[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2011 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 9 Experience
She is a greedy wannabe sub, isn't she? All Edward will have to say is heel and there she'll be, he has nothing to worry about.
Date: 04 Oct 2011 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 9 Experience
Damn what a tease,Tuesday has become my favorite day!
Date: 04 Oct 2011 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 9 Experience
Great story! love it!
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2011 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 9 Experience
love. this. story. and i love that you update on the regular. once again, you rock!! i'm ready to meet emmett, and i'm so ready for edward and bella to have the talk. i had to go google the tantric chair. i'm guessing it'd be a great addition to any home. :)
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2011 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 9 Experience
i am dying for the talk and meeting emmett.
love the story
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2011 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 9 Experience
loved it!!! Can't wait for that talk.
Date: 04 Oct 2011 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 9 Experience
great update, can't wait for the talk
Date: 04 Oct 2011 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 9 Experience
Well it's just about to get even more interesting. Just don't make DES adage to keep and do things that are just wrong! He won't share will he? He does have feelings for her right? Oh well can't wait to find out.
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2011 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 9 Experience
Turning up the heat now. I like the direction you're taking this story. Looking forward to lots more!
Date: 03 Oct 2011 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 9 Experience
Bella let her mind fly and wonder on certain things, but kept it clear for others. It was a good choice. She is well aware there's plenty about Edward she needs to find out and that will be surprising. She has to be openminded, even with her realization that she's interested in him and whatever he might be offering her. It has been a long day, both have missed the other, and want to do more than talk, but talking must come first. I hope soon!!!
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2011 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 9 Experience
Oh my! Well Yes, Yes, Yes I'm pretty frustrated for Isabella, she wants to know more... They are definitely perfect for one another, that's for sure. Oh, next chapter is going to be great.
Emmett's attitude regarding Bella's age is rather interesting to me. For someone in this lifestyle one would think he would be a little more open minded. Just say'n Of course that is just a small teaser, perhaps Emmett is just harranging his cousin.. Regardless I knew that you have stated that there is a HEA in the end, therefore I keep that in mind... Our Bella wants her world opened and certainly knows that the feelings that she is having is not something that she has experienced with anyone else.... Very good chapter... Loved the book too by the way!
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2011 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 6 Beginnings
I don't think he will wait long at all, it was all he could do not to throw her down and fuck her on the stage when she graduated. He's moved heaven and earth to get her there with him for the summer, all is falling into place. he wants her, and he will get her, but just in case, give him my email...lol...xx
Date: 03 Oct 2011 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 8 Awake
These two are mutually attacted to each other. It is hard to fight. so why do it. Bella is 18 and it very mature for her age. They need to talk about what the future holds. I think they both want more than just a sexual relationship. They need to lay it all out. Then enjoy and learn about each other.
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2011 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 8 Awake
Wow! Totally owned by this story. Do you have an updating schedule yet? Just wondering, eagerly anticipating next chapter.
Date: 02 Oct 2011 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 8 Awake
They seem to be a match made in heaven even with their age difference they have a lot in common, and I think Edward could give Bella a lot of things she is lacking like affection and being attentive to her needs. I am looking forward to see what happens next between these two.
Date: 29 Sep 2011 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 8 Awake
good god this is amazing
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2011 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 8 Awake
I get so excited when I get a chapter notice in my inbox! I absolutely love your story! It's just hot, and sexy as fuck already.
I definately don't think it's too soon for Edward to be falling for Bella, when it's right, it's right. I think Bella feels the same about him.
I don't think Edward should worry about telling Bella about his lifestyle, because it looks like she'll be an eager little sub just dying to please her master.
I really want to know more about Bella's home life with her dad. I also wonder what she was dreaming about, it seemed to be disturbing to her.
I'll be looking forward to your next chapter, this one was great. Thanks for writing. xoxo Kelly =)
Date: 28 Sep 2011 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 8 Awake
I'm pretty sure "too soon" is not a phrase I will be seeing in any of your reviews. I like how you've written an older Edward that is not some menacing, giant dick of a jackass. I also like how Bella is not a little girl, either.
Thank you.
Date: 28 Sep 2011 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 8 Awake
Oh Yeah! getting to the good parts. LOL
great story and really like the plot line.
Thanks
Date: 28 Sep 2011 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 8 Awake
I think Isabella is going to surpise Edward. I can't wait to see what she is thinking. I love this story! Great job...thanks so much!!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2011 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 8 Awake
oh i love this one so much
edward and bella go so well together. i am looking forward to the conversation between the two. i also can't wait to see who bella really is and what jer home life was
love it
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2011 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 8 Awake
Oh my gosh! she's going to be so shocked that he's behind her! I can't wait to see what happens. Please update soon! I can't handle the suspense!
