Date: 22 Jan 2011 1:49 PM Title: Delicate Thin Lace
Only one thing i didn't like in the whole story.... That tiny little blue "Yes" next to Completed for the story's info!
You both proved how much you own my ass!!
I loved it and eventhough you know very damn well I love E and B pairing as well as the R and B one this was great!
Damn! I am now all hot and bothered....
Date: 21 Jan 2011 4:23 AM Title: Delicate Thin Lace
Hot, as always, but I'm left feeling for Edward. He seems to grab me more than any other character this time, which is a rarity for me. And why change the relationship anyway? Personally, I'm a believer that marriage changes things and it seems the had it perfect already. Just saying.
I hope this doesn't seem negative, it's not meant to be. It's quite the compliment to your writing that a character who only speaks three lines has captured my attention so much.
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 19 Jan 2011 7:17 PM Title: Delicate Thin Lace
It is an interesting arrangement. The girls on a position that controls both guys, Rose the head of all.
It has a possibility of turning into a long story. Four people not only sharing a house, but so much more. Power, obedience, pleasure, pain. How to cope with it all and life outside their house.... I don't know if you've considered it, I hope so.
Date: 19 Jan 2011 3:41 PM Title: Delicate Thin Lace
Well, if my vote counts, I vote for you to continue!