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Reviewer: jw89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2011 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Oh! do they have to go now, yes you've got them together but come on just a few more chapters ....... please!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!  You guys are the best!  

Teaser and PicTease for Chapter 12 are up on the blog!  Squeeee!  Run on over and check em' out!


Laterzzz:)

~Krazi & Mojo~

xoxo

Reviewer: Supernova8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2011 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Arrggh!  Hurry, hurry, hurry!  Next chapter!

Gotta give Bella props for not completely freaking out - I think she did better than Edward.  LOL.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!  You guys are the best!  

Teaser and PicTease for Chapter 12 are up on the blog!  Squeeee!  Run on over and check em' out!


Laterzzz:)

~Krazi & Mojo~

xoxo

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2011 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

So that was it, eh? I have to say it was a little abrupt, but I'm always glad for closure, thanks for the rec's;D)



Author's Response:

Have no fear, this story isn´t over by a long shot!  I was just a little nervous about people´s response to the meet.  There will be plenty of fun left for these two to have! Not to mention all the little bumps and bruises along the way!  Thanks for reading and taking the time for to review!  

Your welcome! I love rec´ing and giving lots of love to other great writers!

Make sure you submit to the blog: www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com

the teaser for chapter 12 will be up tonight or tomorrow!


Laterzzz:)

Krazi & Mojo

xoxo

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2011 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

OMG!!! So awesome!!!! I need moore!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!  You guys are the best!  

Teaser and PicTease for Chapter 12 are up on the blog!  Squeeee!  Run on over and check em' out!


Laterzzz:)

~Krazi & Mojo~

xoxo

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2011 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Oh you can't stop NOW!!!!!  This is way too good.  I'm greedy, if it was at all possible I would prefer daily updates.  You have a really good story going here.  I apologize for not commenting earlier but I read your story faithfully and look forward to future updates.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!  You guys are the best!  

Teaser and PicTease for Chapter 12 are up on the blog!  Squeeee!  Run on over and check em' out!


Laterzzz:)

~Krazi & Mojo~

xoxo

Reviewer: Annie26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2011 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

I literally check for this story everyday, I can't wait to see what happens! You HAVE to continue! I need to see what happens between Bella and Edward and more importantly, how Tanya is going to lose her mind when she finds out!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!  You guys are the best!  

Teaser and PicTease for Chapter 12 are up on the blog!  Squeeee!  Run on over and check em' out!


Laterzzz:)

~Krazi & Mojo~

xoxo

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2011 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Best line EVER:

I had sucked more silicon cock than a retired porn star living in the Playboy Mansion;

Get out from under that damn bed, put down the vodka and RUN to your computer to write that next chapter!!  OME !!!  What a cliffie !!! 

I'm thinking that your readers were organize a riot if you did not continue this story!  LOL!!

It just keeps getting better and better!!!!  More, more, more.............please.  *batting eyelashes*

Keye

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!  You guys are the best!  

Teaser and PicTease for Chapter 12 are up on the blog!  Squeeee!  Run on over and check em' out!


Laterzzz:)

~Krazi & Mojo~

xoxo

Reviewer: ivoryhairbela Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2011 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

OMG KEEP GOING!!! Please for the love of GOD! PLEASE! I am begging you like a bitch in heat wants to get fucked! PLEASE! Lol... anyways uhm I like your story. It is awesomeness in a bag. :) Please update soon? I will cry if you dont. I WILL CRY! BIG TEARS!

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!  You guys are the best!  

Teaser and PicTease for Chapter 12 are up on the blog!  Squeeee!  Run on over and check em' out!


Laterzzz:)

~Krazi & Mojo~

xoxo

Reviewer: pixiekat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2011 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Sweet ever-loving gawd...do NOT hide!!! This chapter was brilliant...the emotional reactions were off the flippin' chart & beyond intense.

At the begining Bella sorta, kinda broke my heart. I can't imagine coming down from such an intense session without Sir. I am thankful that Rose knew what she needed to get through it.

As for Ali, lord knows she means well & I don't blame her, but I'm sure she's gonna pay hell at least for a little while.