Date: 28 Sep 2011 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 8 Awake
I think Emmett may have to wait a bit for Edward's help!
Date: 27 Sep 2011 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 8 Awake
awesome chapter!! this story is definitely my favorite right now. you don't keep me waiting too long, and i love that your characters are not over-the-top. you make me feel that this relationship could be possible despite the impressive age difference.
Date: 27 Sep 2011 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 8 Awake
HOT< HOT< HOT, more sooooon please
Date: 27 Sep 2011 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 8 Awake
I think Bella will enjoy anything Edward has in mind lol
Date: 27 Sep 2011 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 8 Awake
THIS STORY IS SO HOT!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait for the update! Whew!
Date: 27 Sep 2011 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 8 Awake
oooohhhh shizz!!! great chap cant wait for the next one!!!
Date: 27 Sep 2011 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 8 Awake
OMG!!!!!! You HAVE GOT to update again, SOON!!!!!!! This is SOOOOOO good. We need to hav more of your Edward. He is soooo hot. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update again, SOON!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 27 Sep 2011 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 8 Awake
I thought Edward might have started a happy dance, if it were possible, when he wome up to Bella's inuendos. He probably felt as the happiest man alive. She wasn't scared, on the contrary. She was a most willing participant. They do need to talk, it will be a lenghty talk. But it will have wait a bit since Edward will be leaving to help out Emmett. What will Bella do while he is out? Go on a tour of the house... edward's part of the house? ;)
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2011 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 8 Awake
loved it. I just started reading and have enjoyed this story very much. can"t wait to see it unfold.
Date: 27 Sep 2011 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 8 Awake
Whew, that was pretty hot, I am so ready for them to talk. Hopefully Bella will be turned on by Edward's lifestyle and they can proceed in their relationship, can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: 27 Sep 2011 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 8 Awake
You continue to deliver with every chapter, not only with the awesome lemons, but sublime characters I can't help but love.
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2011 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 8 Awake
Ooooo...its gettin' good. Love it when I get an update notice for your work!!
Date: 27 Sep 2011 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 8 Awake
loved it looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 27 Sep 2011 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 8 Awake
hum interesting... just please let her love her and it not just be a sex thing for him I can do the hole d/s thing if there is love there and the bella character is just going along to get to ed. thanks for the update can't wait for more they are really hot together!!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2011 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 8 Awake
LMAO those two have not wasted time. She'll be on his spanking bench before you can say Green.
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2011 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 8 Awake
wow that was beyond hot!fantastic chapter.i think bella is defo into bdsm.can't wait for next chapter.
Date: 27 Sep 2011 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 8 Awake
Good Chapter.....
Date: 27 Sep 2011 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 8 Awake
Oh i so think Isabella is going to get down on her knees and say do with me as you wish master lol
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2011 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 8 Awake
this is one of those stories that you just have to read the minute a update comes out... Holy shit this is sooooo good
Date: 21 Sep 2011 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 7 **Encounters**
Oops, guess the cat is out of the bag on his intentions, at least some of them. And it appears that Bella is all in. I almost wonder if she subconciously knows he is a dom with her deference and calling him "sir". Also funny how Alice is too much for her to handle. Can't wait to read about Edward the Cuddler :)
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2011 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 7 **Encounters**
Man oh Man, I have to say I am loving this story... Once of the best builds up to BDSM i have read in a while.
Thank you for a wonderful story and I am pimping you out on a friends story. Keep the chapters coming.
Fiorella
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2011 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 7 **Encounters**
I love that Bella is shy and quiet but still knows what she wants and is not afraid to ask for it. Wonder if she is going to tell him about her Edward collection?
Date: 20 Sep 2011 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 7 **Encounters**
I'm loving this story! It's turned me into a cuddler!
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2011 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 7 **Encounters**
Fuck yeah! You know you're good when your readers get hot just reading your words. Not all authors can make the story come alive like that, and I'm not just referring to the lemons.
Personally, I think that Bella will be more curious and willing to learn a lot about Edward's lifestyle. Hell, she's lusted after him since she was 15; I'd say she's more than ready and willing to please Edward. I think her want for him will overshadow any concerns she may feel. Maybe I'm giving her too much credit right away. Or not; look at how eager she was to let Edward take her clothes off, she hasn't known him that long, but it seems to me that she'll bend to his will pretty easily. She already has in some small ways. Bella may be a little stunned at first, but I think she'll get over it pretty quickly. JMO
Thanks again for writing. I'm looking forward to your next chapter. xoxo Kelly =)
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2011 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 6 Beginnings
I really love your story, so much. I always look forward to the next chapter. I'm so excited for BPOV!
Thanks for writing this great story! xoxo Kelly =)
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2011 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 7 **Encounters**
I love this story. Your doing a great job.
