Date: 24 May 2021 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 25: Sweet
Wow way to go Jasper and what a bitch Alice is after what Bella did for her letting Jasper go.
Date: 24 May 2021 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 7: Biscuits and Gravy
Bella's just too damn selfless. Who cares if Alice loved him if he was with Bella. Alice could have jus found herself someone else.
Date: 01 Aug 2018 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 28: Goodbye
That is scary. Alice is going to turn crazy now, huh? I'm glad Bella is trusting and depending on Edward now though.
Date: 01 Aug 2018 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 27: Confessions
I'm not mad at Edward staying with Bella even knowing what she did. I am upset at Alice for trying to get Bella in trouble though. I guess I'm crazy too.
Date: 01 Aug 2018 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 26: Colors
That poor child. I want to hug your fictional character.
Date: 01 Aug 2018 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 25: Sweet
Oh hell..... just because Jasper can't make his wife #1, Bella is being threatened by Alice now?? Dam! Does the universe not think Bella has enough to worry about?
Date: 01 Aug 2018 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 24: Incriminating Evidence
I can't believe Bella's dad might be the one that brings everything crashing down. He is such a dumb ass. But I'm glad he isn't drunk anymore.
Date: 01 Aug 2018 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 23: Getting Warmer
Aly is too sweet and living a horrible life. I hope it is better with Bella. I wonder if Jasper actually saw or found anything incriminating in the fireplace. hmmm
Date: 01 Aug 2018 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 22: Instincts
Dam! Now Bella has to be worried about Jasper, Edward and her dad finding her evidence. Crap!
Date: 01 Aug 2018 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 21: Blinded
I'm glad that Edward came back. Bella's little sister probably WILL have a better life now honestly. I think I'm a little nutty too.
Date: 01 Aug 2018 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 20: My Mother's Child
Why oh why couldn't she burn that dam evidence??
Date: 01 Aug 2018 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 19: You, Me, and We
Bella really does love Alice to not even be mad at her. I'm glad the two of them are good. Jasper better keep his shit straight.
Date: 01 Aug 2018 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 18: Consumed
Now I feel really bad for Alice too. Jasper needs to do a better husband job to make Alice feel like #1.
Date: 01 Aug 2018 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 17: Watch and See
Oh hell... Bella's evil side is going to come out now, huh??? Dam! Edward was almost making her killery side want to go away.
Date: 01 Aug 2018 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 16: Movements
This was beautiful. I hope you find a way for them to keep this.
Date: 01 Aug 2018 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 15: Progress
I sure hope Edward isn't going to be an arresting abandoner. I'm hoping he has some crazy as well.
Date: 01 Aug 2018 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 14: In the Light of Day
Poor Bella..... She is too scared to hope to be with Edward and yet doesn't want to let him go.
Date: 01 Aug 2018 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 13: Uncovered
WTF Edward??? Dam!!! Poor Bella's evil voice is mean to her like all the people that have left her. sigh....
Date: 01 Aug 2018 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 12: Pandora's Box
I can't believe she is keeping those bloody gloves!! Arg!!!! Burn those fuckers!!! Dam!!!
Date: 01 Aug 2018 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 11: Glory
I am so nervous for Bella..... ---bites nails---
Date: 01 Aug 2018 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 10: Territory
I'm happy and scared for Bella at the same time.
Date: 01 Aug 2018 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 9: Warm
Oh crap.... I don't want Edward to arrest Bella. ---pouts---
Date: 01 Aug 2018 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 8: Easy
Bella seems a touch annoyed by the nickname the cops or news people gave her. LOL
Date: 01 Aug 2018 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 7: Biscuits and Gravy
Interesting..... She gave up Jasper so Alice could love him.
Date: 01 Aug 2018 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 6: Truth, Lies, and Hope
Well she got inspiration from something at least. I hope her story wasn't about the murder she just committed.
Date: 01 Aug 2018 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 5: Famous Last Words
It was truly ironic that his name was Paul as well. Too bad for that son of a bitch. Hopefully his ex lady will be able to move on quickly.
Date: 01 Aug 2018 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 4: Clawing
So she is going to go after random dick heads. I should be appalled but I'm not.
Date: 01 Aug 2018 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 3: In with the New
I love that Bella has so many friends that came to support her.
Date: 01 Aug 2018 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 2: Cleaning House
Well we know the who now. I love that she and Alice will dePaul her living space. It is sad that she still was getting things HE liked. I'm really happy for Bella.
Date: 01 Aug 2018 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Bella
I can't wait to see who and how she gets even. I hope she can eventually trust at least 1 person.