Lastly E & B,I highly doubt that Edward will walk away from Bella,but he does need to calm down before he does something he will regret. Most impotantly, at this point, they need to talk and Bella has to come clean about her marriage.

The other thing that's got me beyond curious is how will Edward handle the fact that Bella is still a virgin. I mean, I know that he will probably be thrilled with that on a personal level, but how does that fit into their D/s roles?

Thanks ever so for another fanfreakintastic chapter!

~Kat



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!  You guys are the best!  

Teaser and PicTease for Chapter 12 are up on the blog!  Squeeee!  Run on over and check em' out!


Laterzzz:)

~Krazi & Mojo~

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!  You guys are the best!  

Teaser and PicTease for Chapter 12 are up on the blog!  Squeeee!  Run on over and check em' out!


Laterzzz:)

~Krazi & Mojo~

xoxo

Reviewer: EdwardAllThewway Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2011 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Loved it.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!  You guys are the best!  

Teaser and PicTease for Chapter 12 are up on the blog!  Squeeee!  Run on over and check em' out!


Laterzzz:)

~Krazi & Mojo~

xoxo

Reviewer: frostbitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2011 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

oh my god...oh my god...oh my god!! can't wait for the next update. i really hope he doesn't push her away or do something stupidly male ;) let's get on with the kinky :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!  You guys are the best!  

Teaser and PicTease for Chapter 12 are up on the blog!  Squeeee!  Run on over and check em' out!


Laterzzz:)

~Krazi & Mojo~

xoxo

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2011 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

oh damn, the cat is finally out of the bag.  I loved seeing the scene from her POV, and am glad they finally figured it out over dinner.  Loved how he kept sniffing the air because of her shampoo.

Hopefully they won't be too mad at Alice in the end...and I can't believe you left us hanging at the end...I can't wait for the next update and am dying to read their conversation with each other...and I hope they have a nice long discussion and don't just immediately run to the playroom to fuck like bunnies :)

Surely Sir will have some questions for Pet about her soon-to-be-ex-husband.  Can't wait!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!  You guys are the best!  

Teaser and PicTease for Chapter 12 are up on the blog!  Squeeee!  Run on over and check em' out!


Laterzzz:)

~Krazi & Mojo~

xoxo

Reviewer: inked-mom Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2011 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

YESSS!! The moment I've been dying for! :D It was perfect!! You had better keep going cuz now I'm anxious to know what happens next!!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!  You guys are the best!  

Teaser and PicTease for Chapter 12 are up on the blog!  Squeeee!  Run on over and check em' out!


Laterzzz:)

~Krazi & Mojo~

xoxo

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

oh my! I really hate that I started this fic before it was done... I am not good with waiting!!! I need more B & E.. they are so hot together! and now they know who each other are!!! I can't wait!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!  You guys are the best!  

Teaser and PicTease for Chapter 12 are up on the blog!  Squeeee!  Run on over and check em' out!


Laterzzz:)

~Krazi & Mojo~

xoxo

Reviewer: swimmer4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Great way to reveal!!   Keep writing and please don't make Edward an ass or if you do don't make Belly suffer too long.  I love this story line.  Can't wait to see what else ypu have planned.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

update soon. I can't wait to find out more.

Reviewer: bownbey Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

I love this story and would LOVE to see you continue with it. I hope you do. Great chapter.

Reviewer: lizutte Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

You SO have to update soon..... Loved this.

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Don't you dare stop!!!  You just got them in the same room...we've gotta find out what happens.  Don't make me come over there...

Thanks for the recs...love you madly!

 

Reviewer: OposKneg Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Yeah! Great chapter and set up for the next….eagerly awaiting..

Reviewer: nicole1962 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

i love this chapter;)

Reviewer: angelburt84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

awesome but damn what a cliff hanger i want more please

Reviewer: Tildycatpuss Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

OMG They know at last. Keep it going I cant wait to see what happens next. 

Reviewer: amber133 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

OMG.....thank god they found out, and i am glad it was in such a clever way

i cant wait to find out what happens next, please dont leave us hanging, im dying to read more

Reviewer: TG100 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Please keep going.

