Doobie, Doobie, Doobie... Doobie, Doobie, Doobie...Agent P!  Sorry, but I couldn't resist... I think that's why I love this story so much: even with all the sexiness, love, and angst, you make me lmao with things like "Perry the platypus" and Mojo vs. Edward.  Awesome chappie! ;)

So glad you updated! I'll be waiting for more!

Who caught them??

UGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH How can you do that to us???!!!??!?!?!?! ugh who nocked on the window and how is Bella going to fix her hair and wipe off her sweat before going into the house? the towel they had is pretty much wasted=P Please update soon

Incredible update! Wow! I can't wait until the next one. Busted....so funny. Thank you!

Good Chapter.....

thanks good chaapter

well they are totally hot together! im excited for the next step of their relationship and to see who bust them!

Absolutely great chapter. Hope Bella doesn't need to choose between Mojo and Edward. Wonder who would win.

hmmm   yummy chapter.  Mojo and eddie are funny.

I like pictures but be careful not to overuse them.

Edwards and Mojo/Cojo's interaction was soo funny. One minute best buddies and than when Bella is near they fight for her attention, real frenemies ;).

It is great that Bella want to move in with Edward but also wants to wait some time. Although her cautiousness is great it is totally anwarrant, because Edward is not going anywhere without her.

Probably Charlie busted them, because they took so long to come in, when they arrived. But I am not sure, I just hope, that whoever it was, didn't get to see to much of Edwards and Bellas activities. She would be mortified and embaressed.

Thanks for the chapter and until the next one.

I have am not a particular animal lover.  However, after reading this I think I am sold on a Mojo of my own.  Or at least E's name of Cujo.  LOL  

I truly love this story.  I need the fun part of this chapter!

That was a HAWT, awesome, wonderful, amazing chapter.  I absolutely loved it.   I love Mojo/Cujo LMAO  That is exactly how dogs are too.  But I have faith in Edward, he will win Mojo over.  I was dissapointed that Edward didn't get his road head but hey thats what happens when you wait too long, someone comes along and ruins your fun. lol.

man i love your writing. it took these guys long enough to get together and now we are looking at moving in. can edward get used to a dog. i am sure he can or at least he is willing. i can't wait to see what bella does next. love the story and love the pictures. thank you for writing

Loved it!!!

I hope you update soon!!! ;o)

Loved it.  Great plan to win the dog over!  Can't wait for more.  My husband's gonna be in for a surprise when he gets home from work thanks to you...xoxo

4/18/11

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At first I wasn't sure if B and E would be able to meld their love and D/s relationship, but maybe they'll find the right balance.

I think it would be logical for B to move in with E.

I can't wait to see what evil lurks behind Tanya.

Really enjoyed this chapter from beginning to the end especially because both of these characters have been hurting for so many years and it was great that he finally spoke up the told her that he loved her because I sure don't think Bella ever would have said anything.  She did a fantastic job during the scene and pleased Edward so much.  I did find her excuse with her dog a little lacking though although I can see her hesitance in moving in so soon.  He did explain that he's been in love with her for so long and didn't want to waste anymore time being apart from her and we know how long she has been in love with him so I guess I'm wondering what is the real reason for her hesitance other than just her overthinking type of personality that she has?  Why doesn't he suggest a 24/7 D/s type of arrangement?

Great chapter, moved everything along beautifully.

another awesome chapter! i love how in love they are. they're entirely too cute together. i'll see if i can find the stories you rec'd. if not, i'll try sending you a message.

Thanks for one dead sexy chapter!  Hum-in-na.

Love the HOT chapter!!! Dam girl you can write some HOT SMOKIN lemons!!!!

Thanks for the update, great long chapter. I'm glad they could share the depth of feelings for each other they've been secreting from the world for years. Now, getting the dog on board with things. Was this a reference to Twilight & mut interference? ha

Thanks for the rec's have not read them, I'll check em out;D)

OMFG!!!  What a chapter!  Geezus!!!  That has to be some of the hottest, sexiest, most insane citrus overload of lemony goodness I have ever read!  Lord Have Mercy!!!  Whew! 

Your Edward is the most awesomest Edward in the whole wide world... I want a BF/Dom like him... I just love the heck outta him!!!

