Date: 18 Feb 2018 12:49 AM Title: The Conclusion
I thought in a twisted way it was great.
Date: 18 Feb 2018 12:49 AM Title: The Conclusion
I thought in a twisted way it was great.
Date: 27 Oct 2016 3:31 AM Title: Cullen and Cullen
This is my favourite out of all of your stories. I really wish there was more.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2016 11:50 PM Title: The Conclusion
Am I crazy cause I actually loved this story? Talk about some dark shit. This was all sorts of crazy but it was exactly what you said it would me.
This was perfect I think if you add more chapters I'd end up in the looney bin. Lol!!!
Date: 18 May 2016 2:20 AM Title: The Conclusion
Well the first chapter had and of sorts. Could've ended therer. This one is definitly a ending with a big exclamation point. All 3 were more than 50 shades of f'd up.
Date: 25 Jun 2015 2:33 PM Title: The Conclusion
Damnnnnn
Date: 17 Feb 2015 12:17 AM Title: Cullen and Cullen
Wow. Great story. They're all crazy!
Date: 30 Oct 2014 12:59 PM Title: The Conclusion
They are all really fucked up
Date: 24 Jan 2014 4:41 AM Title: Cullen and Cullen
very vicious
Date: 02 Oct 2013 4:42 AM Title: The Conclusion
Wow! Very dark and eventful! No matter what anyone says E&B are together! I have to say I liked it & it couldn't have ended any better!
Date: 19 Sep 2013 6:45 AM Title: The Conclusion
Im never tired of repeating myself you are an amazing writer
Date: 18 Jul 2013 6:14 AM Title: The Conclusion
Christ, what a ride! Loved every word. They are all so screwed up in their own way! Thanks for sharing this with us. I am hoping that you find a way to bring them back and continue it for another chapter or three!
Date: 17 Jul 2013 8:16 AM Title: The Conclusion
This story is screwed up in the strangest way yet I couldn't stop reading. You're right. Who is truly the crazy one in this situation. I have no idea. Great story.
Date: 03 Jun 2013 5:44 PM Title: The Conclusion
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Date: 27 May 2013 1:30 PM Title: Cullen and Cullen
Damn girl, you packed one hell of a punch in just one chapter! Love your slutty Bella but hope Edward grows a pair in the next chapter! Great writing!
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2013 6:39 PM Title: The Conclusion
Bella is deff. a whore, but she was used by Carlisle. Edward just seemed like he was young & inexperienced with matters of the heart. SMH poor Bella & Edward both were victims in a way if you ask me.
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2013 5:36 PM Title: Cullen and Cullen
WOW! THAT WAS AWESOME,BUT ID TAKE AN INEXPERIENCED EDWARD ANY DAY BABY OVER THAT SLUTTY CARLISLE.
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2013 11:31 PM Title: The Conclusion
That was deep. I guess everyone was sick in their own way
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2013 12:14 PM Title: The Conclusion
wow fab story so intense and emotional
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2013 12:05 PM Title: Cullen and Cullen
fab chapter wow that was intense!hopeshes ok
Date: 13 Jan 2013 11:08 AM Title: Cullen and Cullen
Loved it!
Date: 29 Dec 2012 6:22 AM Title: The Conclusion
I actually liked it a lot. I would like to see a POV from Edward, maybe? I know the story is old and I know youve got a lot going on, but, in the future? I'm interested to see what's going on in his head. Like, from the scene w/ Emmett on? That would be good.
Date: 28 Nov 2012 9:27 AM Title: The Conclusion
damn, they were all fucked up. emmett called it.
Date: 28 Nov 2012 8:56 AM Title: Cullen and Cullen
they deserve eachother. lol creeps. i loved it.
Date: 11 Oct 2012 3:26 PM Title: The Conclusion
I kind of thought it was funny- So maybe I'm a sadist, but it was just so.... I dunno... Different from my perception of RL, that it was crazy. It was interesting that's for sure!
Date: 30 Sep 2012 11:52 AM Title: The Conclusion
I actually thought this story was amazing - in a very wierd way...kind of like how i felt after watching the movie "American beauty" or "donnie darko". I know there are no relations, I'm just saying that the wierd feeling that lingers even after the story's over is similar, if that makes any sense. I just wished Edward didn't hit Bella - that was the only thing that bothered me.
Date: 30 Sep 2012 10:28 AM Title: Cullen and Cullen
Wow...just wow...this is so very screwed up, yet I can't stop reading! I really wanna know what happens next!
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2012 1:37 AM Title: The Conclusion
it's a different kind of story, but it is interesting. what I didn't expect was for you to kill both of them. I would still read it again'; your a great writer.
