Date: 10 Apr 2017 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 16
She is every fucking thing to me, Emmett. She's earth, water, air, and gravity. She's what keeps me grounded and sane on this rock of a planet, and it's been that way since we were ten, even if I wasn't able to admit the full extent of it.
That's soooo sweet!! I mealted when I read this!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2015 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 24
Awesome story, I enjoyed the way you developed the storyline.
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2015 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 24
cute little story ;) thanks for completing it on here ;) are you going to complete the epov version of this one soon? ;D
Date: 13 Mar 2014 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 24
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! Bella and Edward should have known that when they plan to tell their family any news that someone is going to figure it out before they get a chance to tell it. lol.
I truly enjoyed reading this story. Thank you for sharing.
Date: 13 Mar 2014 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 22
Oh no, what will happen if they do not let Bella go with Edward??????
Date: 13 Mar 2014 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 23
I am glad that Edward stood up respectfully to their parents. They really are serious about being together. Everything is coming together for them!!!!!!!!! Awesome
Date: 13 Mar 2014 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 21
LOVED this chapter!!!!!! I am so happy for them.
Date: 13 Mar 2014 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 20
OMGosh!!!!! Tanya and Ginna are suppose to be in college not high school. That was sooooo petty. I can not believe that they did that. That took some nerve.
Date: 13 Mar 2014 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 19
They finally get their time together with no worries!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 13 Mar 2014 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 18
Sounds like Emmett is on his way to accepting Edward and Bella's relationship. I hope so for everyone.
Date: 13 Mar 2014 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 17
Well, I don't know if I should say that went well or not. It could have been much worse I guess. I am just glad that they have family support. LOVED that Emmett stood up for Bella and Edward.
Date: 13 Mar 2014 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 16
I am glad that Carlisle came around and is supporting them. I knew he would. I am glad that Edward stood up to Emmett. He needed to do that. Emmett needed him to do that. Love Esme!!!!! She knows what her kids need.
Date: 12 Mar 2014 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 15
I am so glad that Esme is on their side from the beginning!!!!!!!! They will get through this but it will take some time. GREAT GREAT STORY!!!!!!!
Date: 12 Mar 2014 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 14
I hate that their first time ended like that. That is the way I thought Emmett would react but I was hoping that maybe he would be a little more understanding after they explained things. I feel sorry for all of them, Bella, Edward and Emmett.
Date: 12 Mar 2014 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 13
OH NO!!!!!!!!!!!! Poor Edward and Bella. That was the worst timing ever!!!!!! Bless their hearts. But they are finally together together. I am soooo off to read the next chapter. I am so glad that I do not have to wait for an update.
Date: 12 Mar 2014 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 12
So Rose did see them. I am glad that she is going to let Edward and Bella tell Emmett. Can't wait to see everyone's reaction.
Date: 12 Mar 2014 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 11
They are going to face a lot of problems when they go public. Loved that Emmett spoke up at the Mexican place. I hope Emmett does not kill Edward when he finds out.
Date: 12 Mar 2014 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 10
Glad that they are finally getting to spend time alone.
Date: 12 Mar 2014 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 9
Loved this chapter!!!!!!!!
Date: 12 Mar 2014 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 8
Edward has a Bella porn box. lol. What else does he have in there??????? I am glad that Esme does not suspect anything right now. Bella and Edward need time to figure out things for themselves before going public.
Date: 12 Mar 2014 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 7
They finally kissed!!!!!!!!! How in the world is Esme and Carlisle going to react?? What about Emmett???? Things could get really heated.
Date: 12 Mar 2014 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 6
They almost kissed!!!!!!! I hate that Riley's father died. That is hard. I like what Bella told Edward in the car.
Date: 12 Mar 2014 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 5
I am so thankful that Bella talked Edward into buying the test and making Tanya take them. I have a feeling that their relationship if going to start to change.
Date: 12 Mar 2014 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 4
I am glad that Bella did not forgive them the next day. I am glad that she made them suffer for a few day. lol.
Date: 12 Mar 2014 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 3
I do not blame Bella for bing pissed. I would be too. That was just wrong.
Date: 12 Mar 2014 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 2
Why does Edward not trust Dr. Billy Black, is he just that over protective???
Date: 11 Mar 2014 10:35 PM Title: My Other Brother
Glad I found this story. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 10 Oct 2013 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 24
Thank you so much for your story! I loved it!
