Date: 01 Jun 2023 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 52
Loved it and look forward to more.
Date: 30 May 2023 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 52
I really love this story definitely keeps you on the edge of your seat wondering what is going to happen next
[Report This]Date: 29 May 2023 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 52
Paul and Emmett don't realize how well their wives know them. LOL
Bella and Rose telling all the others what is going on will help I'm sure. Alice and Charlotte will proobably find out something by following gross Angela W. too.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 29 May 2023 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 52
This is such a great story, I love it! Thanks for your hard work. You have inspired me wo get back to a story I am trying to write. I wish I knew more about how to post and could find someone to read what I have written so far who would tell me if it is worth doing. Again Thanks for the insperation and your story.
Date: 29 May 2023 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 52
Can't wait to read more soon. I love how Bella schooled Paul.
Author's Response:
Dear Team66fan,
Bella was simply reminding Paul that they are equals, and any attempts to control her will be met with resistance. LOL! I'm so happy you enjoyed chapter 52. Thank you for taking the time to read and review Intensity.
XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 15 May 2023 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 51
Absolutely love it thanks for the awesome update.
Author's Response:
Dear 01katie,
I'm glad you enjoyed chapter 51. Thank you for taking the time to read and review Intensity.
XOXO mama4dukes
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2023 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 51
It sure is a mystery who changed Stormcrow and Byers. They are obviously on Fuller's side of things. Or maybe Fuller works for this vampire? Hmmm....
Carlisle is going to flip out I'm sure if he discovers Rose and Bella missing. Maybe the two will get back before Carlisle notices them being gone.
The wolves and coyotes are in good training hands.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2023 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 50
A lot of new friendships and enlightenment at Bella's house.... Thanks for writing and sharing.
Author's Response:
Dear trbuie,
Lots more coming, and many friendships to be had. Thank you for taking the time to read and review chapter 50 of Intensity.
XOXO mama4dukes
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2023 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 49
Carlisle's POV was a great read for this little meeting. Those "men" think they have everything all planned out regarding Babs and Bella. LOL
Peter's no filter mouth almost got him into trouble. ;)
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Author's Response:
Dear trbuie,
Paul did his best to make Carlisle feel included. Peter's filterless mouth will be making an appearance in La Push soon, but not quite yet.
Thank you for taking the time to read and review Intensity.
XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 08 Apr 2023 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 49
Loved it.
Author's Response:
Dear 01katie,
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. There's more to come. Thanks for taking the time to read and review Intensity.
XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 22 Mar 2023 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 48
Incrível como todas as suas fics, estou amando essa também, sou sua fa.
Author's Response:
Fico muito feliz que esteja gostando das minhas fics. Obrigada por ler e revisar.
XOXO mama4dukes
[Report This]Date: 20 Mar 2023 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 48
Bella and Paul's version of meditating would be waaaaaay more peaceful. ;)
I wonder if Paul's "missing" uncle IS one of the attacking vampires. Hmmmm..... just a thought..... Hmmm.....
Jeff getting "date ready" to chase a vampire made me smile as well. LOL
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Author's Response:
OMG! Thank you! You were the only one who commented on Jeff trying to figure out how to get ready for a vampire chase! You made my week! As for Uncle Malcolm, you'll find out soon enough. XOXO mama4dukes
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2023 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 48
Thank you I have missed this story soooo much. great chapter.
Author's Response:
I'm so happy you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for sticking with the story. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 17 Mar 2023 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 48
I bet one of the vamps is Paul's uncle.
Author's Response:
You'll find out in the next chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 17 Mar 2023 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 48
Love the twist with Fuller having vampire connections.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying the twists and turns. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2022 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
Always a pleasure for my yearly reread. Awesome new chapters!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your patience! I know updates are slow. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 13 Sep 2022 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 21
This was a hilarious chapter! Sue...what goes around, comes around. Now maybe she'll stop asking for babies to be born - haha!
Date: 31 Jul 2022 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 47
I freaking love this story and can't wait for more. Thanks for the awesome update.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your patience. I know updates are slow. I also appreciate you reading and reviewing Intensity. XOXO mama4dukes
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2022 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 47
Bella and the other ladies came through with the catering...even for Carlisle.
With so many people on this case, hopefully Fuller will be staying in jail permanently. grrr...
Thanks for writing anbd sharing.
Author's Response:
Let's hope Fuller stays in Jail permanently. He's annoying. And that's mild. Thank you for taking the time to read and review the story. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 03 May 2022 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 46
I am loving this story. I can always look forward to an update. I will be happy to see Tony and Angela get there comeuppance. I love all your stories. May you stay blessed and keep writing you are great at it.
