Date: 05 Sep 2010 4:36 AM Title: Vegas
Interesting so far. I can already feel B's pain in this chapter with her flashbacks. Been there, done that, and I cried right along with her.
Author's Response:
Yeah, me too. The memories are the toughest part to write since they're all from experience...
Thank you!
xx
Gelix
Date: 04 Sep 2010 10:37 PM Title: Grandparents
So, I want to say that they should just screw Renée, because she doesn't deserve any consideration after being such an ignorant asshat to Bella earlier, but if she doesn't hear from Bella but from someone else, there's a chance she might come up and make a visit to them just to yell and be a jerk. So... tell her, but not in person? I don't know. I always liked Renée in the books, so I don't want her to be a jerk character, but she's always been inconsiderate and rather immature. Thanks for the update!
Date: 04 Sep 2010 10:19 AM Title: Grandparents
No! do not tell Renee, she'll just make Bella feel worse
Date: 03 Sep 2010 6:50 PM Title: Vegas
Edward is so mean. lol
Author's Response:
Yeah, but he gets better! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 03 Sep 2010 6:09 PM Title: Grandparents
This was classic with Charlie and him knowing that they were acting strange. Can't wait to see how the pregnancy is going to progress.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 03 Sep 2010 4:21 AM Title: Grandparents
I am not sure if they should tell Renee but I think that if they don't she might make nore stress for Bella. I hope that she doesn't do something stupid if they do tell her but I am thinking that it is Renee so she probally will.
Author's Response:
Okay, thank you for your opinion! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 02 Sep 2010 6:33 AM Title: Grandparents
I think they need to tell Renee before she finds out from someone else and really freaks out but I think she should just right her a letter and let her see how it feels to be so impersonal. Edward is the best at trying to keep Bella's self esteem up but I have a feeling it may be a tough job but he is a good man just like her father.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 02 Sep 2010 5:20 AM Title: Grandparents
Good to see everyone took the news well. I think they shouldn't tell Renee until later in the pregnancy.
Date: 02 Sep 2010 3:24 AM Title: Grandparents
Great chapter, I think they should tell Renee, don't know how well that will go though. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 02 Sep 2010 1:59 AM Title: Grandparents
I wouldn't bother telling Renee right away. She has been so negative every step of the way I would be afraid she would send Bella off the deep end.
Author's Response:
Okay, thank you for your opinion! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 02 Sep 2010 1:56 AM Title: Grandparents
LOL, I must confess I tried the foot from elbow to wrist thing when watching pretty woman. I think she should because she could find out and end up surprising them with a visit. But then if it were me I wouldn't tell her.
Date: 02 Sep 2010 1:51 AM Title: Grandparents
Your foot is as big as your wrist to your elbow.....Pretty Woman!
Date: 02 Sep 2010 1:44 AM Title: Grandparents
Quote from Pretty Woman.
Waiting for the update....
Date: 02 Sep 2010 1:25 AM Title: Grandparents
Awe poor Bella and her insecurities...I think every woman feels that way when they're pregnant. You continue to make me fall in love with Edwards character...He almost seems to-good-to-be-true...Do men like him exsist? lol
Well if I'm correct, the quote "Did you know that your foot's as big as your arm from your elbow to your wrist?" is From Pretty Woman???
Date: 02 Sep 2010 1:11 AM Title: Grandparents
great filler chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks!
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Gelix
Date: 02 Sep 2010 1:08 AM Title: Grandparents
Okay I suck that quote is a stumper, I don't know what it is but do I get a preview? :D lol I can't wait to read more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Sorry, but that would be unfair if I gave you one..Check the Facebook-page on Saturday and you'll get a small teaser!
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 02 Sep 2010 12:43 AM Title: Grandparents
The quote from this chapter is from Pretty Woman: "Did you know that your foot's as big as your arm from your elbow to your wrist?" Although they should wait on telling Renee, because i mean she freaked about Bella's weight before, she is probably gonna freak when she hears about the baby.
Date: 02 Sep 2010 12:14 AM Title: Grandparents
I don't tgink they should tell her right now remember how she freaked out about Bella's weight and started a fight with Charlie. Not a good idea especially for Bella's sake.
Author's Response:
Yeah, you're right!
Thank you for your review! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 01 Sep 2010 11:59 PM Title: Grandparents
as always another awsome chapter little emotinal but good thanks
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 01 Sep 2010 11:22 PM Title: Grandparents
i almost don't think that they should tell her until the end of the pregnancy
Author's Response:
Okay, thank you for your opinion! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 01 Sep 2010 11:05 PM Title: Grandparents
i think they should tell her and the therpist should make it be her homework! cant wait till the next chpater
Author's Response:
Thank you for your idea! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 01 Sep 2010 9:55 PM Title: Grandparents
This is a really good story. You are doing well. Let Bella heal please. I hate messed up Bella. She is smart, pretty and a survivor.