Reviewer: Mountainlioness13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Keep going! Keep going! Gah! I squeeed out loud when Bella read the text. :D

Reviewer: teaire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Please do not let this be the last chapter.  I would go crazy.  This is an awesome story. 

Reviewer: imc67 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

What the hell do you mean quit. Over my dead body you'll quit!!! Oh sorry, please don't quit. Waiting on pins and needles.

Reviewer: tracylk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Oh MY Freaking GOD!!!!!  That was awesome.  Don't even tease about this being the last chapter.  I will find a way to hunt you down and go all Kathy Bates on your ass... got it???!!!  LOL ... you so totally RAWK!  I want to see them together soooO freakin bad it hurts. 

I cannot wait for the next chapter!  It's going to be so awesome... I just know!  God I just LOOOOOOOOOVE you!  lol

Another recommendation that is quickly becoming me and Robshandmonkey's is "Living Amongst Vampires" by IBelongToAVampire.  It totally rawks... if you get time, take a look at it.  It's totally original in every way and totally hawt!!!  Oh Baby!!!!

Muah!  ~xoxoxox~

Reviewer: Moltz Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Not sure how I expected Edward to act, but he is more pissed off than I expected. Maybe that's because of the setting in which they were placed in.

Bella's immediate response to him by showing a submissive stance was brilliant; showing her determination in making this D/s relationship a reality.

Where his Edward leading her? If I were Bella all I would want to do is attack his lovely person! Let Edwards temper turn into his long awaited passion, showing her exactly what he feels.

Will Edward make his family, those in on this set up, pay for their deception?

When does he find out about the sham of a marriage?

Your little comment on stopping the story here will garner more than 100 reviews.....nice little trick to keep us dangling off the edge of the clif!

Please hurry with the next chapter.

Reviewer: cedward2417 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Don't you dare fuckin quit this story!!!!  And hopefully you're drinking that Kettle One in celebration of a job well done!!!  Please tell me we are going to get an EPOV of the dinner party?! ;)  OMG, I am so happy that they know.  Yay, yay, yay, yay!!!

Reviewer: cshorte Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Loved it!!! please continue!!! I just found this story and finally caught up!!!!

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Awesome  chapter

 

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Phew!  Awesome chapter!  The emotions had me reeling.  Can't wait to find out where they go from here!

Reviewer: firepixi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Amazing chapter!  Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: ugagirl120 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

um 2 words KEEP GOING!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Are you serious, you would be that cruel?  You would leave us all hanging right here?  No,  I can't believe anyone would have that much cruelty.  Just like Bella saying she wouldn't survive if Edward left her, I won't survive if you leave us here.  I found your story fairly recently...I think maybe you were about 3 chapters back, maybe 4 when I found you.  This story is so well written, and suspensful and so full of lust and love.  I love this Edward and Bella. My gosh there might be mass suicide all across the country, no, across the globe.  Don't leave us here. Please.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

I can't wait to read how E & B's reunion goes!  What a thrilling chapter!

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

thanks good chapter

Reviewer: michele_my_bella Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

damn woman......talk about a slow burn!!! that was fuckin amazing! i loved how she slid right into sub mode in his presence. beautifully done....now come out from under that bed and get the next chapter done.....please ;)

Reviewer: twimom55 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Are you kidding?? this story ROCKS huge!! you had better keep going!!!! it's just getting good!!! Thanks for a great story!!!

Reviewer: JenJen Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

This cant be the end keep going please!!!!!

Reviewer: kittylove Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Fuuucccckkk!  God woman I will come after you and hunt you down if you don't finish this up.  That was fantastic ...... I actually held my breath for a few minutes and now I have to recover.  Please update quickly - no make that immediately like within the next hour!

Reviewer: twilightmenrhot Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Oh my oh my oh my. Small touch of panic, mixed with equal parts excitement and arousal. Shit. Where is he taking her? Is he taking her home to have his wicked way with her? (God I do hope so)

The man certainly needs a few answers so unfortunately I doubt he will be whisking her away to his playroom right away. Did Alice tell him Bella isn't married to Jake? He doesn't even know she has moved to Seattle!

Eeeks. Confused, horny Dom with the woman he's always dreamed of; whatever will he do with her????