Sincerely, Cheri
Author's Response:
Dear Cheri,
I am so happy you're enjoying Intensity. And thank you for sticking with it, too. Now that Fuller is in jail, let's hope Paul and his team can bring him down. Thank you for your kind compliments and for reading and reviewing.
XOXO mama4dukes
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2022 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 46
Wow! Well hopefully with the video of Fuller running his mouth and Johnny Lahote's information, the police can keep Fuller in prison. Man! He sure is a scumbag. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Author's Response:
Dear trbuie,
Yes, Fuller is behind bars so now the real work to keep him there begins. Glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 27 Mar 2022 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 46
Love it thanks for the awesome update.
Author's Response:
Dear 01katie,
Glad you liked the chapter. Thank you for reading and reviewing Intensity.
XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 05 Mar 2022 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 45
Thank you
Author's Response:
Dear MaryMary,
I'm so happy you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2022 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 45
I'm relieved they are all being cautious around Fuller and his cronies. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Author's Response:
Dear trbuie,
Absolutely! The pack members understand how dangerous Fuller and company are. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for taking the time to read and review. XOXO mama4dukes
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2022 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 45
Loved the new story. like this chapter also.
Author's Response:
Dear Zanath,
I'm you liked the new story. I'm also happy you enjoyed chapter 45 of Intensity. Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 19 Feb 2022 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 44
Protect Bella!
Author's Response:
I agree! She must be protected. Thanks for reading and reviewing Intensity. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 17 Feb 2022 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 44
Loved it thanks for the awesome update.
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and reviewing Intensity. XOXO mama4dukes
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2022 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 44
What a traumatizing lunch for Bella and the others. Ugh.... Thanks for writing and sharing. :)
Author's Response:
It was traumatizing to everyone! Thanks for reading and reviewing Intensity. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 14 Feb 2022 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 44
So many exciting details to discover what is about to unfold
Author's Response:
More to come soon! Thanks for reading and reviewing Intensity. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 14 Feb 2022 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 44
So many exciting details to discover what is about to unfold
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2022 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 44
worth the wait thanks!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing Intensity. XOXO mama4dukes
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2021 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 43
The Charlie/Pail relationship is really sweet and supportive both ways. My opinion changed of Pauul's father somewhat. I think this Travis douche is goinna try and blame something on Paul's father when he gets out of prison. Hmm....
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 11 Sep 2021 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 43
Looking forward to reading more soon.
Date: 10 Sep 2021 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 43
Loved it. Awesome chapter and thank you for the update. I can't wait to see Travis and Tony and theirs get nailed to the wall.
Date: 23 Jul 2021 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 42
Love this story!! Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response:
I'm happy you're enjoying the story. Thank you for taking the time to review. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 19 May 2021 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 42
Love it and can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2021 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 42
Everyone is maturing and seeing the other side in this chapter. thanks for writing and sharing.
Author's Response:
You hit the nail on the head with your assessment. Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 18 Apr 2021 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 42
Good chapter.. thank you
Author's Response:
Dear MaryMary,
I'm glad you enjoyed chapter 42 of Intensity. Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
XOXO mama4dukes
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2021 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 41
Men typically over spend or spend more money on useless crap than women do. LOL They like to gripe about women, but it's really them. :)
Paul and Embry were very supportive friends to Carlisle.
I do wish the others would quick giving them shit for not having kids. What if they never want to? Everyone doesn't have to bear children to be a good person? They all need to quit being so dam pushy. :)
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Author's Response:
Dear trbuie,
Men do overspend--I completely agree. I have my husband as a prime example. Paul and Embry both know what it feels like to be ostracized and they would never do that to Carlisle. More coming soon. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 22 Mar 2021 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 41
Loved it and can't wait to see that walking jizz sponge and that prick get what they deserve.
Author's Response:
Dear 01Katie,
There's more coming on the Fuller front. I'm glad you enjoyed chapter 41. Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 19 Mar 2021 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 40
I love your work so much and I am looking forward to seeing more updates from you on this wonderful storyline!!
* * β♥ * *
Author's Response:
Dear Bellnedward0,
Thank you for taking the time to read and review Chapter 41.
XOXO mama4dukes
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2021 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 40
Paul was reminded of, and became very appreciative of his wife and friends again in this chapter. :) Thanks for writing and sharing.
Author's Response:
Dear trbuie,
Sometimes, Paul needs a subtle reminder to appreciate what he has. Thank you for taking the time to read and review Chapter 41.
XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 08 Mar 2021 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 40
Loved it. Thank you for sharing.
Author's Response:
Dear 01katie,
You're very welcome. Thank you for taking the time to read and review Chapter 41.
XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 05 Mar 2021 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 39
Love it. Thanks for the awesome update.
