Date: 03 Jun 2010 3:39 AM Title: Pushing Boundaries
i'm soo glad that with edward's help, bella can race again... i was a little fearful that that would be a big issue in this story...i love how these two have become so close so quickly!!! they're sooo adorable together!!! and i love their first date. edward is quite the romantic! i can't wait for her to become neighbors with him and for them to walk through their backyards to get to each other's house. that's kind of really cute
Date: 03 Jun 2010 3:13 AM Title: Pushing Boundaries
sigh love this
thank you
ally
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2010 3:09 AM Title: Pushing Boundaries
awesome date! very romantic ;) i hope Bella will do well in the next race and not panic
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2010 2:11 AM Title: Mr. Cullen’s Neighborhood
Home is where the heart is. And, Edward's heart belongs to Bella. So therefore it only would make sense that she move there. While yes, I do believe it would be too soon for a new couple to move in together this is a nice alternative. So far. :)
Date: 03 Jun 2010 1:46 AM Title: Pushing Boundaries
aww first date, first kiss too cute. I loved that date. thus proving if guys actually think they can be romantic. lol thanks again bye
Date: 02 Jun 2010 10:59 PM Title: Pushing Boundaries
aww that was so stinking cute! i loved it!! can't wait for more :):)
Kristi
Date: 02 Jun 2010 10:59 PM Title: Pushing Boundaries
Once again, so sweet! I absolutely love this fic! Thanks for another great chapter.
Date: 02 Jun 2010 10:49 PM Title: Pushing Boundaries
what a sweet date he made for her! Love these two!
Date: 02 Jun 2010 9:47 PM Title: Pushing Boundaries
Aw!! Some nice ExB fluffiness!! Always good!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2010 9:12 PM Title: Pushing Boundaries
Edward planned a perfect first date- so love this story and a fantastic chapter. Cant wait for the next one.
Date: 02 Jun 2010 8:53 PM Title: Pushing Boundaries
Their definitely becoming closer, looking forward to seeing how it plays out, especially with Bella's first race back.
Date: 02 Jun 2010 2:33 AM Title: The Edward Shaped Hole
best chapter yet.
Date: 02 Jun 2010 1:33 AM Title: New Connections
Still interested and getting better with each chapter.
Date: 28 May 2010 5:34 AM Title: Mr. Cullen’s Neighborhood
Loved it!
Date: 28 May 2010 3:56 AM Title: Mr. Cullen’s Neighborhood
I love this story, it includes two of my favorite things. I wasn't sure how I was gong to feel about a female driver, even in a story, but the way you made the characters, that is great. Cannot wait for more track time, I want someone to take James out, he is making me mad. Oh and thanks for having Dale Jr. win the race that they had there crash in, its about time that he won, even if it is in a story.
[Report This]Date: 28 May 2010 1:18 AM Title: Mr. Cullen’s Neighborhood
Oh, can't wait for an update.
Date: 27 May 2010 7:09 PM Title: Mr. Cullen’s Neighborhood
i love your story cant wait for the next update
Date: 26 May 2010 10:47 PM Title: Mr. Cullen’s Neighborhood
So they are going to be neighbors why not room mate wink wink but they have not even kissed yet so I see neighbors. cant wait for more.
Date: 26 May 2010 1:59 PM Title: Mr. Cullen’s Neighborhood
Please don't let Bella "overthink" this too much. Overthinking Bella is quite annoying, LOL
Date: 26 May 2010 12:08 PM Title: Mr. Cullen’s Neighborhood
great chapter
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2010 3:13 AM Title: Mr. Cullen’s Neighborhood
wow!
Date: 26 May 2010 2:47 AM Title: Mr. Cullen’s Neighborhood
Awhhh...will she take it? If she does then when she and Edward get married she can move Charlie into the smaller home. Oh wait am I getting too far ahead of myself?
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2010 2:37 AM Title: You’re Asking Me This NOW?
J'adooore
Date: 26 May 2010 2:04 AM Title: Mr. Cullen’s Neighborhood
Bella needs to get over her insecurities, Edward has already proven he isn't like Jacob. I'm hoping she doesn't walk away from him just because she's insecure.