Reviewer: lambykins Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Im so glad they finally know who each other are...YES KEEP GOING WITH THE STORY... just my opinion :)))))

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

YOU BETTER FINISH THIS STORY!!!!!!!! What do you mean "should you finish??????? PLEASE FINISH!!!!!!

WOW!!!!!! This was GREAT !!!!! I can not wait to see what Edward is thinking. I am soooooo glad that Sir told Bella to "Come". At first I wondered if he met "come-follow me or CUM. I would have done both. Can't wait for MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!! PLEASE don't leave us hanging long.

Reviewer: Library Lolita Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

I WILL come after you if you leave it here!!!  You can't just buikd it up for so long and quit!!!  What would your mama say??  Really, now!!!  It's not even funny to threaten something ike that!!!

Reviewer: A Swan Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

SERIOUSLY AMAZING FIC!  WHATEVER YOU DO DON'T QUIT PLEASE KEEP GOING!!! AND UPDATE ASAP YOU GOT ME AT THE EDGE OF MY SEAT!!! CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE. 

GREAT JOB!

Reviewer: tlmorris Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Finally!!!!!

Reviewer: My Not-So-Secret Obsession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

EEEK! They realise they know each other. In my head i can just imagine meeting someone after you've had sex with and realising it was them and it being incredibly awkward, but Bella and Edward got through fine. I hope you update soon=)

~My Not-So-Secret Obsession

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Oh crap....i hope this does not end up with them running in different directions. I don't want Edward to run away. They have to talk this out and be honest with each other. They can't forget about the night before and how they both felt. They will be so good together. Great job...thanks so much!!! Happy Valentine's Day!

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

That was AWWSOME!  I wondered how they were going to come to the conclusion at a family dinner!  I just can't wait until the next chapter... it should be incredible.

Reviewer: krisandrob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

 

OMG what a chapter I can't wait to see Edward's point of view and see how they deal and confess their feelings for one another

Reviewer: reneesmay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

holy shit tha was intense i new edward was going to be pissed at alice and everyone for what they did i cant wait to see what happens next and what is edward going to do when he finds out that bella is still a virgine i cant wait to see what happens next so please update soon

Reviewer: lmb Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Wow.  Beatifully written.  I hope that they find a way together.  I am confused about one thing though.  It almost sounds like Bella was waiting until marriage and when things didn't work out with Jacob, it was never consumated?  Does this mean she is still a virgin?  Well we know what she wants, I hope your next chapter is an EPOV.  Don't wait to long!

Reviewer: Lasharp15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

I'm not sure I can wait until next week! I'M LOVING THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: galwidanatitud Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

oh come on...don't start drinking yet....you're doing great!  :)

Reviewer: vero11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

OMG! You are NOT ending this here. Keep it going girl!

Vero

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

I was so so excited to see/read their reunion. I couldn't imagine how it will go without feeling betrayed for either of them. But your solution was really great. I can't wait for the talk between Edward and Bella about how this all happend, what happend to her wedding and perphaps admitting some feelings for each other.

Reviewer: eumenida Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

You`re kidding us!! Righ?! END?! Like, THE END ?!

   I`m  just adusting myself to accept that the story was about anticipation, and as that it is just PERFECT, as it is . With no additional chapters.

  But You ( with capital Y) can`t just provoke such deep emotions in all  of us, and said :" No more story. And of the road."

 At least give as some good epilog, with some conversation and cuddling. PLEEEEASEEE.... You own us. You can`t take the favourite toy from child.

  Just look how much reviews you got in last few houres.

   OK, Calm down Eumenida. Hm.Hm. Thank you for your story , thank you for shearing with us , it has been beautifull.

 

( And pleeeeasee, just one chapter). Be good.

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

wow, just wow!  I can't wait to find out what they have to say to each other - - they have a few years of stuuf to talk to each other about.  will they be open and honest with each other even though the contract has not been signed?? looking forward to the next installment of the story!!!  I thank you fof it being up sooner than later!

 

Reviewer: Berrug243 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

O m g .... Keep going don't stop there please

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

What do you mean *IF* we like it...IT was bloody amazing...I can't wait until the next update...what happens next...does he love her...hate her...does he still think she is married..WHAT?