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2012 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 24
Awwww, I love a happy ending. *sigh* Edward and Bella have always done things their own way, they knew what was best for them and resisted outside interference, well apart from having to live by the house rules when they were at home, lol. When you know you are meant to be together you have to go with it, I'm glad they didn't wait any longer to get married there would have always been another reason to delay it. Thank you for sharing your story. I've really enjoyed it from start to finish.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2012 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 23
Awww, finally the get to start living their dream, I love it when everything comes together. It's going to be hard work for them both but if they get through all of what's to come then they'll be stronger than ever, together they'll be a force to be reckoned with, lol.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2012 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 22
Carlisle and Esme are thinking about practicalities but love doesn't fall into that at all. I think they would survive without each other if they really had to but I also think that going to New York with Edward will be the making of Bella.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2012 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 21
Julliard, woohoo!! This would be an amazing opportunity for Edward and hopefully Bella will still get a full scholarship either at Columbia or a different school. How will Carlisle and Esme take this news? What about Emmett as well, is he going to be over protective about Bella going so far away to school?
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2012 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 20
I hope that Tanya and Gianna find out about Bella's threat of legal action, that should scare the shit out of them. Edward and Bella really should have expected something like this, most people just see things in black and white and don't question any further. Transferring to another school is not the answer, they have to show a united front and face up to those idiots that believe anything they're told, things will get better. I have no doubt that transferring to another school would be easier but the 'scandal' for want of a better word, of what happened would follow them eventually starting the whole cycle up again. Better to stay put and front it out.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2012 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 19
Mmmm, yummy lemon. I can't believe Edward's saved up all that money. Is it only Edward and Bella that know that he's been saving all these years? What Bella wrote all those years ago about Romeo and Juliet was like looking into the future for her and Edward before anything was ever going on. Now it's back to reality with a bump for them after their wonderful night at the hotel.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2012 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 18
I'm glad Emmett is getting his head around things a bit more, he was funny with his be yourselves but not completely yourselves speech, lol. Are they going to have to explain every move they make to Emmett to re-assure him that they aren't up to anything, this could get really frustrating for Edward and Bella. To a certain extent they're still going to have to sneak around.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2012 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 17
Jessica and Lauren are such skanky whores, I loved how Bella shot them down even though she got hurt in the process, she was so good at shutting them down and pointing out how stupid they are that the only thing they could do was resor to violence. Thank God Emmett was there and it spurred him into action and into actually defending Edward and Bella. I think Edward's words with him may have had an effect. The town is ridiculous, they can't see past the end of their noses.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2012 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 16
I think Bella's right and also her Mum knows how hard it will be for Edward and Bella to stick to the rules of the house especially in the face of all the freedom Emmett and Rose have. I'm glad that Edward blew up at Emmett and told him what's what and also turned around so Emmett had to see it from his POV. Hopefully this has set Emmett thinking and started him on the road to accepting their relationship. I can only imagine what this party's going to be like and I hope that Edward and Bella don't get to much hassle.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 25 Dec 2012 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 15
So things went better than they thought. I had a feeling that Esme saw what was happening with them, it was the red New Year dress and Edward's red tie, lol. I'm glad that Esme accepts their relationship and that it will only be a matter of time before Carlisle supports them fully in their choice. As for Emmett, well it looks like he's going to take a lot longer and it may be something that they have to keep chipping away at with him or Rose might eventually make him see the error of his ways.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 25 Dec 2012 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 14
So Emmett has been noticing more that anyone gave him credit for. I'm not sure what he's most angry about, whether it's that he wasn't told from the start, the fact that its Edward or that they've always felt their relationship was different right from the start. This is going to be an awkward journey home.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 25 Dec 2012 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 13
Oh crap, how did Emmett find out? Did Rose tell him? She said she would wait. Awww, Bella's first time was lovely and now Emmett's going to stamp all over it with his great big feet. Is it wrong that I loved it when she got sick from Edward's cum? Lol, I just thought it was so funny, if she's going to try that again she needs to get him eating pineapple and whatever else makes it taste better, hahahaha!!
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 25 Dec 2012 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 12
So Rose did see. I'm glad she didn't go straight to Emmett and gave Bella a chance to explain what's been going on. Lol, Bella sounded about forty years old when she said she was too old for sneaking around.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 25 Dec 2012 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 11
Sneaking around can be so much fun and exciting but when you can't touch your man or kiss him in public then sneaking around really sucks balls. Has Rose seen something or heard something? If she has will she go straight to Emmett and tell him or will she confront Edward and Bella first? This is the last thing they need at the moment right at the beginning of a semester.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 25 Dec 2012 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 10
Things are moving fast now for these two which is only natural, as Bella said, they already knew each other, they've been doing the getting to know you part for the past nine years or so and now they're at the final frontier, lol. Bella needs to try and not think about it, easier said than done, hahaha!!
