is trying to be all cavemanesk! Go Bella! At least this man realized he was being a dick...he was really only worried about her which makes him a forgiven man.
Date: 14 Jun 2010 5:38 AM Title: Unexpected Visitor
Ohhh I bet it's Tanya!!!!!
Date: 14 Jun 2010 5:05 AM Title: Pushing Boundaries
I loved the first date. How romantic!
Date: 14 Jun 2010 3:57 AM Title: Unexpected Visitor
Awww thats so not fair! And Im really glad Im reading this from my LT rather than my phone bec I can review here when I cant on my cell.
I really like this story a lot. I know so much of it u r having to really get into in order to bring out some of the things you dont know much about. I congradulate you on doing a really good job of that.
But now to the story, I am always anxiously waiting every update that you have. Like I said this story is so good. But Im a racing fan myself. I like off roading stuff like NASA the best. Nascar is good but its just not my fave. I wish you could bring some more 'training' Cullen in. I think it would be fun for them to have some more off track time like that.
But congats on the story so far!
Date: 13 Jun 2010 6:26 PM Title: Unexpected Visitor
aahh!!! well strawberry blonde automatically makes me assume Tanya. hopefully Bella believes Edward. i wonder what Aro wanted. great chapter, update soon!!
Kristi
Date: 12 Jun 2010 10:28 AM Title: Unexpected Visitor
Yikes! I'm not sure who this other woman could be, but I'm thinking maybe an ex girlfriend...or maybe his sister...cousin? Alien from another planet sent here to destroy Edward and Bella's happiness? LOL!
Rhonda
Author's Response:
LOL...you crack me up!!!
Date: 12 Jun 2010 4:50 AM Title: Unexpected Visitor
Oh hell no! Bella is not going to take too kindly to Tanya being in her house (which it basically is now). Please tell me this is the he Volturi brothers way of drumming up more publicity?!?
Date: 12 Jun 2010 3:33 AM Title: Unexpected Visitor
i really hope it is esme coming to visit...but she said that she was a blonde bombshell...so i am hoping that is tanya the ex-girlfriend who turned lesbian. can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Hey! Good Memory. Most readers completely forgot the mention of Tanya being his ex that left him for a girl! :)
Date: 12 Jun 2010 2:38 AM Title: Unexpected Visitor
great chapter even with the cliffy attached nice to see bella and edward getting om so well and a little intimate, soooooooo who is the mystery blonde????? thanks tracy
Date: 12 Jun 2010 1:34 AM Title: Unexpected Visitor
I'm going to be honest i don't care who she is as long as you get rid of her xx
Date: 12 Jun 2010 12:50 AM Title: Unexpected Visitor
LOL!! It's Tanya right, and she was totally checking Bella out! Too bad that isn't the way Bella's gonna see it, but hopefully she will give Edward the time to explain! Loved it!
Sarah
Date: 11 Jun 2010 9:46 PM Title: Unexpected Visitor
dun dun dun..... you are evil, leaving us there! LOL j/k. cant wait to see how he gets out of this one! :)
Date: 11 Jun 2010 9:34 PM Title: Unexpected Visitor
great chapter
Date: 11 Jun 2010 9:07 PM Title: Unexpected Visitor
its tanya!!! oh nooo they were just making progress
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2010 8:35 PM Title: Unexpected Visitor
Dont tell me this he going to be their new teammate.
Date: 11 Jun 2010 8:32 PM Title: Unexpected Visitor
is it tanya? oooo cant wait to find out who she is
Date: 11 Jun 2010 7:54 PM Title: Unexpected Visitor
EASY!! Your version of Tanya - that or a youthful version of Esme?! B+.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2010 7:09 PM Title: Unexpected Visitor
Well
what a good cliffie. Fun story. Guessing Tanya? But guessing she is not there to ruin things if Eddie
boy can act
fast enough. Ugh i hate texting reviews. Meg
Date: 11 Jun 2010 6:11 PM Title: Unexpected Visitor
OMG you are not nice today. Please tell me that the blonde is is sister please. They were getting so close and going so well I should of known that something would have to fuck it up LOL :)
Date: 11 Jun 2010 5:58 PM Title: Unexpected Visitor
If this is Tanya the tomboy this would be funny. :-)
Date: 11 Jun 2010 4:02 PM Title: Unexpected Visitor
OK, so since she's strawberry blonde I'm going to guess that it's Tanya. I hope they're not involved. Sister maybe... or an ex? Good friend, but lesbian (she looked Bella over and said Edward had good taste).
Can't wait for the next chapter. By the way, what't the title of your Original fiction piece?
Author's Response:
My original fiction piece is The Children of Creation. It hasn't posted yet, but will on the 15th or 16th. Thanks for asking. As far as Tanya's relation to Edward, check out the chapter called Mr Cullen's Neighborhood for a reminder. It was mentioned in passing...;)
Date: 11 Jun 2010 3:35 PM Title: Unexpected Visitor
maybe the blonde is just his sister??? i mean, you said that she 'smirked evilly' but maybe in bella's state, she couldn't tell the difference between and 'evil' smark from a mischeivous one... and hte blonde moved toward her with 'a look of concern' so she can't be all bad. i bet it's just his sister...
i'm more worried about the phone call from aro's office tellign edward to come in right away, and ALONE. i have a feeling it has something to do with bella. or maybe it has somethign to do with his career and they are offering him a chance to move forward, but it will mean him separating from her... i dunno... i'm just making wild guesses.
can't wait til the next chapter. keep up the good work!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2010 3:12 PM Title: Unexpected Visitor
Who is Tanya, now an old girlfriend, maybe a relative or good friend? You left me hanging, UGH!! Evil pure Evil ;)
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2010 2:54 PM Title: Unexpected Visitor
He freaking better be related to (Tanya?)her! Well at least Bella doesn't have clothes on so she can't run out of the house!
