Date: 11 Aug 2013 2:22 AM Title: Ruling
Splendid! Te progression of time and generations does them justice. Also, the use of. Pembroke... Brilliant! Thank you so very much for all your hard work and care!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I was concerned about skipping the time, but felt it worked better with telling their story at the end. Thank you for the appreciation, once I became ill it became very hard to continue giving this fic the attention to detail I had previously done (research is long and difficult work) but I hope I managed it. Thank you for reading and your review.
~Anna-Margaret
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Date: 11 Aug 2013 2:21 AM Title: Ruling
Wow....you forgot the tissue warning...beautiful ending
Author's Response:
Whoops! I knew I'd forgotten something. Sorry, my brain isn't fully functional when I take my tablets and I had to take one before writing the author's notes. Thank you for review. I'm glad you liked it, even if it was sad. The engraving is one of the first images that popped into my head when I first came up with this idea. Thank you again for reading and reviewing.
~Anna-Margaret
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Date: 10 Aug 2013 8:09 PM Title: Ruling
Wonderful story!! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm glad that you liked it!
~Anna-Margaret
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Date: 10 Aug 2013 7:11 PM Title: Ruling
wow! J'ai bien apprécié avoir la fin.... même si c'est un peu en retard, lol
merci.
Google Translate. French.
Montréal, Québec
Author's Response:
Je suis désolé qu'il était en retard, mais je vous remercie pour votre critique. Je suis heureux de voir que vous avez apprécié la lecture mon histoire. Merci bien.
~Anna-Margaret
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Date: 10 Aug 2013 3:45 PM Title: Ruling
:) loved this story
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed my story. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I am sorry though it took so long to get out.
~Anna-Margaret
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Date: 04 Apr 2013 2:52 PM Title: Living
I'm so glad Bella is okay! I love this story thank you sooooo much for writing it. I hope you get a diagnosis soon and that you aren't in too much pain. Alway looking forward to more - Aimee
Date: 21 Dec 2012 3:05 AM Title: Living
I dont want it to end i love it
Date: 21 Dec 2012 12:47 AM Title: Crying
So if edward could bring bella pleasure as he did in this chapter why didnt he do that for her 1st time?
Date: 20 Dec 2012 2:09 PM Title: Lacking
Wow edward is cold hearted for something out of the queens control. Does edward cheat on bella when they get married?
Date: 08 Dec 2012 5:03 AM Title: Flaunting
OMG TOTALLY LOOOOOOOOOOOOVEEEE THIS STORY!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 20 Nov 2012 2:38 AM Title: Living
I am so very happy that Bella came out of her fever. I knew she could not leave her King and their children. Loved that they were in the garden playing at the end of this chapter. I am sad that this story is coming to an end. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us. Hope we get the last chapter soon. Thank you.
Date: 19 Nov 2012 4:16 AM Title: Living
love it. please update soon
Date: 18 Nov 2012 7:03 AM Title: Living
Hi Anna-Margaret!
This was another awesome update! Just knowing that this is the penultimate chapter is sad but I can't wait to see how you will end this wonderful tale;) While it is was heartbreaking to know how serious Bella's illness was, I love that the king did not just give up but sat with her throughout her illness and nursed her back to health once she had recovered.
Finally Esme has found her HEA with Carlise amidst the worry of the queen's health. You just got to love how precious their little angel Helen is with her knowledge that her mama will be fine as she has them to look after her;) Love the fact that Bella is the one who named their son despite her being out of it and Edward has not let the grass grow under his feet and gotten their little boy baptised as soon as humanly possible.
Loving the fact that Edward did not want to leave his wife's side once she had recovered;) He has finally found the love he was meant to find in his wife and with his children. While sad that their is only one chapter left I can't wait to see your vision for the rest of their HEA. Thanks for sharing and I do hope you are having more good days than bad.
Date: 17 Nov 2012 7:34 PM Title: Living
Wow, I have loved this story from the moment I started reading it, and I am upset to hear that there is only one chapter left...
Make it a good one as I know you will.
Date: 15 Nov 2012 8:03 PM Title: Living
The King has journeyed a great distance from his dysfunctional emotions in the beginning.
Carlisle and Esme are wonderful together.
Date: 15 Nov 2012 6:51 PM Title: Living
C'est un bon chapitre :
J'ai bien aimé cet Edward, il est devenu un bon roi grâce à son épouse.