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2012 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 9
God that party was hard work what with all the avoiding of other people they had to do, rescuing each other, the stolen glances and the excuses to get a little bit of alone time. Was Edward's matching tie to Bella's dress just a coincidence, is Esme a little bit psychic or is it just wishful thinking on her behalf.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2012 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 8
Aren't mums scary when they do that. It's almost as if they can read your mind or they've been watching you on CCTV or something and are giving you the opportunity to come clean because we all know it's better to admit something rather than be caught out, lol. I can't believe Edward's told Bella about his Bella porn box already, lol, I'm so glad she wasn't offended or disgusted. This has to be the worst torture for them being so close and not being able to touch as they want to, I see lots of sneaking around in their future and more than likely a couple of close shaves, hahahaha!!
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2012 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 7
Well they've taken that first step and they've decided to keep it quiet for the time being. I can't say I blame them, they'll need to be certain that this is what they want before telling their family. I hope that they'll all understand and look at it with the knowledge that Bella and Edward aren't related but the reality is that most people won't look at it that way at all.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2012 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 6
They were so close and then Emmett arrived. Bella thinks it's wrong of them to feel like this, but it isn't they aren't actually blood related so there would be no problem, it would be weird for their family however. Imagine though if Carlisle and Esme hadn't got together until much later and Edward and Bella were already an item, would they have made them split up, would Esme & Carlisle not have acted upon their feelings for one another or would they have accepted it and made the best of the situation. It's a shame that Edward and Bella made progress with their relationship and both voiced a little of what they'd been thinking for them now to be awkward with each other, they need to talk and somehow get that moment back.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2012 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 5
Thank God for that! I hope Edward has learned his lesson and will change his man whoring ways, lol. There's nothing like a pregnancy scare with a bitch from hell to make dick run and hide and never want to play out again.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2012 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 4
Well I'm glad they've all made up and Emmett and Edward have seen the error of their ways. What they were trying to do was very noble but Bella's right, this is her time to make her mistakes and learn but she has to go out there and be a proper adult.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2012 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oh my God! They are way too protective. Bella should have explained to Emmett who Jake is and made him go back and apologise. It's up to her what she does and she has to be allowed to make her own mistakes. I know they're only trying to point out that potentially she could put herself in bad situations or get herself a reputation but if they don't let her decide for herself how will she ever learn to know when things might start to go bad. I know Edward has an ulterior motive whether he realises it or not yet but he still has to let her find her own way.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2012 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
Well fancy Billy Black turning up and being one of the tutors and now Jake's here as well, hmmm, Edward's not going to like that one little bit when he sees him perving over Bella, especially in that dress, talking of which it's party time. I love a good party.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2012 12:21 AM Title: My Other Brother
Awww, it's so sad that they all lost a parent and I can really empathise with Bella missing her Dad and wanting to talk to him. I liked how she questioned Edward about why he gets to screw around and she doesn't. It's the age old double standards coming in to play but also I think, from what Bella's observed, that he already has more than brotherly feeliings for her.
Jane x
Date: 05 Nov 2012 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 24
A few chapters back to talked about wasp spray versus mace. It really made me laugh considering I have my own history using bug replentant against a guy. I may have only been 8 or 9 years old at the time but at summer camp on year I was startled and scared $$$$less my someone sneaking up to my cabin window and grabbed the bottle of bug spray hitting him full face with it. I don't remember any details about it other then my own guilt after the occurance but found the reference brought back a memory I had long since forgotten.
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2012 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 24
sorry I didn't review each chapter but I loved them all. I couldn't believe it when Em heard their first time & figured out it was Edward. of course the double-standard for the daughter, plus I think Dad's like to believe their daughter's don't have sex at all LOL. so happy they worked out the college plans in NY, great story & wonderful ending :) ~Tracey xoxox
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2012 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 2
why do I have a bad feeling that the boys will end up showing up at the mixer? so will Jacob & boys end up friends? hmmm, I am thinking no. especially not if Jacob likes Bella. looking forward to finding out :) ~Tracey xoxox
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2012 1:29 AM Title: My Other Brother
hmmm, his heartbeat sped up huh? poor Bella, lonely lil V card still in her deck. sounds like college will be collecting that card, but will it be Edward or someone else? this is a cute story, really like it so far :) ~Tracey xoxox
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2011 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 24
I looovvveeee this story! the only thing is seeing edward and bella in new york is so wrong they need to be back in washington >.< lol
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2011 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 19
Hey, I really loved all the stories of yours on fanfiction and on this website that i have read so far. Especially Sovereign Fate and My other Brother.
I also read your new book Convergence and fell in love with it. You are an amazing writer and i really hope that you keep up with your writing :) :D
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Hearing that you liked my fanfiction and my original works just made my day!!! Thank you so much for taking the time to leave a review!
