Date: 02 May 2010 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 30
i absolutely adore it. its so awesome! ohmygosh what's gonna happen?!
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2010 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 30
Sweet as always. Jake and Victoria is too precious. Wonder what the sad case will be. Love that the abby kicked adn that they are so lovign with each other. can't wait for the next update.
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 30
Awwww....Jake's in love....how cute. Wow, I was starting to get worried with the lapse in chapters. I have really enjoyed your story and look forward to the updates. Thanks for sharing your talent!
Date: 02 May 2010 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
awesome story!!
Date: 02 May 2010 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 30
great chapter cant wait till the baby is born !
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2010 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 30
that was great can't wait to see what happens next thanks for sharing....
Date: 28 Apr 2010 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 29
This is a beautiful story, I have thoroughly enjoyed it thus far.
Date: 18 Apr 2010 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 29
Awwww!!! I just found this story yesterday, and I couldn't quit reading until I got here!! Can't wait for more!!
Date: 17 Apr 2010 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 29
I'm so glad both Alice and Alyssa are nice and healthy and happy.
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2010 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 29
loved it very much can't wait to see whats next thanks.....
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2010 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 29
Great chapter. I really like your story alot. This is a great take on their relationship.
Date: 17 Apr 2010 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 29
aaawwwww that was cute! the lovin' in the begining did left me all hot and bothered though :P
much love!
Date: 16 Apr 2010 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 29
very good chapter im happy he was there for alice and jasper! cant wait to read on !@
Date: 16 Apr 2010 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 29
Good chapter. I'm happy that everything worked out okay for Alice and little Alyssa and there weren't any problems.
Date: 16 Apr 2010 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 29
That was great... one baby down, another one to go! :)
Date: 16 Apr 2010 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 29
Awww...that was awesome :) So happy that Alyssa Jane is here :) Cannot wait to meet Bella and Edward's baby too!
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2010 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 29
I say use the creative licence, it makes the story beautiful, I am sure a lot of doctors would like to do what Edward was able to do and then again I am sure a lot would not like to see that part of their sister at all.
Thank you for the update I loved it and cant wait for the next chapter as always.
Date: 16 Apr 2010 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 29
i'm just glad you didn't name the baby Lily! seems like every time they have a baby it's always named Lily
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2010 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 28
Great chapter, beautiful wedding and vows. Please tell me there is going to be more to this story. I love it so much.
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2010 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 11
Yes, you did that was an amazing scene.
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2010 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 2
There is nothing like a birth of a baby especially without complications.
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2010 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love this story all ready.
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2010 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love this story all ready.
Date: 06 Apr 2010 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 28
I love your story. Perfect!
Date: 06 Apr 2010 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 28
I love your story. Perfect!
Date: 03 Apr 2010 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 28
i just found this story yesterday and i have to say that this is just so wonderful and passionate. i have loved every single chapter that i have read. i had a feeling that jake and victoria were going to hit it off...and i am really happy for it! i hope alice and bella have a good pregnancy and delivary. so is bella going to have twins or just one child. i think they should have twins!!!! i hope to see another update soon. great job!
Date: 03 Apr 2010 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 28
Good chapter. I'm so glad that they Edward and Bella are now married and their vows to each other were very romantic.
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2010 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 28
I loved it can't wait to see what happens next update when you can please great wedding thanks for sharing this with us....
Date: 03 Apr 2010 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 28
Now that I the way to start off the honeymoon! Congrats to E&B.
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2010 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 28
Sweet wonderful loving sexy and beauififul. One of the best weddings i have read. Meg
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2010 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 26
Damn that was a hell of a chapter. I hope you let her baby be ok. Meg
Date: 02 Apr 2010 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 28
Awww how cute! I like Jake and Victoria getting close, she needs a guy who will treat her right.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 28
That was wonderful for them!
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2010 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 28
I love this story and I REALLY ENJOYED this chapter!! they are the most awesome couple
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2010 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 27
I just wanted you to know that I love this story. I have read every chapter and have been so anxious to find out what happens next that I forgot to leave reviews. I am really sorry about that.
I can tell you though, that I loved getting to know everyone in this story :)
I thought she might get pregnant when they stopped using condoms :)
I love that Bella told Jessica off way back when...it was too funny!
Love it all and now I can't wait to see the wedding :)
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2010 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 13
Awe. Love the e&b parts. I was sad how you resolved Marcus. I am biased. I was adopted at 19 days old. So I have a different outlook. I am happy you surronded the young mom with love and support. Meg
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2010 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 11
You succeded 110%. Totally sensual. I
look forward to the hot monkey sex. Lol. Meg
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2010 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 11
You succeded 110%. Totally sensual. I
look forward to the hot monkey sex. Lol. Meg
Date: 02 Apr 2010 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 28
awwww I want to cry that was so cute, and sweet and romantic....
wow, vicky and jake, who would've thought :)
I can't wait for them to have their kid :)
much love!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 28
That was a wonderful wedding! What is the name of the song that Bella and Edward danced to? Just wondering. I am so happy that Baby Cullen moved for the first time on their wedding day, so cute :) Amazing job!
