[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 30
Oh crap... that went all kinds of wrong... yikes!
*runs over and envelopes Peter in a bear hug*
Hush now, its not your fault Peter *glares at Garrett*
Well, We kinda knew it wasnt gonna be all rainbows and unicorns.
I cant wait to see where you take us next. :)
Author's Response:
lol, thanks :)
Date: 18 Oct 2010 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 30
well i hope that she realizes that people just care about her!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 18 Oct 2010 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 30
Oooh boy. So much for being better.
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Thanks:)
Date: 18 Oct 2010 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 30
Didn't Garrett already tell them all about Peter?
Author's Response:
Yes, but he seemed to forget to tell Bella.
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 30
Obviously her recovery is going to be a long process.
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Yep:)
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 29
So good. I can just see them screaming at "him". Tomorrow is a new day and school shall be interesting to say the least. Can't wait to see how everyone (the bitches especially) interact with strong Bella.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) They all needed to scream at him!
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2010 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 29
Wow, intense chapter, loved it!!
There is gonna be some major drama at school, isnt here.
WTF is with letting Lauren and Jessica back in?! I hope there is a reason they are back, or else they are gonna be a nomad's dinner and dessert if I have anything to do with it.
*jumps on cell and calls AU Peter*
It rang twice before a chuckle resonated through the line into my ear. "Hey beautiful. So, you need a nomad that is close the the Olympic Penninsula eh? Well, I think I have just the lucky, or unlucky for the taste matter, raomer for the job." He cackled once more before saying he would take care of it on his end.
I grinned from ear to ear as I replied, "You always have my back Pete. Thanks again for doing this for me. These chicks need to become statistics sooner rather than later"
Peter full out belly laughed. "It seems I am rubbin' off on you a bit there darlin'."
"That you are, Peter dear, but it is not a bad thing at all. I will see you soon hopefully." I sighed in longing.
"Darlin', you will see me sooner than you think. Till then sweet cheeks." That was all I heard before the line went dead.
*giggles* See you next update BB!!!!
Author's Response:
DAmn, I can barely type with as hard as I am laughing right now!! That was freaking perfect!!
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2010 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 29
well that wasn't too bad. at least they all know where she is ocming from and hopefully cans ee the light at the end of the tunnel. they have a better picture of what happened as maybe how to handle things better.
look forward to school
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 17 Oct 2010 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 29
well happy she with her family again!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 17 Oct 2010 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 29
I would love Garrett to meet the skank sisters, Jessica and Lauren. They fed on Bella's fear and pain and used it to hurt her.
Author's Response:
Oh, he will. TRust me!
Date: 17 Oct 2010 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 29
that was a good homecoming
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 17 Oct 2010 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 28
I agree with you letting Edward explore her that way. Not only is she sure he wants her I think Bella needed to have someone she trusted who loved her touch her that way so she knew the difference between the touch of someone that loves her and somebody who only wanted to hurt and humiliate her.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) You explained it very well:)
Date: 17 Oct 2010 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 29
Me too! That part where Garrett forced the others to make statements against Phil was very emotionally raw.
Author's Response:
Very emotionally raw but needed.
Date: 17 Oct 2010 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 29
great chapter....
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2010 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 28
Very nice :) I think you did the right thing, it was something that B needed to know before letting go completely.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2010 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 28
Good chapter. I make my self wait until I have two chapters to read. Progress is good. :-)
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 28
i thought the chapter was perfect. she did what she needed to do and edward responded. they both where in control and it was as it should be. them both saying what they needed at the house was great. i am hoping that they got it out. i know there will be some trying times but it seems like it is time to heal and see what the future will hold
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THank you:)
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2010 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 28
I am so happy for Bella and Edward. I was surprised that they moved so fast but then again it was totally natural for them. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2010 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 27
This was a really good chapter. It was nice to see her so much happier.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2010 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 28
great chapter, Bella's finally free!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 16 Oct 2010 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 28
I think that this chapter was perfect I love that he showed her how much he loved her and did not expect anything in return. The room what a freaky place.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 16 Oct 2010 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 28
I felt mixed feelings about Edward taking things that far with Bella so soon. But I think it represents how much she has healed in order to be able to allow Edward to do that and not be pulled into a flashback or a panic attack. It was incredibly brave of her to expose herself to him that way and I think Edward handled it perfectly. I was a little surprised that Bella did not address the fact that it was the first orgasm that she had where she was allowed to enjoy it and claim it as her own and that it wasn't forced on her.