Merci.
Non, je n'ai jamais rien reçu comme ça, tu as eu de la chance, je suis contente pour toi.
Date: 15 Nov 2012 6:36 PM Title: Birthing
Mon Dieu, Bella a la fièvre...
J'espère qu'elle va aller mieux.
Date: 15 Nov 2012 4:20 AM Title: Living
He has become the king with the bigest heart that almost broke. I am so glad she pulled through. I will be sad when it is over this has been a great story Thanks.
Date: 15 Nov 2012 12:12 AM Title: Living
looking forward to more
Date: 14 Nov 2012 10:36 PM Title: Living
Feel Better!
We will wait for the story . . . its that good!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 10:04 PM Title: Birthing
I hope Bella pulls thru. Just when Edward realizes what he has he may lose it. So sad
Date: 08 Nov 2012 8:21 AM Title: Birthing
Oh my god! what an ending, I haven't been able to stop reading since. I really hope you continue this story and update soon. Wow.
Date: 06 Nov 2012 3:14 AM Title: Birthing
Awesome chapter!
Date: 02 Nov 2012 2:04 PM Title: Birthing
I have finally gotten around to reading this wonderful story. With how bad things are for you health wise and the loss of a loved one your determination to post chapters for this story is admirable;) It was such a pleasure to witness Edward finally maturing and changing into the man and king he now is thanks to his wonderful wife;) You have given us a Tanya that one could not help but like especially when she befriended Bella and stood by her in her time of need. I honestly hope that Bella does survive her fever and comes back fighting fit, I do believe that Edward would be totally lost without her in his life. With everything that they had to overcome to finally find their love and happiness it would be heartbreaking if he did lose her to death. Thanks for sharing and looking forward to reading the next chapter update;)
Date: 02 Nov 2012 5:01 AM Title: Birthing
He has a son and he needs his wife she has to be ok. I am so glad to hear from you Thanks.
Date: 01 Nov 2012 1:29 PM Title: Birthing
This is such a wonderful story. Thank you for writing and sharing with us. Hope Bella is OK. They've finally grown so close and I hope this doesn't upset it! Sounds like Tanya will be looking for revenge for James but time for Edward to step up and protect his queen. Well-written and fabulous. Love it!
Hope RL improving
Amy
Date: 01 Nov 2012 3:47 AM Title: Birthing
The beloved heir to the throne.
The realm has reason to celebrate yet their queen fights for her life. Poor King Edward.
Date: 01 Nov 2012 2:17 AM Title: Birthing
OH, PLEASE let Bella be ok. PLEASE update soon and let us know. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us.
Date: 01 Nov 2012 1:08 AM Title: Apologising
Des fleurs... pleins de fleurs!
Date: 01 Nov 2012 12:24 AM Title: Coercing
Je mange du chocolat...
Date: 31 Oct 2012 8:36 PM Title: Resolving
poudre de chocolat cru, gingembre, cannelle + lait froid pour mélanger.
Ajouter lait chaud et sucre ou sirop d'érable... mélanger au pied mélangeur.
Date: 31 Oct 2012 7:03 PM Title: Departing
J'ai eu un bouvier bernois mâle pendant 12 ans. Lorsqu'il est décédé, toute la famille pleurait, même mon mari. Ma fille a toujours une photo de lui sur le frigidaire de sa maison.
J'ai maintenant deux caniches royales bicolores, un mâle brun et blanc et une femelle blanche et noire. Je les laisse à poils longs. Je n'ai plus de poils dans mes assiètes parce que ce sont des caniches, même si ils sont hauts comme la table!!!
Date: 31 Oct 2012 6:37 PM Title: Flaunting
Google Translate. French.
Date: 31 Oct 2012 8:38 AM Title: Birthing
Oh please let be Bella ok
Date: 31 Oct 2012 6:29 AM Title: Birthing
Great chapter. Please update soon
Date: 31 Oct 2012 5:10 AM Title: Birthing
I missed this story greatly. I hope things will look up for you and ur family. I am deeply sorry to hear about ur nanna, I know what that feels like. Btw great chapter except the ending. lol. Please dont let her die......... cant wait to read more.....
