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Reviewer: MexicanChapina Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2011 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

Sexy time was SO fucking hot... =) Can't wait for the next chapter!!! And Edward is sweet.. he wants her first time to be special =D

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2011 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

so loves these two together. i can't wait for more, want more with them. hawt

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2011 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

great chapter

Reviewer: cullenmother05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

so fabulous. hot on so many levels. always great. cannot wait to see the actual deed happen and what he plans for her.

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

I think I better go off for a little quiet time by myself for a while!  Outstanding chapter!  His inner monologue is so funny!

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...

Holy Shit!!  That oughta put the man into a tailspin!!  Great chapter...as always.

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

Wow!!! That was great, & really HAAAAWWWWTTTT!!!!!! :) I can't wait until your next chapter! I love your story!!!

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

This story is really the perfect combination of love and sex...... The drama is a added bonus that keeps everyone holding on by the seat of their pants. I can't wait to hear Bella's side of things..

Reviewer: sessa Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

I loved the last 3 chapters, you did a wonderful job. i can notwait

Reviewer: nicole1962 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

love this chapter:)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...

I have stayed up way too late reading but I have to see what happens next :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Great chapter! I wondered how all that was going to go down. Now they know :0) I sure they talk about all this. He needs to know she isn't married.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 10: It´s Playtime...

They are going to be so suprised when they find out who the other person really is. Especially since Edward already had his moment of wondering if it could be Bella. Great chapter!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 5:18 AM Title: Chapter: 9 And So It Begins...

Another great chapter. Looking forward to Sir and Pet finally meeting. The thought of sub Emmett still makes me chuckle. That's so fun. :0)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

well in the end i hope that he can keep he head thinking right! 

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

Is it hot in here or is it just me?  *grin*  Yep, that was HAWT!  Loved the photo you found of Rob at the beginning of the chapter.  That was priceless!  So, perfect for just being told that Bella was a vigin!! LOL!  So, if all this preliminary smexxy time is so awesome, I can hardly wait to see what Edward has planned for the first time.  Is he going to keep it all vanilla or is he going to go in a different direction?  I cannot wait to see what happens next!!

Keye

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 8: Twas A Night With Sir... And All Through the House...

This was fun. Love their phone calls and texts. Yay Edward is coming home early! :0)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

Hell with just new panties I need a new chair LOL.  I think they get the idea they like each other lol.  Is Edward going to believe what he heard when Bella said she loves him???? 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 7: How the Douche Stole Christmas...

I love Bella and Seth. To bad Jacob had to show up and ruin their time together. Leah may not be happy now but at least now she knows what type a guy she's envolved with.

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

Love the update!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 6: Propositions, Female Dommes, & Cell Phones...

Ok I understand why Edward did that with Tanya. But I have a feeling it's going to come back to bite him in the you know what. He was better off ending it and not giving her this false hope that he's just thinking about things. I'll say it again ... she's crazy! :0)

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

As always another fantastic chapter.  Very hot I loved it and I am super excited to see them together.  YAY!  I love this so much.  I look forward to your posts of new chapters a lot!  Thank you for sharing this really great story with us all it is the bomb!

Kasi~ xoxoxo

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 5: Revelations... What´s Done In the Dark...

Their talk about "mowing the lawn"  really made me laugh especially when Jasper caught on to what they were talking about. ha ha I'm glad Alice came clean and told Bella about the lifestlyle she and Jasper share. It'll help for Bella to have someone she can talk to. :0)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

;D)

<3

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 5:24 AM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...

I'm afraid to see what problems Tanya is going to cause. She's a bit crazy. I have to say I'm loving Emmett and Rose! ha ha I know they weren't in this chapter a lot but the thought of Rose using that unkown toy on him made me giggle. Great job!

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

super hot! amazing job!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...

I love that they caught Jacob on tape and now she's free to move to Seattle with Alice (where Edward is) :0) Plus she's 10 mil richer. I don't think I would have gone through with the wedding. Just because of the press they'll get. I hope Bella comes out and just talks to Alice about her dreams. Great job!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

That was incredible.  But I think Edward needs a spanking for making her cry and think that he didn't want her.  He better be careful when he admist his feelings for her that it is not too much and cause her to run.

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

AWESOME!  Loved it!

Reviewer: twilightmenrhot Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

*grins* What a crazy night. Bella shared so much, but saved the best part for while she slept. I do hope their chat in the morning is even more fruitful than the one this night!! Now that Edward has a hint at what Bella's heart holds, I do hope they each are able to reveal years of supressed emotions to the other.