Date: 25 May 2010 11:44 PM Title: Mr. Cullen’s Neighborhood
aww things are progressing smoothly. :) I can't wait for more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 25 May 2010 11:29 PM Title: Mr. Cullen’s Neighborhood
seems like these two are going to be neighbors!! ahhh!! and they're separated by only a fence. how cute is that????
Date: 25 May 2010 11:01 PM Title: Mr. Cullen’s Neighborhood
Love this story so much! Great chapter and a good look into their future! Can't wait for the next one!
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2010 10:42 PM Title: Mr. Cullen’s Neighborhood
The big house sounds perfect for them, hes already thinking of filling the rooms with babies, lol.
Date: 25 May 2010 9:38 PM Title: Mr. Cullen’s Neighborhood
Love it! Can't wait to see what's next!
Date: 25 May 2010 9:23 PM Title: Mr. Cullen’s Neighborhood
Enjoying the story so far!
Date: 25 May 2010 9:04 PM Title: Mr. Cullen’s Neighborhood
what a wonderful way to live with the gate in he middle it would certainly keep them private as the paps seem to have gone crazy, they are yet to kiss will we get a kiss on the first date thursday? thanks tracy
Date: 25 May 2010 8:11 PM Title: Mr. Cullen’s Neighborhood
This story is great! I'm checking everyday for an update.
Congrats!
Date: 25 May 2010 6:42 PM Title: Mr. Cullen’s Neighborhood
Aw, fluffiness! A-.
Date: 25 May 2010 6:40 PM Title: Mr. Cullen’s Neighborhood
i hope Bella buys Edward's house! then they'd be neighbors. and when they get married, she can sell it and move in with him in the big house and have lots of babies. oh, sorry am i jumping the gun? haha great chapter, can't wait for the next one!!!
Kristi
Date: 25 May 2010 6:28 PM Title: Mr. Cullen’s Neighborhood
these two are so stinkin' cute! I love it!
Date: 25 May 2010 6:01 PM Title: Mr. Cullen’s Neighborhood
*rinses...*
*burshes again*
*rinses with mouthwash*
GAH! Cavity number 5 or something form this fic! So sweet! I love it! These two are going to be somehitng hot AND soulful when they finaly hit their stride physically. And I look forward to every last word of it!
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2010 5:55 PM Title: Mr. Cullen’s Neighborhood
They haven't even had a first "real date" and he already is picturing her in the new house with kids all around. Gotta love it!
The car lusting is so cute. Guys do it all the time but to realize that Izzy has motor oil in her veins too is really adorable. No wonder they are so good together.
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2010 5:50 PM Title: Mr. Cullen’s Neighborhood
Oh i hope he buys the house.....just in case ....down the road...(no pressure or anything...lol) they make their relationship permenant, they can raise their kids there :)
Date: 25 May 2010 5:33 PM Title: Mr. Cullen’s Neighborhood
Ok Edward is tooo adorable, Bella is too nervous, and her reservations keep trying to make their presence known. It'll be cute to see them as neighbors. Cant wait!
Date: 24 May 2010 2:52 AM Title: You’re Asking Me This NOW?
awww that chapter was so good
Date: 23 May 2010 1:28 AM Title: You’re Asking Me This NOW?
I fall a little more in love with this racing pair each chapter!
Date: 22 May 2010 1:02 AM Title: You’re Asking Me This NOW?
Great chapter. Look forward to the next.
Date: 21 May 2010 9:04 AM Title: You’re Asking Me This NOW?
I just want to say that I like this story and I am a NASCAR fan as well as a twilight fan. In fact my dad and I have tickets for the Napa race on Father's day so if you have any questions, let me know. Now that Danica Patrick has made her move, someday we will have women in Sprint Cup.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2010 6:32 AM Title: You’re Asking Me This NOW?
