Date: 26 Sep 2016 11:50 PM Title: The Conclusion
Am I crazy cause I actually loved this story? Talk about some dark shit. This was all sorts of crazy but it was exactly what you said it would me.
This was perfect I think if you add more chapters I'd end up in the looney bin. Lol!!!
Date: 29 Dec 2012 6:22 AM Title: The Conclusion
I actually liked it a lot. I would like to see a POV from Edward, maybe? I know the story is old and I know youve got a lot going on, but, in the future? I'm interested to see what's going on in his head. Like, from the scene w/ Emmett on? That would be good.
Date: 30 Sep 2012 11:52 AM Title: The Conclusion
I actually thought this story was amazing - in a very wierd way...kind of like how i felt after watching the movie "American beauty" or "donnie darko". I know there are no relations, I'm just saying that the wierd feeling that lingers even after the story's over is similar, if that makes any sense. I just wished Edward didn't hit Bella - that was the only thing that bothered me.
Date: 23 Sep 2012 8:30 AM Title: The Conclusion
That was pretty wild! I suspected Edward would flip out after what Emmett said about him. I think Bella and Carlisle were especially screwed up and Edward was just mentally ill. Interesting plot, I liked it even with it being so dark.
Date: 17 Sep 2012 7:15 AM Title: The Conclusion
this was some weird ass shit... but i guess im jacked up to for enjoying it lol. i had a feeling carlisle or edward was going to kill her, and when i read her convo with emmett i just knew she was going out stan style.
Date: 21 Jul 2012 11:51 AM Title: The Conclusion
What I don't see is how Bella couldn't have foreseen the whole cliffdive thing. As soon as I read that he'd parked in front of a cliff I was like, 'Yep, gonna die.' Seriously...
This was cool though, so fucked up. I liked it.
Date: 05 Jul 2012 12:05 PM Title: Cullen and Cullen
My friend did that to her husband. They had just split and he was trying to get back with her. She said she stayed in bed after the other guy left didn't clean up and when her ex showed in the a.m. She had him eat her out but she didnt tell him.
Date: 14 Jan 2012 5:14 PM Title: The Conclusion
In all honesty I don't mind Bella and Edward being dead in this case...sicne they were both seriously f**ked up...
I can only hope that Carlisle dies too :)
This is a messed up story, yet I couldn't stop reading it.
Carlisle, Edward and Bella all need help. More than anyone can ever give, I think Edward is the only one capable of redemption, but he is the son of Carlilse so...
Date: 27 Nov 2011 3:03 PM Title: The Conclusion
i dont know what to say. i loved it but im still confused with edward bella and charlisle. i wish you had a sequel or something.
Date: 20 Jul 2011 6:23 PM Title: The Conclusion
I kind of figured that Edward was going to take both of their lives after Bella’s conversation with Emmett. But wow…
Great story, it reminded me of Eminem ft. Dido's Stan. I loved the darkness of the plot, and the unusual characters. The whole thing was so chaotic, from start to finish. My favourite part had to be the ending, definitely.
To be honest, at first I didn’t want to read this because of its title, but I’m glad I gave it a go.
It was so crazy how everyone was screwing around with everyone, expect for our poor faithful Edward. Haha. I found it sad that Edward thought he could change Bella into a better person just by loving her. I guess love makes people do crazy things. For instance, driving off a cliff with the person you supposedly love.
I’ve read stories of Edward being possessive and obsessive, but this Edward was just plain creepy. I really didn’t like this Bella, the confused whore. I think she deserved to die for effing up the lives of everyone around her.
Overall, this is the weirdest Twi fic I’ve read, and I love it! Well done.
Date: 25 Jun 2011 12:57 AM Title: Cullen and Cullen
This made me laugh, Bella is one fucked up cookie on the reals. I'd have to say that she is definitely the sickest of the 3 of them. She needs her ass beat to gain some semblance of clarity on this situation she has created with father and son. Loved this chapter!
Date: 25 Jun 2011 12:55 AM Title: The Conclusion
LMAO this was awesome despite the weirdo fuck-triangle B/C/E found themselves in. Personally I think you did really good with this 2 shot, yes there's alot of plots that could be developed on, but IMO I feel that this is complete. Definitely loved reading this :)
Date: 05 Jun 2011 7:44 AM Title: Cullen and Cullen
this bella is so fucked up. heck, they all are. and i like the twist you included in the second chapter about edward's character. it wasn't until emmett said that he was creepy that i saw where you were taking this story. great job with it!
Date: 26 May 2011 10:32 AM Title: The Conclusion
OMG! that was intense! and that was the best ending, considering the circumstances, it would've been too sick if she got to stay with either Edward or Carlisle... if there was a contest for dirtiest bella contest, this thing would win! the plot is very unique and the way you told the story really captured me. great job
Date: 25 Mar 2011 6:25 PM Title: The Conclusion
cool thought that would happen! it was cool all three were f-ed up. it could have been even better if you had edward kill carlisle then drove off the cliff with bella. who could tell who was using who who was telling the truth and who was the worse?!? like it!!
Date: 23 Mar 2011 9:52 PM Title: Cullen and Cullen
You said you wanted to know what I think.......and I really think I wish this was more than just a one-shot!!! Seriously I love it! If you ever did decide to finish it I would check my compter daily just to see if it was updated! Amazing work...thank you for sharing it with all of us, you are greatly appreciated!
There is a chapter two, and I plan to post it soon. I hope you don't hate the outcome. It's more of a two-shot.
Thanks for reading, reviewing, and for your kind words.
Date: 23 Mar 2011 3:11 PM Title: Cullen and Cullen
Wow, I kind of liked even if was a pretty dark story. Somehow I like Bella, even of she's not the nicest person.
I also like how you wrote the story, it captured me from the beginning. Hope you'll write a second chapter :)
Date: 23 Mar 2011 8:54 AM Title: Cullen and Cullen
OMG... i dont know what to say.. im a little disturbed perhaps? its a very very dark side, that not everybody is familiar with... bellawhore... hmmm... shes a whore.. what can i say... and darklile (ok that ended up like the name of a flower) EVIL... geez!
but as you say... fuck it all.. ;) but im not sure if i like this or not.... not very much much i must say... but no hate or harm done ok! Now im going for the story of us.. :)