Seeing poorEdward physically ill at the thought of 'his' Bella being used by other Doms was very moving. He has kept his adoration for her a secret for so long (so he thinks!).  He has wanted to claim her as his own for so long and tonight was a first step. Last night, while incredibly hot beyond wildest imaginations, was without knowledge of who the other was.

Bless Edward for not listening to his dick. He did seem to recover remarkably well to the shock he suffered. Virgin? How would he have thought it.

Will be most anxious to see what the morning brings!!!!

Reviewer: cedward2417 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

I love how much Edward loves her...and I can't wait for him to find out that she's always felt the same way. ;)

One wee little question: Were they in Bella's sub room?  I thought that her sub room was a "free zone" and he couldn't go all Dom on her there...or is that only if Bella doesn't want him to? 

Reviewer: michele_my_bella Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

wow....another great juicy ;) chapter. i luv ur lemons

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

Awesome chapter.

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

I am glad that he admitted that he did something wrong.  I am also happy that he didnt just take her and he wants to make it special for her. I hope he makes up with Alice because she did the right thing. Sexy time was HOT!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

Uggh! uh...uggh! Speechless...

Reviewer: edaddict3254 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

great chapter...i liked it much better than the last one.  i'm glad that he finally realized that he needed to sit down and talk to bella about a few things first.

i figured edward would go insane when he heard the story of what jacob did to bella. 

i'm just curious as to why edward wasn't with bella as himself -  as edward, while in her room, instead of slipping into the role of her dom.   i know they hadn't covered all of the details of how their relationship would work, the how's, when's and where's etc...whether strictly d/s or that and more.

anyway, very hot.  you write this couple so well, their chemistry just oozes off of the pages of this story.  i'm looking forward to them getting further into each other as both d/s and beyond.

i do hope that edward keeps his word about honesty and comes clean with bella with respect to his feelings for her.  he now knows how she's feeling, please don't let him disregard her words as anything less than they were meant.  i also hopes he finds some way to make her first time special and i really hope it's as edward the first time.

love you, love your story!  thanks for writing for us!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

Out Freaking standing!

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

What a chapter.  It was wonderful.  I cannot wait for the next one.

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

LOL that first pic was hilarious loved the chappy :) 

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

Love it, love it, love it!

Reviewer: vampirenites Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

omg i am so exhausted i am so happy also he needs to tell her and he needs to get her to come to seattle with him he can take care of her as a boyfriend and a dom they could be the perfect couple in both i await the next chapter you are a great writer

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 2: PAGING DR. CULLEN

Tanya getting punished kind of made me chuckle. :0)

Reviewer: viking Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

Holy hot damn girl!!!!!  That was awesome!

Reviewer: My Not-So-Secret Obsession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

=) He better make her 1st time special=) Soon preferably. I'm glad they talked it out and Edward bettr beat the sh*t out of Jacob if he sees him. Ugh, well now i need to go change=P Update soon!

~My Not-So-Secret Obsession

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

Gah, that was SO AMAZING!  I really loved it so much!  I didn't need just ONE pair of extra panties, I needed at least 2!  That was INCREDIBLE!  I cannot wait to read the outtake now :)

Reviewer: lambykins Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

wowie that was hawt.  ha so glad bella sleep talks.  Edward is going to be a happy man with bella saying love you.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?

Wondering what Bella and Alice will blan to get back at Jacob? :0)

Reviewer: CrimsonRed-ink1792 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

Oh, why can't they just get it over with it already. They both like each other... *rolls eyes* Seriously. Both totally over dramatic.

Okay, all done with that now. Sorry. Had to rant. Can't wait til next time!

Happy typing!

CrimsonR

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

Another great chapter!!! I'll be waiting for more!

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

Another awesome chapter! I really love this story!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

You NEEDED a panty warning at the beginning of this chapter. HOT HOT HOT!!! and there wasn't any actual sex. He still has not taken her virginity. GREAT GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!!! Can not wait to the next chapter!!!!!!1

Reviewer: swimmer4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

You did a really good job displaying the emotions of both characters even though it was EPOV.   However, I do have a question about Edward insisting on her submissiveness in her room.  I thought in her room that idea was suspended as long as she was respectful, was there a reason you had them maintain the Dom/Sub dialogue or am I confused?   I do really like your style of writing.  It's good and you give your characters dimension and the sex is an integral part of the story and not just thrown in.  I look forward to your future posts.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

Personally I could do without the pictures. THe picturs of Rob & kristen are fine but all these others destroy my minds eye of the original. The scene you depict well with words.