Author's Response:
I forgot to mention it in the A/N. The song is "All of You" by Julio Iglesias and Diana Ross. Two gorgeous voices blending in a magical way.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 28
i just wanted to tell you how much i love reading your story. it's a nice litlle feel good story barely any drama/angst. great wedding'honeymoon scene, can't wait till next chap.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 28
aww that was cute !
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2010 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 4
WhAt a kiss. So simple but such emotion. Meg
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 28
A beautiful chapter I like how you paired Victoria and Jacob. Can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2010 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 28
Cecilia,
What a beautiful wedding, and start to their honeymoon. I really do they have a wonderful honeymoon. For all the crap they have been though they both deserve it.
I love it and thank you for the update.
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2010 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love the start. Needing some love and fluff tonight. I'm reading on my phone so my reviews will be every few chapters, short and have texting errors. Thanks for sharing your writing. Meg
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2010 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 28
So sweet! That was a perfect wedding.
Date: 24 Mar 2010 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 27
i cant wait to read whats next great chapter !
Date: 24 Mar 2010 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 27
I love how everything is turning out for them!
Date: 23 Mar 2010 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 27
aaaaaaaaawwwwwww that was so sweet! and the dress is georgeous of course! damn that james and his devilness... but vicky is fine and robbie too, so I'm ok with that, much love!
Date: 23 Mar 2010 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 27
That was AWESOME! I loved it all. Bella's dress is amazing and I am so happy they are building their own home :) Cannot wait for the wedding :)
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2010 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 27
That is a great dress loved it update when you can thanks.....
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2010 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 27
Ohh so beautiful. I was not sure how Bella was going to cope after James, I love the fact that you packed so much into this chapter to keep the story moving.
Cant wait for the update. Love Bella's Dress.
Date: 23 Mar 2010 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 27
I'm so glad Bella and the baby are ok. What a lovely present for Bella. I can't wait for the wedding.
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2010 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 27
tho not unexpected I was pleasantly relieved that bella, edward and the baby were ok .. cant wait to see their reactions to the birth esp edwards .. it'll prob b close to his reaction when he sees bella in her wedding dress
renee is def a handful and prob best in small doses .. so opposite to bellas calm non attention seeking way.
love all the characters and glad no angsty scenes b/w jake, bella and edward
thanks for sharing so far and looking 4wd to the rest of ur fic
xoxo ety
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2010 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 27
That was a great chapter. I went through so much from Jame's Death and the torment it cause Bella to the elation of hte upcoming wedding.
I am glad to see James is gone for good and Victoria has the right perspective on the situation.
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The property is a wonderful gift. I cannot wait for the wedding and honeymoon. I am sure it will not disappoint.
Date: 23 Mar 2010 11:15 AM Title: Chapter 26
cant wait for next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 26
This story is absolutely amazing! I am so happy about their Miracle baby :) so awesome. I cannot wait to see what they have as well as what Alice and Jasper have. So exciting :)
Date: 14 Mar 2010 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 26
i love your story, please update soon
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2010 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 26
I figured it would happen, but you seemed a bit rushed...might have been better to draw it out as James is nuts like that. I think what you had was good, but could have used a bit more. Thanks so much for the update and for sharing your talent!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 26
First of all I'm loving this fic. I hoped that Bella would fall pregnant and I'm so glad she did. I loved Renee when they visited her and can't wait to see some more of her.
As for this chapter, oh my god! All that extra security and he still managed to get in?!?! At least Victoria and Robbie don't have to worry about James now. I really hope Bella and the baby are ok.
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2010 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 26
oh man please tell me that bella dosnt loose the baby i cant wait to see what happens next i am glad that james is dead edward is going to be worse then ever at protecting bella and the baby if she dosnt loose it so please update soon
Date: 10 Mar 2010 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 26
Wow! That was an exhilerating chapter! I hope that Bella and the baby are ok. I am so glad that Victoria and Robbie won't be tormented by James any more.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 26
Wow!! Drama, terror, and FINALLY the bad guy gets his just deserts. Love this chapter. Bella's OK, I'm sure, but Edward's gonna be an overprotective mess, too. Can't wait for more.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 26
Wow that was one hell of an ending to this chapter!! Thank you so much for not leaving it a cliffee!!!! I hope bella is ok and sooooo glad that bastard is dead!