Let's just hope that Edward didn't really think that Bella would never see his little stunt. I did notice that he called her Bella. Bella is really a much for fitting name for her anyway. Izzy is fine for the track, but for Edward to call her anything else is just odd. On occasion Isabella is alright. lol. What a flirt that boy is. haha. Now that was one charming line for him to lay on her. Hmm, even though a picture does speak a 1000 words; it seems that they also leave the viewer speechless. The owners can kiss my ass... I mean their ass. Never-mind I meant what I said. The talking to my girl line had put a smile on my face. I liked the His Bella one as well. Bella really is his whether they have admitted it to one another yet is another thing. His and Hers. By the way I loved how you switched from Bella to Izzy just that quick. When Izzy comes out to play you better watch your @$$! No pressure for a date right? At least that time it wasn't broadcasted to the world. Edward Cullen you may very well be in trouble with that little fiesty lady. Speaking of fiesty... I wonder how she will react to whatever his plan entails.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2010 5:58 AM Title: Sweet Awakenings
So I guess it is safe to say: Father knows best. I don't have children myself, but I have heard that it is extremely tough to watch them grow. Between wanting to protect their heart, but at the same time wanting them to be loved for the rest of their life. It is a budding relationship. They do have a little ways to grow; I think that they could a few subtle pushes. haha. God knows, Charlie is trying. haha It may have been hell for Edward to have to wait, but he would have done it 10x over for Izzy/Bella. Anything to appease her. Now, I wonder just how deep her fear with grip her.
Date: 21 May 2010 12:06 AM Title: You’re Asking Me This NOW?
Awwww! TOO cute! I am seriously going to need to see a dentist after I`m done reading this fic!
Another great chapter!
Date: 20 May 2010 5:07 PM Title: You’re Asking Me This NOW?
great chapter
Date: 20 May 2010 6:00 AM Title: You’re Asking Me This NOW?
How sweet but come on let get some kissing going on. What does he have in store for Bella so she will be ready to race.????
Date: 20 May 2010 2:20 AM Title: You’re Asking Me This NOW?
aww!!! it is so like Edward to ask Bella out in the middle of a race. and i love that he calls her Bella now!! i love this story so much. (sometimes when i'm driving, i pretend i'm Bella racing) um.. yeah, ignore that last bit. anyway, amazing chapter. can't wait for the new one!
Kristi
[Report This]Date: 19 May 2010 9:46 PM Title: You’re Asking Me This NOW?
LOL! I love that Edward is holding this normal, run of the mill conversation with Bella while he is still in the race. And the hand holding is sweet. Personally, I love the heat, but I am enjoying this slow burn you are writing for these two. ;)
[Report This]Date: 19 May 2010 8:15 PM Title: You’re Asking Me This NOW?
So now its out in the open, yippee. Now I amwondering what Edwards plan is to help Bella get back into her racecar. I could tell that she is going to have problems.
Date: 19 May 2010 7:58 PM Title: You’re Asking Me This NOW?
great chapter, i really liked this chapter a happy we realise were falling in love chapter, edward won his race, everything is cool, thanks tracy
Date: 19 May 2010 6:44 PM Title: Breakaway
Great story! they are both so cute.
keep writing please!!
Date: 19 May 2010 6:03 PM Title: You’re Asking Me This NOW?
aww those two are sweet as hell and just like they said, like 6th graders. lol I loved it. thanks again bye
Date: 19 May 2010 5:48 PM Title: You’re Asking Me This NOW?
aww im so happy they are happy but is he gonna be jealous when she gets back in the car ? cant wait till next chapter
Date: 19 May 2010 5:09 PM Title: You’re Asking Me This NOW?
Awe! What a great chapter! Really love your Edward and Bella!
[Report This]Date: 19 May 2010 4:38 PM Title: You’re Asking Me This NOW?
Just when I thought I couldn't love him more! Asking for a date in the middle of the race. Nothing like leading with your heart.
I'm glad they haven't kissed yet. There isn't quite enough sexual tension between them yet...haha. When they do finally get down to business I know we can count on you to give us ALL the details!
I'm really enjoying all the aspects of this story. Thanks!
Date: 16 May 2010 8:38 AM Title: Sweet Awakenings
great story can not wait for the update... please update soon
Date: 16 May 2010 6:18 AM Title: Sweet Awakenings
Awhhh!
Date: 14 May 2010 5:12 AM Title: Sweet Awakenings
god everthing ou write is alwas so brilliant i totally love this story can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 13 May 2010 9:19 PM Title: Sweet Awakenings
nother superb chapter, love how edwarrd is so concerned for issy, sounds like they having a lotr of fun in that hospital room lol thanks tracy
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2010 5:36 AM Title: Sweet Awakenings
J'ai hâte de lire la suite
Date: 13 May 2010 3:38 AM Title: The Edward Shaped Hole
Awe, loved this chapter! Perfection!