Date: 31 Oct 2012 3:59 AM Title: Birthing
I love this story, I was afraid you've stopped updating :P
Date: 31 Oct 2012 3:21 AM Title: Birthing
Woo hoo another baby safe and healthily. Fingers crossed for Bella's speedy recovery and also fi gets crossed for another chapter.
Date: 31 Oct 2012 2:42 AM Title: Birthing
I am so happy to have a wonderful new chapter to read. It was really good as well as sexy despite the cliffhanger.
I do hope you get some pain releif soon. My condolences on the loss of your Nannie.
Date: 30 Oct 2012 11:49 PM Title: Birthing
Oh no she has to live!!! Loved it :)
Date: 30 Oct 2012 11:48 PM Title: Coercing
What a wonderful story. I love this period although it is so hard to imagine living in that time being a woman. Hopefully Bella will be able to make a better man out of King Edward...I'm sure she will!
Date: 30 Oct 2012 11:21 PM Title: Birthing
Please not a tragedy.... She must survive child birth! can't wait for more
Date: 30 Oct 2012 10:02 PM Title: Birthing
looking fowrard to more
Date: 01 Oct 2012 10:59 PM Title: Visiting
Thanks for updating. They are a sweet couple and with her influence, he is becoming a better king. Thank heavens for Zara.
I would go to Italy.
I hope you can get some better news from your doctors and feel better soon!
Date: 22 Sep 2012 6:38 PM Title: Departing
wonderful so far ...dogs I have 4 ...2 red nose pit bulls they are wonderful babysitters that is what they were bred for ,,a carrin terrier and a mini pin ...believe it or not he rules the roost
Date: 22 Sep 2012 6:29 PM Title: Flaunting
i love historical romance ...and a good one is so hard to find ....this is wonderful
Date: 20 Sep 2012 3:48 PM Title: Visiting
This story is really great! :D
Date: 19 Sep 2012 3:10 AM Title: Visiting
OMGosh!!!! The dog is sleeping in between them. LOL!!!!!!! LOVE IT!!!!!
It was good to see Edward out among the common people!!! :)
I am so glad that the dog was there to protect Bella.
I love the she finally told Edward that she loved him.
I have finally caught up with your chapter. Now I have to wait on an update. I hope it is soon. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us.
Date: 18 Sep 2012 6:43 PM Title: Declaring
LOVE that Bella has Edward's back
Date: 18 Sep 2012 6:32 PM Title: Learning
LOVE this EDWARD!!!!!!!!! I am so glad that he gave Tanya back her daughter. Thank you for explaining about her only living child. So glad that Edward and Bella are getting along. I know it is the time, but I still find it strange that husband and wife do not sleep together.
Date: 18 Sep 2012 6:22 PM Title: Punishing
WOW!!!! Renee and Charles died a horrible death. I can not believe that Bella watched it. I knew that James was bad. What in the world is Edward going to do with James.
Date: 18 Sep 2012 6:06 PM Title: Dying
OMGosh!!!!! I never expected Tanya to show up. That was very surprising. I hope Edward feels like a snake. I can not beleive that he took her baby away from her. He better bring little Helen back to her mother.
Date: 18 Sep 2012 5:52 PM Title: Failing
OMGosh!!!! I can not believe that Renee said to kill the baby, Really???? She has no heart. How cruel is she??? If I were Bella, I would have my own mother banned from being around me. That is awful. Edward seemed kind of cold towards Bella at the end of this chapter.
Date: 18 Sep 2012 5:25 PM Title: Crying
I am so glad that Bella has Emmett. He really does care for her. I love the Edward in this chapter. Can not wait for Lord and Lady Swan to get theirs. I can not believe that Lord Swan sent his own whore to "train" Bella. How discussing.
Date: 18 Sep 2012 5:06 PM Title: Apologising
Poor Bella and Poor Edward. They are both lost in this relationship. I am surprised that Edward was saying he was sorry. I did not think he would have done that. But that just goes to show that he does have some good in him.
Date: 18 Sep 2012 4:01 PM Title: Wedding
I hate that Edward did not make it special for Bella. He just did not care if she got any pleasure or not. I hope he changes.
Date: 18 Sep 2012 3:36 AM Title: Coercing
So, Bella's parents have abused her in the past. I hate that. I am glad that she has had Emmett to take care of her. Maybe that is why Emmett paraded her in front of the King in the other chapter, to get Bella away from their parents.