Date: 04 Jan 2017 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Bella
I just wonder who the dick was..... and why did it take her 365 days to get angry at hys lying scumbag ass?
Date: 04 Jan 2017 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Bella
I just wonder who the dick was..... and why did it take her 365 days to get angry at hys lying scumbag ass?
Date: 01 Aug 2016 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 28: Goodbye
I really like your crazy beautiful story!
Date: 07 Jul 2014 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 27: Confessions
Is she saying "goodbye" to Jasper? And, is Edward and Bella leaving together? Is Edward protecting Bella by moving her to some remote location? What was Alice doing outside their house? So many questions. I guess that's why I'm confused. Loved this story. Very different!
Date: 06 Jul 2014 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 24: Incriminating Evidence
I don't want to believe this but, could Edward moving in next door be a plan to get close to Bella and get evidence on her? Even if the only thing connecting her to the murders would be that Paul was her ex-boyfriend, which is a very weak suspicion. Maybe this is why Jasper doesn't like Edward. I hope the house isn't bugged or that Edward didn't hear any of their conversation. And I really hope that Edward is clueless about Bella. I just knew Charlie was going to dig up the evidence. Great chapter!
Date: 05 Jul 2014 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 15: Progress
Can't believe I just discovered this little jem. It's awesome. Okay, why hasn't Edward said anything to Bella about Paul? Surely Jasper told Ed he was Bella's ex. And what's with Jasper's jealousy over Bella and Edward's relationship? In fact, I find the whole Bella, Jasper, Alice relationship a bit strange and it seems Jasper still has feelings for Bella. So,we know Bella is mental due to her being a serial killer and all, but Edward's pretty strange himself. Staking his claim, the "territorial" thing and possibly being a stalker. What's in his past? And does Bella want to get caught because why hasn't she gotten rid of the EVIDENCE? That dream was a warning Bella.
Date: 21 Dec 2013 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 28: Goodbye
And can't wait till you start the sequel!
Date: 21 Dec 2013 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Bella
I just wanted to let you know that I loved this story!
Date: 15 Dec 2013 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 27: Confessions
Awesoooommmee story!! Loved your style of writing and just Everything about it. But I will say... I need help understanding the ending. The way I understand is the she's leaving but is he ever going to see her again or... You might have said this but she's leaving so why isn't he going with her? I mean no disrespect because this is WAYY better than anything I could ever write but please help me understand.
Date: 08 Nov 2013 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 28: Goodbye
What a beautiful crazy story. I will happily read the next one no matter how long it takes. I have a story I need to be finishing but can't find the motivation so in the mean time I read knowing the person's work I'm losing myself in has probably been in the same boat as my unfinished work is now.
Date: 06 Nov 2013 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 28: Goodbye
I CAN'T WAIT TO READ HELLO AGAIN I ONLY HOPE I LIVE LONG ENOUGH TO READ IT I HAVE CANCER AND I'M NOT DOING TO WELL, READING THE STORY'S HERE ON THE WRITERS COFFEE SHOP IS WHAT I DO EVERY DAY ALL DAY I LOVE READING SO I LOOK FORWARD TO HELLO AGAIN
Date: 04 Nov 2013 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 28: Goodbye
I am so glad to see this new addition to the story! I told you I'd be here waiting. I thought. This wrap up was perfection. You even symbolized the new fullness in Bella's life by using longer sentences in places she would have said less before. Now, I think, her trust in Edward is complete but she is still working on trusting life's situations and what they give her. Thanks to Edward and Ali, she is making a start.
I look forward to "Hello Again" more than I can say! I'd favorite it now if possible, but like Bella, I must learn to wait patiently. Thank you so much for your amazingly in depth writing. I love every bit of it!
Date: 14 Sep 2013 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 27: Confessions
I'm very happy with the ending! I have never rooted for the killer before! You kept me on the edge of my seat!
Date: 14 Sep 2013 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 25: Sweet
Wow! Does Alice know?
Date: 13 Sep 2013 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 22: Instincts
I really want Bella to not be found out.
Date: 12 Sep 2013 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 21: Blinded
You constantly shock me! This story has so many twists & turns! You want to love Bella & feel bad for her but like you said bat-shit crazy is spot on. I don't want Edward to get his heart stomped on but it only seems like that will happen.
Date: 11 Sep 2013 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 11: Glory
This is fantastic!
Date: 20 Aug 2013 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 12: Pandora's Box
why wouldn't she burn the gloves?? im enjoying this story, very funny. i like that she writes children's books but is a serial killer too lol.
Date: 02 Jun 2013 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 5: Famous Last Words
Oh crap!
Date: 02 Jun 2013 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 4: Clawing
Hummmmm is she going to kill him?
