Date: 12 Jun 2018 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
I enjoyed this, but am sorry that you never extended it. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2012 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
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Date: 05 Dec 2011 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
really did like it wish I could read about renesemes reaction and everyone elses.....maybe another chapter or two???? please a little peak into the future when the kid is born??
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2011 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
i love it and can't wait to see if you will continue it
Date: 11 Jun 2011 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great job! I loved it. Thanks for writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 10 Jun 2011 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this story. The story seemed so real to life showing us sometimes we make crazy decision as well as say some crazy things to our love ones just to make a point. Some time that decision back fires big time as well as some time it works. In this case it backfire, however, Bella was allowed the happy ever after. I felt really good after reading this story because I really like the happy ever after. This story had a point, and it all flowed together and all tied in.
Good Story.
Janis
Author's Response:
Janis,
Thank you so much!! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. I tried to make it realistic - even going off of some of what I saw my parents go through. :) I appreciate your kind words and feedback. Thank you so much again!! :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2011 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome one-shot that I would love to see more of! Congratulations on the contest and the research project's success. You are a wonderful writer and I look forward to reading more from you!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!! :)
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2011 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful story!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 09 Jun 2011 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
I definitely want to see how Edward and Bella tell Renessme! I would so love a continued story. Hey, congrats on the grade too! Lol
Author's Response:
Thank you!! :) Working on the next segment of the story...Nessie's being a bit of a brat. LOL Thanks again!
Date: 09 Jun 2011 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved your story and yes it needs another chapter or two. Would love to know thier families reactions, see Renesmee get a bit jealous and hopefully they are having twins!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Working on the next segment now! :)
Date: 09 Jun 2011 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
Good job, after all is one of my favs, and this does has the potential to be a good story.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!! :)
Date: 09 Jun 2011 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
Please go back to it I would love to hear how everyone reacts to them being together and having a baby. I think what you wrote so far is fantastic it was so sad when they were apart.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!! :) I'm working on the next part now...
Date: 08 Jun 2011 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
That was beautiful. Congrats on your grade and on winning the contest. Yes this must be continued.
Hugs
Author's Response:
Thank you!! I'm so glad you liked it!! :)
Date: 08 Jun 2011 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
Update soon
Author's Response:
Working on the next part now... :)
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2011 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
It was very good. Made me cry.
Wow Bella 42 and pregnant.. I am glad she finally told Edward.
Um so will you expand on this?
Love to see how they handle being back together and Edward's job and now a baby.
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Thanks for sharing
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing!! I'm hoping to expand a bit on it - probably won't be too long; maybe another chapter or two. :)
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2011 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
Totally worth continuing. This was a truly angsty, yet touching story. Definitely want to see where this goes!!! Definitely.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!! I'm working on the next part now... :)
Date: 08 Jun 2011 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sweet!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 08 Jun 2011 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
I wish it would work like this in real life. You really did a great job writing this story. I'm going to check out your other fics :)
Author's Response:
I wish it would work like this too; I think that's why I love fic so much - I can make it happen! LOL
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!!
Date: 08 Jun 2011 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
love this one shot but i hope you expand it !
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I'm working on the next part now...
Date: 08 Jun 2011 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great job!
Author's Response:
Thank you!!!