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed chapter 39 of Intensity. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
XOXO mama4dukes
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2021 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 39
I love the interesting history and bonding between Carlisle and Taha Aki. The prophecy probably blew both of their minds. :)
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Author's Response:
Carlilse and Taha Aki were there for each other when they needed each other the most. As for their father-son bond, clearly, the spirits saw it too. Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 24 Feb 2021 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 39
Ok, a very interesting chapter. I get now why Bella has been human. In order for her to fit this prophecy she must remain human!!!!
Author's Response:
That's right. Carlisle needed to keep her human, and he knew that Edward wasn't her mate. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
XOXO mama4dukes
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2021 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 38
Talk about evil cliffy... grrr.... LOL
Great chapter though. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Author's Response:
Carlisle will save you from the cliffhanger--I promise! Thank you for taking the time to read and review. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 07 Jan 2021 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 38
Thank you for this chapter...the cliffie is ... well I can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks again for all your hard work.
Author's Response:
Sorry about the cliffie. Carlisle will bring you back off the ledge. Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 07 Jan 2021 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 38
Sounds interesting! Hurry please
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed chapter 38 of Intensity. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 16 Nov 2020 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
Needed some happy reading. So I tensity it is!
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying it!
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2020 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 37
So many questions about Paul and Bella..... Edward is ashed and Esme is ashed. I did not expect that. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Author's Response:
I know, really? Edward and Esme have both been 'ashed' and neither of them played a very significant role in the story in the first place. Why is that? It's simply because there was no place for Edward nor Esme in the story, and I needed Carlisle alone and free of his family. Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 21 Oct 2020 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 37
Getting a new chapter is such a treat! Thank you!!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 21 Oct 2020 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 37
Awesome chapter, thanks for the update. Ive missed this adventure.
Author's Response:
I'm so happy you like the chapter. Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 13 Jul 2020 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 36
Love it and can't wait for mor thank you for the awesome chapter.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2020 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 36
Paul got to learn a lot of amazing things about his and Bella's past. Trippy... :) Thanks for writing and sharing girl. :)
Date: 13 Jun 2020 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 35
Omg I'm so glad you're back this was a really great chapter
Date: 12 Jun 2020 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 35
It is the vampire blood from Bella!
Can't wait for more Thanks
Date: 12 Jun 2020 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 35
Oh my, I can't wait to read more soon!
Date: 12 Jun 2020 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 35
Loved it and can't wait for more Thank you for the awesome update.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2020 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 35
Well crap! What's happening to Paul and Bella? This sounds scary. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 09 Jun 2020 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love the story please update
Date: 09 Jun 2020 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love the story please update
Date: 03 Feb 2020 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 34
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 03 Feb 2020 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 33
Bella is an awesome friend!
Date: 03 Feb 2020 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 32
Loved it! I'm happy for Jake! Why is Angela giving up her parental rights?
Date: 03 Feb 2020 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 30
Loved it! Poor Sue!
Date: 03 Feb 2020 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 29
Loved it! Poor paul
Date: 03 Feb 2020 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 28
Poor Bella! Poor Paul
Date: 03 Feb 2020 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 27
Loved it! Go Bella!
Date: 03 Feb 2020 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 26
Poor Jacob and Bella
Date: 03 Feb 2020 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 25
I really don't like Angela
Date: 03 Feb 2020 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 24
Loved it! Poor Bella and Paul!
Date: 03 Feb 2020 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 23
Poor Sarah! Jake is becoming a better father! Angela is a horrible person and mother!
Date: 02 Feb 2020 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 19
Great chapter! I really don't like Angela!
Date: 02 Feb 2020 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it! Poor Jake!
Date: 02 Feb 2020 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 13
Bella and Charlie are amazing! Poor Paul!
Date: 02 Feb 2020 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it! I definitely don't trust Angela!
Date: 02 Feb 2020 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 10
I don't like Angela and Jake!
Date: 01 Feb 2020 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 7
I hate Jake! He's a prick!
Date: 01 Feb 2020 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 5
Poor Bella and Paul!
Date: 01 Feb 2020 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 4
I really don't like Jake!
Date: 01 Feb 2020 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 3
Bella is awesome
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2019 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 34
Can't wait for more!!
Date: 13 Oct 2019 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 34
Awesome update can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2019 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 34
Wow! This chapter was a great adventure. Tawny started out being all suspicious, but she calmed down. I'm glad the crew got to be together a while and Jacob/Tawny got married how they wanted in Vegas. It's really not important what anyone else expects or wants when it comes to your wedding.
Bella was so kind answering Jacob's sweet, smart kid's questions.
Great chapter with lots of yummy Paul/Bella goodness as well. Thanks for writing and sharing.