I thought the scene in Bella's prison was incredibly powerful, especially when Edward claimed Bella as his. Very good chapter.
Author's Response:
See, that was my dilemna with that chapter. I wasn't sure if it was too soon or not but in the end, I decided to follow my instincts and left it in there. IF I have learned anything with my writing is that I should follow my instincts. As for Bella claiming the orgasm, I honestly never even thought about it. You bring up a good point:)
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2010 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 28
♥ i just love edward, and love this story, even if every chapter makes me weep like a baby ♥
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THank you:)
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2010 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 28
thank god edward was there to help bella through all of it.i hope she continues positivly.
excellent as always,can't wait for more.c.
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Thank you:)
Date: 16 Oct 2010 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 28
great chapter....
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2010 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 27
thanks good chapter
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2010 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 27
I really liked this chapter, and I loved that Garrett called Edward to meet them.
To answer your question..hell no she won't be okay, but I think she will be able to leave that room under her own power which iswhat she really needs.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) I think you are right:)
Date: 15 Oct 2010 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 27
i dont think she will be ok going back into that room ! but hopefuly with the help she has it will be ok!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 15 Oct 2010 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 27
I am so proud of Bella. I can't believe she is back in Edward's arms where she belongs. Garrett is so cool and knows that Bella needs Edward to finish this last task. I wish her luck.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 15 Oct 2010 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 27
great chapter....
Date: 15 Oct 2010 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 27
I think facing that room is going to be hard but she will be strong enough now. So happy she is going home.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2010 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 27
OMG yes!!! I am glad she is taking E with her!! I am so glad we are well on the way to recovery!!! *turns on applause light*
I dont know about the room... this is gonna be hard... yikes!
*crowd gasps*
See you next chapter! *turns on applause light again*
~end scene~ *gigglesnorts*
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2010 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 27
i hope bella deals with that room,she can finally close some doors and be able to deal better with herself,,iwas so happy when edward met them at the airport,another person she can rely on,great ch. it's good to see her in the light now,instead of being swallowed by darkness,until next time.c.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 15 Oct 2010 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 27
It's good to see her getting back to herself. I hope she'll be ok in that room. I know she might not be at first, but hopefully she'll be able to pull it together.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 14 Oct 2010 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 26
Ugh! That is so sad and so hard to read. I need to go read domething happy to counteract this chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2010 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 26
thanks good chapter
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Thank you:)
Date: 14 Oct 2010 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 26
Phil was one evil prick. Bet he felt like a big man overpowering and torturing a little girl who was physically weaker than him. Too bad he couldn't have survived so he could have gone to prison and gotten raped everyday for the rest of his life.
I'm glad he told her that Edward, Emmett,Jasper, Rose, and Ali had fought him on sending her away. I think she needed to know that.
Author's Response:
Yes, she did:)
Date: 14 Oct 2010 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 25
After what Bella had been subjected to those 2095 days, who wouldn't have emotions that ranged from hurt to fear to extreme rage. Atleast with the rage that could be channelled into an effective tool to heal. If she's in a rage she'll also give out more info too, than she was planning on.
Date: 14 Oct 2010 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 24
So I guess she had been kidnapped on September 7th?
Author's Response:
Yes:)
Date: 14 Oct 2010 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 23
Finding out Garrett's story and knowing what Bella has been through, I don't think it ever goes away. All that can be done is finding ways to cope and work on getting your self esteem and confidence back. Accepting that what was done was beyond your control and not your fault. She keeps saying she is a whore when she wasn't the one who made the choices that put her in the same room with the men who raped her.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 14 Oct 2010 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 22
I know Bella is very angry right now but she has to know deep down that every member of her family wishes they could have been there to defend her and to save her. They just couldn't find her.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 14 Oct 2010 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 21
A resort full of victims of sexual abuse... aren't the victims of abuse more likely to turn into abusers? I hope she'll be safe there. It's a little fishy that this place is located in a foreign country.
I hope Varner the dousche ends up working at a Burger King drive thru.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2010 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 26
Awesome chapter, I love breakthroughs!!! :)
I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter!!
*tries to go back into daydream of Peter...riding a horse...bareback...*
*swoon*
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 14 Oct 2010 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 20
Mr Varner is a dousche.... seriously... didn't he attend the 'Don't Stare, Don't Touch, and Don't Physically Intimidate Bella Swan Assembly'?