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
She's getting there.
xx
Gelix
Date: 01 Sep 2010 9:40 PM Title: Grandparents
Loved this chapter ...but did not get quote, this so hard to me...Sad...but true...This chapter didn't have a title why...Wait to next sunday.
Love from ayour brazil fan.
Author's Response:
Thank you! :D
I must have forgotten. It does now: 'Grandparents' :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 01 Sep 2010 9:02 PM Title: Grandparents
Did you know that your foot's as big as your arm from your elbow to your wrist.
Pretty Woman me thinks?
Hi Gelix
Sorry to have been MIA but real life couldn't get any worse so bare with me I will review when i can.
Debs
Date: 01 Sep 2010 8:35 PM Title: Grandparents
I'm glad that the parents were happy about the baby. I don't know if I would tell Renee. She might cause Bella stress that she doesn't need. If they are going to tell her, I think Bella should discuss it with her therapist first. I'm excited to see what you have planned, you seem to be able to sway me to the other side. Can't wait.
Okay, so the quote from this chapter is from Pretty Woman: "Did you know that your foot's as big as your arm from your elbow to your wrist?"
Date: 01 Sep 2010 7:41 PM Title: Grandparents
i love them.. keep up the good work.. also quote is from Pretty woman..
Date: 01 Sep 2010 7:33 PM Title: Grandparents
I really liked this chapter! I'm thrilled that everyone is excited and that Bella is eating :) My thoughts are kind of mixed on telling Renee'...
Thank you for the chapter and looking forward to the next one!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 01 Sep 2010 7:26 PM Title: Grandparents
i loved charlie's reaction he's gonna be a great grandpa and i think they shouldn't tell renee.. but on the other side you could write great chapters if you do..
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Yeah, it's a hard decision to make...
xx
Gelix
Date: 01 Sep 2010 7:00 PM Title: Grandparents
"Did you know that your foot's as big as your arm from your elbow to your wrist?".... Pretty Woman
Love this story keep it up
Date: 31 Aug 2010 7:52 PM Title: I forgive you
I am really enjoying your story, can not wait for the parents to find ou. The quote is from Remember Me. I cried at the end of this moving even though I had read the script and knew what was coming. Just listening to the rest of the peoples reaction when the relalized what was about to happen.
Date: 31 Aug 2010 7:52 PM Title: I forgive you
hmmm glad she's finally in therapy
Date: 31 Aug 2010 1:40 AM Title: I forgive you
Quote from Remember Me!
I think Bella was right saying it, however I hope that there will be more about the past revealed. I don't know why, but I'm really interesed in that.
Waiting.....
Date: 31 Aug 2010 12:18 AM Title: I forgive you
did not see chappy
Author's Response:
It's back! I don't know what the problem was but every chapter on TWCS was gone. Not just my story ^^
xx
Gelix
Date: 30 Aug 2010 8:07 PM Title: Vegas
Gelix
Thanks for the info I already found it on FF.net and read it there.
Womderful as always. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 30 Aug 2010 6:15 PM Title: I forgive you
Ok I can't get chapter 27 at all. All I am getting is author's chapter notes and author's end notes. Help please.
Author's Response:
I know. It's not just chapter 27, it's the same on every chapter which pisses me off because I don't know what's wrong! All I can give you is a link to FF.net where the chapter is available.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5965492/27/Married_to_the_Enemy
xx
Gelix
Date: 30 Aug 2010 4:59 AM Title: I forgive you
Nope, I don't think she should have waited anymore, if then was when it felt right to her, then it was when it should have happened.
It's amazing how much high-school and peer pressure can weight in one's life. They do, wether we like it or not. Dealing and moving along isn't always easy for everyone. Bella had a hard time doing it then, but it seems she is doing a much better job this time around.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! :D
xx
Gelix
Date: 30 Aug 2010 4:51 AM Title: I forgive you
again, another guess
the ghandi quote is from remember me?
Date: 30 Aug 2010 3:38 AM Title: I forgive you
Gandhi said that whatever you do in life will be insignificant, but it's very important that you do it. Because nobody else will. from Remember Me
I thought the forgiveness was a little quick. They discuss one bad memory and she can say it just like that? I know it would have taken me more time.