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2011 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 7 **Encounters**
thanks as always awesome chapter
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2011 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 7 **Encounters**
I loved Bella. It was great to hear her version of things. The bit about her crush on Edward was so sweet. Also loved that she knows how naive she is.
And obviously I loved the smutty goodness.
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2011 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 7 **Encounters**
Well Hot damn!!! that was amazing and I cannot wait to see where you go with this. I am so pleased to see this mostly from Edwards pov but this chapter was out of the water fantastic, I would have reviewed all chapters but its sucked me in and like I swear under two hours 7 chapters andI want more.
Meet my new addiction!!! Loved and Loved
Date: 16 Sep 2011 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 7 **Encounters**
Wow I just have to say Bella definetely surprised me with her reaction to what was going on, here I thought she was nieve and sheltered but I must say I liked the results. I also have to agree with your recs I have only read Be my master and Isla so far but if you're into the older Edward and younger Bella they are definetely must reads! There is just something about an older Edward that is totally hot. I will be eagerly awaiting more updates to see where you go with your story!
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2011 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 7 **Encounters**
Sizzling!!!!!
Date: 16 Sep 2011 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 7 **Encounters**
So it begins...please don't make this like my greatest masterpiece yuk! I will have to give you up too and I don't want too.
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2011 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 7 **Encounters**
wow that was hot!fab chapter.update soon
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2011 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 7 **Encounters**
Good grief, that was hot!!! I was so impressed with how you wrote them getting together. Bella hearing him was so unexpected and really sexy. I love how she didn't run away embarrassed, but went after what she wanted. And that curve you threw in there about her having a crush on him all those years... that was just genius!! You rocked this chapter!!!
Date: 16 Sep 2011 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 7 **Encounters**
WOW! So hot! Loved it.
Date: 16 Sep 2011 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 7 **Encounters**
Gah! great update!!
Date: 16 Sep 2011 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 7 **Encounters**
So, it turns out Ella knew of Edward, quite a lot and for quite a while... Getting this opportunity was like a dream come true. The real dream come true is becoming true this evening. Timing is such an important factor, she got there right in time.
Later things turned steamier and so wonderful for both of them. Second thoughts will come later on, for now it's still the middle of the night.
Date: 16 Sep 2011 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 7 **Encounters**
OMG! I have read so many stories and I don't remember the last time I was this drawn in. I was holding my breath and tensing up and reading as fast as I could. This was so well written and I couldn't get enough. The sexual tension was so high I could feel it. LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!!!
I also love Bella's POV and thought it was awesome that she was annoyed by Alice. Too many times authors write about Bella and Alice being instant friends and I never buy it, they are so opposite that I always think Bella would be put off by Alice and her over-spending ways.
Love the story and the direction you are going. Can't wait for more!!!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2011 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 7 **Encounters**
loved it. I am very excited to read this story. love the whole mix, of artist creativity,
Date: 16 Sep 2011 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 7 **Encounters**
Fave line,"..a damn phyton under the towel!" Yeah, your Edward could charm any snake too. This early update in BPOV was such a succulent treat. The austere schooling has definitely not Bella uptight, she's refreshingly wild yet innocent. Great chap.
Date: 16 Sep 2011 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 7 **Encounters**
Finally!!!!! I loved this chapter. I was so scared that she would get away before he saw her in the hallway. LOVED the lemon!!!!!! I can't wait to see where you are taking this. I guess great minds think alike. I am reading all the stories except one. Now I am off to start reading it. Can't wait for your next update.
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2011 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 7 **Encounters**
Wow, that was an awesome chapter. Never did I think getting caught in the act could turn into something so good. Lucky girl!
Date: 16 Sep 2011 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 7 **Encounters**
I am wondering what ALice's reaction will be, because I doubt they'll be able to hide it from her!
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2011 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 7 **Encounters**
Oh Soapy ~ Whoa... what a chapter! OMG, I about died when I woke up to this in my mailbox. SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEE if it was freakin' HOT too. So excited for more. Yum! I just LOVE the Taste of Honey! *giggle snort*
XxOo ~ Fangs
P.S. Love your recs most are either on my "to-read-list" or I'm currently reading!
Date: 16 Sep 2011 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 7 **Encounters**
I really loved this chapter. It shows that Bella wants Edward as much as he wants her.
Date: 16 Sep 2011 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 7 **Encounters**
whew.......lol....so much foir the niave bella
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2011 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 7 **Encounters**
great update, pure genuis having Bella overheear Edward !!!!!!
Date: 16 Sep 2011 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 7 **Encounters**
i like bella she is the perfect mix that edward needs i am eagerly awaiting more
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2011 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 7 **Encounters**
HOT!!!