Date: 13 May 2010 1:59 AM Title: Breakaway
Loving it so far! I've never been able to get much into NASCAR but my family are all mega fans. I have to say that if Edward Cullen was really driving, I may just have to sit in front of the TV for hours and watch his little car go around in circles!! :) And Bella too...I mean "GIRL POWER" and all that jazz! And the banner is so freaking awesome!
Ok, on to the next chapter!
Author's Response:
LOL...thanks! I'm pretty proud of that banner :) I made it myself. I'm so glad you are enjoying it. I don't know a ton about NASCAR, so it's really more about the relationships and a little about the racing :D
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2010 8:52 PM Title: Sweet Awakenings
Who doesn't love Monty Python? That shit is classic!
Excellent chapter. I think it is awesome how they seem to gravitate towards each other and they are more aware of the other's pain rather than their own.
Charlie is a good dad. I love the inner strugle to want to protect his little girl from getting her heart broken but also wants her to be open to find love.
Date: 12 May 2010 12:17 PM Title: Sweet Awakenings
can you all say aww? that was too sweet. I loved it. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
Date: 12 May 2010 10:35 AM Title: Sweet Awakenings
Loved it! I can't wait until Edward gets Izzy back into the race car. There's going to be a lot of nerves on her part and I'm sure Edwards going to help calm those down.
Rhonda
Date: 12 May 2010 6:49 AM Title: Sweet Awakenings
Love Monty Python but I also Love Benny Hill LOL. Good to know his leg is just bruised. I hope Bella isnt to afraid to race???
Date: 12 May 2010 5:17 AM Title: Sweet Awakenings
Cute. :)
Date: 12 May 2010 5:16 AM Title: Sweet Awakenings
Damn, you spoiled us. How will we survive the wait?
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2010 4:42 AM Title: Sweet Awakenings
those two really are sweet- love Charlie getting into the teasing of not just Bella, but Edward too. Cant wait for the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2010 4:23 AM Title: Sweet Awakenings
Happy that Edward is okay and able to race. I'm sure Bella will only be taking off one week to heal. She is one tough cookie and I love her spirit and determination.
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2010 3:33 AM Title: Sweet Awakenings
amazing chapter, great job :)
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2010 2:51 AM Title: Sweet Awakenings
aww, they are too cute together
Date: 12 May 2010 2:35 AM Title: Sweet Awakenings
I have absolutley no interest in NASCAR and racing in general, but I love this Edward and Bella. Something about their akward flirting and testing of the waters is so believable and relatable. I am loving on this story! Another Winner!
Date: 12 May 2010 1:08 AM Title: Sweet Awakenings
Great chapter, I like the Bella was sort of the one to make the first move... it's usually Edward.
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2010 12:54 AM Title: Sweet Awakenings
She needs to race as soon as possible to get over the fear. I am so glad they seem to be figured some things out.
Date: 12 May 2010 12:14 AM Title: Sweet Awakenings
I really love your story. Edwards and bella's budding romance is so freakin cute!!! And charlie is funny ribbing Bella.
Date: 12 May 2010 12:12 AM Title: Sweet Awakenings
Great job---am really enjoying this story, and get excited each time I see that you have updated in my email box! Thanks for the great story (all of them!)
Date: 12 May 2010 12:10 AM Title: Sweet Awakenings
aww Bella and Edward are so cute together! and Charlie cracks me up. i love this story, i keep re-reading it lol. great chapter, can't wait for the next one!!!
Kristi
P.S. those clips were hilarious! i never actually seen the movie, but i'm going to have to
Date: 11 May 2010 1:19 PM Title: The Edward Shaped Hole
Again another great chapter. It's great to watch these two develope feelings for each other. Please tell me if he screws up or not?
Update Soon!!!
Date: 11 May 2010 1:04 PM Title: Attacking Walls
aww that was sweet at least he is now noticing that he is in love with her :)
Date: 10 May 2010 6:11 PM Title: The Edward Shaped Hole
"Let's put it this way, Aro. Either I fly to the next race, or you find another driver. I. Am. Not. Leaving. Her. Period."