 

That is just me. I do think that now we have E & B finally knowing each other and talking is great.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 6:04 PM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

This is going to be so much fun :0)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

yummy yummy yummy  what else can iI say.    more plz.   love the pics.

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

thanks awsome chaprer

Reviewer: carlie cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

WOW I am sooooo excited this story is soooooooooo damm awesome you girlz RAWK!  that was so fuckhawt! See ya next week. Thanks :)

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

Good Chapter....

Reviewer: FangMe Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

Oh my gosh!  Awesome chapter!  LOOOOOOVED it :D  Domward is so freakin' sexy!  Strong and sensitive... gah!  I can't wait for the next chapter.  I'd love to hear what's going through Bella's mind.  I hope you keep at least some of the D/s aspect of the story if you do decide to have them pursue their 'love' for each other... so many D/s stories start out with that theme then dump it and go for the vanilla of a 'love' relationship...

Sorry... rambling again... LOL

A lot of your recommendations are on my list of favorites as well.  I am also currently working on my own story too... maybe if you have time you can check it out.

You soO rawk my dearest!  God love ya!

XxOO ~ Tracylk (Fangs is my evil alter ego) Mwuahahahaha

Reviewer: ju007 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

love this story!!! Gah! Can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

oh my word..little breathless here.  that was just..........yummy thanks

Reviewer: juandedios Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

got that was so hot can't wait for the next chapter i'll be waiting.

Reviewer: wdmmom4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

Fantastic update!!  That was HOT!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

Hi Krazi - TGIF to you & Mojo!

Wow that was FuckAwesome!  Love the pic at the very top when he is tugging at his hair when he discovers she stilll holds her -V- Card!  Priceless picture and perfect for what he must have thought in that instance..  Hahahahaha!

So now he fully understands what went down with Asshat Jacob and Leah that is wonderful!

I thought it was so interesting the whole time he is thinking, just how he is going to convince her that this is not just a weekend thing he will want with her.  I think now, at least I hope he knows now...since hearing here sleep talk that he will realize she feels deeper, much deeper for him... Unless he just doesn't want to believe it and blows it off, in any case he will eventually get there... after all he is a pretty intelligent man for Goodness Sakes...

Instead of being mad at the little Pixie (yes, he did have a right to be at first) he needs to buy her something REALLY special after this....

Can't wait for more.. Such a good story..  You are very very talented in your writing..

Laters BB  Kathy xoxoxo

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

hot and sweaty !!!!!   well done chapter.  I just hope they can admit their feelings, like Edward said be honest.  I hate the stories where it is so drawn out before they admit their feelings.   Love the sex !!!

Reviewer: maryannabella Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

just... damn! whoa i need a drink and my husband... now.lol

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

Wow...this is awesome!  I love their time together.  I am glad he knows he needs to be honest with her about his feeling sooner rather then later.  They both need to be honest about this, but it looks like Bella sleep talking has let Edward in on her little secret already. 

2 things I would love to see....#1 I hope they can go see Seth soon.  Seth will be so excited to see them at the same time.  #2 - I hope they are Edward and Bella when he makes love to her for the first time.  That would make it so special.  I can't wait to see what he has planned.  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

Awesome chapter

love this story

can't wait for more more more

Reviewer: lisab Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

This was your best chapter yet!  loved this edward and can't wait to see in bella's head why she kept walking away thinking he didn't want her...so loved their time together.  hope when he takes the V that they are not dom/sub though.  loved it!  i too am really enjoying that quirky and funny Rubbish that you rec'd!

Reviewer: gretel Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

Ugh... ugh... ughhhhhhh...   Thank you!  Beautiful chapter.

 

Just a tiny, minor negative note:

That pic of Kenny G?  ---  Cockblocker.

Reviewer: Kimberlyann Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

Jesus... Damn I need some clean pants... LOVED IT

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

Fanning furioursly.

Reviewer: team rob Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 6: Propositions, Female Dommes, & Cell Phones...

:)

seems we like same stories as i am reading most of your rec's

 

Reviewer: Kimberlyann Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...

lol... I hope we is happy after being shocked about it .... I mean he will be the only person to ever touch her..

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

I loved it and I am glad he didn't take her in the sub room He needs to show her he's different and that needs to be done in his bed I also hope Edward gets a chance to say "Fuck you Black Look at what you are missing out on" LMAO I can't wait for that. I am so excited to see what will happen next and I really hope they both get what they want, and Stupid Tanya gets the hint. I know she will try to cause problems but are lil' Bella has claws and I hope she gets to use them on her It will probably get her punished a few times but I would take it as long as it comes from him*giggles* Lucky BITCH

Thanks for sharing this with us I really enjoyed this update So see you when you can and have a good weekend...........