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

You are absolutely amazing! This story is No. 1 on my "Can't wait till it updates" list. This chapter was as great as the one before. Thank you so much for sharing your amazing talent with us.

Reviewer: eamc1901 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

OME!!!  you have to keep going and fast...dont leave me hanging...i need to know what happens..and he better not leave her!!

Reviewer: CrimsonRed-ink1792 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

It ended??? Sadface... LOL.

Wonderful. The world's two most subborn people are finally together. And leaving together too! Happyface!!! 

Can't to see the discussion that follows! Keep up the awesomeness.

Til next time, happy typing!

CrimsonR

Reviewer: lisab Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

OMG!!! I am shocked!  can't wait to see where this goes!  i thought for sure they would meet after a contract not go to dinner! 

Reviewer: LAURENCEPL Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

No, please don't stop ! this story is amazing and I love love love it so much !!

Reviewer: lisab Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 10: It´s Playtime...

such a great chapter!  i really thought E had it figured out with the lip biting this B does and love how hooked he is on her!  thanks for writing.

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

PLEEEEEEEEEEASEEEEE keep going!!!!!!! I'm dying for more!

Reviewer: mebk03 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

I loved the chapter.  No way can you quite now.  I can't wait to read the next update.

Reviewer: Wolf Lover Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

I will hunt you down and spank you myself or better yet, let Edward do it if you leave us here!!!! Please update- soon, please...

Reviewer: maddy4400 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Finally! I really hope he doesn't act like an ass to her.

Reviewer: rtpobsessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

OMG WHAT A WAY TO END IT! Pins and needles, pins and needles. Holy crap just launch into a scene, then I would probably pass out at my computer.

Reviewer: fortheloveofrob Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Absolutely keep going. 

Alot of writer's would have stopped before the dinner dragging it out.  I am SOOO thankful to you that you kept going. 

I am very interested in knowing what happens after this cliffie.

Reviewer: Amandyw Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

What a horrible place to leave us hanging.... I have to know what happens next. Please, please, please don't stop writing this story.

Reviewer: Jessy-Anne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

OMG you can't stop there pleeeease this is still so good and i'm not above begging haha you know i was kind of worried about jane because of edward's worries with cattiness but jane seemed really nice i just hope it wasn't all a front bella could probably use some more friends like that are into the whole submission thing haha and dinner talk about awkward haha but i thought it was too good in the end when she fell into her position for him and he didn't leave her but now i really really want more :D you are brilliant sweets and i can't wait to see what you are going to do hopefully it's not end it :D

Reviewer: Motherthing Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

PUULLLLEEESSSSEEEE don't leave us hanging!  I've been reading avidly and would just wilt if I didn't get my fix of Sir and Pussycat!

Motherthing

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

I like the way they union went BUT.... HOW COULD YOU LEAVE US HANGING LIKE THAT??????  UUUGGGHHHHH  we had to read the same chapter over only in Bella's POV.  I understand wanting to know some things of what she was thinking but gosh, I feel cheated.  I was soooooo hoping to get them together this chapter and I see that yes you did that in the very end and left us hanging.  :'(  I am thinking that he is taking her home to talk at least that is what I am thnking.  I sure hope he doesn't turn her away.

Reviewer: cb2brown Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

I loved it -- I am glad that you didn't "draw it out" unrealistically.  Please don't stop now!  I want to know what happens when they finally sit down and talk through everything.  I am sure that there will be talk of lost time but really, Bella wasn't ready for all of Edward until now.  I believe that they will both come to thank Alice and Rosalie.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

wow  HUGE chapter.  liked bellas pov.   hmmm cant wait to see eddies pov next. hmmm cant wait for him to find out about the wedding sham.

Reviewer: crhunt123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Girl get back here now I can't wait for the next chapter.

Pleae let them work it out, I can't wait to she how you handle this mess Alice made of this.

 

 

 

Reviewer: avidreader69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

It's like Lois Lane finding out that Clark Kent is Superman, all of her feelings can be combined as soon as she grasps that they are one person!

