Date: 13 Sep 2022 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 21
This was a hilarious chapter! Sue...what goes around, comes around. Now maybe she'll stop asking for babies to be born - haha!
Date: 31 Jul 2022 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 47
I freaking love this story and can't wait for more. Thanks for the awesome update.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2022 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 47
Bella and the other ladies came through with the catering...even for Carlisle.
With so many people on this case, hopefully Fuller will be staying in jail permanently. grrr...
Thanks for writing anbd sharing.
Date: 03 May 2022 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 46
I am loving this story. I can always look forward to an update. I will be happy to see Tony and Angela get there comeuppance. I love all your stories. May you stay blessed and keep writing you are great at it.
Sincerely, Cheri
Author's Response:
Dear Cheri,
I am so happy you're enjoying Intensity. And thank you for sticking with it, too. Now that Fuller is in jail, let's hope Paul and his team can bring him down. Thank you for your kind compliments and for reading and reviewing.
XOXO mama4dukes
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2022 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 46
Wow! Well hopefully with the video of Fuller running his mouth and Johnny Lahote's information, the police can keep Fuller in prison. Man! He sure is a scumbag. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Author's Response:
Dear trbuie,
Yes, Fuller is behind bars so now the real work to keep him there begins. Glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 27 Mar 2022 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 46
Love it thanks for the awesome update.
Author's Response:
Dear 01katie,
Glad you liked the chapter. Thank you for reading and reviewing Intensity.
XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 05 Mar 2022 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 45
Thank you
Author's Response:
Dear MaryMary,
I'm so happy you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2022 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 45
I'm relieved they are all being cautious around Fuller and his cronies. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Author's Response:
Dear trbuie,
Absolutely! The pack members understand how dangerous Fuller and company are. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for taking the time to read and review. XOXO mama4dukes
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2022 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 45
Loved the new story. like this chapter also.
Author's Response:
Dear Zanath,
I'm you liked the new story. I'm also happy you enjoyed chapter 45 of Intensity. Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 19 Feb 2022 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 44
Protect Bella!
Author's Response:
I agree! She must be protected. Thanks for reading and reviewing Intensity. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 17 Feb 2022 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 44
Loved it thanks for the awesome update.
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and reviewing Intensity. XOXO mama4dukes
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2022 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 44
What a traumatizing lunch for Bella and the others. Ugh.... Thanks for writing and sharing. :)
Author's Response:
It was traumatizing to everyone! Thanks for reading and reviewing Intensity. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 14 Feb 2022 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 44
So many exciting details to discover what is about to unfold
Author's Response:
More to come soon! Thanks for reading and reviewing Intensity. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 14 Feb 2022 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 44
So many exciting details to discover what is about to unfold
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2022 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 44
worth the wait thanks!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing Intensity. XOXO mama4dukes
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2021 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 43
The Charlie/Pail relationship is really sweet and supportive both ways. My opinion changed of Pauul's father somewhat. I think this Travis douche is goinna try and blame something on Paul's father when he gets out of prison. Hmm....
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 11 Sep 2021 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 43
Looking forward to reading more soon.
Date: 10 Sep 2021 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 43
Loved it. Awesome chapter and thank you for the update. I can't wait to see Travis and Tony and theirs get nailed to the wall.
Date: 23 Jul 2021 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 42
Love this story!! Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response:
I'm happy you're enjoying the story. Thank you for taking the time to review. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 19 May 2021 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 42
Love it and can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2021 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 42
Everyone is maturing and seeing the other side in this chapter. thanks for writing and sharing.
Author's Response:
You hit the nail on the head with your assessment. Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 18 Apr 2021 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 42
Good chapter.. thank you
Author's Response:
Dear MaryMary,
I'm glad you enjoyed chapter 42 of Intensity. Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
XOXO mama4dukes
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2021 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 41
Men typically over spend or spend more money on useless crap than women do. LOL They like to gripe about women, but it's really them. :)
Paul and Embry were very supportive friends to Carlisle.