Date: 30 Aug 2010 2:25 AM Title: I forgive you
cant wait till they tell the grandparents to be :) looking forward to the update
Author's Response:
Next chapter! ;)
Thank you for your review!
xx
Gelix
Date: 30 Aug 2010 2:25 AM Title: I forgive you
The Quote first off is from Remember Me! God how I LOVED That movie. as for her forgiving Edward, no I don't think it was too soon. as long as she DOES forgive him, it doesn't really matter if it was 3 minutes or 3 decades. In my opinion though. I love this story. its soo great and I love the Quotes. thanks again bye
Date: 30 Aug 2010 2:21 AM Title: I forgive you
Gandhi said that whatever you do in life will be insignificant, but it's very important that you do it. Because nobody else will.
- remember me.
wonderful chapter, lol Edwards got blue balls!
can't wait for the next update
Date: 30 Aug 2010 1:21 AM Title: I forgive you
Good chapter. Looking forward to your next update.
I don't really understand why they aren't having sex unless it's just that she's tired? Has her therapist even asked about Emily, everything isn't Edward's fault.
I hope that Bella can move on after expressing her forgiveness to Edward. Only she can let go of that burden and move forward. She's only hurting herself and Edward if she doesn't.
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
The lack of sex will be brought up in the next chapter.
And no, they haven't talked about Emily yet.
xx
Gelix
Date: 30 Aug 2010 12:49 AM Title: I forgive you
Love the quote from Remember Me,as for Bella forgiving him she is right to do so for them to have a good marriage.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 11:01 PM Title: I forgive you
the Ghandi quote was from 'Remember Me' ;)
i can't wait till they tell Esme!!!
Date: 29 Aug 2010 8:49 PM Title: I forgive you
it's the Ghandi quote from Remember Me. I love that Bella cried because she wanted Edward...had the same experience in one of my pregnanies. I just hated to be away from him...it's hard to explain and lil embarassing. Great chapter.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 8:28 PM Title: I forgive you
I am happy that Bella is getting help now. It is going to get them to deal with the past and put it to rest once and for all. No more pretending it was a different Edward.
I can't wait for them to tell their parents. I think they will all be happy. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 29 Aug 2010 8:15 PM Title: A visit to the Hospital
:)
Date: 29 Aug 2010 8:05 PM Title: I forgive you
OMG great Chapter. the qoute is from Remember Me.
"Gandhi said that whatever you do in life will be insignificant, but it's very important that you do it. Because nobody else will.
This was one of those moments that I tended to agree with him."
Date: 29 Aug 2010 7:58 PM Title: I forgive you
Good to see that Bella is taking herself seriously and is tasking with the therapist. I think that Bella does have to start from the beginning to figure out what is causing her the problems. Excited to find out the parents reaction to the news that they will be grandparents.
I think the quote for this chapter is from the Remember Me trailer "Ghandi said that whatever you do in life will be insignificant, but it's very important that you do it."
Date: 29 Aug 2010 7:52 PM Title: I forgive you
Can't wait to see what Charlie thinks, and I don't think she was too early in forgiving Edward. If she couldn't forgive him then how could they plan their lives together? Great job as always. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 29 Aug 2010 7:46 PM Title: I forgive you
Sorry for take so long to leave a review I was in vacation with my boyfriend and he forbidden me to take my notebook with me ...
I love every single chapter before this one I tried using his Iphone to write a review but did not work very well ... I am in love with your history it's so lovely, and sweet without be corny, cheesy.
It's so well written , it's one of best fic in the fandom.... I'm in love for this fiction, and so grateful for the fast updated, U rock !!!!
And for the first time I think I know the quote this time...It's from Remember me...I think and Hope ...
Love form Brazil....(H)ellen.
PS: Your country this AMAZING, AND BEAUTIFUL, One off my best vacation .
PS1: Sorry for any misspelling.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 7:31 PM Title: I forgive you
LOVE it
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 29 Aug 2010 7:31 PM Title: I forgive you
Poor Bella so emotional it is a good thing that Edward is a good guy and pays attention to her. I think she mit of forgiving him a little early for every thing. She has a lot of thing to think about.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 29 Aug 2010 7:18 PM Title: I forgive you
Bella is a much nicer person than I am because I don't think I could have forgiven Edward so quickly, maybe never. As much as I like the new Edward, I wanted to kick his ass when she had the flashback. Apparently I'm a little vindictive. LoL. I kind of think he's getting off easy. It makes me wonder if Bella is just saying that she forgives him because she doesn't want to dwell on it. I know the saying is forgive and forget, but I don't think people forget. My thinking is that Bella still has a lot to work through, but then again I don't know what you have planned. I'm actually very interested to see where you are taking the story.