Reviewer: shelly8721 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

I didn't like it...I LOVED it!!  Please, please don't stop writing!! This is my favorite story right now.  I totally loved how you did the reveal and I absoutely cannot wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: rosedale58 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

I DEVOURED this fic this weekend and LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!!!! Can't wait to see what happens next...you're killing me here with the suspense!  Very well written and the anticipation is as good as it gets!  2 thumbs up! WELLLLLL DONEEEEEEEE! Clap*clap*clap (and not in a sick bad way...if you get me!)  I'm really sick! LOL...

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Ok, I will admit, I didn't like this chapter....I LOVED IT!!! HEHEHEEHE!  I really loved it so much!  I cannot wait for them to meet face to face as Pet and Sir ;)  Please don't take too long to update, ok?



Author's Response:

I promise not to leave you in suspense for too long! Lol! My goal is to keep it as close to a week as possible!  And don´t worry, you won´t be disappointed! 

Gosh I´m so blown away and humbled by everybody taking time to stop and leave me so much love for this story!  I had no idea that ppl would love it so much!  You guys are the best and this is the best Valentine´s Day present ever!  Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!


Happy Valentine´s Day Everybody!


Laterzz:)

Krazi & Mojo

xoxo

 

Reviewer: Lilygirl88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

OMG...
They know who was who now. I just hope Edward doesn't break it off before he Finds out she's divorced. You my dear are cruel lol leaving us with that ending.

Author's Response:

Sorry it just couldn´t be helped, had to stop it there; if I didn´t you wouldn´t be thirsting for more!  Lol! Cruel I know, but you won´t be waiting for long, I promise!

 

 

Gosh I´m so blown away and humbled by everybody taking time to stop and leave me so much love for this story!  I had no idea that ppl would love it so much!  You guys are the best and this is the best Valentine´s Day present ever!  Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!


Happy Valentine´s Day Everybody!


Laterzz:)

Krazi & Mojo

xoxo

 

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Awesome chapter, loved that they finally figured out who is who!



Author's Response:

Gosh I´m so blown away and humbled by everybody taking time to stop and leave me so much love for this story!  I had no idea that ppl would love it so much!  You guys are the best and this is the best Valentine´s Day present ever!  Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!


Happy Valentine´s Day Everybody!


Laterzz:)

Krazi & Mojo

xoxo

 

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Sitting on the edge of my seat. He better not screw this up.



Author's Response:

Let´s hope he doesn´t ! Lol!

Gosh I´m so blown away and humbled by everybody taking time to stop and leave me so much love for this story!  I had no idea that ppl would love it so much!  You guys are the best and this is the best Valentine´s Day present ever!  Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!


Happy Valentine´s Day Everybody!


Laterzz:)

Krazi & Mojo

xoxo

 

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

wwoooooohhhhhooooooooo,this was excellent , i want more, MORE, MORE,plz , PLEASE update soon.c.



Author's Response:

I promise not to make you wait too long! Lol!

Gosh I´m so blown away and humbled by everybody taking time to stop and leave me so much love for this story!  I had no idea that ppl would love it so much!  You guys are the best and this is the best Valentine´s Day present ever!  Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!


Happy Valentine´s Day Everybody!


Laterzz:)

Krazi & Mojo

xoxo

 

Reviewer: LissLove Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

i didn't like, but i did like it. is that okay too?
I want more! just get that next chapter up very soon, 'cause I don't what will happen if you don't!

xxxLiss



Author's Response:

Phew... you had me nervous there for a sec! Glad you liked it!  Soon I promise!

Gosh I´m so blown away and humbled by everybody taking time to stop and leave me so much love for this story!  I had no idea that ppl would love it so much!  You guys are the best and this is the best Valentine´s Day present ever!  Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!


Happy Valentine´s Day Everybody!


Laterzz:)

Krazi & Mojo

xoxo

 

Reviewer: carlie cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Omg you guyz are soooooooooo bad hmmmmmmm maybe need punishment..hehe you guyz are driving me mad......LOL but it was awesome as usual PLEASE KEEP WRITING if this is the last chapter I will DIE........LOL now get back to writing or suffer PUNISHMENT...........LOL

 

Thanks:)



Author's Response:

Sheesh! I´m writing, I´m writing!  I feel like when my mom threatened to whip me, no punishments please! I am so on it!  Lol!