I hope they find her before she can hurt herself too much.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 14 Oct 2010 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 19
I swear parents can be more ridiculous than their kids sometimes...
Author's Response:
Yes, they can.
Date: 14 Oct 2010 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 26
great chapter....
Date: 14 Oct 2010 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 26
Progress...
Author's Response:
Progress :)
Date: 14 Oct 2010 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 26
She is starting to see how to help herself
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 14 Oct 2010 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 26
I glad she is finally ready to fight the ghost in her mind.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 14 Oct 2010 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 25
I am glad that Bella has Garrett on her side. I hope she can at least write to Edward and her friends.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2010 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 26
Good chapter.
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Thank you :)
Date: 14 Oct 2010 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 26
Things are slowly looking up now or at least it seems so.
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Thank you:)
Date: 14 Oct 2010 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 25
great chapter....
Date: 14 Oct 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 25
Garret is an amazing person and wants to help her so badly.
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Thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2010 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 25
Wow!! Awesome pov! Its good to hear what Garrett has to say.
Love it!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2010 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 25
Okay, I think I am warming up to Garrett a little bit...but just a little. ;)
Are we going to get Edward's POV while Bella is away?
Author's Response:
Thank you:) I don't have an EPOV planned but I mgith add one. I'm still thinking about it.
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2010 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 25
that insight on garrett, loved it
he has also been through so much and i love that he helps others. it is alot to deal with others pain and not take it in.
i also love that he wants her to have a happy ending with edward. he sees that there is something there worth saving and nuturing
love it
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2010 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 25
I almost made it with out tears and then she has to go and talk in her sleep. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
I like to sneak the sentiment in there:)
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2010 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 25
thanks good chapters
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Thank you:)
Date: 13 Oct 2010 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 24
Wow, I bet Garrett didn't see that one coming. You would have thought he did his homework on Bella before taking her to the island.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 13 Oct 2010 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 24
great chapter....
Date: 13 Oct 2010 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 24
So sad I think we all need to piss on his ashes.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) Good idea:)
Date: 13 Oct 2010 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 24
Bella needs to remember the positive things. For example that this is the first September 7 she is not a captive. She needs to work on making new memories.
Author's Response:
You're right.
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2010 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 24
Its going to be a long road to recovery. Looking forward to Garrett's POV.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2010 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 23
Baby steps in the right direction perhaps?
Author's Response:
Perhaps:)
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2010 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 22
You wrote angry Bella really well.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2010 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 21
If it helps but talk about tough love.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2010 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 23
*runs over to hug her* Damitol!
Poor girl!
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2010 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 24
Holy crap WOW!!!! *trembles*
That was intense!
Loved it :)
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2010 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 19
You would hope people would be more understanding.
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:) But they aren't always.
Date: 13 Oct 2010 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 23
I hope Bella listens and stops pitying herself and starts helping herself. She says she doesn't want people staring, well don't freak out on the floor. This causes people to stare. Bella would stare too. Bella is stubborn it is what allowed her to surrive. Now she has to use it to heal herself.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 13 Oct 2010 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 23
great chapter....
Date: 13 Oct 2010 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 23
Everyones pain is different so sad
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2010 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 22
i think this has got to be the hardest thing to do. they love her and i believe would do anything for her. but the hardest thing right now is to walk away so she is forced to get the help she needs. i see them trying to help her but like garrett says she would become dependent on them all and never be able to do anything for herself or learn to cope with people around her. maybe on day but man someone could eventually get hurt when it wasn't meant for them to get hurt. hard decision. but they all did it and i have to believe she will see in the end that she is worth it and that they did love her enough to walk away
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2010 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 23
wow, their stories are all heartbreaking. garrett's man oh man what where his parents thinking. you think they had kids just so they have sex toys and someone to toture. my heart goes out to them. you got to hope kids do not have to go thru that. poor garrett couldn't save his brother. i think by hearing his story isabella felt that she should listen to him because he know what it felt like and somewhat she went thru. their are some sick sick fuckers out there. man you hope once they get put in jail someone just takes them out
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 13 Oct 2010 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 23
Such sad and tragic stories. I wonder if Bella will really allow herself to heal. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2010 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 23
thanks good chapter
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Thank you:)
Date: 13 Oct 2010 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 23
well im glad that they are going thru the same thing and that they hopefuly can help her but does she want the help? cant wait till the next chatper
Author's Response:
Yes, she wants help. She just doens't know how to ask for help.