The quote in this chapter is from Remember Me: "Ghandi said that whatever you do in life will be insignificant, but it's very important that you do it."
BTW, I feel a little cheated because I got the quote right in the last chapter and I didn't get a preview. LoL.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 7:13 PM Title: I forgive you
Remember Me
Great chapter!
Date: 29 Aug 2010 6:48 PM Title: I forgive you
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 29 Aug 2010 2:06 AM Title: Heartbeats
The Notebook if ur a bird I'm a bird. Makes me want to watch the movie again although the book was better.
Date: 28 Aug 2010 3:01 AM Title: Heartbeats
Absolutley marvelous as always. Reading her going through all the doctor stuff reminded me of when I was preggo with my 2 girls. Good job. On the money. Oh and I love the Notebook. (however the ending will always be my favorite...oh and the rain kissing scene!) Gotta love those birds!!
Date: 27 Aug 2010 1:29 PM Title: Heartbeats
I think I was a bird in my previous life," I told him. "What do you think you were?"
"If you're a bird, I'm a bird
The Notebook, best movie ever
Date: 26 Aug 2010 7:58 PM Title: Heartbeats
Edward was too sweet when he kissed her belly....*sigh*
Author's Response:
Yeah, it made me want him all to myself! ;)
xx
Gelix
Date: 26 Aug 2010 7:35 PM Title: Heartbeats
I think that you did a good job with the doctors appointment because some people don't know that you have to have that kind of a sonogram or that they exist. That is the one that I had to have when I saw my son for the first time.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I was so nervous that I had gotten it all wrong! ^^
xx
Gelix
Date: 26 Aug 2010 5:46 PM Title: Heartbeats
Being checked by the doctor is never pleasant, every woman should know. It's necessary, especially in this case. Both of them are more than thrilled with the news.
It was great that they shared it with everyone, and that also both of them told someone else before and that they told each other.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I don't know, but I fear the day I have to...
Thank you for the review!
xx
Gelix
Date: 26 Aug 2010 12:35 PM Title: Heartbeats
The Notebook!
Great chapter (as always)!
Date: 26 Aug 2010 6:45 AM Title: Heartbeats
"I think I was a bird in my previous life," I told him. "What do you think you were?"
"If you're a bird, I'm a bird," he said seriously.
-THE NOTEBOOK
GREAT CHAPTER!
Date: 26 Aug 2010 6:22 AM Title: Heartbeats
I think I found the quote: IF you are a bird, I'm a bird. from the notebook. great chapter again, very real!! thank you!
Date: 26 Aug 2010 3:44 AM Title: Heartbeats
oooh nice :D Please update soon :D
Author's Response:
Thank you!
xx
Gelix
Date: 26 Aug 2010 3:41 AM Title: Heartbeats
"If you're a bird, I'm a bird"......quoted from The Notebook...great chap as usual
Date: 26 Aug 2010 2:35 AM Title: Heartbeats
love it and can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 26 Aug 2010 1:58 AM Title: Heartbeats
:)
Author's Response:
;)
Thank you for your smiley!
xx
Gelix
Date: 26 Aug 2010 1:36 AM Title: Heartbeats
When you said heartbeats, I thought they were having twins. Minor freak-out over here!
Waiting for the update!
Author's Response:
Oh, don't worry - no twins! ;)
xx
Gelix
Date: 26 Aug 2010 12:43 AM Title: Heartbeats
Good chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
xx
Gelix
Date: 26 Aug 2010 12:18 AM Title: Heartbeats
THE NOTE BOOK!!!! That's where the quote is from "I think I was a bird in my previous life...What do you think you were?...If you're a bird, I'm a bird"!!!
That was a cute chapter :) Edward is so caring with Bella. They will make great parents :)
Date: 25 Aug 2010 11:54 PM Title: Heartbeats
Loved it, so glad everybody was onboard, even Jake. Can't wait to see when things start progressing. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 25 Aug 2010 11:50 PM Title: Heartbeats
Very nice chapter! I'm so excited that they are having a baby!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 25 Aug 2010 11:23 PM Title: Heartbeats
aww Baby Cullen. :) too cute. I love that Bella put Jake in his place and I actually did like the very first doctor's appointment. very informative. :D The quote is from: THE NOTEBOOK!!! thanks again bye
Date: 25 Aug 2010 11:15 PM Title: Heartbeats
Loved the chapter. The qoute is from The Notebook.
Date: 25 Aug 2010 10:24 PM Title: Heartbeats
im happy that everything is going well! great chapter! keep them comming
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
They'll keep coming as long as your reviews keep coming! ;)
xx
Gelix
Date: 25 Aug 2010 10:08 PM Title: Heartbeats
I am so happy for them. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 25 Aug 2010 9:39 PM Title: Heartbeats
The quote was from the notebook. love this this story by the way.