Date: 14 May 2011 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 24
Beautiful story. I read most of it on my phone which won't let me review but I had to tell you how very much I enjoyed it. Congratulations on your continued success with your original work publications. Thanks for taking the time to entertain us.
Date: 08 Mar 2011 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 24
they did it just how they needed to but still remembered to include the family in a way. it sounded so sweet. it is always good to find the happily ever after, and i think bella and eddie have found theirs.
thank you for sharing your story (especially now that you are a big shot published author! LOL)
suzie :)
Date: 07 Mar 2011 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 23
wow that was a hell of a day! so happy for bella and eddie/ but seriously can not even imagine a place that small! 600sqft?!?!?!? my place is a little over 1000sqft and my mortgage is less than 1/2 the price of their rent! and i have close to double the room! wow i can not even imagine.
Date: 07 Mar 2011 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 22
Well we are almost at the HEA. Only. A few more bumps bto iron out. Life is really coming together for these 2
Date: 07 Mar 2011 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 21
Movin to NYC! Leaving behind all of the haters and starting fresh out on their own where they can blosome!
Date: 07 Mar 2011 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 20
That is some major bitchiness at work and a whole lotta slander! I am glad bella stood up for herself and eddie.
Date: 07 Mar 2011 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 19
that was so sweet! but question did they use protection? will we have yo worry about those grandbabies anytime soon?
Date: 07 Mar 2011 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 18
em is funny don't hide but hide but don't.
Date: 07 Mar 2011 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 17
well at least mmie stood up for bella and eddie. it could have been worse.
Date: 07 Mar 2011 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 16
eddie made a lot of valid points em. now em and rose just need to deside what they are gonna do about everything.
Date: 07 Mar 2011 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 15
i knew momma e knew something was going on. why is it you guys always write the perfect mom? i guess that's just one of the things that makes all of you authors so great. em is gonna be the hardest, it is all about changing the perception of the family dynamic.
i love momma e's talk of grandbabies and bella and eddie now needing to donate 4 to her cause.
Date: 07 Mar 2011 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 14
well that went about as i had expected. em obviously knew something was fishy since eddie was the first name he said. i sure hope momma and poppa can be a little more open and help em through this. this is gonna have to be a family stick together kinda thing....
Date: 07 Mar 2011 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 13
i keep forgetting to comment when i finish the chapter so i figured i would jump down here and leave you a quick little note congradulating you on the book! a few chapters ago you mentioned convergance and i thought boy that sounds familliar! then i move ahead a chapter and lo and behold theres your book flashing on the banner at the top of my screen! that has to feel just awesome for you and all of the other authors published here. great job and i hope you continue to write..... both books and fanfics! heehee. ok back to the top to actually read this chapter, see you in a few!
ok i'm back and seriously bella is so right fanfic makes it sound so different than it really is, i mean sexy time is always hot and full of wanting but it does not really live up to the rainbow s and flowers if you've never been there, done that and are trying to use ffn as a measure of reality. and then she mentioned candy and all i thought was skittles! i am so sorry i do not remember which fic it was as it was a long time ago but that bella describedd it as tasting like skittles! heehee i remember thinking um no sweetheart so not skittles! and damn if it does taste that way what kind of diet do i need to put hubbie on?!?!? lol
and now emmie is at the door, he obviously heard what was happening in the room and he wants to see who just defiled his sister! he is gonna be so surprised!
Author's Response:
LOL...thankyou on the book congrats and on my take on ffn's false advertising. I've actually read up on this, and the only way to make it less bleachy is to eat little to no processed food or foods with perservatives, which is never going to happen for me, so hubby's just going to have to do will a wife who doesn't swallow. LOL! Anyway, glad you're enjoying. I'm LOVING the reviews as once a fic completes people rarely take the time to leave them. If you're lucky they might leave one at the end, if at all. Thanks again for reading and I hope you enjoy the rest!!
Date: 07 Mar 2011 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 12
i wonder if em is really that clueless? or has he too been waiting for them to just admit it? is he happy that he knows eddie will take care of bella and treat her well? or is he just oblivious?
Date: 07 Mar 2011 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 11
duh duh da! sorry that was bad. things are heating up around others and now maybe rose has seen ....... something..... maybe. 1 month before the big coming out party, not a lot of time but still so long. i wonder what emmie will think?
Date: 07 Mar 2011 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 10
now they have the freedom to be closer together, but they also have to work up to the full on relationship. it is a big step to stop holding yourself back and just take the leap.
Date: 07 Mar 2011 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 9
so many close calls and the jealousy! wow nothing harder than having to pretend that you don't care when you do.
Date: 07 Mar 2011 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 8
i wonder if momma e has seen things between bella and eddie while they were growing up? so far so good....