I do wish the others would quick giving them shit for not having kids. What if they never want to? Everyone doesn't have to bear children to be a good person? They all need to quit being so dam pushy. :)
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Author's Response:
Dear trbuie,
Men do overspend--I completely agree. I have my husband as a prime example. Paul and Embry both know what it feels like to be ostracized and they would never do that to Carlisle. More coming soon. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 22 Mar 2021 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 41
Loved it and can't wait to see that walking jizz sponge and that prick get what they deserve.
Author's Response:
Dear 01Katie,
There's more coming on the Fuller front. I'm glad you enjoyed chapter 41. Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 19 Mar 2021 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 40
I love your work so much and I am looking forward to seeing more updates from you on this wonderful storyline!!
* * β♥ * *
Author's Response:
Dear Bellnedward0,
Thank you for taking the time to read and review Chapter 41.
XOXO mama4dukes
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2021 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 40
Paul was reminded of, and became very appreciative of his wife and friends again in this chapter. :) Thanks for writing and sharing.
Author's Response:
Dear trbuie,
Sometimes, Paul needs a subtle reminder to appreciate what he has. Thank you for taking the time to read and review Chapter 41.
XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 08 Mar 2021 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 40
Loved it. Thank you for sharing.
Author's Response:
Dear 01katie,
You're very welcome. Thank you for taking the time to read and review Chapter 41.
XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 05 Mar 2021 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 39
Love it. Thanks for the awesome update.
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed chapter 39 of Intensity. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
XOXO mama4dukes
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2021 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 39
I love the interesting history and bonding between Carlisle and Taha Aki. The prophecy probably blew both of their minds. :)
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Author's Response:
Carlilse and Taha Aki were there for each other when they needed each other the most. As for their father-son bond, clearly, the spirits saw it too. Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 24 Feb 2021 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 39
Ok, a very interesting chapter. I get now why Bella has been human. In order for her to fit this prophecy she must remain human!!!!
Author's Response:
That's right. Carlisle needed to keep her human, and he knew that Edward wasn't her mate. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
XOXO mama4dukes
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2021 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 38
Talk about evil cliffy... grrr.... LOL
Great chapter though. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Author's Response:
Carlisle will save you from the cliffhanger--I promise! Thank you for taking the time to read and review. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 07 Jan 2021 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 38
Thank you for this chapter...the cliffie is ... well I can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks again for all your hard work.
Author's Response:
Sorry about the cliffie. Carlisle will bring you back off the ledge. Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 07 Jan 2021 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 38
Sounds interesting! Hurry please
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed chapter 38 of Intensity. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 16 Nov 2020 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
Needed some happy reading. So I tensity it is!
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying it!
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2020 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 37
So many questions about Paul and Bella..... Edward is ashed and Esme is ashed. I did not expect that. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Author's Response:
I know, really? Edward and Esme have both been 'ashed' and neither of them played a very significant role in the story in the first place. Why is that? It's simply because there was no place for Edward nor Esme in the story, and I needed Carlisle alone and free of his family. Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 21 Oct 2020 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 37
Getting a new chapter is such a treat! Thank you!!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 21 Oct 2020 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 37
Awesome chapter, thanks for the update. Ive missed this adventure.
Author's Response:
I'm so happy you like the chapter. Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 13 Jul 2020 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 36
Love it and can't wait for mor thank you for the awesome chapter.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2020 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 36
Paul got to learn a lot of amazing things about his and Bella's past. Trippy... :) Thanks for writing and sharing girl. :)
Date: 13 Jun 2020 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 35
Omg I'm so glad you're back this was a really great chapter
Date: 12 Jun 2020 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 35
It is the vampire blood from Bella!
Can't wait for more Thanks
Date: 12 Jun 2020 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 35
Oh my, I can't wait to read more soon!
Date: 12 Jun 2020 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 35
Loved it and can't wait for more Thank you for the awesome update.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2020 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 35
Well crap! What's happening to Paul and Bella? This sounds scary. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 09 Jun 2020 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love the story please update
Date: 09 Jun 2020 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love the story please update
Date: 03 Feb 2020 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 34
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 03 Feb 2020 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 33
Bella is an awesome friend!