Date: 02 Jun 2013 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 3: In with the New
You go girl
Date: 02 Jun 2013 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 2: Cleaning House
Well at least it isn't Ed who she wants to get at!
Date: 02 Jun 2013 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Bella
Oh my...Bella on a rampage
Date: 15 Apr 2013 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 27: Confessions
Thanks good chapter
Date: 14 Apr 2013 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 27: Confessions
I'M SO LOST I'M SORRY BUT I DON'T UNDERSTAND WHAT I JUST READ DID EDWARD SEND BELLA TO JAIL OR DID THEY MOVE AWAY TOGETHER OR WHAT PLEASE ANSWER I NOT MAD IN ANY CASE IT'S YOUR STORY TO DO AS YOU PLEASE NOT OUR IT'S ONLY OURS TO READ, LIKE OR DISLIKE I HAPPEN TO LIKE VERY MUCH BUT I NEED TO UNDERSTAND THIS LAST PART WILL YOU HEPL ME?
Date: 14 Apr 2013 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 9: Warm
Oh crap! he will find out about the murders:(
Date: 14 Apr 2013 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 5: Famous Last Words
Thk God it was not edward
Date: 13 Apr 2013 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 27: Confessions
You're an absolute genius and poet!! The ending you gave us was, in my mind, perfection. Bella has been in the lonely, solitary "cell" that was her life many years and times. She has fought to stay human AND humane. Her love for Aly is proof of that. It is undying and pure. Edward's choice was gallant and to be fair, I had a feeling he must have known something long ago. The difference is Edward can see the horribly misused and "real" Bella that the world can not. I don't think even Jasper sees HER. I believe he is loyal and sees her as a wounded soul but can't find a way to "cure" her. Edward's power is in his knowledge, his intelligence, but above all his unwavering love for her - the very thing he knows she needs above all else. He knows that this will set Bella free.
This story was a damn masterpiece that would make Hitchcock nod in approval. Thank you so very much for giving us this world and allowing us in. I have loved every single syllable of it! If you do revisit it and them, please be sure I know! I can't wait to see where you bring us next. Kudos and a big BRAVO from a huge fan.
P.S. I love the idea of the jar of good things! I just may start one here!
Date: 25 Mar 2013 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 26: Colors
Thanks good chapter
Date: 24 Mar 2013 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 26: Colors
I feel so bad for Alice! Jasper's feelings are stopping her from realizing Bella loves her and would celebrate for them both. I also love Aly here!
Date: 12 Mar 2013 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 25: Sweet
Thanks good chapt
Date: 11 Mar 2013 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 25: Sweet
Enough tension to cut it with a knife and make me want to start biting my fingernails again! Marvelous!
Date: 27 Jan 2013 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 24: Incriminating Evidence
Thanks good chapters
Date: 23 Jan 2013 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 24: Incriminating Evidence
Personally, I loved the last chapter! And this one. They are different and therefore require a different mindset when both reading and writing. Anyway - touché! Bella's ather showing up now is brilliant and now he has her questioning Edward. I happen to think that Edward came in a different door for safety sake. He has no way of judging Bella's dad except for his past actions regarding Bella. No wonder he came to check! Kudos on another winner!
Date: 14 Jan 2013 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 5: Famous Last Words
Oooh! I got on the crazy train and I don't want off!
Date: 07 Jan 2013 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 23: Getting Warmer
Thanks good chapter
Date: 05 Jan 2013 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 23: Getting Warmer
Wonderful. Aly may just be the "eye" that Bella needs to see how to set her life back in order. Instead of simply needing, she will be needed - and giving. Together, she, Aly and Edward can be a real family.
Date: 03 Jan 2013 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 23: Getting Warmer
Awesome!
Date: 06 Dec 2012 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 22: Instincts
Now that is a great twist in the plot! Great chapter!
Date: 29 Nov 2012 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 22: Instincts
So good, update sooner plz??!!
Date: 28 Nov 2012 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 22: Instincts
thanks good chapter
Date: 09 Nov 2012 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 21: Blinded
Happy birthday! For what it is worth, it is far from unloved! Especially by me. My theory is that they are reading and not reviewing. Nevertheless, I do love getting into Bella's head, and it would be fascinating to get into Edward's. What does he suspect? How much? Is he trying NOT to put the puzzle pieces together? No matter what, you always bring your "A" game. Thank you!
Date: 30 Oct 2012 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 21: Blinded
Ha, ur so funny. I really do love this story.