Date: 13 Oct 2010 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 23
Ahhh she is slowly starting to see reason and that is really good. Thanks for the awsome update I always looki forward to your chapters.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 12 Oct 2010 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 22
Bit of an understatement, don't ya think? Her moods flipped so fast I am surprised no one got whiplash.
And I do have faith in you...that doesn't mean that I didn't read this chapter with one eye closed. I am sure it will get worse before it gets better. I just hope it gets better for her.
Author's Response:
Thank you, hon:)
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2010 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 22
thanks good chapter
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Thank you:)
Date: 12 Oct 2010 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 22
so sad but for the best she needs to do it on her own
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 12 Oct 2010 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 22
OMG!!! Very intense and sad. I kind of thought it was a little harsh to send her all the way to Brazil. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) I know it seems harsh but it will be ok.
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2010 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 22
True, she needs that anger.... but it still hurts. Wow, my chest is still clenching.
Loved this chapter, Garrett is awesome. But not as awesome as Peter *swoon*
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 12 Oct 2010 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 22
Oh my word, what an emotional chapter. you are writing this so well. Amazing writing. I cried during this chapter, so much. Especially when Bella was yelling at E and Em.
Wow awesome job. Is she going to be in Brazil along time? Can't wait for the next update.
I love all of your stories.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) She will be there for a few months.
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2010 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 22
bella is in serious need of a punching bag,and some heavy music ,help releave some of that anger,,,,,
thanks for such a quick update,looking forward to the next ch..c.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 12 Oct 2010 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 22
well im glad that shes leaving but hopefuly they whole leaving everyone behind will work for her ! cant wait itll the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2010 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 21
*gasps out all the air in my lungs* Holy SHIT!
So THATS what Carlisle was up to..... damitol! And I just knew.......
Peter *swoon*
was more than just a history teacher! *bats eyelashes and eyes glaze over*
And whattya know! Ol' Garrett comes into the picture, the voice of reason, of course! He has a way with words, dont ya think? :)
See ya next update!! *runs off to Forks HS to stalk Peter*
Author's Response:
My Peter always is more than just a pretty face:)
Date: 12 Oct 2010 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 21
great chapter....
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2010 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 21
ok cried my heart out for edward and emmet,in this ch. hopefully this will help bella and she won't hold it against the others,so much heartache before they can find happiness,,,,,, yey,the mob has decended upon varner,he must go!
anyway,excellent ch.think this is the first story that i have seen such heated reviews from readers,your doing an excellent job with such a hard and emotional subject ,keep up this astounding work.until next time,,,,.c.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) Emotions are definatley running high!
Date: 12 Oct 2010 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 21
OMG but we all know it is for the best but how hard would that be.????
Author's Response:
Very hard!
Date: 12 Oct 2010 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 21
WTF!?!? Brazil??? Couldn't find a further place to send her??? Sorry, but...seriously? I am more worried about Edward than Bella at this point. He is going to lose it when Bella begs him to let her stay and I am sure she is going to call him a liar for not keeping his word.
I am afraid to read the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Have some trust in me. Have I ever let you down before?????
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2010 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 21
OMG how heartbreaking. i know it is what is best but omg it is going to tear them all apart at first. her parents have to be dying inside. i wouldn't be able to let my baby go. they all do need help garrett is right. it is a perfect place that she is going to. they can all imagine what she is going thru somewhat cause they have been thru it. it will be tuff but i am sending all my prayers for all of them. mr varner was so wrong on so many levels. i am glad he will no longer be able to teach. bella does have alot of people in her corner and it will be hard and heartbreaking but they got to have hope. she survived for 6 years for a reason. she came back they can only go up from here. love it
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 12 Oct 2010 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 21
im glad that they are getting her some drastick help! cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 12 Oct 2010 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 21
I'm not going to lie. I'm not happy about this separation. I understand. But I don't like it.
Author's Response:
I know but Bella has to be able to trust herself before she can truly trust them.
Date: 12 Oct 2010 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 21
Finally!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 12 Oct 2010 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 21
Well that is an interesting twist. It will be interesting to see how long it takes her to get back to all of them.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 12 Oct 2010 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 21
I have been reading ur stories for a while now but I have just recently learned how to review from my phone.
With that said, I love all of your stories.
This story has been very hard to read. Its quite devistating, the things Bella has to deal with.
I hope she comes to realize that this treatment is what's best for her. She needs to get better in order to lead a 'normal' life.
I can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much:)
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2010 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 21
thanks good chapter
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Thank you:)