And, I just about tinkled myself when I saw the story recommendations... I can't believed you pimped my story!  That is sooO freakin' amazing I can't even sit still... I'm like a kid at Christmas!!!  Tooo freakin AWESOME, baby!

So yeah... between the insanely fuckhawt chapter and my 41 year old weak~ass bladder, I kinda need to go change my panties.  LMAOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooo

You know I love the heck outta ya, girlfriend... You totally rawk my world!  I cannot wait for the next chapter.  Gah... you are too talented for words!!!

Mwuah~XoXoXoX~Tracy

10+++++++++++++++++ all the way!!!!

Whoa nelly... tried to get to this fic three times today and was interupted everytime.  So now its midnight the whole house is sleeping and I am finally getting me some good Dr.  Good thing too 'cause the pics were hot hot hot and hubby would accuse me of reading smutty porn lol.  I really try to tell him that all my porn has plot.  He doesn't believe me.  Fantastic chappie, and am looking forward to next.

I love their time together.  It was awesome!  I hope Edwad and Mojo can get along.  They are not going to want to be away from each other and who cares what people think.  I can't wait for them to go see Seth.  He is going to be so happy.  I am still worried about Tanya and what she is up to.  Great chapter...thanks so much!!!

I was wondering when she was going to remember she had a dog, lol.  Edward is just soo perfect for her. I hope she moves in with him.

Who would want to return to the 'real world' after such delights as they have shared??? All Bella needs to say is 'yes' and they need never fully return to reality. They have the power to create a new reality for themselves, together.

The wait for this chapter was worth it!  I loved every part of it.  I am kinda hoping that Mojo doesn't "love" Edward right away.  I think it would be hysterical to have Edward fighting to win Mojo over... hee hee. ;)

I loved the chapter. I am glad that Edward has no problem telling Bella his feelings now. Why not move in together. If they are going to do this, do it all the way.

great update!

I always smile when I see that you've updates, so send me more and keep me smiling!!!

GAH!  That was INCREDIBLE!  Well worth the wait :)  I really cannot wait to see what happens when they go to Forks ;)  I really loved it all so much!  Cannot wait for more!

God, you make me tense.

It was so good to see this update.  I'm really looking forward to their trip to Forks, hanging out with Seth and the aftermath of Leah & Jacob with Sue and Charlie. Thanks again!!!

WOW that was an action packed chapter! loved it btw! I cant believe how fast he wants to move hehe

That was excellent chapter..  made me want to cry with all the emotions..   It really sad that Bella doesn't think worth of herself.    But with determention Edward will  show her love and understanding..    :)Leona

awesome as usual thanks so much !

OkKKKK I have a big qustion.  WHAT on earth was she punished for????????????????????????????????  I did not get it.  I mean the scene was wonderful the punishment was wonderful and all but I did not get WHY was she punished in the first place.

Great chapter.  I'm anxious to see what happens in Forks.

You find the BEST pictures...great story

Ok I love the pictures but reading at work on my blackberry is definately interesting! I never know what the pic will be and who could be walking by! Heehee still so awesome! A great little break for my day.
I am. So glad to see that they have made it through the main part of the night! And perfectly done for them - alittle sweet and a little kink. Looks like it is time for them to have yet another big talk!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! Be sure to check out the blog there's a teaser up of the next chapter!

well it looks like there is just one big reveal after another tonight! i am so glad bella safe worded, she should not be fucked hard as punishment on his desk for the first time. maybe the second or third, heehee. let's see where eddie takes things with his new info......

wow that was very much needed! so glad that they came together so perfectly and the connection was so just wow! can not even believe that eddie took a swing in alice's direction

I am beyond hooked into your story! Brilliant, I love it.

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wow small world! i really hope jake and leah can make things work. familt get togethers will ddefinately be a blast! heehee

well alice has shown bella the path through the looking glass. now we all need to trust alice to lead her down the right path.

wow that was quite the trap they set jake up with! and bella's little slip told alice everything she needed to know....

ohhhh i wonder what bella does to jake? slimey snake!

Ah....Yeah! That was an amazing first time! Edward is dreamy.