Date: 16 Sep 2011 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 7 **Encounters**
That was definitely not how I expected them to move their relationship forward. Yay for a sleepless and wandering Bella.
Yeah, I was surprised by Bella. I love that she crushed on Edward since she was 15.
That was definitely a greate start to a beautiful relationship. Can't wait for Chapter 8.
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2011 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 7 **Encounters**
Wow they didn't loose anytime. lol. I cannot wait to see how this pans out.
Date: 16 Sep 2011 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 7 **Encounters**
hmmmm and what a lovely addiction it is
Date: 16 Sep 2011 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 7 **Encounters**
I am loving Bella she is shy but still not afaid to go for what she wants.
Date: 16 Sep 2011 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 7 **Encounters**
looking fwoard to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2011 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 7 **Encounters**
okay that was so freak'n hot.... love this story
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2011 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 7 **Encounters**
I totally wasn't expecting to press the submit button and have a email pop up saying that there is a new chapter, it was like magic. I love Bella. They always say it's the quiet ones you have to watch.
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2011 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 6 Beginnings
I don't think Edward is going to have to wait that long. That teaser for the next chapter certainly seems promising, at least maybe a little humorous. I can only imagine what made that noise and what Bella will be disrupting or walking into.
Date: 15 Sep 2011 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 6 Beginnings
Great chapter I can feel the build up coming.. Oh my goodness the teaser has me in knots.. I hope to god he did NOT bring another girl into the home he is now sharing with her while he's trying to court her!!! How horrible that would be..
<biting nails>
Date: 15 Sep 2011 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 6 Beginnings
I think having Alice there might have been a bad idea. She is so overwelming to Bella's personality. I think she doesn't like alcohol because Charlie is a drunk. I don't care what the age difference is Edward is sexy.
Date: 15 Sep 2011 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 6 Beginnings
Edward isnt going to make it very long lol
Date: 15 Sep 2011 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 6 Beginnings
I am loving this story and Edward and Bella are cute trying to get to know each other and figure each other out, but why is Alice staying at the house again? She's rude, inconsiderate and just in the way.
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2011 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 6 Beginnings
That Edward is a real horndog, isn't he? I think the man has a one track mind. I can't wait for Bella's POV. I have a feeling she is just a little smitten with Mr. Cullen, too. This was a wonderful chapter. Your story is really good. You have me totally hooked!
Date: 14 Sep 2011 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 6 Beginnings
OMG!!!! I am loving this cat and mouse game that Edward is playing. I love the chase. I can't wait for more and more and more. I am glad that we are getting Bella's POV.
Date: 14 Sep 2011 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 6 Beginnings
Good Chapter.....
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2011 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 6 Beginnings
i am thinking maybe charlie is alcholic and bella doesn't like how he is when he has been drinking. doesn't seem as charlie likes bella much anyway. almost seems as if she is trouble to him.
seems as edward is getting somewhere with bella. i like her explanantion of him calling her by her given name. love it
Date: 14 Sep 2011 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 6 Beginnings
god i love this story. there is just so much appeal that comes with an older edward and tasteward is very very yummy. can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 14 Sep 2011 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 6 Beginnings
Sounds like Bella may have a thing for Edward too. I don't think he'll have to work very hard to win her over.
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2011 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 6 Beginnings
Ya got to give it to him, he's sneaky...and fun to listen to.
"Sex Machine" is wonderful!! Only one problem....you never said where one could purchase a Masen......
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2011 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 6 Beginnings
I can't wait for more. I loved that chapter. Thank you.
Date: 13 Sep 2011 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 6 Beginnings
Edward is not going to be able to resist her much longer, I hope!
Date: 13 Sep 2011 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 5 Expectations
I love Edward's fantasies!
Date: 13 Sep 2011 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 4 **History**
Let the fun begin!
Date: 13 Sep 2011 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 3 *>Proposition
Hot hot hot!!! I love that he is pierced!
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2011 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 6 Beginnings
im certain hes not hurt lol the sexual tenxion between them is electric.fab chapter.update soon
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2011 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 6 Beginnings
I love it! I wish I could see what Bella thinks of all of this but the mystery of not knowing how she'll react when he makes his first move makes it so much mor interesting.
Date: 13 Sep 2011 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 6 Beginnings
He won't be able to say away for too long. It might be sooner than he planned. As for Bella, we know so little about her, having her POV next week will be great. From what we saw, she is thrilled to be there, but also to not be at home. Things there probably weren't too good, and that's where her aversion to alcohol probably comes from.
Alice has been okay, so far. She is being a good host, even if Edward at times would prefer her not to. But Bella and Edward need her there. Perhaps Alice has realized a part of Edward's plan and will start giving them more time to themselves...