Date: 09 Mar 2010 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 26
Chapter was good. Morning sickness - it's the pits, and for some of us it's not limited to "just mornings". I had 7 months of feeling like the flu with one of my pregnancies. FYI - most American hospital stays for natural births is 1 to 2 nights - MAX. In reality, Victoria could have been released to the Cullens by the time James arrived. However, killing off dirt like James's character works.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 26
Great that James got what he deserved. I am on pins and needles to find out Bella and baby are ok. Don't let her lose the baby.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 26
Thank god you didn't make a cliffie out of this, let me tell you there are so many authors making cliffies out of James taking or holding Bella agains her will that it get us bored, update soon, I loved the fluff parts of this chapter ^^
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2010 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 26
wow that was great can't wait to see what happens next....
Date: 09 Mar 2010 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 26
Wow, that was rough. Really, I hope that Bella and the baby are all right, and that Edward will have no problems, it was self defense, he was protecting his family.
Love that story and cannot wait for more.
Thank you for sharing.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 26
wow... that was intense there for a moment... I am glad they can put all that to rest although I am sure there will be some negative effects from all of this but they have the support to get through it!
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2010 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 26
Intense indeed. Now let Bella and the baby be ok from the tramatic experience and I wiill be alright too. Her and Edward can have thank heavens you are alright and I am so glad your alive sex and hold one another tight while professing their undying love to one another ;)
YEAH! Victoria is finally free of that psyco woman beater. She is finally free to feel safe to life a happy life with her son.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 26
Oh no, i hope Bella's baby is going to be okay. It would be terrible if she lost it. Looking forward to the next chapter to see what happens next.
Date: 05 Mar 2010 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 24
OH, my God I was so stuck in my chair while reading this story I almost forgot to turn off the iron. I love this story because is so real in a lot of aspects of people wanting to have children and how their dreams become true against all obstacles. Keep on with the good writing
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2010 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 25
Thank God, you moved this story. I love it and can not for the life of me find anything that is so offensive in this story for FF to find fault with. This is the most believable and tasteful and loving story. I am glad I have found this site and MyVampFiction for you authors to continue on. I really like this site(TheWriter'sCoffeShop). Take care and look forward to more.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 25
Beautiful story. I've truly enjoyed reading it so far. Looking forward to lots more soon.
Date: 01 Mar 2010 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 25
I enjoy this story so much. Thank you for sharing and for the opportunity to read it.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 25
Love the story! I've been reading so much angsty fanfic lately that this is such a nice reprieve! Good for the soul! Looking forward to the chapters to come!
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2010 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 25
yes that happened to a friend of mine he got twins out of the deal from a one night stand whats sad is he denied they were his untill the tests came back and ruined any chances of being friends with the mother loved it update when you can thanks.....
Date: 28 Feb 2010 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 25
Awww hun honestly that was an awesome chapter :-) I throughlly enjoyed reading the whole thing and I am so happy for them :-) Great chapter and I will look forward to reading the next one :-)
Date: 28 Feb 2010 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 24
So happy for Edward and Bella! Will continue to post this on FFn, or are you posting here for now on? Love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Date: 26 Feb 2010 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 24
Pleased to see you on TWCS after you were hounded by the FF Liberation Front, or whatever the hell they wanted to call themselves. Looking forward to the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2010 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
I am new to your story and can't wait to read more. Maybe when the internet doen't keep going out on me. Took me almost an hour to be able to read the one chapter. ;)
Date: 25 Feb 2010 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 24
I love this story. Just as you said it is happy and uplifting and takes me away from the angst and drama for awhile. I love your writing style and I am glad you have the creativity to write such a story.
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2010 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 24
loved it so much so glad he belived her update when you can thanks....
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2010 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 24
OH that was great! I bet they will bet so excited and Charlie and Jacob will be too.
They will be amazing parents. So much love to share.
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2010 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 24
So so happy for both of them!! !
Date: 25 Feb 2010 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 24
ooooooh!!! Cute!!!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2010 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 24
Ahh, I love this story :)
Date: 25 Feb 2010 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 24
what an awesome chapter :-) I had tears in my eyes in the last chapter esp when they went to the hospital. I don't think Edward really believed it til them ;-) Thanks for the update and I will look forward to the next one :-)
Date: 25 Feb 2010 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 24
ive started to read this story on here and not of fanfiction! im glad you put it on here ! great story and im anchous for the next chapter ! i cant wait
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2010 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 23
Yaaaa Please i just hope the edward belives her update when you can thanks.....
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2010 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 22
Yea, kinda figured that was coming...now is Edward gonna accuse her of cheating? Wow, that will really stink if they have a fight over that. Oh well, that is life. Thanks for the update and sharing your talent with us!