Date: 18 Sep 2012 3:21 AM Title: Resolving
We are seeing a different side of Edward here in this chapter. I like this Edward. He seems very gentle and loving.
Date: 18 Sep 2012 3:06 AM Title: Departing
King Edward is go cruel!!! I do not like James. I think James is the reason that Edward is so cruel. I hope Bella can help Edward be more compassionate.
Date: 18 Sep 2012 2:47 AM Title: Flaunting
I feel sorry for Bella. She has got to be scared to death.
As for your question: When I was younger I was shy. As I have gotten older I like to dance. I do not necessarily flaunt my stuff but I do like to dance.
Date: 16 Sep 2012 5:36 PM Title: Lacking
This Edward seem very cruel and uncaring. When he married Tanya did he love her??? Bella always seems so compassion. You said that Queen Tanya did care one to term but it was to sickly for Edward to care. Did it die??? What happened to the child?? I can not wait to read more. Off to the next chapter.
Date: 15 Sep 2012 2:54 AM Title: Visiting
It's amazing how far Edward has come.
Date: 13 Sep 2012 8:29 PM Title: Visiting
Ireland is the home of my ancestors and I would so love to see its green pastures, rock ruins, and shores.
Date: 13 Sep 2012 5:29 PM Title: Visiting
loved it looking forward to more
Date: 12 Sep 2012 4:01 PM Title: Visiting
Nice update. Bella is finally allowing her walls to drop and Edward is finally aware of her true worth. I also love Zara, by the way!
Date: 12 Sep 2012 3:54 PM Title: Visiting
Loved it will be waiting for more :)!!!!!!
Date: 12 Sep 2012 10:23 AM Title: Visiting
I am so happy to read a new chapter of this wonderful story and so sad to hear of your serious illness. I pray you get some relief, soon. Take care and God bless you.
Date: 12 Sep 2012 6:28 AM Title: Crying
Wait...a man that cares about a woman's gratification? Yep, this is fiction.
Date: 12 Sep 2012 6:11 AM Title: Wedding
That is the worst 'fuck and duck' I've ever heard of!
Date: 12 Sep 2012 6:00 AM Title: Coercing
I'm sad to admit that when I'm upset a little alcohol does the trick, but I've never had to deal with an abusive father!
Date: 12 Sep 2012 5:43 AM Title: Departing
Oh my...dogs! My baby, Bacon, is an English Bulldog a breed that also has an unfortunate violent history.
Date: 12 Sep 2012 5:27 AM Title: Visiting
great chapter, I am glad he is changing to be the man and king she could be proud of..,
Date: 12 Sep 2012 3:35 AM Title: Visiting
The changes in the Kings behavior and ability to see his loyal subjects as more than peasants is amazing. The love if a good woman has him searching for answers to his kingdoms problems that he previously would not consider fixing.
Date: 12 Sep 2012 2:06 AM Title: Visiting
Take care of yourself, that'snthenmost important thing.
It was wonderful to see thrm working side by side helping their people, then to see them so happy together. Younwere right it was the perfect place to stop.
Date: 12 Sep 2012 1:25 AM Title: Visiting
I was so desperate for an update, I loved it.
Any place around the world? In my case it would be without a doubt, England and Scotland.
Date: 11 Sep 2012 10:24 PM Title: Visiting
great chapter, as always. I'm so sorry to hear that you probably have fibromyalgia, because I've been diagnossed for 4 plus years and it's a difficult dissease that not many people understands. If you need anything, some advise, anything at all, don't hesitate to write me at catalinaantoine@gmail.com and good luck
Date: 11 Sep 2012 9:59 PM Title: Visiting
Good chapter....
Date: 11 Sep 2012 9:23 PM Title: Coercing
Pauvre Bella ! Ses parents sont vraiment méchants.
Date: 11 Sep 2012 9:07 PM Title: Resolving
Donc il a choisit Bella... Bon choix !
Date: 11 Sep 2012 8:41 PM Title: Visiting
Don't care when you update again, I will wait patiently..Thanks for updating!
Date: 11 Sep 2012 8:18 PM Title: Flaunting
J'aime ce chapitre !
Date: 11 Sep 2012 8:00 PM Title: Lacking
Donc Tanya va être répudiée !
C'était cruel, mais nécéssaire dans le temps, pour un roi.