Date: 25 Aug 2010 9:16 PM Title: Heartbeats
Great chapter. I love that they got to see and hear their baby. That's always the best part of the doctors appointment. I'm actually looking forward to the therapy session. I'm curious as to what type of things may come up there. Can't wait.
The quote in this chapter is from The Notebook: "If you're a bird, I'm a bird"
Date: 25 Aug 2010 9:14 PM Title: Heartbeats
"I think I was a bird in my previous life," I told him. "What do you think you were?"
"If you're a bird, I'm a bird," he said seriously.
The Notebook. My all time favorite movie
Date: 25 Aug 2010 9:08 PM Title: Heartbeats
If you're a bird, then I'm a bird. The Notebook. Great Chapter!
Date: 25 Aug 2010 8:53 PM Title: Heartbeats
"If your a bird I'm a bird." The Notebook. Great chapter by the way. Can't wait til the next update.
Date: 25 Aug 2010 8:25 PM Title: Heartbeats
I am so excited about the baby. So glad she straightened Jake out.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 25 Aug 2010 7:45 PM Title: Heartbeats
I am glad that everyone is happy for them. It is about time Bella and Jake had it out. He needed to know that this is really what Bella wants. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 25 Aug 2010 7:38 PM Title: Heartbeats
Awwww - what a happy chapter! Love it! And you did really good with the doctors appt. :)
Thank you and looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :)
I was pretty scared that I screwed that one up, since I've never been to one! ^^
xx
Gelix
Date: 25 Aug 2010 7:36 PM Title: Heartbeats
Easy quote this time- the bird quote is from the Notebook! Great chapter btw
Date: 25 Aug 2010 7:32 PM Title: Heartbeats
Ok the if your a bird im a bird comment is from the notebook so that is the quote you used here. I really like this story, but i do miss some of the angst i will admit that bc it makes it that much better when things get good again.
Date: 25 Aug 2010 7:17 PM Title: Heartbeats
i love this story and i always get happy when i find out that the e-mail from the writers coffee shop is an update for this story.
i think i know the quote in this chapter
"If you're a bird, I'm a bird"
from the notebook
Date: 25 Aug 2010 7:14 PM Title: Heartbeats
Oh "The Notebook!" I love that part of the movie! So sweet. And I'm so happy about the baby.
Date: 25 Aug 2010 6:54 PM Title: Heartbeats
"I think I was a bird in my previous life," I told him. "What do you think you were?"
"If you're a bird, I'm a bird," he said seriously....... From the Notebook.....
Love this story, keep up the awesome work
Date: 25 Aug 2010 4:43 AM Title: A visit to the Hospital
It is wonderful that they are going to have a baby!!! I just love babies and I get to go to the hospital tomarow where hopefully my neice will finally make her entrance into the world, and let me tell you she is a stuborn one already my sister was due a week ago. I feel really bad when I hear about morning sickness and I feel guilty because I never had any I was one of the luck one.
Author's Response:
Aww, I hope you get your niece soon! :)
Thank you for sharing!
xx
Gelix
Date: 24 Aug 2010 4:05 PM Title: A visit to the Hospital
True story---as I got into my 6th mo. the hubby was scared to have sex. He thought he might damage the baby from penetration. he is so modest he wouldn't even discuss it with the ob-gyn. Course the dr. was female so maybe that's why. the kids are now 17 and 20 and he still doesn't want to discuss his behavior back then. lol
Author's Response:
Haha, funny! Thank you for sharing! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 24 Aug 2010 3:38 AM Title: A visit to the Hospital
:)
Date: 24 Aug 2010 3:02 AM Title: The Honeymoon
Me thinks Bella is pregnant
Date: 23 Aug 2010 8:00 PM Title: A visit to the Hospital
It was a big scare,but a great one, all in all.
It will take a lot of compromise from both, I guess it's part of pregnancy. Along with moving, mood swings, food, and .... so many more.
Rosalie probably has figured it out, now, they need to tell everyone, how will that go?
Date: 23 Aug 2010 11:49 AM Title: A visit to the Hospital
I can relate to part of this story. I caught my boyfriend, who is now my husband, looking at porn right after we started dating. Yeah, that was also the last time.
Author's Response:
Boys.. At least he stopped looking at it! ;)
xx
Gelix
Date: 23 Aug 2010 7:00 AM Title: A visit to the Hospital
I love your whole story!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :)
xx
Gelix