"In that moment, another large chunk of the wall that had built up around her heart to protect it crumbled into rubble, leaving a large Edward shaped space, just waiting for him to choose to walk through."
Are you planning to pay my dentist bill ofor the cavity I just got form all that sweetenss? LOL!
Very cute. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 10 May 2010 5:55 PM Title: Attacking Walls
"But, I love her..."
fave line form this chapter! Such a mature statement, said with immature grounds... very sweet
Date: 10 May 2010 5:35 PM Title: New Connections
Uh OH, they were outside... did stalkerazzi get a hold of that moment on film?
They're so cute though! And I LOVE that you're writing Jake as kind of a jerk. It's about time someone did that!
Date: 10 May 2010 5:18 PM Title: Breakaway
I like it! Very different to think of them in the racing world. I actually really like that you jumped forward quite a bit with time too. it helps advance things pretty quickly.
Off to read next one.
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2010 6:08 AM Title: The Edward Shaped Hole
I like the 'I told you so' look from Charlie. Simple yet understated. Daniels deserved his crash. You don't purposely hit someones vehicle without having Karma bite your ass in the end. Not many parents would be as supportive as Charlie. It is something to aspire to, I'll tell you that. Charlie and Bella are two quite peas in pods. While it was a moment worthy of Knights it was incredibly stupid. He is no good to her six feet under someones tires. I digress what is done is done, and she better appreciate. I told the girl in my first (or, was it second?) review not to believe everything she read and heard. But, did she listen? No. Shame, shame on you Ms. Swan. I think the conversation of a rebuilt throttle is definitely feminine. Three reasons: 1 a female is driving the car, 2: half her crew is female. That along makes it gender neutral depending on how it is perceived. And, number 3 cars are always given a ladies name. *smirks* Joss Whedon fan I see? Honey, Edward will walk through that hole.
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2010 5:20 AM Title: Attacking Walls
I will say it is nice to get a little perspective for father Swan. He protects his daughter, and saw with in 5 min Edward would do the same. Even if Edward didn't realize it at the time. Edward was in the right course of thinking about one thing. It is usually a bad idea to get involved with a co-worker. Of course, I did say usually, A.K.A not always. I know I am gifted with being subtle. haha Never bet on Alice and also never ignore Rose when is speaking Auto. Family is a relative term. Bullshit he better get is ass there and safely. Bella (not just Izzy) needs him there. Besides his admission I did notice that he called her sweetheart twice, and thought of her as his Izzy.
Date: 10 May 2010 3:56 AM Title: The Edward Shaped Hole
I cant wait until u have the next chap ready for us. I really like this story.
Date: 10 May 2010 2:08 AM Title: The Edward Shaped Hole
I am loving this story!
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2010 1:08 AM Title: Attacking Walls
Great chapter
Date: 09 May 2010 10:19 PM Title: The Edward Shaped Hole
greatt chapter, edward has fallen for issy big time just as she has him, issy geing a little afraid is normal, charlie is a wise man, thanks tracy
Date: 09 May 2010 10:05 PM Title: Attacking Walls
jepers i hope bella is going to be ok, i think the love thing snuck up and caught them both off guard, as always a great chapter and good luck with the all human awards tracy
Date: 09 May 2010 7:28 PM Title: The Edward Shaped Hole
Gotta love the image of Charlie and Edward ruffled and out for the count in the waiting room.
Great job!
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2010 7:49 AM Title: The Edward Shaped Hole
woooow!
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2010 1:44 AM Title: The Edward Shaped Hole
Love, Love, Love It!! Each chapter is amazing, you write beautifully. Keep up the great work :)
Date: 09 May 2010 1:42 AM Title: The Edward Shaped Hole
Hi :) Femme Docs was my first fanfic (awww!!) and I loved every word!! Your writing is so entertaining - I love it!! I am really enjoying this new story too :) Looking forward to the next update :) Nik
Author's Response:
Wow...now that's cool that Femme Docs was your first fanfic :D That makes me happy. I"m so glad you're enjoying the stories!
Date: 09 May 2010 12:31 AM Title: The Edward Shaped Hole
i'm so excited I can't wait until they get together. xx