Gosh I´m so blown away and humbled by everybody taking time to stop and leave me so much love for this story!  I had no idea that ppl would love it so much!  You guys are the best and this is the best Valentine´s Day present ever!  Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!


Happy Valentine´s Day Everybody!


Laterzz:)

Krazi & Mojo

xoxo

 

Reviewer: ocd girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

holy shit I thought he was going to leave her!  Know the better question is were is he taking her..



Author's Response:

He´s waited too long to have her, so even though he doesn´t understand; he couldn´t bear to leave her behind. And believe me, he is not a happy camper!

Gosh I´m so blown away and humbled by everybody taking time to stop and leave me so much love for this story!  I had no idea that ppl would love it so much!  You guys are the best and this is the best Valentine´s Day present ever!  Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!


Happy Valentine´s Day Everybody!


Laterzz:)

Krazi & Mojo

xoxo

 

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

So evil of you to end the chapter there, LOL. I cant wait to see what goes on between them. Wonderful chapter! I just know Edward was figuring it out in his head when he sat down at the table.



Author's Response:

Ha ha!  Sorry, but there was nothing more to be said this go round, but I promise to give answers in the next chapter.  Also, I don´t plan on taking forever to update! Squeeeee!  Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!


Happy Valentines Day!


Laterzz:)

Krazi & Mojo

xoxo

Reviewer: viking Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

HOLY SHIT!!!!  That was great!  Please update again soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks! Lol!

Gosh I´m so blown away and humbled by everybody taking time to stop and leave me so much love for this story!  I had no idea that ppl would love it so much!  You guys are the best and this is the best Valentine´s Day present ever!  Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!


Happy Valentine´s Day Everybody!


Laterzz:)

Krazi & Mojo

xoxo

 

Reviewer: kgunter34 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

No quitting.  What would happen to poor Mojo?  Awesome update.



Author's Response:

Thanks!! You are so right!  I could never leave Mojo hanging this way, but I do think that he should have a say about the fact that Bella ditched him two nights in a row. She´s definitely got Sir on the brain!  Lol!  Thanks for the review!  I´m once again shooting for a week as my update goal... I´m being threatened to deliver! Ha ha!


Laterzzz:)

Krazi & Mojo
xoxo

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

oh my, oh my.  Just communicate please so they can get back to the playroom lol 



Author's Response:

Lol!  There will definitely be some dialogue and we´ll get a little more insight in the next chapter!  Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!


Laterzz:)

Krazi & Mojo

xoxo

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

This was a great chapter and I am seriously looking forward to their first conversation.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I´m so glad you enjoyed it.  I must admit I was a bit nervous, I really wanted it to surpass the last one and keep the momentum going! You´ll get soon, I promise!

Gosh I´m so blown away and humbled by everybody taking time to stop and leave me so much love for this story!  I had no idea that ppl would love it so much!  You guys are the best and this is the best Valentine´s Day present ever!  Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!


Happy Valentine´s Day Everybody!


Laterzz:)

Krazi & Mojo

xoxo

 

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

oh boy.  i sense a bit of drama up ahead.  hope it all works out



Author's Response:

We´ll have to just wait and see! Lol!

Gosh I´m so blown away and humbled by everybody taking time to stop and leave me so much love for this story!  I had no idea that ppl would love it so much!  You guys are the best and this is the best Valentine´s Day present ever!  Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!


Happy Valentine´s Day Everybody!


Laterzz:)

Krazi & Mojo

xoxo

 

Reviewer: Natsar Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Don't quit! Edward and Bella have not even got started yet! I hope they won't be too hard on Alice. She was only trying to help bring them together... Please update soon! Thanks! :~)



Author's Response:

Never! Not until there´s nothing left to write! Lol!  Yeah, I´m kind of hoping they ´re not too hard on Alice myself.

Gosh I´m so blown away and humbled by everybody taking time to stop and leave me so much love for this story!  I had no idea that ppl would love it so much!  You guys are the best and this is the best Valentine´s Day present ever!  Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!


Happy Valentine´s Day Everybody!


Laterzz:)

Krazi & Mojo

xoxo

 

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