Date: 11 Jun 2010 2:44 PM Title: Unexpected Visitor
for Edward's sake, she better be like a Publicity representative or a cousin. lol that poor girl. she put herself out there on the line and this happens. also the first time edward sees her in a towel and then this. lol keep up the great work. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2010 1:05 PM Title: Breakaway
Loved the start but that is normal for one of your stories. I too know very little about racing so this will be fun to read. Go Bella wat to take Cullen down a peg. Meg
Date: 10 Jun 2010 2:42 AM Title: Schooling Cullen
Loved the fact that she could show him what she could do. His is concerned about her but he better watch his mouth. How are they going to survie apart now that they have spent the nights together.
Date: 09 Jun 2010 9:41 PM Title: Schooling Cullen
great chapter, loved bella putting edward in his place but he took it in good grace, i wonder how they will fair being apart, thanks tracy
Date: 09 Jun 2010 4:33 AM Title: Schooling Cullen
nice to see Bella show she knows what she is doing, gives Edward a better glimpse of her experience, They are so addicted to each other, she might as well just move into the new house with Edward.
Date: 09 Jun 2010 3:55 AM Title: Schooling Cullen
great chapter
Date: 09 Jun 2010 12:09 AM Title: Schooling Cullen
Ahhh, I can totally see these two sneaking across their back lawns to sleep together because they won't be able to sleep alone.
Date: 08 Jun 2010 9:43 PM Title: Schooling Cullen
Total girl power that's what I like! LOL! Totally loved the Jr. refrecence too!
Rhonda
Author's Response:
LOL...that may have happened after the timeline I'm using, but I found that tidbit about Dale Jr. scouting the V8 drivers over his vacation while researching about road racing and HAD to throw it in! LOL! Glad you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2010 7:49 PM Title: Schooling Cullen
I think Edward took getting schooled by Bella with grace, even if I found it very funny.
Date: 08 Jun 2010 5:51 PM Title: Schooling Cullen
well Bella showed him. lol I'm glad you updated and I can't wait for more. keep up the awesome work. thanks again bye
Date: 08 Jun 2010 5:00 PM Title: Schooling Cullen
hahaha Bella owned him! that was really cute :)
Kristi
Date: 08 Jun 2010 3:30 PM Title: Schooling Cullen
i love it :)
Date: 08 Jun 2010 3:18 PM Title: Schooling Cullen
i like that bella is able to show edward other aspects to racing and let him expand his racing knowledge, even if it isn't nascar. maybe this knowledge will come in handy one day on the nascar race track... or maybe not... but i like that she schooled him in something.. sometimes, he can be too cocky for his own good.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2010 1:39 PM Title: Schooling Cullen
Ha! She showed him.....(lovingly) ;) why can't they spend their time together after practices and the race in each others trailers??? gossip???
Date: 07 Jun 2010 6:46 AM Title: Pushing Boundaries
WOW what a date that was so cool. This is going to be hard to keep it cool and hands to there selves but why should they they are both grown ups and deserve a little relife. LOL
Date: 05 Jun 2010 4:08 PM Title: Pushing Boundaries
ohhhh, great chapter, the love is really begining to flow, they have enjoyed a beautiful first date and i'm sure many more are to come, dates that is especially now she will be living at the end of the garden, thanks tracy
Date: 04 Jun 2010 6:53 PM Title: Pushing Boundaries
OH MY GOD THAT WAS VERY ROMANTIC. I'm trying to decide which story i like best SF or Breaway but i still can't because they are both excellent. you know this but are an awesome writer i'm also trying to decide which of your other stories i'm going to read after i send the review. sigh, DECISIONS, DECISIONS, DECISIONS.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2010 2:25 AM Title: Pushing Boundaries
Gold star to Edward for best first date ever!!! What a fantastic idea to have dinner and a private showing at a drive-in. I also love that he took her to race her car. It was so obvious that she needed that before an actual race. I love how Edward watches out for her.;)
The end was so cute how they couldn't sleep but were out cold once they were back in each other's arms. Sweet!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2010 12:01 AM Title: Pushing Boundaries
Oh what a nice first date. Edward is so perfect. I can't wait for he and Bella to be neighbors.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2010 7:55 PM Title: Pushing Boundaries
Awesome. I loved how Edward eased Bella onto the track again. A driver knows another driver and it would have been a disaster to let her on the track for the first time in an actual race.
The date was so romantic. To rent out an entire drive-in and have a table set up in the middle just for them with her favorite movies and a sofa to relax on. The first kiss was beautiful. Its amazing how a simple kiss can hold so much power over two people. You can capture that moment like no other. And the fact that neither of them was comfortable being away from the other at the end of the night. That was sweet.
I'm curious though will Bella still buy Edward's house now that she will have a few days living with him? Great chapter again. I can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2010 4:19 AM Title: Pushing Boundaries
Awww, Edward is just so darn cute, makes you love him even more.