Reviewer: Rion Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

wow, blown away. great chapter once again. I dont even want to think of where this story is going or how it will unfold, I am along for the ride, because you are an amazing writer and your writing is simply just amazing You are so right there are talented and awesome writers out there and you are one of them. much love

Reviewer: flavia Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

Hi, I really love your story, great as always!!! I love Edward POV.

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

Yet another Yummy chapter..... now I need new panties!!!!  I can't wait for all of this to unfold and Edward open up about his feelings...

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

FAN-FUCKING-TASTIC!!  Holy shit!!  I tell you just about everytime, I think, but I fucking ADORE this story.

Yippee!!  I'm soo thrilled how this chapter turned out.

Can't wait to see what happens next.

Have a great weekend!!!!

P.S.  Thank you for being soo consistent on updates.  I sooo look forward to them.

 

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

wow

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

Excellent chapter, but don't you think Bella would not have gotten upset if he just told her he wanted to make her first time special?  I mean they did talk for hours, why didn't he? 

I can't wait for the next chapter to find out why the phone was ringing!  Its nNever a good sign when people don't let up.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

Excellent as always i can't wait for them to confess their feelings and make love, then of course i can't wait for edward to fuck her silly.

til next time keep up the great work

Reviewer: arrr Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

Again, best laid plans – I get to work at 5 am (groan) but see I have an update – oh hell no I am not waiting until I get home – I have been dying for this update to our favorite couple.  Can Domward come over and tickle me senseless?? And his “deviant” is hilarious – I love B’s inner voice and conversations with MoJo and E’s is just as good…well, maybe better! It’s *hard* to tell?!

 

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

Yes I think I need some new panties.  lol.  Wheewww that was hot.  At least he gave her some release.  I was still dissapointed that they didn't make love but hopefully you will stop torturing us and put it in the next chapter. At least that is what I am hoping for.

Reviewer: 3kdz4me Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2011 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...

Pop, pop, pop!  He needs to get to popping that cherry!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2011 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...

I am glad they talked a little, but there is so much more to talk about!  I can't wait to see how this conversation goes!  I hope they really talk about their feelings for each other and make this speacial for both of them.  Great job...thanks so much!!!

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Date: 27 Feb 2011 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Holy shit... Please hurry with the next chapter....

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Date: 27 Feb 2011 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 10: It´s Playtime...

oh wow...

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Date: 27 Feb 2011 3:21 AM Title: Chapter: 9 And So It Begins...

loving it

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Date: 27 Feb 2011 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 8: Twas A Night With Sir... And All Through the House...

That better be Rose he just called....

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Date: 27 Feb 2011 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 7: How the Douche Stole Christmas...

Holy Hell did not see that coming

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Date: 27 Feb 2011 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 6: Propositions, Female Dommes, & Cell Phones...

so loved it

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Date: 27 Feb 2011 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!. How could you end it there!! that was evil, that was just mean. no way a virgin!!! was she not with Jacob? WTF!!! I love you so I'm gonna go calm down and mope.

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Date: 27 Feb 2011 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 5: Revelations... What´s Done In the Dark...

hmmm... sounds like there meeting is coming up.. hopefully...

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Date: 27 Feb 2011 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

well alrighty than. Alice was so busted. I'm kinda scared what Edward is up to but  not really. We all know that the world aligned when he looked in her eyes and recognized his pet. Soooo can't wait.

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Date: 27 Feb 2011 12:02 AM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...

you and me both momma Es

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Date: 26 Feb 2011 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 10: It´s Playtime...

First, your Laurent is Fuck Hawt. Two the scene was soooooo FUCK Hawt. oh my... sweety You killed it. I want to review more but honestly I want to go read the next chapter. I  heart your burn, no one does it better. He fell hook, line and sinker. This goes to show you how blind men are when they are  in their heat. Cant wait to read his shock

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Date: 26 Feb 2011 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...

you are so moving there to be with him..lol

Reviewer: MexicanChapina Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2011 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 6: Propositions, Female Dommes, & Cell Phones...

i love this story!! it's well written and have me wanting more!! I want to finish reading all the chapters you have up but, alas, the husband is home... haha Update soon so I have more to read next time =)

Reviewer: Kimberlyann Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2011 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 2: PAGING DR. CULLEN

lol

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