Date: 03 Feb 2020 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 32
Loved it! I'm happy for Jake! Why is Angela giving up her parental rights?
Date: 03 Feb 2020 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 30
Loved it! Poor Sue!
Date: 03 Feb 2020 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 29
Loved it! Poor paul
Date: 03 Feb 2020 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 28
Poor Bella! Poor Paul
Date: 03 Feb 2020 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 27
Loved it! Go Bella!
Date: 03 Feb 2020 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 26
Poor Jacob and Bella
Date: 03 Feb 2020 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 25
I really don't like Angela
Date: 03 Feb 2020 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 24
Loved it! Poor Bella and Paul!
Date: 03 Feb 2020 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 23
Poor Sarah! Jake is becoming a better father! Angela is a horrible person and mother!
Date: 02 Feb 2020 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 19
Great chapter! I really don't like Angela!
Date: 02 Feb 2020 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it! Poor Jake!
Date: 02 Feb 2020 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 13
Bella and Charlie are amazing! Poor Paul!
Date: 02 Feb 2020 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it! I definitely don't trust Angela!
Date: 02 Feb 2020 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 10
I don't like Angela and Jake!
Date: 01 Feb 2020 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 7
I hate Jake! He's a prick!
Date: 01 Feb 2020 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 5
Poor Bella and Paul!
Date: 01 Feb 2020 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 4
I really don't like Jake!
Date: 01 Feb 2020 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 3
Bella is awesome
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2019 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 34
Can't wait for more!!
Date: 13 Oct 2019 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 34
Awesome update can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2019 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 34
Wow! This chapter was a great adventure. Tawny started out being all suspicious, but she calmed down. I'm glad the crew got to be together a while and Jacob/Tawny got married how they wanted in Vegas. It's really not important what anyone else expects or wants when it comes to your wedding.
Bella was so kind answering Jacob's sweet, smart kid's questions.
Great chapter with lots of yummy Paul/Bella goodness as well. Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2019 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 33
Awe.... Bella and Jacob both were really sweet to each other. And it appears they were really honest too. Jacob's children will benefit from their father being more happy as well. Great chapter. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 22 Jul 2019 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 33
Loved it and thanks for the awesome update.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2019 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 32
Ahhh... I need more!! This story is beyond good. I love everything.about it.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2019 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 23
Aww...Daddy Jake!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2019 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 19
Aww...poor Will and Sarah! Angela is a piece of work!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2019 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 18
I am so loving this story. I keep reading...going to the next chapter instead of reviewing. I love how you're growing these characters. I hate Angela...and that's never happened in any story. I think she is sleeping with that Fuller dude, why else would she act the way she does. Hmm...on to more!
Date: 27 Feb 2019 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 32
You are an amazing writer. I love your stories. So can't wait for you to update again !
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2019 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 32
That was nice cor Jacob and Tawny. I'm really pleased about Bella putting her foot down and demanding her and Paul get away. They needed that.
Date: 24 Feb 2019 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 32
Loved it thanks for the update.
Date: 23 Feb 2019 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 32
UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU POSSIBLY CAN PRETTY PLEASE?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2019 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 31
I laughed so much at Charlie's over reaction's in this. I'm pleased that Bella got some clarity about what she wants to do with her life. Great chapter. :)
Date: 05 Feb 2019 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 30
UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU POSSILY CAN PRETTY PLEASE?!?!?!?!?!!??!!??
[Report This]Date: 04 Feb 2019 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 30
Hopefully Sue will be ok. Paul and Bella sure having a rough go of it as well. I am happy that Paul has some happy memories of his mom now.
Date: 03 Feb 2019 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 30
Thank you for the update it was awesome. will you be updateing your other stories as well or mainly sticking with this one?
Date: 03 Feb 2019 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 30
Just wanted to say that I love all your stories.