Date: 15 Oct 2012 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 20: My Mother's Child
Thanks good chapter
Date: 13 Oct 2012 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 20: My Mother's Child
Outrageously marvelous! I swear, I didn't see that curve ball coming! I keep wondering if Bella's mother knows that Alexandra is reading Bella's books. Hmmmmm......
Date: 12 Oct 2012 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Bella
God im so worried about what he will do when he finds out shes a killer and what she will do about it!!!! Loving the suspense :)
Date: 10 Sep 2012 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 19: You, Me, and We
Another edge-crawling winner. I kept trying to work out how Bella's psyche wold get her past hurting Edward, when in fact the honest, simple truth was that she has been built up by him a bit by now. She's able to fight her more horrific natures better. Nice touch with the forgotten pizza topping! So simple yet so-o effective. Bravo!!
Date: 10 Sep 2012 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 19: You, Me, and We
Thanks good chapter
Date: 04 Sep 2012 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 18: Consumed
REALLY GOOD STORY!!! I can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 13 Aug 2012 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 18: Consumed
Thanks good chapter
Date: 08 Aug 2012 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 18: Consumed
Interesting chapter. I wonder how her relationship with Jasper and Alice is going to develop in later chapters.
Date: 07 Aug 2012 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 18: Consumed
Amazingly deep and profound as well as well written!
Date: 07 Aug 2012 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 18: Consumed
Wow! Alice that was a little harsh! Loven it!
Date: 31 Jul 2012 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 17: Watch and See
Hmmm so Edward has a "brother" but he confirmed to Bella that he was an only child... And his phone conversation was suspicious too since it was spoken in angry whispers. BUT if a family member was hurt you would expect more concern than anger, right? *sigh* Bella where is your bullshit detector, hun?! I just hope Catwoman doesn't smell anything fishy now that she will have some alone time to think without him "dazzling" her (he totally is BTW) or she will be shipped off to the pound! *bites nails*
Date: 28 Jul 2012 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 17: Watch and See
DAMN POOR BELLA THINKS HE'S NOT COMING BACK BUT HE WILL WON'T HE?
Date: 20 Jul 2012 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 17: Watch and See
Dun, dun, duuhhhn. Well, I foresee a killing spree in the not too distant future. Hmm, wonder what will happen when Eddie boy returns...
Date: 20 Jul 2012 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 14: In the Light of Day
Interesting chapter. The dream chapter before was good too. I was reading it, and was like 'wtf?' doesn't he need a warrant for that? But alas, it was all a dream.
Date: 20 Jul 2012 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 12: Pandora's Box
Fuck, that was an awesome chapter. I would be so pissed if I were Bella.
Date: 20 Jul 2012 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 11: Glory
Really enjoyable chapter. I love the banter between Edward and Bella. It's awesome to read; I found myself smiling the whole time which kind of hurt my face.
Date: 19 Jul 2012 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 10: Territory
Really enjoyable chapter. I'm glad I kept at this story; I found the first few chapters a little hard to get in to. But now, the pace is good, the plot is thickening and I even like the short style of writing you take when she goes into kill mode. Anyway, I'm going to add this to my favourites now :)
Date: 19 Jul 2012 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 9: Warm
Whoaa, well fuck! I was not expecting that. This should prove most interesting.
Date: 19 Jul 2012 11:15 AM Title: Chapter 5: Famous Last Words
Whoa, I actually let out an evil laugh. I'm not even joking.
Date: 18 Jul 2012 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 2: Cleaning House
I loved this line: "it's just really hard for some people to know how to deal with that kind of sadness" You put it so well, it was like a major clarification of it somehow. Very succint, and I just loved it. It's so true.
Date: 17 Jul 2012 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 17: Watch and See
So good. I am hooked. Cant wait for more.
Date: 11 Jun 2012 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 16: Movements
This chapter was sheer poetry. Bella's inner fight and demons are coming face to face with sheer and pure giving and love. Marvelous! Having read the author's note in this chapter, I totally agree with you. Bella's revelation to Edward in the last chapter was understandable and safe. Also, perhaps, a bit of a relief valve. Thank you for a wonderful story. Your updates are always a high point of the week!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 16: Movements
I love the way he gets her! Like he knows what she need before she does. I think he will put all the pieces together soon, that is if he has not already!
Date: 10 Jun 2012 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 16: Movements
I loved it you silly girl! You know I love that you don't always give us what we expect....most of the time for me at least, it's even better! P.S. I have a sneaking suspicion that he already knows....
Date: 13 May 2012 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 15: Progress
Wonderful. She is finally able to begin opening the door for Edward - no matter how much that terrifies her. Bella has come a long way! With luck, Edward may find he doesn't need the whole truth. Loved it!
Date: 13 May 2012 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 15: Progress
looking forwrad to more