Date: 23 Sep 2012 8:30 AM Title: The Conclusion
That was pretty wild! I suspected Edward would flip out after what Emmett said about him. I think Bella and Carlisle were especially screwed up and Edward was just mentally ill. Interesting plot, I liked it even with it being so dark.
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2012 7:15 AM Title: The Conclusion
this was some weird ass shit... but i guess im jacked up to for enjoying it lol. i had a feeling carlisle or edward was going to kill her, and when i read her convo with emmett i just knew she was going out stan style.
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2012 3:34 AM Title: The Conclusion
two words: oh, shit!!!
Date: 21 Jul 2012 11:51 AM Title: The Conclusion
What I don't see is how Bella couldn't have foreseen the whole cliffdive thing. As soon as I read that he'd parked in front of a cliff I was like, 'Yep, gonna die.' Seriously...
This was cool though, so fucked up. I liked it.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 12:51 PM Title: The Conclusion
I think you should write a prequel telling how all 3 of them got so fucked up. I'm wondering if maybe Edward knew how Carlisle tastes. I'm sure plenty of people would bitch but it's a good story.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 12:05 PM Title: Cullen and Cullen
My friend did that to her husband. They had just split and he was trying to get back with her. She said she stayed in bed after the other guy left didn't clean up and when her ex showed in the a.m. She had him eat her out but she didnt tell him.
Date: 29 Jun 2012 10:25 AM Title: The Conclusion
Awww its like romeo and juliet but dirtier i love it
[Report This]Date: 21 Mar 2012 12:39 PM Title: Cullen and Cullen
Good story. I think I am going to look for more Carlisle/Bella pairings. Maybe another with all 3? Anyway, I love your stories!!
Date: 02 Mar 2012 9:31 AM Title: The Conclusion
love this story
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2012 1:21 AM Title: Cullen and Cullen
Wow That was really good!!!
Date: 14 Jan 2012 5:14 PM Title: The Conclusion
In all honesty I don't mind Bella and Edward being dead in this case...sicne they were both seriously f**ked up...
I can only hope that Carlisle dies too :)
This is a messed up story, yet I couldn't stop reading it.
Carlisle, Edward and Bella all need help. More than anyone can ever give, I think Edward is the only one capable of redemption, but he is the son of Carlilse so...
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2012 1:28 AM Title: The Conclusion
I loved it
is at least different,
and hot.
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2011 3:03 PM Title: The Conclusion
i dont know what to say. i loved it but im still confused with edward bella and charlisle. i wish you had a sequel or something.
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2011 11:56 PM Title: Cullen and Cullen
wow, that was intense :] I am a huge carlisle lover lol so I loved it!!!! and I think I may make a banner for you cause this has inspired me :] xx
Date: 20 Aug 2011 8:34 AM Title: The Conclusion
No it doesn't suck, what sucks is they couldn't run over Carlisle as they were driving off the cliff. jk I liked the story, it staarted out naughty, then got down right twisted, no love loss for Bella;D)
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2011 6:23 PM Title: The Conclusion
I kind of figured that Edward was going to take both of their lives after Bella’s conversation with Emmett. But wow…
Great story, it reminded me of Eminem ft. Dido's Stan. I loved the darkness of the plot, and the unusual characters. The whole thing was so chaotic, from start to finish. My favourite part had to be the ending, definitely.
To be honest, at first I didn’t want to read this because of its title, but I’m glad I gave it a go.
It was so crazy how everyone was screwing around with everyone, expect for our poor faithful Edward. Haha. I found it sad that Edward thought he could change Bella into a better person just by loving her. I guess love makes people do crazy things. For instance, driving off a cliff with the person you supposedly love.
I’ve read stories of Edward being possessive and obsessive, but this Edward was just plain creepy. I really didn’t like this Bella, the confused whore. I think she deserved to die for effing up the lives of everyone around her.
Overall, this is the weirdest Twi fic I’ve read, and I love it! Well done.
Date: 04 Jul 2011 10:12 PM Title: The Conclusion
Hi
Just read this and although it has a bad ending in a wierd way I love this story.
I dont usually like to read Bella and Carlisle but I did enjoy this one, maybe it was because Bella was bad.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2011 12:57 AM Title: Cullen and Cullen
This made me laugh, Bella is one fucked up cookie on the reals. I'd have to say that she is definitely the sickest of the 3 of them. She needs her ass beat to gain some semblance of clarity on this situation she has created with father and son. Loved this chapter!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2011 12:55 AM Title: The Conclusion
LMAO this was awesome despite the weirdo fuck-triangle B/C/E found themselves in. Personally I think you did really good with this 2 shot, yes there's alot of plots that could be developed on, but IMO I feel that this is complete. Definitely loved reading this :)
Date: 15 Jun 2011 5:53 PM Title: The Conclusion
omg!!!!!!!!!! i was not expecting that. i really liked it, i wished there was more.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2011 4:46 PM Title: Cullen and Cullen
Hot!!
Date: 05 Jun 2011 7:44 AM Title: Cullen and Cullen
this bella is so fucked up. heck, they all are. and i like the twist you included in the second chapter about edward's character. it wasn't until emmett said that he was creepy that i saw where you were taking this story. great job with it!
Date: 05 Jun 2011 7:43 AM Title: The Conclusion
this is so sick and twisted. i love it! hahaha. i like the way you ended things, that no character gets redeemed. they're all pretty bad
Date: 26 May 2011 10:32 AM Title: The Conclusion
OMG! that was intense! and that was the best ending, considering the circumstances, it would've been too sick if she got to stay with either Edward or Carlisle... if there was a contest for dirtiest bella contest, this thing would win! the plot is very unique and the way you told the story really captured me. great job
Date: 24 May 2011 11:08 PM Title: The Conclusion
WOW! This was sick! The family dynamics of these 3 is crazy as heck.
Date: 07 Apr 2011 4:29 AM Title: The Conclusion
Wow, that was dark and very twisted, and good. They were all so f****d up. Who wouldn't thought Emmett would have been the smart one. :)
Date: 06 Apr 2011 7:10 PM Title: Cullen and Cullen
This is a dark dark Carlisle. Can't wait to see what else you have planned.
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2011 4:23 AM Title: The Conclusion
no there wont be any flames from me but can i just say wow this story is so fucking crazy that its good
Date: 26 Mar 2011 11:46 AM Title: The Conclusion
Damn that was so good!
Date: 26 Mar 2011 1:18 AM Title: The Conclusion
Wow that didnt end like I thought it would. That is one of them leasons about you shouldnt fuck around.
Date: 25 Mar 2011 7:55 PM Title: The Conclusion
you should write one more chapter in carlises point of view at their funeral that would be good
Date: 25 Mar 2011 6:25 PM Title: The Conclusion
cool thought that would happen! it was cool all three were f-ed up. it could have been even better if you had edward kill carlisle then drove off the cliff with bella. who could tell who was using who who was telling the truth and who was the worse?!? like it!!
Date: 25 Mar 2011 6:04 PM Title: Cullen and Cullen
not cool i think you f-ed with the wrong person bella.....
Date: 25 Mar 2011 4:32 PM Title: The Conclusion
I can't go "easy" on you as per your AN request, because I don't have to !! Your story was amazing . Great first chapter and fantastic second one. One hot and sick family you got there. Loved it !!!
Date: 25 Mar 2011 2:15 PM Title: Cullen and Cullen
I think she pushed him to far.
Date: 23 Mar 2011 9:52 PM Title: Cullen and Cullen
You said you wanted to know what I think.......and I really think I wish this was more than just a one-shot!!! Seriously I love it! If you ever did decide to finish it I would check my compter daily just to see if it was updated! Amazing work...thank you for sharing it with all of us, you are greatly appreciated!
XOXO
Heather
Author's Response:
There is a chapter two, and I plan to post it soon. I hope you don't hate the outcome. It's more of a two-shot.
Thanks for reading, reviewing, and for your kind words.
Date: 23 Mar 2011 8:02 PM Title: Cullen and Cullen
Wow! carlisle is one sick bastard! bella's screwed up too, but I love the story! Can't wait to see how this complicated plot turns out!
Date: 23 Mar 2011 3:11 PM Title: Cullen and Cullen
Wow, I kind of liked even if was a pretty dark story. Somehow I like Bella, even of she's not the nicest person.
I also like how you wrote the story, it captured me from the beginning. Hope you'll write a second chapter :)
Date: 23 Mar 2011 1:10 PM Title: Cullen and Cullen
Wow that was totally different from anything else I've ever read. I felt bad for Edward. Didn't like Bella much but have to say I kind of liked the darker Carlisle. :0)
Date: 23 Mar 2011 11:34 AM Title: Cullen and Cullen
a little twisted, but interesting.... u left it at a point to where it could go either way..... maybe do a second chapter?
Date: 23 Mar 2011 11:28 AM Title: Cullen and Cullen
I didnt know how this story was going to go but I really enjoyed it! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 23 Mar 2011 8:54 AM Title: Cullen and Cullen
OMG... i dont know what to say.. im a little disturbed perhaps? its a very very dark side, that not everybody is familiar with... bellawhore... hmmm... shes a whore.. what can i say... and darklile (ok that ended up like the name of a flower) EVIL... geez!
but as you say... fuck it all.. ;) but im not sure if i like this or not.... not very much much i must say... but no hate or harm done ok! Now im going for the story of us.. :)
thanks! :)